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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 33

Reaching home, Etansh was sleeping but Vyom recollected the moments he spent with Parikrama and the way he broke down in front of her. The love, the attraction for her is increasing in him, the want to be with her is growing… he felt why he can't have control over his emotions… he was frustrated at been torn between th need to keep her out of his life and the want to make her part of his lonely life…

Kabhi chahta hun tumsey durr hojau,

Kabhi mangta hun tumsey kareeb hojau,

Kya Haqeeqat mey Pyaar mujhe mil sakta hai?

Swarth hai yeh mera, soch dimaag dil ko kosraha hai…

Parikrama reached home and Vaibhav told her everything which he has spoken and heard from Vyom. Inder also shared what he felt and Parikrama now realised the confusion in Vyom's heart… at the same time she felt really bad how rudely she had questioned Vyom that does he know what love is? Does he know what trust is? She felt how Vyom has faced lossign the trust he had in the love of his life…

Next few days Parikrama kept on meeting Vyom and Etansh she informed Vyom that she has decided to stay in Jalandhar and Inder has went back to Pune.. Vyom asked her what about her parents.. she told him that She has taken her decision and she will stick to it for the rest of her life… Vyom didn't knew how to make her not leave everything for him… He didn't even commit himself to her and she had already given up the other bright side of her life…

Parikrama knew Vyom is totally confused and doestn know whats happening to him,She asked Vaani di to make Vyom understand but Vyom was always getting emotional more often than before and Vaani asked Parikrama to handle him. Parikrama went and spoke with him…

Parikrama: Vyom u love me..and I know why u don't want me to enter in ur life… though I have already entered too close to u…

Vyom: Who told u I love u?

Parikrama smiled…and went back … as she went out of the house, Vyom was standing thinkgin in the balcony… he heard loud scream…and it was Parikrama's voice, he rushed back and saw Parikrama sitting on the stairs with her head down and holding her legs… Vyom with extremem care and concern took her clseo and asked what happen, is she hurt? Why did she scearm? She had a fall? And he kept his hands on to her forehead and arms trying to understand if she had not got any hurt … He asked her to look at him and tell him… Parikrama looked up and asked him,

Parikrama: U don't love me… than why did u worriedly came after hearing my voice? What made u feel u can touch and hold my arms like this? (Vyom removed his hands off her arms) Why did u took me so close? (Vyom got up and stood)

Parikrama got up and stood in front of him While Vyom just tried not to look into her eyes… Parikrama went close to him and kissed him on his cheek… Vyom was shocked and looked at her with disbelief… what did she do? Parikrama said,

Parikrama: If u dont love me, why do u take this, I kissed u … u don't like it U should have slapped me… Why don't u?

Vyom couldn't answer and went towards his house.. Parikrama kept following him and asked him,

Parikrama: U love me, Vaibhav jijaji and Inder told me the conversation they had with u.

Vyom felt bad that she knows what he has in mind… He went ahead into his house.. Parikrama entered and said,

Parikrama: This is ur house, ur room, Etansh ur child and I want to say I am urs… I love u more after what u said to Inder and Vaibhav jijaji.. ur love for me is just beyond what I felt and thought.. I am urs completely, I feel so nice that I met someone as wonderful as u…

Zindagi Ek Safar hai, Sathi tum mere;

Safar banjaye suhana, Pyaar jo tumhara mujhe ghere,

Ab na parwaf karo duniya kya sochegi?

Jab mohobaat itni paak hai to duniya humsang holegi…

Vyom was emotional with her words of love for him, Parikrama went close to him and made him look at her…

Parikrama: I know Vyom the amount of trauma u have gone in ur life and ur close ones have also gone through it … u don't want me to face those and get into problems…Vyom come to terms that sacrificing in love is fine but the love which is from both sides needs acceptance to the situation they r in and the comfort that whatever happen they don't want to loose each other love… I don't want to loose u and U don't want to loose me… Dotn u?

