'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 6

Hey bhoomi dear..ik gal te dasso...eh tusi sab logan nu mumbai se bhaga ke jalandhar kaise bhej dita...yaar delhi bhej deti ...is bahane mein tumhe bhi imagine karti ki tum delhi aayi ho...kahaan itni dur rajeev ko bhi bhej diya:p agli baari story mein delhi honi chahiye place warna lassi parantha woh bhi aloo ka nahi milega tumhe:p yeh sab punjab mein hi khana phir mein nahi davangi...aur wahaan tumhari frn Himani bhi nahi hogi jise kahogi parantha lassi taiyar rakho;)Aur wahaan ki punjabi bhi tumhe samaj nahi aaani...meinu nahi aandi te tuhanu kistra aavegi...chalo aaj da episode vi awesome haiga si..hun meinu agle episode da intezaar haiga..cheti cheti post karin;)
lots of love,
Himani

wonderful work Bhoomi! It's so sweet what Pari has done for Etansh. Children should always be happy and playing. I hope that soon Vyom will start to have feelings for Pari. Cant wait for the next episode!

Originally posted by: aksksara

Aiyeee Hain. MAr jawaan. Kya story hain yaar. Dilchasp. Its soo intresting. Lekin yaar parts zara lambe likho naa. Kam se kum Rajeev ke nayee photod dekhne ko milene. It was soooo dan cute u know. I just loovve this story. Amazing. Waise Bhoomy yaar yeh story lambi hain yeh sunke aaj pehli baar acha nahi laga. Oops sorry story gandi nahi thi. Bahut achi hain. Lekin sad isliye kyunki woh kya hain na main India aa rahi hoon. College ke liye. 6th June and I will be staying in hostel. net ka access pata nahi ho paayega ya nahi. Isliye ek kind request hain ki story 6th june se pehle khatam kar sakoogi??? Thankful rahoongi. waise nahi kar paayi toh dnt take stress. Chodo rehen do.
Waise yaaar Vyom is taken by Pari. But Etansh looks molleee cuter. Cutie Pie. Looved that song. I heard it but not in Rajeevs voice. Woh kisi aur ki awaaz se suni thi. Yaha Rajeev ko song gaate hue Imagine kiya toh song mast tha. I mean amazing. Aur yaar tumhari poetr y ka jawaab nahi. Mast. Ek dum jhakkar. Tussi bahut gr888 poetess (kavi ka female version) ho.. I just am crazy.
Pehle to I try to read the peotry then aaram se story padne main mazaa aata hain.
Sorry tumhari last fick main comment nahi kiya. But what can I say its amazing. I really loved it. Waise tumhaari kaunsi fick pasand nahi aati??? Aal are amazinfg. Sorry 4 not commenting earlier. U know na Im soo lazyyy.
I to thought I wont read this fick bcoz ur going par rok nahi paayee. I was reading it while eating lunch yesterday. and fell instantly in love with this Fick. AMAZING. AWESOME. SUPERB. LOVELY. CUTE.
Paar aamna ki kami thi. Phir bhi Etansh ne haappyy kardia. Bhoomy ne bhi. So no complaints. I have a request. Ek toh oopar mention doosri pmse bheejoongi. Reply zarro karna.
Love u and ur ficks.
Tc
Saara
👏

Hi Sara,

Awwww I am so happy that u like my fanfics so much and appreciation for the pomes make me beluve that it just adds to teh story and doesnt disturb it... am glad u liked those scenes of father n son... ya the child is so cute... he acts well u see but i dotn know his name warna start mey child actro ka naam daalti... waise episodes i will try to post thode lambe parts...

Abotu u gogin to India on 6th... yaar.. i always have my deadline of compteling my fanfic and seldom very very rarely do i not finish that in the time.. so i wonttell u the time i have set for this one... but 6th is too soon.. but hope u get to read some more episodes in btw soon.... atleast some very relevant an imp ones..

about lovingly my fanfics... dear its just the comments from u people which make me feel awesome and thoguh am just learign n improving i feel atleast they can be posted and readers r there who love to read and wait for the next episode... i know ur wishes.. hope soemday i do that ..but time.. is too less yaar.... upar se i have functios to attend.. .. anyways.. u enjoy n keep rocking..

