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Posted: 17 years ago
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beautiful! Loved the riddles and the singing and dancing. I wonder why Vyom and his wife got divorced.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
too beautifully described!!!!seriously man u could just increase its length!!!sorry being greedy!!! 😃 not my fault!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
hey lovely story bhomi cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mindblowing bhooomi 👏 👏 👏 , oye thoda lamba likh na 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Hey Bhoomi..
I really like all the episodes so far..i hope this story has a happy ending too.U know wht i really like all ur write ups...so keep doin the fab work:-)

Ur frn,
Himani
Edited by mad_lovee - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely parts bhoomi. so vyom n his wife were divorced. waiing for more. post it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

beautiful! Loved the riddles and the singing and dancing. I wonder why Vyom and his wife got divorced.

Hi Rabia,... am feelign nice that u liked the whole singin riddle and dancing.. part.. yom n wife got divorced... relaly?? hmmm let me see when everything unfolds..😉

Originally posted by: nihita

too beautifully described!!!!seriously man u could just increase its length!!!sorry being greedy!!! 😃 not my fault!!!!!!

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nihita

HI Nihita... u have a beautifulname... dear... aww u foudn it beautifuly.. i have to improving n i am tryng my best...length is too short u felt.. aww i will try and make it longer .. dont know.. why this time evryone felt the same.. there must be soemthign.. i will make sure i post more episoe.. to get u engroseed...... luv u too tc..

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely story bhomi cont soon

Hi Jyothi dear.... am happy u liked the story uptilnow though its not that romantci socha kcuh aur tarah se likhun... luv u

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: monikaseth

mindblowing bhooomi 👏 👏 👏 , oye thoda lamba likh na 😆

Hi Monika... looks like my episode length is really short...😆everyone is complanign abt it... ok ok.. i will try and make it Lamba... theek hai... 😃

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

Hey Bhoomi..
I really like all the episodes so far..i hope this story has a happy ending too.U know wht i really like all ur write ups...so keep doin the fab work:-)

Ur frn,
Himani

HI Himani... menu ek pal chain na ayee. tere commens ke bina.. kahan the tussi..busy busy.. haiii haii...story ka happy ending.. tum to sab ugalvaoogii mujhse.. hun itnii bevakuff to nahi... happy end hoo ya nahi.. ya phir practically wahah ke wahah wohknows... U liek my writeup..s. theek thekkkhai.. menu samjh agayi gal.. try karangi.. par time aur mood donope depend karega... till then u tc.. luv u ..lots... mere paratha & lassi tayaar rakho...😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

lovely parts bhoomi. so vyom n his wife were divorced. waiing for more. post it soon

HI Golu...u know i always look forward to ur comments.... glad that u liked the parts...... Vyom n his wife were divorced??? aisa maine to nahi kaha...😆.. lets see... kya ho raha hai....😉as i post the next parts...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Episode : 9

Vyom took Etansh in his arms as he was enjoying himself. Parikrama called him,

Parikrama: Etansh I read this story and u know it's very funny... u want to know about this foolish crow and the cunning Fox… Etansh went and sat near Parikrama, listening the story and looking at the pics from the story book… Parikrama smiled as she finished the story and looked at Vyom, Vyom smiled back but his eyes… went moist.. He thanked her in a soft voice.. Parikrama understood him and his emotions. Etansh pulled her dupatta and said,

' Aur ek StoryPariaunty' Parikrama went on telling him another story of a pig and the lion… Parikrama made faces to explain how the animal roared how the pig got scared and Etansh went laughing… Looking at them Vyom was very pleased.

Yeh chocolate , Kahani to shayad Bahana hai,

Parikrama ko Bachey Ka Bachpan Wapas laana hai,

Parikrama key Niswarth bhaav, Etansh ka gam Durr kartideti hain,

Vyom ke dil mey Parikrama ke liye ab ek khaas ehsaas laati hain..

Vani: Vyom Maine kaha tha tumhe... Never give up.. Etansh phirse normal hogaya hai..

