'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 3

Originally posted by: monikaseth

mindblowing , awesome & perfect bhoomi i love to read you again and agin 👏

Hi Monika,

aww feels good that u liked the parts... reading it again n again.. 😆..hope u enjoy teh story line as it takes off from here ...😃

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

awesome! I wonder who Etansh's mother was. Continue soon.

Hi Rabia...hmmm lets see when the story takes course towards her...glad u enjoyed reading the parts...

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great parts. waiting for more. vyom and etansh relationship is sweet. he is really close to his father. I think he has lost his mother or she left and has gone with someone?????? just my guess work.

Hi Golu,

am happy u liked teh parts uptil now... Vyom and Etansh ya the father son bond , yup Etansh is very close to his father... hmm whether he had lost , or she left for someone.. hmmm that will be answered later in the story.. but u r gettign too close to the story..akhir writer jo ho... 😉.. I hope u like the way I imaigne things to be... 😃..luv u tc

Grt bgning Bhoomi... isbar toh i can say, ekdam hatke in so many ways ..ek toh jounry story hai , den diffrnt frm ur othr stories, n phir Rajeev ko aise role mey imagine karna ..haye.... too gud ..

i m loving the bapa beta relationship...wondering how he wud play the role if he actually had to play ...n mam, who was his wife or is? dont give any shock in that case ..lol... waise, bohot difrnt ek feeling aarahi hai story mein which i m liking.. the innocent look of payal making the story soft in one side thn the othr side seems to be very tough ... dekhte hai,apne hamare liye aage kya rakkha hai ...

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Nihita..am glad that u liked my work. and calling it master piece awww its feel so flattering.. by the way i luv the avtar u have.. its beno u autiful..😳

no ur work deserved dat term!!well thanku fr my avatar n if u want i can give it to u!!!!😳

when ever i read your work itend to guess the concept but this time the story is totally diff frm the regular bhoomi types waitin to read more mind blwing

Awesome bhoomi...having read u're earlier stories..i know for sure this one will stand apart frm the rest..pl..post the next parts ASAP...

awesome job hunn!!! can't wait for the next part!!

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Grt bgning Bhoomi... isbar toh i can say, ekdam hatke in so many ways ..ek toh jounry story hai , den diffrnt frm ur othr stories, n phir Rajeev ko aise role mey imagine karna ..haye.... too gud ..

i m loving the bapa beta relationship...wondering how he wud play the role if he actually had to play ...n mam, who was his wife or is? dont give any shock in that case ..lol... waise, bohot difrnt ek feeling aarahi hai story mein which i m liking.. the innocent look of payal making the story soft in one side thn the othr side seems to be very tough ... dekhte hai,apne hamare liye aage kya rakkha hai ...

Hi Sara,

Hatkey..heheheh areey tum to ahi se hi hatkey bol rahi ho.. waise nothignthat hatkey its just that situation r similar but just havnt come in my stories yet.. so ab story mey unko daalaa hai.. hope u enjoy it...

Rajeev would be so naturall i feel and when a child is with an actor , it create more magic as there is so much spontanity invovled..who is the wife... aree yaar... main abhi to kuch nahi batungi...innocetn look of payal..heeh Parikrama is a big innocent but lets see what is store in for her.... Main tumhare liye. pata nahi kya layi hu.. iss story se to main khud nahi ubarii. hope u all like it..

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

when ever i read your work itend to guess the concept but this time the story is totally diff frm the regular bhoomi types waitin to read more mind blwing

Hi Jyothi, i didnt knew u could get the concept so soon...heehe an d this time totally differnt lagaa, regular bhoomi types nahi hai..😆.. heeh hope whatever it leads to u like it...so ncie to get ur comments Jyothi..

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Awesome bhoomi...having read u're earlier stories..i know for sure this one will stand apart frm the rest..pl..post the next parts ASAP...

Hi Bini,

Am glad u liked the part... and different from earlier ones... i always try that.. but tis one isnt that fun filled thats most imp difference.. so am wonderign whether u all will feel like reading hte next part or get disappointed... next parts yaa.. Bini.. aap ko hukum sarankho pe..😳

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

awesome job hunn!!! can't wait for the next part!!

Hi.... so ncie to get ur comments.. am glad u liked this part... will be posting next part soon..😃

Episode : 5

It was mid- night and the train halted at a station. Vyom got up from his sleep and from the window peeped to see which station had arrived, as he turned

he saw Parikrama looking at him.

He felt strange and covered himself with the bed sheet, after a while slightly uncovered his face to see if she really was staring at him. He saw her eyes were not gazing at him and he had a sigh of relief... and he smiled thinking how weird thought came in his mind that ... She was staring at him….??!!! (He was amused)

Parikrama dekh rahi hai Vyom ki ankhon mey,

Iss kalpana se bhi Vyom kyun khabra gaya,

Kya yeh ek ehsaas tha jo dil ko samjhagaya,

Key shayad kahin ankho se Dil ke rastey Naa khul jaye,

Shayad kahin Kissii rastey koi rishtey Naa banjaye?

It was in a sec he heard a voice… it was indeed Parikrama..

