[AR]Jab We Met FF **UPDATED PG6 PLEASE READ** - Page 3

The story opens on Aditya.

Aditya is a depressed character. He is a young man disillusioned with life after being dumped by his girlfriend. [Ayesha – Anjali (Armaans Girlfriend)]. To make matters worse his large business of mobiles is going nowhere since his father passed away recently…leaving the whole business to Adi.

Adi: *to himself* Its always me…im always the one to lose the girl.
Adi roaming the streets of Mumbai pulling his tie off, his cufflinks falling to the ground, his hankerchief floats to the ground as he walks off.

[Ends up outside Ayesha's house, wedding celebrations going on]
Ayesha comes out of her room to see Adi standing outside her gate.
Ayesha: ADII WHAT? What are you doing here? She shouts but he doesn't hear her as he is so lost and depressed at the thought of his only love marrying someone else…
[Runs outside]
Ayesha: Adi, Adi what…what are you doing here?? You know its my sangeet today, just go from here…you will create problems…come on…just go…
Adi: So that's it..its so easy for you to say just go…
Ayesha: Oh Adi…
Adi: Don't just "oh adi" me, its not easy for me you know, I loved you with all my heart, and now you just push me away…and its said just like people change their shirts, boys change their girls…but I guess its different here…its you this time. When you see a new good looking, rich boy then…
[Loud Music Coming From The House Interrupts the Foul Language Used Between The Two]
Ayesha: Oh Whatever Adi, Just Go. Main tumhari shakal tak bhi nahi dheek na chaati.
Adi: Walks Away…throwing a letter to Ayesha's face….
Ayesha reading the letter:
"Ayesha, I love you so much, without you my world is incomplete."
Ayesha looks up to see no sight of Adi, one tear drops from her eyes, as she takes one step forward to run after Adi, her mum calls…

Adi: Depressed, he walks the streets of Mumbai, with no sign of where he is going he walks into a train station, people shouting at eachother, many people walking past, banging into him he doesn't say a word…just keeps walking.
He gets into the train and takes a seat…he has no idea where on earth he is heading.

Geet: AREEE FIKUR NAHI KARO. Babaji hai meri saat. Are Piteh Moo yeh tho pukaro. [Handing the man a framed picture of Guru Nanak Ji].
Train Man: But madam, you should come first, don't worry about the luggage.
Geet: Oh Shut Up, I know what im doing, I have never missed a train, so don't worry about me.
Geet: Aaahh Finally..thank you babaji, once again you saved me…Thank you…
[talking to the man] Did I tell you I have NEVER missed a train, did I tell you??
Man: But where are you going?
Geet: Oh don't you worry, I know what your thinking, a lonely girl on a train…but I am a Sikhni from Bhatinda, I can look after my self don't you doubt that. By the way I am going to my home town Bhatinda, in Punjab…


Hey Guys Sorry if that is reallyy badd…well it's a start!!

Sneakk x

I thought i would add some more on...