with luv

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

Hey bhoomi dear..ik gal te dasso...eh tusi sab logan nu mumbai se bhaga ke jalandhar kaise bhej dita...yaar delhi bhej deti ...is bahane mein tumhe bhi imagine karti ki tum delhi aayi ho...kahaan itni dur rajeev ko bhi bhej diya:p agli baari story mein delhi honi chahiye place warna lassi parantha woh bhi aloo ka nahi milega tumhe:p yeh sab punjab mein hi khana phir mein nahi davangi...aur wahaan tumhari frn Himani bhi nahi hogi jise kahogi parantha lassi taiyar rakho;)Aur wahaan ki punjabi bhi tumhe samaj nahi aaani...meinu nahi aandi te tuhanu kistra aavegi...chalo aaj da episode vi awesome haiga si..hun meinu agle episode da intezaar haiga..cheti cheti post karin;)
lots of love,
Himani

Hi Himani,

Yeh gal jangii nahi hai.. mainu paratha nahi diya... thoda dill bada hai hun jaanu. to episodes lambe hotey je menu paratha dii khusboo atii.. chalo hun pher bhi.. koi gal nahi kahungi..aaj hun toparatha kha rahi hun... \:D/ waise Delhi jalandhar te near hai..mumbai bahut dooooooooor... phikar matt karo... ab tak to Jalandhar hai..baad ki stories mey delhi vich kaun sa restaurant asiii dekhya S se satrt hota hai.. wahan pahuncha dungi😉 aur wahan koi sooni kudi dekh woh faint hogaya aisa dikhaungi.. kya bolti hai..😆

ab tenu meri yeh story theek thaak lagi na..hope tenu neend na aajaye.... enjoy karo..cheti cheti post karungi.. pher dekhungi.. meri lassi kaise nahi milti...😃

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

wonderful work Bhoomi! It's so sweet what Pari has done for Etansh. Children should always be happy and playing. I hope that soon Vyom will start to have feelings for Pari. Cant wait for the next episode!

Hi Rabia.... am really happy that u enjoyed and liked the episodes and gettign ur reply after evry post really means so much...Yes its a sad state but nowadsys kids r gettign mature before age... Lets see how much Pari can get close to them.... next episode will be postign soon.. 😃

Episode: 10

After a while Etansh was taking a nap along with Vyom. They were exhausted after they both ran playing in the whole train. Etansh and Vyom were sleeping; Vani and Parikrama were talking about the children of this generation, parental pressures n all. Etansh got up and told he wanted to go to the Loo. Vani told him to come along with her she will take him, but he insisted that Pariaunty will come. Parikrama felt nice to see Etansh liking her so much and she told Vani she will take him to the loo no problem. Parikrama along with Etansh walked out of their compartment and towards the toilet. A man brushed her shoulder and she angrily looked at him, the person just smiled at her.

Parikrama walked and Etansh went into the loo,, she told him, she will wait for him. As Parikrama was waiting for Etansh, the same person came and stood along with her, She tried to ignore him. He started singing song, "Bheegey hont tere, pyaasa dil mera, Lage abra sa, mujhe tan tera Jam ke barsa de, muhj par ghatayen Too hi meri pyaas, too hi mera jaamKabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaarTujhe subah tak main karoon pyaar" Parikrama just tried to get away from him and stood near the door, the person came close .. Soon Etansh came out and she took him hurriedly and walked back, the person too walked and rubbing towards her body made his way through… Parikrama got very angry and she yelled, ' Sick , cheap people… I****Police should teach them a good lesson." The person looked behind, and Parikrama without looking into his eyes tried to excuse herself into her seat, the person looked at her with a smile and with his hands just brushed through her hips… While she turned with anger towards him, he had left. Parikrama made herself calm down and she went inside and sat near the window while Etansh went towards Vani. Vyom had just got up and was pulling his arms with a lazy smile on his face.

Etansh: Papa neechey aoo, main aap ko batata hun Pari aunty aur main gaye the na tab.. ek uncle.. (Parikrama realised Etansh is speaking about the incident to his father and she interrupted pulling Etansh towards her seat) Parikrama: Etansh .. woh janedo na… Achaa Etansh..main…

Etansh: Ek minute Pariaunty…

Vyom wondered what was Etansh wanting to say and Why Parikrama was stopping him from speaking up. Vyom got down and went close to Etansh…

Vyom: Hmm, Ab bataoo kya hua.. kiss kiss ko Tumhari Pariaunty ney daraya..(Laughing)Etansh laughed along with him and Parikrama was a bit hesitant but she gave a slight smile as it eased her emotions.