Vyom looked at her with love and saying with his eyes … "Yes he doestn want to loose her!" Parikrama now felt very shy and with tears in her eyes she said,

Parikrama: Ur decision was wrong.. and my decision was right.. is right… (she smiled ) Vyom on the path u r walkgin there r many hurdles and u want me to choose the other path shortcut which has no hurdles … U r walkgin on that path in that direction… and hoping I walk on the other path in the other direction… U r looking at me and trygint o over come ur hurdles and I am standing without moving lookgina at u .. We both r looking at each other and its obvious we will never reach our destination or even in the right direction as the chances of falling is more.. as we r lookgin at each other and not the path itself…

Vyom looked at her as if he can visualize what she said and what she is trygint o explain.

Parikrama: Vyom I need to wak alogn withu.. and if there r hurdles lets face them, I am with u , u r with me.. even if we fall, we can hold on to each other..and not to forget we have Etansh to make us feel complete and blessed… walking in different paths… we cant walk on the path and we can leave without caring for each other… we will never be satisfied .... (she had tears flowing…. And Vyom went close to her..)

Vyom: I always knew u were a good person.. love for u.. just came by.. I love u .. and it feels so proud to say. I love u.. someone as mature , someone so wonderful and beautiful… u bring joy to my life.. I want to be selfish . I want u in my life.. I need ur love.. I need u..

(He hugged her tightly and kissed her on her forehead… She was shy and feelgin really happy...)

Vyom looked at her the shy eyes and the happiness on her face.. even he was shy and happy.. but he said,

Vyom screamed…. I LOVE U.. Oh god I wanted to say this.. ILOVE U.. Parikrama laughed at the way he was repeating it and happily lookign at her with so much love for her in his eyes.. the smile on his face… I LOVE U! he repeated again.. Kissing her hand.. And Parikrama was so shy.. She told him.. Enough.. Dont scream.. but Vyom was on top of his world.. Feeling so relaxed that he has someone so special in his life…

Vyom: I love u Parikrama… aww Now u r mine.. rnt u.? (Parikrama now was shy and nodded her head in agreement) I love u Pari and I feel... so happy and relieved... u just eased the confusion in me… I Really Love u.. (parikrama was feeling good but at the same time pretty shy)

Vyom asked her to say once she loves him.. and PArikrama who was so confident all this while became too shy to say it..

Parikrama: U know.. I told so many times. (she smiled)

Vyom: Just one more time.

Parikrama looked at him and as she said… I.. L.. She saw Vyom looking at her with so much love and she felt too shy and told him to turn and not look at her… Vyom argued he wanted to see her face when she says she loves me.. he just wants to feel the glow on her face… Parikrama said.. I LOVE.. and with extreme shynes continue.. U…and went into his arms and close to his chest…

Vyom felt like taking her in his arms and kissing her as the beauty with shyness she looked like an angel…

Mohobat har mushily dagar ko asaan kardeta hai,

Mohobat sachi ho to gamo ka andhera durr karleta hai,

Rishta pak aur pyaar bepanah agar ho,

Ishq mey duub jatey Khushnuma lagey ab jahan to…

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 34

Parikrama's parents opposed her decision but she had already decided to stay on in Jalandhar. Her didi and jijaji were with her and her decision. She stayed with themand kept meeting Etansh and Vyom. Vyom's divorce proceedings went on at the saem slow speed and Parikrama was dragged in the whole thing once…though Vyom's lawyer had already counter preoperly how to nto let her name be spoiled. Parikrama told Vyom she got a chance to see the way the court proceedings take place and also a chance to see and meet Kaya.. she told vyom.. any cheap comments by Kaya can never affect her and the realtives , people who have kept quite watching the false accusation , she deostn care what they think about her and Vyom's relationship. Vyom was always proud that Parikrama is in his life.

Etansh was operated and was fine. Etansh was always at his Mamma side (Parikrama) and called up Parikrama if anytime Vyom scolded him .. Parikrama was his Mamma and he did want one day Mamma will come and stay with them. Though in between he went and stayed with Parikrama and play with the cute small baby.. oh Anurama gave birth to a baby girl… and Etansh was always jumping to play with her… and see how tiny her fingers r..and make her smile. She was his sister and he was very protective about her… and loved her. He would shout at Vaibhav if he didn't bring his little sis when coming to meet Vyom.