Part 2
Geet: *to herself* Where's my seat, aahh meri seat kithe gayab ho gayi hai?
Geet: *to Adi* Uh, Hello? Yeh Meri Seat Hai…*No Response* Aree HELLO?? Tum Bere ho kya? Sunay Nahi Detha? This is my Seat…
Adi: Nods and moves to the opposite seat.
Geet: Yeh sab choro, [loud] Hi!!
Adi: Staring outside the window.
Geet: *to herself* yeh bara ajeeb sa ladka hai…hmm..kuch to hua hai…
Geet: Areee hello mr…*Adi looks* Do you know what, im so excited, I have neverrrrrr missed ONE train in my whole life, I always got onto it..it was so exciting, with all that adrenaline running inside of me, the thrill of running after the train like running after someone you love…
Adi: Turns to look at her in shock of hearing the sentence "running after the one you love"…he remembers moments with Ayesha.
Geet: Ha…well what I was saying was that im going to Bhatinda to see my mummy daddy and offcourse theres Uncle, Auntie, Pappu, Gullu, Sweety, uhh..OH how could I forget theres grandad too, hes quite scary but hes got a heart of a baby…yeh so theres sweetty gullu guppu pappu amarat…uhh who else…hmm…Who else? Oh yeh and Roop..I love her like a sister…did I tell you?...uhh Hello??
Adi: Totally tuned out..not listening to a word shes saying, hes totally quiet.
Geet: * To herself* Looks like hes gone mad…
Geet: Keeps chatting, until they get to sleep, she obviously gets the bed at the top, and he still sits on the chair like before.
Geet: *eyes shut, on the bed, in sleep* When I get there I will have to meet gullu, roop..and have Gulab Jamans…mmm and jalebis…..fades out..and what about you Adi?...Adi??...
Opens eyes to see no Adi…
Geet: Walks around the train to the door compartment to see Adi literally walking out of the train…
Geet: AREEE TUM PAGAL HOGAYE HO KYA??? Whats the matter with you, you don't say a word, you just sit there looking outside the window, is something wrong with you??...
Adi: Can hear nothing, as he is totally zoned out to hear her, he just sees her mouth constantly moving….
Ticket Guy: Ticket Please *to geet*
Geet: Yeh Yeh Wait a second ill give it to you at the seat…
Adi: Stares at the man.
Ticket Guy & Geet: Ticket?? Adii Ticket??
Back at the seats…
Geet to ticket man: Just make his ticket here..uh he doesn't speak much, just gone through a tough time, uhh…he will go where I go.
Thanks.


Geet: Don't you speak?
She goes on and on and on until Adi has had enough and has an outburst…
Adi: Enough! Don't YOU EVER SHUT UP? JUST ONCE?? I DON'T CARE IF YOU HAVE NEVER MISSED A TRAIN, I FRANKLY DON'T CARE IF YOU SIT ONTOP OF THE TRAIN…AND I DON'T CARE WHERE YOU ARE GOING, YOU CAN BE GOING TO YOUR HOUSE OR A BROTHEL IT WONT MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO ME IF YOU'RE A GOOD DAUGHTER OR A CALL GIRL!!! NOW WOULD YOU PLEASE JUST SHUT UP!
Geet: *Very shocked at the brothel part…nearly in tears* …..silence…..
Adi: Uh..Vo..Main…I didn't mean the brot…i..
Geet: Oh don't worry, that part was a bit OTT but don't worry things happen, anyway…
Adi: *Funny* You wont be quiet will you! Oh God! ?

Train stops at a station…
Adi gets off, still a little depressed he walks off into the station with his coat.
Geet comes out of the toilet to see hes not there, she looks out of the train and sees him wondering into nowhere…..

To Be continued..

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wow yaar plz coninnue soon itwaswoderful mid boig plz continue son 👏 [=👏 D>] 👏 [=👏 [=👏 D>] 👏 D>] 👏

awesome story.. funnily enough i was watching JWM last nite!

lol.. please do continue!!

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hey awesome yaa.. 👏 do count soon 👏

Very nice sis!! 👏 loved it, it was quite funny 😆 Geet is so cute 😆 continue soon plz 😳

Originally posted by: kvn1983

please start it 😊

I Have Started It, Yesterday I Just Put Up Part 1 & 2 Didnt You See It?

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

well..start it soon dear.. 😃

I Have Started It, Yesterday I Just Put Up Part 1 & 2 Didnt You See It?