Parikrama: Aap jaag gaye hain to..ooo..?

Vyom: Ji.. (Realizing she was awake and he actually saw her staring at him)

Parikrama was wondering what more to say, She felt he will observe, as he didn't she said,

Parikrama: Etansh mere pass yehan soo gaya hai…

Vyom then realised Etansh was sleeping holding her tightly on her lap…

Parikrama: Ab main ussey uthaungi to uth jayega… aap yehan ajaeeye …

Vyom was embarrassed that why he did not observe this in the first place…he said sorry and got up…

Vyom: Pata nahi yeh yehan kyun sogaya.. maine to neeche sulaya tha… didi ke pass...

Parikrama: Woh raat ko uth gaya aur thoda darr gaya.. uski awaz se main uthh gayi.. to maine pass mey liya aur woh mujhse lipat ke sooo gaya…

Vyom: Thank u... aur sorry aap ki neend kharab hogayi…

Parikrama: Ji aisa kuch nahi… bass mujhe fresh hone jana tha.. isliye socha koi iskey pass bethey, kahin phir uthkey darr na jaye… Jaldi ghabra jata hai ..

Vyom: Ji..

He felt emotional and took Etansh close and kept his hand on Etansh's forehead… kissing him and making him feel safe and secured.

Mera Beta Etansh, tuhi to meri duniya hai,

Kya karu aisa ke duniya lagey tujhe sunder sapna hai,

Teri pareshani, ghabrahat dekh, dil mera rota hai,

Hasna bhi sikhlau kaise soch dil dard se bharjata hai..

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Episode: 6

It was morning Vyom was making Etansh to brush, comb his hair and change his T shirt. Parikrama felt nice looking at the bond between the father and the son. Etansh would quietly listen to his papa, Vyom would ask him what kind of hairstyle he should give him, experimenting different style he tries to cheer him. Etansh would also try and comb his Papa's hair and Vyom would kiss him and take him close and hug him. He knew his son loves him a lot.

Vyom: Etansh hum Jalandhar pahunchkey picnic pe jayengey, theek hai.. bohat enjoy karengey… kahan jaye?

Etansh: Papa aap kahin bhi lekey jaoo. Lekin aap mere sath rehna…

Vaani: Papa Etansh ko bohat acche lagtey hain…Bua nahi achi lagti?

Etansh: Bua acchi lagti hai… lekin Papa to PAPA hai na bua… Etansh ke liye Papa sab kuch(he closed his eyes, opened his arms and with his hands denoted the whole world)..Saabbb Kucccchhh hai…

Parikrama smiled

listening to their conversation.

Dekho kitna anokha yeh rishta hai,

Papa ki Ankh ka tara Etansh lagta hai,

Dekh inhe rishty ki gehrayi naap rahi Parikrama,

Rishtey ke kareeb gayi to kaisa hoga tab Sama?…

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Soon the train halted at a station and everyone got down as the train would stop for at least half an hour.

As Vyom was buying newspaper and Parikrama was also at the same stall she bought chocolates and a story book.

Vyom smiled as he wondered for whom she is buying. She gave Rs 500/- note and the shopkeeper didn't have the change, Vyom gave her the change and she thanked him. As they walked together,

Parikrama: Yeh chocolate aur book maine Etansh keliye liyen hain. I hope ussey yeh chocolate achhii lagey.

Vyom: Lekin Etansh to chocolates nahi khata.. aapne kyun uskey liye .. plzz…aap.. (Parikrama interrupted)

Parikaram: dekhiye Main aur Etansh friends hogaye hain, aur do friends ke beech aap nahi bolengey… theek hai.. (She said with a cute angry face..and later she smiled)

Vyom: Ji theek hai.. lekin sach woh chocolates nahi khata.. Stories suneka mann bhi nahi hota uska, sirf video games khelta hai bohat.

Parikrama: Lekin kyun?

Vyom: (he was a bit uncomfortable to reveal much)

Vyom: ab thoda chupp hi rehta hai… jyada shorr usey pasand nahi.. kahaniya sunau to kehta hai.. Papa aap sirf goud mey lekar gana gaoo bas main soo jaunga.. story nahi.

Parikrama: Uska matlab hai Aap achaa gatey hongey?

Vyom: (smiling) I am not that a good singer just an ok singer.

Parikrama: Lekin , aap jo bhi kahiye, main Etansh ko yeh choclate dungi aur kahani bhi sunaungi .. dekhna woh khayega aur kahani bhi sunega…

Vyom: Agar Aisa hoga…(Parikrama interrupted)

Parikrama: Agar aisa hoga .. to aap mujhe ek achaa sa gaana gaakey sunayengey theek hai...

Vyom: (he smiled cutely hearing it) Theek hai.. aur agar nahi huaa.. to bhi sunaunga.. aap Etansh ki dost jo hain..

(both smiled and entered the train)

Aaj pehli baar yeh dono akele sath hain,

Kab miltey dekhein inke dil ke taar hain,

Etansh ko Parikrama apna dost maan chuki hai,

Etansh Parikrama ko Dost manney yehito baaki hai…

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