Love in the Time of Orkut - Pt 6 - Pg 16 - Page 11

heyyy firstt of all huz depikka well an awesummm updateeee 👏

cool amazing wow superb!
and ya u r my friend and miss perfect tooo! 😆
fantabulosly written!
im short of words and yaa orkut not safe correct!
keep up the gud work!
god bless!
👏

Originally posted by: PraThAm~GaURi

huh finally i got the link thnku 4 uupdating darlin

thx vrinda 😊
will post links 4m now on as well 😃

Originally posted by: k-ekta fan

Aahana it was gud part yaar.

ju said it si rite... dun gve ur nos 2 stranger n mostly while chattin no way. dat si y i neva gve 😆 😆

wow pratik is so protective n smart also.

luv dis part 😉 👏 👏

th mona 4 agreeing with me 😊

i m not tryin 2 be a prude here or set guidelines but really ppl shd think abt their steps

ya pratik has kinda been more mature abt his opinions as he is not a day dreamer

Originally posted by: nihalfan

who's deepika? newa gd one 👏

well deepika can be tht girl who plays Ash in KDMHMD 😊

Originally posted by: Yug-Deepika

well great. great... great part.And what u wrote about science and technology and orkut was so true. Recently Orkut was in news for many bad reasons n some indian political parties were also demanding to close it. I really agree anything can become bad if used too excessively and sciene and orkut are no exception. Great part Aahana and i think Pratik is much mature and wiser than Deepika.Waiting for the next twist to unfold. And last but not the least, i think that u have seleted really a different subject and u r handling it really well. and 👏 u deserve really this lil sis 😛 The devil wears D& G Is it a hint 😉 Because i have watched someone wearing this. Anyways post the next part really really soon

first of all thank u so much 4 makin me ur lil sis 😃

so gaurav Bhaiyya m really happy u r likin my this lil attempt

i was just thinkin abt what could be a topic we all could feel connected to when this FF ' concept came to my mind

ya i know some parties were like dead on tryin to close orkut but i rather not blame em cause its our choice after all

how r they 2 blame 4 us freely joining a site

& abt the D&G thing act i was kinda thinkin abt 'The Devil Wears Prada' a really famous novel but changed it to D&G 4 this one so really donno abt d connection u mentioned 😳

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

heyyy firstt of all huz depikka well an awesummm updateeee 👏

sorry 4got tht 😳

deepika is Ash of Kis desh main.....

Originally posted by: kanan_26

cool amazing wow superb!
and ya u r my friend and miss perfect tooo! 😆
fantabulosly written!
im short of words and yaa orkut not safe correct!
keep up the gud work!
god bless!
👏

thx a lot kanan

n ya it never hurts to be safe on net on any site

Chapter 5: The Devil Wears D&G.

Pratik was a very popular guy amongst his friends sometimes too much for his own good, which got him into trouble many a times.

Being a guy who could never be at one place he was always some place or the other, this had even taken a toll on his education & he had been admitted to a junior college after paying a huge donation.

He knew being a guy their ways & things much more than Deepika. She was just being an ignorant fool who felt I- Know-All, but she didn't.

On that day when Pratik checked her scrapbook he saw she had been chatting with a guy whose onscreen name was BAD BOY ON THE LOOSE BEWARE.

Somehow he had an idea of this guy by his screen name, reading their scraps he realized that Deepika had promised to meet the guy.

Somehow that was not the end of it at all he felt he new the person to whom this profile belonged, calling up a friend Vishal he soon found he was right.

Vishal was on this guy' Scrapbook on Orkut & even Pratik knew him personally as they had been introduced & become good friends.

Pratik got a low down about this guy & found out he is a scum who made friends with innocent girls on orkut & other such sites & later ruined their life for good.

He would black mail them for money after taking em to his place & spike their drinks taking indecent pictures & even make blue films.

To his worst horror Pratik realized Deepika had fallen into his trap & was his new target.

With a few phone calls he found out the place where he would ask girls to come & later his address. He asked Vishal to come along with him.

Driving his Hyundai Santro at the speed of 120/km per hour he reached the spot just in time.

Deepika had stupidly drunk a spiked cola & was feeling giddy after it. Imran the guy she met had so far succeeded in his modus operandi.

They had met at Cinemax where they saw a movie & later had drinks at a small joint near it, where he had always taken girls as part of his plan.

He later asked em to relax for a while in his apartment close by until they have recovered.

If a girl were to say no thinking how can she trust he would say that his mom is at home so it will be fine he would lie that they are college friends if she were to ask anything & that he brought her home as she was unwell.

As the girl reached home he would lie that probably she ain't at home & was out shopping. Thou the girl may have resisted but succumbed owing to the conditions. That would ruin them forever.

Deepika too had almost reached his home when Pratik & Vishal reached in time before he had even got her in after reaching their doorstep.

As soon as he was about to get her in Pratik reached there & started hitting Imran badly while Vishal held Deepika who was nauseous.

She didn't understand what happened, to her Imran was this nice guy who was well mannered, good looking, polite who was nice enough to take care of her when she was uneasy & wore expensive D&G stuff.

Pratik beat up the guy black & blue while vishal too joined him after managing to get deepika in the car.

The next day he was so mad at her when they met that at first he slapped her hard across the face for doing something so irrational & stupid.

Deepika however not the one to bow down said he had done all this as he was just too controlling & that she was sick of him & his conservative ways.

They abused each other & later she asked him to f*** off from her life & that he shouldn't bother his a** about her from now on, along with some of the most things that Pratik could never forget or forgive her for.

They broke up on that ugly note & Pratik had the last say when he said that now even if she begged on her knees he wouldn't return to her.

And that was the end of it.

Next chapter: Morning Wake ups are a Disaster.

nice one..fankx for ur pm..gtg now..i got exam tomorrow..n only came to read ur FF 😳 👏