Part 3
Geet: Aree Yeh Kaha Gyab Hogaya? *adi walkingg off* Ohh Piteh Moo!
Adi: *visible in the mist*
Geet: AREE SUNOO HEROOO!!!
Train Guy: Whats his name?
Geet: Oi Chad Yaar I don't know
Train Guy: Is he with you? Do you know Him?
Geet: Aree Yaarrr Chup Kar. HEYYY HEROOO THE TRAINS LEAVING…..COME ON!
Geet: * steps off train and starts to run*
Train Guy: Heyy miss the trains leavingg…
Geet:*running*
Geet: Oiii Kalii Pant…Depressedd Guy WAITTT *She is shouting*
*catches up with him* *hes sits down*
Areee come on, the trains leaving…*he looks at her..not interested* Ohh…
MAROO SALEE!! (Go To Hell)
Geet: Runs off after train….* bashes into lady with oranges..obviously lady is angry and shouts at Geet to pick them up*
Geet: Carries on running, lady throws oranges at her…
Geet: *Just missed the train* *Adi comes out with his shirt unbuttoned at the top and his suit jacket in his hand…; sees Geet and turns around*
Geet: *walks up to Adi*..YOU BLODDYY WEIRDO where on earth are you from, because of you I missed my train, all my luggage and my babaji picture are on that train you freak!! And now look I am standing here in my slippers and nightsuit…ALL BECAUSE OFF YOUUU!!!!!
Adi: Did I tell you to follow me off the train? Can't you just leave me alone?
Geet: Aree vaah…I tried to help you, you fool …you shameless goatt…and so its my mistake? AND NOW YOUR SHOWING MEEEEE ATTITUDE!?
Adi: Okay, Thanks for helping me *sarcastically* Now that you have helped me, would you please *folding his hands* Pleasee…leave me alone?
Geet: LEAVE YOU ALONE?? Right I seee…hmm…its not that easy you fool, because of you I missed my train and NOW YOUU will drop me to Bhatinda to my house, and that's with ALL my luggage…JEE HA!!! I am not gonna spare you now, KYON DOUBT MAT RAKNA…SIKHNI HOO MAIN BHATINDI KI!
Adi: Stands with arms folded…..then runs for it!
Geet: Areeee CHOR!! *runs up stairs after him shouting chor*
Adi: *runs past police man, he doesn't stop adi even though shes shouting CHOR!*
Geet: *to police man* USELESSS, THROW YOUR UNIFORM TO THE FLOOR!
Adi: *at a taxi, sees Geet tells her to hurry into the car.*
Geet: COME ON COME ON..Goo Taxi Driver..*Adi in car* *Taxi guy praying*
Geet: Yes Yes, God has heard your prayers, now please can we gooooooo!!!!!
Taxi Guy: *Drives VERYY Slowly*
Geet: What on earth, piteh moo, what ARE you doing? How are we gonna get the train now???
Taxi G: Well, you missed the train because you were slow, and so it doesn't matter now…Ritlam is the next station…*starts to sing* *Aate Jaate Khoobsurat Avara Sadkon Pe..Kabhi Kabhi Ittefaq Se….*
Adi: Stop the car…I said stop..
*Taxi Guy, Adi get out*
Adi gets into drivers seat and taxi guy into passenger….
Adi: *Drives like the wind…all surprised*
Geet: Aree Vah! Mr Bombay! WOW KYA STYLE HAI!!!
Arrive at Ritlam Station….Taxi Guy asking for money, whilst Adi and Geet run into station!
All out of breathe…Taxi Guy catches up with Adi…asks for money..
Adi: Oh Whatever, stay still im getting money out.
Geet: I need some money I want water…
Adi: Stay STILL! I said im giving your money…*to taxi guy*
Geet: *at water shop* Water Please..*gets bottle* Aaah Thank you, God I would die, Pani is the bestt when your out of breathe…How much?
Guy: 15 Rupees
Geet: WHAT! Train prices are less?
Guy: This is rate..sorryy.
Geet: WHATEVER…Give me my money back THIS INSTANCE.
Geet: *gets money, and starts to drink…hears train moving…in shock* STOPPP!!!! SOMEONE STOPP!!!
Geet: Falls to the ground, once again shes missed the train.
Geet: *Starts to walk…its dark* *Guys start to bother her.
Guys: Heyy your water, you left it…oh a poor girl all alone…what can u do …come with us we will keep you safe..*gets closer*
Geet: Stop this nonsense and get lost!...Get any closer and ill slap you!
Guys: Let her slap you, atleast she will touch you then…
Geet: Walks Away…*Sees other taxi Guy and tells him to stop..but he drives off*
Guy: Come with me, ill give you a lot of money for one night..
Geet: Im not that type of girl…*walks off..he follows* *she sees Adi and runs to hug him; guy drives off*
Geet: Thank you BABAJI!!! Saved me AGAIN!
Adi: You missed the train again?

Geet: Hi, Im Geet!!
Adi: Hi, Im Aditya..
Geet: Pleased to meet you!

That's it for today Guys x x

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