'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 21

oh oh oh oh....no no no no....why it ended? m gonna miss it yaar...tell u the truth Bhoomi, all the story u have written, unmein se donno why Rajeev ko visulaisd karna is story mein sabse asaan tha..i guess, for this reason this one becme so close to my heart ... though finally whn Vyom shout [ whn he confessed his love] i love u bolke.. i was so embrssed ...lol was thiking wo aise chillate huye, express karte huye kaisa dikhega ..My God..yeh to imagine karnahi tough ...hehehehe

Nice ending Bhoomi, really very nice ..31 epi was very touchy n one of the main ofcrse..i loved it whn parikrama said.. Etansh is not urs only he is mine too , how cud u do this to me? n den last part mey ...the brkfast moment ..awesome .... Vyom became naughty..ahaan.. cho romantic n sweet ...this one story had so many shades n element ... social issus , probs, emotions , romance ... u combind everything so brilinatly ...it's always a plesure to read ur stories.. will be waiting for next one...

Originally posted by: nihita

superb ending bhoomi....me going greedy when u'll start ur next ff?hehehe!!!!'
fantabulous work!!!!!!!

love
nihita

Hi Nihita.... am feelgin so nice... heheh U wrote superb.. wow!! that means u really liked the ending... and greedy..?? oh ho.. ab I cant promise antyhing.. but i have an idea abotu the next one.. time n mood kab milega dontknow.. only then can work on it... but its wotn be so looooong...😆 luv u .. tc

Originally posted by: sanightingale

awwww dii...story khatam....nahiiii!! 😭
both the parts were good...finally Vyom maan gaya😆..Etansh's poem was gr88...anurama's daughter is soo lucky to hv a brother like him....shoo shweet😍
kitni cute family hai..😊..story ws ekdum mast!!👍🏼a biig tight jhappi 4 u...🤗
luv u...allah hafiz...nida

Hi Nida... dear.... story khat, huee to kyun rona hai... san mujhe peetegi that maine uski behan ko rulaya.. aisa matt karo... mujhe San ke hatho nahi peetna hai..😉.. Vyom manta nahi to ussey jhodtey nahi na... Etansh ki poem u liked na... Anurama's daughetr so lucky u feell..heeheh cute family lagiiiehhehe Anurama ki baby may nto be as cute as u r... 😆😳.. One big tight jhappi to u too dear....and Story mast lagiii phri to lets dance aaaooo twist karein..😆..luv u .. tc. Allah haifz

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow great ending bhoomi finaly Vyom make it soooo sweet 👏 sweet family 😉 😉 😉

I love Etansh's poem its sooooo sweet 👏


My granny blesses me from the clouds of the heaven,

She is my inspiration always to start and to began,

My Maamma is an angel; her name itself is Pari,

My Papa is my superman; he is with me so no need to worry.

They have given me life and they have loved me the most,

My parents r my best friends I pray for them foremost.

Papa sings for charity and gives money to the needy,

Mamma tells me service to humankind is our duty.

With folded hands I pray to the almighty,

Let every child like me get home so pretty


Bhoomi its realy awesome story 👏 👏 👏I love it from my heart 👏 & please write more i am waiting for next ff. 👏

Hi Monika... U found the ending parts nice enoguh and it broguthe family look sweet and cute make me really glad ... yup the poem .. didnt knew it was so nice... happy u liked it and enjoyed readin gmy story... Ab main awesome writer to hongiii hi naa jab readers khud mindblowing hai to mujhe kuch to theek thaak likhna hai.. akhir readers r too good and too tlaented tehmselevs...😳😊.. writign one more... areeee.. dil abhi bhara nahi .. have written so many in this section 😆😆😆.. lets see when the next one comes.. cant promise anything at present... mood time ki jaroorat hai...luv u dear.. u have really vben very sweet.. take care

Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey !! Awesome story yaar !! I luvd it!!! 😳

Hi Vandu... Story pasand ayii.. feels realy good... U loved it and I am ust too happy to know it... 😃 luvu dear... tc

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

bhoomi why did u end this ff so sooooooooooon i wanted to read more a lovely and a very mature concept and the poems were always splendid i loved the last one amazing bhoomi hope u write more such fics 🤗

here are your jappis

Hi Jyothi.... my my... awwww felt so special with those jhapis comign my way.. kaunsi jhappi pehle lu soch rahi thi😆😆😆 btu it made my heart feel the warmth and love.. so ekdam khsuh...

End to karna tha.. i cant make my sstories go on n on... i need to give out anoher story , another life another charcter to live and get some differnt.. this story was special to me as well.. and am glad u liek ti...concept poem.. feels ncie u all liked it.. ya littel mature conept... and there was this feelgin that it shoudl have all elements.. andnot a depressing feelgin as u read... btu sad happy dono feelings shoudl come... glad u liked it...and writign ore..lets see.. when it ocmes...😃luvu dear..tc

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Superb bhoomi..just luvd the ending..even the conversation btw vyom n parikrama in the hospital was v..well written.

Zindagi - Ek Safar ...struck such an emotional chord....hats off to u...thanx for penning such a beautiful story...