Etansh: Papa Pariaunty khud dargayi… mujhe toilet ki taraf le ja rahi thi na, to ek uncle ney unhe dhakka diya.. aur pata hai woh achey uncle nahi the, woh Gaanaa hai na jo chii chii hai.. jo Tv pe ataa hai to hum channel change karte hain, woh gaana gaa rahey they.. Main toilet se bahar aya to Pariaunty dari hue thi, Woh bahot bad manners waley bad uncle the, Pariaunty ko pareshan kiya, phir bhi smile kar rahe they. Pariaunty ne gussey meykuch kaha na to woh unko aur bhi push kartey gaye,

Vyom realised someone had misbehaved with Parikrama. Parikrama just had nothing to say. Vani: Aaj kal, aisa bohat ho raha hai. Din mey jhed rahe hain kisika koi darr hi nahi raha. Police inhey theek nahi karti to aise logo ki badmashi badti hi jati hai.

Parikrama just looked at Vani and expressed that she agreed.

Etansh: Papa, main bahot chota hun , aap mere sath aoo to main usey theek kardunga… punishment to milni chahiye… bad the woh uncle (Vyom smiled with the confident expression on his child's face, no fear at all)

Parikrama: NO... Etansh.. Tumne mere liye socha yehi bohat hai, ab woh baat jane detey hain. Chalo hum kuch kehltey hain… (Etansh looked up at his father face, and didn't understand what he should do so he walked towards Parikrama)

Yeh hadsaa Etansh key hausle ko batla raha hai,

Parikrama ke ander chuppe ghabhrahat ko jatlaa raha hai,

Ab dekhen Vyom Etansh ke hausle se khush hota hai,

Ya Parikrama ke Ghabrahat ko Kareeb se dekh muskurata hai… ____________________________________________________________ ________

Episode: 11

Vyom: Etansh, pehchanogey woh bad uncle kaun hai.. hum unhe samjha ke atey hain.

Etansh smiled and quickly said: Haan.. chalo chalo

Vani and Parikrama both tried to stop them but they didn't listen.

Parikrama: Yeh samjhayengey , matlab samjhayengey… kahin hatha payi to nahi na…?

Vani: Pata nahi… waise Etansh hai woh sambhalega Vyom ko..

Parikrama: Etansh sambhalega? (She wondered what will happen and went out to see where they went)

Soon she saw Vyom and Etansh standing in front of some people and talking. She went close…

Vyom: Haan to bad uncle aap hain, aap ko sharm to nahi ayi hogi , bacchey ke samney yeh sab harkatey karte The Man just smiled and looked at the kid understanding they r talkgin abt that girl…,

Man: Teri joru hai kya, ya phir behan, ya Saali ?Jo itni takleef hue, jaa jo karna hai kar, police mey report karle jaa… (he laughed while his other 3 friends stood along his side… )

Vyom: Police mey report ab police hi samjho samne khada hai .. tooo.. (he raised his eyebrow with smile on his face and anger in his eyes)

The man and his friends got a bit shocked…

The man a bit shaken: Tu police hai… uniform nahi daalii

Vyom: Police… hmm teri shikayat mere daftar mey aaagayi ab mujhe kaarwahi to karni hi hai… Kaarwahee sabpe karni hogi yaa..

The other three started asking for forgiveness and the man (bad uncle) was scared.

Etansh: Bad uncle bohat bad hogaye hain, punishment to dena hi … Vyom looked towards Etansh and kissed Etansh's forehead. He immediately turned towards the man and slapped him one hard, little blood came from the person's lip corner. Etansh: Bass Papa, ek hi kafi hai…

Parikrama stood there with her hands on her mouth. The sound of the slap was loud and clear, the train passengers arrived at the scene...

The man shaken by the sound of the slap tried to give Vyom a punch while his friends didn't try to intervene as they felt Vyom is a police man, trying to get at a police man will be very risky they felt.

Vyom: Gaane ka bohat shauk hai na.. ab gaake bataa.. main bhi dekhun kitni surilui awaaz hai.. (he had anger in his eyes...)