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Let us take a day from how they r doing after 2 more years have passed by…

Vyom making parathas and singing.. "Mere rang mey rangney wali PARI ho ya ho pariyo ki raani ya ho meri prem kahani .. mere sawalo ka jawaab dooo doona.."

PArikrama enters and Vyom is angry at her.. its Sunday and she told she will come aroung 9am and its 10:30am… Vyom doesn't speak with her.. and Parikrama geos sits wit Etansh… Etansh is eating parathas.. and Parikrama orders, ' One for me as well.." Vyom looked at her with anger… Parikrama smiled and etansh said, " Maamma aap kha paogi Papa ke hath ka paratha..?" VYom looked at him with disbelief, he had 3 parathas and saygin as if his papa cant make nice ones.. Parikram replied.. " Etansh .. khaalungi.. kyakarein ab Jaisa bhi banatey hain khana hota hai.. waise Vyom yeh kya etansh ke parathe pe makhaan nahi lagaya.. sab sikhana padega mujhe"

they both laughed while Vyom took the makhaan out of the fredge and went close to them..and pasted it on their face and both took and pasted on Vyom's face and a makhaan fight started… They were laughing and later on PArikrama made the parathas while

Etansh was taking a nap and she with her hand made Vyom to have them… Vyom took the bite from her hand..and said, " Yeh swaad lanaa mere bass ki baat nahi." Both smiled and sat in the drawing room.. and Vyom asked her…

Vyom:Parikrama once u said Etansh can sing better than me.. sach mey…?

Parikrama: Ya..

Vyom was thinking and parikrama said,

Parikrama: Etansh CAN sing I said… Vyom smiled and kissed her…

Vyom: Why were u so late.. was waiting for u ..ankhen beechaye intezar kar raha tha..

Parikrama: Sorry late hogayi … raat ko late sooyi subah neend hi nahi jaagi..

Vyom : Ab sazaa milegi.. ( and he raised his eyebrow… hinting at something)

Parikrama: Kya (feeling Vyom can get naughty)

Vyom: areeey tum kya soch rahi ho.. hmm (smiling )

Parikrama: theek hai.. lekin no touching and…

Vyom: Tum ladkeeyon ka bhi dimaag kahan jaata hai.. maine nahi socha tha.. tum aisa sochogi… (he looked at her and she felt embarssed and hit him..)

Parikrama: ab itna seedha naa bano.. bolo kya hai..

Vyom: hmmm Tell me any two fantasy u have after u met me.. mujhe dekh kuch ajeeb sa fantasise kiya.. u need to be honest ok..

Parikrama was shy but she had to say it. She said,

Parikrama: Hmmm I once.. felt.. dreamt… that..

Vyom : thoda loudly bataoo .. theek se sunnu..kya kya imagine karti ho ..

Parikrama: Just that u were wearing that black Banyaan…

Vyom: yes yes… once u told me.. Zamana kharab hai.. when I wore it and stood in the balcony…

Parikrama: I wont say.. u r teasing me…

Vyom : Sazaa hai… chalo.. agey..

Parikrama; And I am in a red saree and we both r on bike and going on to a steep hill.. zig zag road…

Vyom: Red saree.. it will get entangle in the bike and accident chances r there..

Parikrama angrily looked at him: We r on the bike, hill raod and the windbreeze is touching us and it starts to rain

and I have kept myself close to u and smilgin with the rain water pouring on u and one me..and …u stop the bike and we walk lookigna t the green surrounding..

Vyom: But.. why should I be in a banyan.. exposing .. chhhi chiii and u in a saree .. sober...and its raining.. u mean I can get nuemonia ….

Parikrama got angry and stood up.. Vyom held her hand..and asked her.. coming close to her..

VYom: What happen when we got down.. Did I look in ur eyes like this.. (he took her close) Did I touch ur face like this. (takgin his hands on to her beautifully face and bright eyes) Did I came so close and we could hear each other's heart beats… Did I … and he kissed on her lips…. Parikrama closed her eyes and felt she still is in her dream and as she opned her eyes..and realised its not dream.. She pushed him away..and said,

Parikrama: U… I told u No touching…

Vyom: When did i.. I just went trhoguh ur fantasy.. (Parikrama was very shy and Vyom took her clseo and asked her what abt the next fantasy..)