Hi Bini... jaanu Superb likhdiya.. kya bolti tu.? itna badhiya tha kya.. I am still wondergn that i haev got some really heart felt response. and i am so happy that this story thoguh not very romantic totally did touch u all.. It struck and emotinla chord..awwww... i think the conversation coming int he imp parts made u all like it.. that means my attempt was good. btu it will be better if I post the next story..

Phirse Thanks bola.. kahana only in intro i have the right ot htnaks..heheheh.. luv u dear...ur encouragment means so much.. and its u and sara pushign me to post this and get on to this story.. luvu... tc

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

oh oh oh oh....no no no no....why it ended? m gonna miss it yaar...tell u the truth Bhoomi, all the story u have written, unmein se donno why Rajeev ko visulaisd karna is story mein sabse asaan tha..i guess, for this reason this one becme so close to my heart ... though finally whn Vyom shout [ whn he confessed his love] i love u bolke.. i was so embrssed ...lol was thiking wo aise chillate huye, express karte huye kaisa dikhega ..My God..yeh to imagine karnahi tough ...hehehehe

Nice ending Bhoomi, really very nice ..31 epi was very touchy n one of the main ofcrse..i loved it whn parikrama said.. Etansh is not urs only he is mine too , how cud u do this to me? n den last part mey ...the brkfast moment ..awesome .... Vyom became naughty..ahaan.. cho romantic n sweet ...this one story had so many shades n element ... social issus , probs, emotions , romance ... u combind everything so brilinatly ...it's always a plesure to read ur stories.. will be waiting for next one...

Hi Sara,

ehhehe end to karna hi tha.. I had to finish this in 10 days and had kept the parts ready just for the last segmetn had ot write but Aamir film ticket n woh chakkar mey I took more 5 days warna I woudl have finihed in 10 days.. 😆 I cant go on with one story and stretch it for months.. i think I have other story and otehr charcters to think and write.. Dotn be sad... new one ayega . sometiem later.. havtn decided yet.. time n mood chahiye...

U coudl imagine Rajeev in this... Jeet and Vyom r charcetr i coudl visualsie Rajeeve plagin them.. so i took him.. and am glad u liked the way teh charcters went throguh...Why not i can visualise Rajeev doign this... he canscream and say I LOVE U in real he is very cheerpy..and wantign attention , love all the time..😆😆😆

The ending conversation and the conversation of pArikrama and Vyom were speaciall... we usually know the heroine n hero will confess btu how the reaosnign n justification comes thats what i feel should be correct .. and tried to make it look as realas possible and so glad u liekd and loved those conversations...

Yup dear.. Sara it feels so nice that u thought abotu all these as even i wanted my readerss to feel all the aspects , fathers love, motehr love, childs sweetness, roamnce, laughter, sorrow... and I hope i provided in bits n pieces few of all..though i knw i have to improve i will try with every story of mine... u waitign forthe next.. eheh luv u dear.. lets see when i can....

luv u ..onekonek bhalobasha.. tc..

Bhoomi!!! sorry i ewas out of town couldnt comment...just caught up..off the Fic ended..waiting for a new one...awesome job hun!!

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

Bhoomi!!! sorry i ewas out of town couldnt comment...just caught up..off the Fic ended..waiting for a new one...awesome job hun!!

Hi Sameera.. firstly no sorry.. haan... i can understnad... so glad that u liekd it and wanted to comment.. on it.. Yup the story ended and happy that u felt it was nice ... 😃.. new one... yet not in my kitty.. heheh lets see how tiem n mood helps me to get it across... luv u ..tc

today got time to come to the net and i see u finished ur fic feeling sad. I use to wait each day to read ur fic.

But the parts were awesome and etansh poem was just too good. Bhoomi u write awesome poems.

Will now wait for ur next fic

kuch kuch likhte rehna will be waiting for something new from u

Amazing ending...thankgod i mean thank u bhoomi for making a happy ending of this story...i m so sorry cudn't give u feedbck on time as my net was givin so many probs from last 2-3 days..u know wht i really njoyed all the parts n especially the last 2-3 parts were just awesome....So miss writer when r u starting ur new story n make us engross in dat? cheti cheti likho taaki saanu tuhadi story padhne ko mile....Is baar toh lassi , prantha sab milega....waise bhoomi i cud feel dat frm the story itself dat u love pranthas n lassi too tabhi story jalandhar mein bana di...hehe;)
neways keep up the gud work.
God bless u

Himani

Originally posted by: golu_1677

today got time to come to the net and i see u finished ur fic feeling sad. I use to wait each day to read ur fic.

But the parts were awesome and etansh poem was just too good. Bhoomi u write awesome poems.

Will now wait for ur next fic

kuch kuch likhte rehna will be waiting for something new from u

HI Golu... awwww I know as u look forard to readin my episode I look forward ot read the comments. and many times u have been really qucik in thsi story to reply to soem episode which were very imp for me..and felt so much encoruaged with it...

Am so happy that u liekd this one story as well..U liked the poems.. feels my littel effort worked.. luv u dear..and ur coments always encoruage me a lot..

tc and hope u see few of my ff comgin.. some tiem later.. cant say anthing now..havnt yet planned a story yet😃