Etansh pulled his father saying.. Papa…

Vyom held the mans hand and bent the arm towards the back and told him to behave himself, or else one day not only a slap he will land up with all his bones broken, the man grinned with pain as Vyom bend the man's arms. The TC came and Vyom told him what all happened while Parikrama came forward and explained how he had misbehaved. The TC took the man to the railway security personnel and the train moved forward.

Vyom: Parikrama, u know u should have not let the incident just pass by but at least tried once to inform the TC or me, or anyone so that such people get a lesson and next time they don't repeat the same offence.

Parikrama just kept silent Vyom: I understand aap … phirbhi… haar manlengey, kamzoor dikhengey to koi bhi aapki kamzori ka sahara lekey aur pareshan hi karega..

Parikrama just looked down…

Vyom: I am really sorry agar mere yeh kehney se aap ko dukh hua hai.. I really didn't mean to hurt u.. really…

Parikama: NO.. actually I am thankful to u, when I came back after the incident and sat in my seat I felt inside my heart that I should have given one back to him for misbehaving. I couldn't… When u slapped him one hard I was just so shocked at first but I felt like that's what even I should have done. It made me smile looking at his swollen cheek.

Vyom smiled and Etansh was smiling looking at them.

Etansh: Papa, Pariaunty clapped after u slapped him I saw… Parikrama smiled keeping her head low and winked looking at Etansh…. She asked vyom

Parikrama: Waise kya sach mey aap Police officer hain?

Vyom said with a matter of fact expression

Vyom: Nahi… I am a software programmer. Lagta hai unkey dimaag mey program fix hua that ho sakta hai main Police mey hun. Ab apni zubaan se maine to aisa kuch directly nahi kaha. (He smiled raising his eyebrow and looking at Etansh)

Etansh: (smiled) My Papa… (he went and hugged Vyom tightly) they gave a high five..

Parikrama smiled and took Etansh close and kissed him on his cheek, saying he is so strong and Vyom smiled looking at them.

Vani just looked at the three of them smiling, Etansh speaking and it was after a long time she had seen Vyom & Etansh so open and happily conversing with anyone.

Yeh Safar mey Etansh ke Dil mey Parikrama ke liye jagah ban gayi,

Safar ki raah mey Parikrama ko Baap Betey Ki nazdeeki chuuu gayi,

Ab lagta hai Parikrama ke Dil mey Vyom ke liye Adaar badh raha hai,

Kya inteeno ko saath dekh Vaani ka Dil kuch aur bhi Mehsuus kar raha hai?

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bhoomi all three parts were jst awesome. So etansh enjoying with his dad just loved it. Vyom is so happy seeing his son happy again. but wat abt the past wen will u reveal it. Loved the way vyom dealt with the gunda and etansh with him. Best part was wen pari was fearing wat will vyom do and vani saying dont worry etansh will take care of vyom. Loved the father son relationship.

Just loving it cont further soon.......

Awesome parts! 👏

I just hate gunde like that who think they can treat women however they want. Reminds me of this one guy who was winking and waving at me at a railway station when I visited India. Totally disgusting! I'm so glad Vyom taught him a lesson. Continue soon!

Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi all three parts were jst awesome. So etansh enjoying with his dad just loved it. Vyom is so happy seeing his son happy again. but wat abt the past wen will u reveal it. Loved the way vyom dealt with the gunda and etansh with him. Best part was wen pari was fearing wat will vyom do and vani saying dont worry etansh will take care of vyom. Loved the father son relationship.

Just loving it cont further soon.......

Hi Golu,.. so u enjoyed reading the etansh and Vyom realtiosnhip adn teh way Vaani said etansh sambhalega..heheh... abotu the past.. hmm i will reveal but it will take some tiem.. akhir yeh safar to khatm ho.. zindagi ka safar to shuru ho..😉

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Awesome parts! 👏

I just hate gunde like that who think they can treat women however they want. Reminds me of this one guy who was winking and waving at me at a railway station when I visited India. Totally disgusting! I'm so glad Vyom taught him a lesson. Continue soon!

Ya Rabia... such people have just incerased and its due to the lack of police petrollgin and teh lack of fear among them. Vyom taught them a lesson and I really want woman to atleast complain and speak to their family..and not take it silently as it happen mostly.. such incidents increase and actually its turning worst ....

hey it feels so ncie that u liek the parts...