Parikrama looked emotional towards him and said: I fantasice How it woud be to feel Etansh from the first day of his birth, the each moment to make him walk, talk and see him learn to say Mamma..and he says that … I fantasice … I gave Etansh birth… Vyom looked at her and felt her emotions and he took her close and just kept taking abt Etansh and his childhood….

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It has been 3 years and finally Vyom got the custody of the child and also divorce from Kaya.. No no.. our judicial system has not worked wonders.. its just that there was an out of court agreement and both mutally agreed. Kaya was given 2 lakhs and she herself wanted to settle with someone else… Vyom was ready to pay the expense as a thank u to her for giving him Etansh … Parikrama and VYom got registered married, and legally r husband and wife… parents to Etansh … Etansh recently won the first prize in a poetry competion.. and lets see the poem he wrote…

My granny blesses me from the clouds of the heaven,

She is my inspiration always to start and to began,

My Maamma is an angel; her name itself is Pari,

My Papa is my superman; he is with me so no need to worry.

They have given me life and they have loved me the most,

My parents r my best friends I pray for them foremost.

Papa sings for charity and gives money to the needy,

Mamma tells me service to humankind is our duty.

With folded hands I pray to the almighty,

Let every child like me get home so pretty.

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This was the last episode to the story "Zindagi – Ek Safar" and I thank all my readers they have given so much support; I was nervous posting few parts but the reponse made me feel really good. The story is as much mine as it is urs… Luv U all.. JJJ Cheers to our journey through this story😃😃😃

Edited by bhoomikauttam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow! finally she made him understand 😊 ......thats good....... so mission impossible 1 is accomplished 😆 ......i just hope MI2, throwing kaya out of the cute little world, happens soon 😃 ....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

wow! finally she made him understand 😊 ......thats good....... so mission impossible 1 is accomplished 😆 ......i just hope MI2, throwing kaya out of the cute little world, happens soon 😃 ....

Hi dear.... Yup mission done.. and not only this.. the mission of this story is done.. 😆as the story ended.. hope u did read the 34th part as well.. Kaya and ben trhown why to take the effort .. in rel world.. we better saty away from such people and not let our hands get dirty ... am relaly happy with ur comments on my story and felt really ncie to get the respnse from u... 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
superb ending bhoomi....me going greedy when u'll start ur next ff?hehehe!!!!'
fantabulous work!!!!!!!

love
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Monika..dear... U liked the parts.. aww mindlwoig bol rahi ho.. dont know.. chalo glad u liked them..and felt teh conversation was touching.. thats wat i need. it to touch and make u feel... U like Pari..yup brave.. love makes u brave i guess... ur appreciation makes me gladd.. yaar. i dotn say thanks in replies so i am avodiign that word..warna sab ko thanks bolne ka mann hai... 😳

you are sooo sweet bhoomi 👏i said mindblowing bec it is dear.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow great ending bhoomi finaly Vyom make it soooo sweet 👏 sweet family 😉 😉 😉

I love Etansh's poem its sooooo sweet 👏


My granny blesses me from the clouds of the heaven,

She is my inspiration always to start and to began,

My Maamma is an angel; her name itself is Pari,

My Papa is my superman; he is with me so no need to worry.

They have given me life and they have loved me the most,

My parents r my best friends I pray for them foremost.

Papa sings for charity and gives money to the needy,

Mamma tells me service to humankind is our duty.

With folded hands I pray to the almighty,

Let every child like me get home so pretty


Bhoomi its realy awesome story 👏 👏 👏I love it from my heart 👏 & please write more i am waiting for next ff. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey !! Awesome story yaar !! I luvd it!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
bhoomi why did u end this ff so sooooooooooon i wanted to read more a lovely and a very mature concept and the poems were always splendid i loved the last one amazing bhoomi hope u write more such fics 🤗

here are your jappis
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Posted: 17 years ago
Superb bhoomi..just luvd the ending..even the conversation btw vyom n parikrama in the hospital was v..well written.

Zindagi - Ek Safar ...struck such an emotional chord....hats off to u...thanx for penning such a beautiful story...

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