[AR]Jab We Met FF **UPDATED PG6 PLEASE READ** - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sneak.

OKAY No One Replied.

If i dont get any replies in this week then i am shutting my FF.

hey plzzz dnt close it its really gd i fink no 1 gt a chacnce to read it coz dey didnt kno jus a lil sugestion wen u updte on ur title part just type dwn u updtd den watch da comment cum flyin in dw really gd ff plzz dnt close it its really gd

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey.tht's really good. continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey dont do that! we all love your fan fiction a lot!

it will take time to get some readers! trust me it happened to me too! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hello i just read your ff .it rocks man!! nice concept!! pls pm me when updated
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww plz Snick dont close it!!! missing u yaar Im in India but I promise I will try my best to read ur FF updates 😳 anyway, this part was really nice 👏 simple, cute and funny 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plz don't shut it we love it plz don't if you will keep writing then maybe more people will see it so plz you're an amazing writer plz don't stop it 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys, Sorry I haven't updated for ages!! I thought no one read it, so I stopped for a while and I just checked my FF today and a few people were saying carry on, so I thought I would for you lot!!

Last Time:

Geet: Im not that type of girl…*walks off..he follows* *she sees Adi and runs to hug him; guy drives off*

Geet: Thank you BABAJI!!! Saved me AGAIN!

Adi: You missed the train again?

Geet: Hi, Im Geet!!

Adi: Hi, Im Aditya..

Geet: Pleased to meet you!

Part 4

Geet: You don't understand how pleased I am to meet you…because you're the cause of all my problems with the train! I told you didn't I! DON'T DOUBT ANYTHING, You are taking me to my house. We will stay at a hotel tonight, and then go to Kota get the luggage...and then *weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee(sound a child makes)* all the way to Bhatinda!

…..

Adi: Having fun? You know what we should put you in a museum! Everyone should pay to see you!

Geet: Ooo, yes yes..but where shall we put you! You are on the train, but don't know where your going…you drive like a crazy man, nearly kill me. And now we are walking side by side in a creepy street * puts on a voice* slowly slowly its getting darker, walking the streets of Ratlam! ALONE!!!! I mean yaar, what IS your problem? Ohh Yes yes, *sarcastically* you don't share your problems with anyone…I see….Are you a fan of Bachchan?? Angry young man! *puts on voice like Amitabh*….

Adi: *Walking quietly*

Geet: You are very quiet, don't you say much!..Ah anyway whos your favourite actor!!! Tell me tell me!

Adi: Oh *shrugs his shoulders* God man, where have you put me…where am I, what am I doing here!

Geet: Oh COME ON! I myself like Shahid Kapoor, oh come on tell me!

Adi: You never shut up do you!

Geet: No

Adi & Geet approach a hotel called Hotel Decent!

Geet: Chalo.

Adi: *not so sure* Nahi, lets see somewhere else.

Geet: Oh Come On *pushes him*

*At the reception desk they see (atul) a guy with a woolly hat on and a waistcoat; dodgy looking guy.

Adi: Do you accept credit card?

Guy: No Credit only cash.

Adi: *saying it more clearly* credit card?*long silence* Oh god, whats the tariff?

Guy: WHAT?

Adi: For one day how much do you charge?

Guy: You want the room, for a matter of hours *Looking at Geet, wink wink* or…

Adi: Whatever I ask you, just answer that, don't get all smart on me! How much for one day…

Geet: *butts in* Why do we need it for one day? We just need it for a few hours…

Adi: Listen I know what im talking about

Geet: *to guy* we will take the room for the hourly rate.

Adi: Geet, you are not understanding what he means…

Geet: *butts in* OH come on, theres no need to be shy! We only have work for a matter of hours…

Guy: Smiling *to adi* How many hours.

Adi looks at geet, Geet: Uhh..Two? Two is enough. Oh fine on the safe side 3 hours?

Adi: Laughing, as Geet doesn't know what the guy really is implying!

Adi: *to guy* 3 hours.

Geet walks to the side

Guy: * to adi* Where did you find her!

Adi: On the train.

Guy: MY GOD. Really!

Adi: Like my item?

Guy: Beauty!

Adi: 3 hours!

Guy: *winks*

….in the room

Geet: What were you talking to him about?

Adi: you know your such a big cartoon!

Geet: Possibly. But I know karate

Adi: Why?

Geet: Just telling you, im a brown belt.

Adi: Oh I see, so if I try anything on you, then you will show me your karate.

Geet: Maybe, Actually exactly!

Adi: Don't worry I wont.

Geet: you wouldn't anyway.

Adi: Even if I can I wouldn't..

Geet: Yes yes but you cant.

Adi: are you irritating me so I will?

Geet: No no…im just telling you okay.

Geet: Im a one guy girl! I have mine already! Anshuman!

Adi: Yes I am also a one woman man look…*takes out picture*

Geet: Ooo show me! Wow! How lucky

Adi: No, not any more.

Geet: Ohhhh I see she dumped you.

Adi: Life dumped me.

Geet: Meaning…

Oh God! The Famous silence! Tell me..oh leave it. Right look at the photo, and burn it!

Adi: oh stop it…your acting childish!

Geet: Come on no tension!!

*lights the photo*

Geet: Okay now go to the toilet and flush her out of your life!!

Adi: Flushes the photo.

Geet: Better?

Adi: Yes. Surprisingly!!

Geet: See I told you!! You are quite handsome, so you will get so many other girls!!

Adi: Thank you.

Geet: See im getting married to Anshuman and all. But say I wasn't…then maybe I would have fallen for you…JUST IMAGINE!!!

That's all for today guys! Please Comment.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nicely done..like ur concept..lol..gud job!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice it was wonderful plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 update cnt soon fel free to PM me!
❤️twinkle!

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