Vyom: Haan Didi… Etansh ko phirse aise dekh sach aaj bohat khushi hai.. Thanks to Parikrama …

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It was afternoon, Parikrama was taking a nap. Etansh jumped on to his father back and put his arms around his neck and kissed him. Vyom took him and tickled him and both were enjoying doing masti… Vyom later made Etansh to sit on the upper seat and Etansh kept saying.

Etansh :Papa utaro neechey Vyom: Badmash mera hairstyle kharab kardiya..

Etansh: Papa.. Aap dekho kaise lag rahe ho..(He laughed looking at Vyom's hair condition.) Vyom: Achaa hassi aarahi hia.. ab nahi utarta..

Etansh: Theek hai ,Pari aunty utaregi. He was about to scream 'Pari aunty' and Vyom made him come down…

Etansh: Pariaunty se kitna dartey hian aap.. (He laughed again) Vyom : Darta nahi.. woh soo rahi hai.. aap disturb nahi karoo thek hai.. (he looked at Parikrama who was sleeping and as her hair came on to her cheeks and with the air touched her covered her face… Vyom looked at her with emotions filled and he wanted to just tell her… 'U dotn know how much I wanted my son to play with me like this, to enjoy, dance… how much happiness u have given me…thank u from bottom of my heart, God bless u…' Suddenly she smiled though she was still in her sleep and Vyom felt she looked so innocent, so beautiful and her smile somehow expressed him… 'I am not a stranger that u have to thank me'… he looked at Etansh

Vyom felt so happy to spend such moments, Etansh would be so silent and he wondered where the innocence, the childhood vanished. Now again to see Etansh enjoying like other children of his age he felt happy.. he felt glad to see his naughtiness…his Zidd and his loud laughter which was the most beautiful sound he ever heard.

Kitne samay se tumhari hasse sunee nahi,

Kitna samay beeta tumhari masti dekhi nahi,

Meri zindagi mey tuhi to khushi laata hai,

Aaj maahol phir Zindaho utha hai…

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aiyeee Hain. MAr jawaan. Kya story hain yaar. Dilchasp. Its soo intresting. Lekin yaar parts zara lambe likho naa. Kam se kum Rajeev ke nayee photod dekhne ko milene. It was soooo dan cute u know. I just loovve this story. Amazing. Waise Bhoomy yaar yeh story lambi hain yeh sunke aaj pehli baar acha nahi laga. Oops sorry story gandi nahi thi. Bahut achi hain. Lekin sad isliye kyunki woh kya hain na main India aa rahi hoon. College ke liye. 6th June and I will be staying in hostel. net ka access pata nahi ho paayega ya nahi. Isliye ek kind request hain ki story 6th june se pehle khatam kar sakoogi??? Thankful rahoongi. waise nahi kar paayi toh dnt take stress. Chodo rehen do.
Waise yaaar Vyom is taken by Pari. But Etansh looks molleee cuter. Cutie Pie. Looved that song. I heard it but not in Rajeevs voice. Woh kisi aur ki awaaz se suni thi. Yaha Rajeev ko song gaate hue Imagine kiya toh song mast tha. I mean amazing. Aur yaar tumhari poetr y ka jawaab nahi. Mast. Ek dum jhakkar. Tussi bahut gr888 poetess (kavi ka female version) ho.. I just am crazy.
Pehle to I try to read the peotry then aaram se story padne main mazaa aata hain.
Sorry tumhari last fick main comment nahi kiya. But what can I say its amazing. I really loved it. Waise tumhaari kaunsi fick pasand nahi aati??? Aal are amazinfg. Sorry 4 not commenting earlier. U know na Im soo lazyyy.
I to thought I wont read this fick bcoz ur going par rok nahi paayee. I was reading it while eating lunch yesterday. and fell instantly in love with this Fick. AMAZING. AWESOME. SUPERB. LOVELY. CUTE.
Paar aamna ki kami thi. Phir bhi Etansh ne haappyy kardia. Bhoomy ne bhi. So no complaints. I have a request. Ek toh oopar mention doosri pmse bheejoongi. Reply zarro karna.
Love u and ur ficks.
Tc
Saara
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