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Posted: 16 years ago

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kashish dear i'am here with my comment on aks... sorry itne din se comment nahii karr paayi thi.. woh main thoda sa busy hogayi thi... ab chalo comment likhna shuru karthi hoon..😊 to ab woh din bhii aagaya jis din khushi kii shaddi hone waali hai... well is din se hii tho khushi ke woh theeno bhai durr bhaag rahe the... sujal, prem aur rudra apni behen se kabhi alag nahii hona chahthe hai.. chahe log kitna hii kyun na samjhaye un theeno ko kii yeh tho dastoor hotha hai jahaan ek ladki ko apna ghar chod kar doosre ghar jaana hotha hai... lekin yeh baat un bhaiyyon ke dil ko samjhayega.. they know it is the fact of life, they know kii khushi ek na ek din unko chod kar apne ghar chali jayegi.. lekin phir bhi bhi i'am sure they are still not able to come to terms with the fact kii khushi unko chod kar chali jaayegi.. zaahir si baat hai, bachpan se yeh theen bhai apni behen kii raksha karr rahe hai.. aur aaj jaakar yeh haath kissi aur ke haathon mein dena, un theeno ke liye hii thoda sa mushkhil hoga na.. but still i can see kii sujal, rudra and prem are putting up a brave front.. aur apne kaamon mein apne dard ko chupa rahe hai... the scene where khushi taiyaar ho rahii hothi hai, aur kashish, heer aur mehek uski madat karr rahe hothe hai.. aur joh baatein hothi hai un chaaron ke beech.. khushi joh waada chahthi hai kashish se... all these talks seriously touched by heart... mujhe tho yeh scene padkar ek dum se rona bhi aagaya... aur kashish bhi khushi se kehthi hai kii woh apna vadaa nibhayegi... chalo achcha hai.. atleast khushi us ghar se bina chinta ke jaa sakthi hai.. kyunke woh yeh baat tho jaanthi hai kii uske jaane ke baad us ghar ko sambhal ne waale,uske bhaiyon ko sambhal ne waale, uske parents ko apne maa, baba samaj waale uski bhabhiyaan hai, aur khushi ko yeh yakeen bhi hai kii woh log yeh kaam bohat hii achche tarike se karenge.... tho khushi apni shaddi ko lekar thodi si nervous hai.. khushi ka nervous hona tho lazmi hai na, aakhirkaar har ladki nervous hothi hai.. us ladki ko apna ghar, apne rishthe sab peeche chod kar ek nayi duniyaan mein kadam rakhna hotha hai tho nervous hona tho bohat hii common si baat hai.. i'am glad kii kashish, heer aur mehek are giving khushi the support that she needs at that time... aur phir jab wahaan sujal, rudra aur prem aathe hai.. woh theenon apne dukh ko chupa kar chehre par ek fake smile rakhte hai.. aur ab bhi rudra aur prem khushi ko tang karthe hai.. this is just so that they can hide their pain, i'am sure of it.. aur phir sujal, khushi kii woh emotional baatein... yeh sab mere dil ko choo gaye.. very well portrayed emotions.... then even anurag is trying to hide his emotions.. sachchi jab ek beti, shaddi karke doosre ghar jaathi hai, tab sabko kitna dukh hotha hai... and then finally the baraat has arrived.. i'am sure jaise, jaise waqt guzar raha hai khushi ka dil tho baita hii jaa raha hotha hai.. and then shaddi ke time kanyadaan ke waqt khushi ka kehna kii woh chahthi hai kii anurag, prerna ke saath, saath sujal,kashish bhi uska kanyadaan kare.. haan sahii bhi hai yeh baat sujal ke liye khushi uski chotti gudiya, uski beti se kumm thode na hai... aur phir shaddi ho jaathi hai.. aur khushi ka bidaai ka waqt bhi aa jaatha hai... aur yahaan sujal mahashay bidaai ke waqt gayab ho jaathe hai..ab khushi ka going to meet sujal... aur phir sujal aur khushi ke beech kii baatein.. yeh sab padkar tho bina ehsaas ke mere aankhon se aasoo behne lag gaye.. i never realized kii main ro rahii hoon.. the bond which khushi and sujal share is very damn good... finally even sujal apne dil kii baat bayaan karr raa hai.. his dukh has come out.... and then after all the rona, khushi kii bidaai bhii ho jaathi hai.. the three brothers would have parted ways from their sister bohat hii mushkhil se, i'am sure of it... then the agli subaah ka scene, jahaan breakfast table par sujal, prem aur rudra mein se kissi ka bhi khaane ka mann hii nahii hotha.. woh log khushi ko joh miss karr rahe hothe hai... aur phir jab kashish unhe batathi hai kii un theeno ko khushi ko laane jaana hai rasam ke liye, jis tarah kii chamak aathi hai un theeno ke chehre par..kya baatun is baare mein... too sweettt... aur ab tho prem aur rudra kii shaddi kii baat bhi agge badh rahii hai.. me tho bohat hii zyada khush...aur kashish us ghar kii badi bahu hone ka farz kie achche se nibha rahii hai.. woh sabki chotti, badi zaroorat ka khayal rakh rahii hai.. bohat achche... and then sujal, prem, rudra going to khushi's house..aur wahaan yeh theen bhai aur unki behen kii aankhon ka bhar aana.. they are so attached to each other.. inke bhai-behen ke rishthe ko kabhi kissi kii nazar na lage.. waise jaise woh kangan dekhkar vasu react karthi hai na, mujhe lagtha hai kii kuch tho gadbad hai khushi ke sasural mein.. woh log jaise dikhthe hai, waise hai nahi.. unka asli rang kuch aur hii hai aisa mujhe lagtha hai... then khushi ka apne ghar aana.. wahaan tho sab log bade khush hothe hai... this shows kii un logon kii khushiyaan ek dusare par dependent hai.. aur ek shaks bhi na ho tho yeh khushi kum ho jaathi hai... aur phir khushi apne ghar wapas chali bhi jaathi hai in the evening... aur ab agle din kashish aur sab log , kashish ke maayke ke liye nikal jaathe hai prem aur rudra ka rishta tay karne ke liye.. aur jis tarah se kashish bell bajathi hai na, aur joh jawaab woh sujal ko dethi hai, yeh kashish na abhi thak bachchi hii hai.. shaddi ko itna waqt ho gaya hai, lekin ab bhi sharat karne nahii bhooli hai... and then finally rudra aur prem ka rishtha tay ho jaatha hai... unki sagayi kii date bhii final ho jaathi hai.. chalo yeh tho bohat hii achchi baat hui... aur joh un sabke beech baatein hothi hai woh bhi bohat hii achcha tha... kashish kitni zimedaar ho gayi hai... woh apna har farz itne achche se nibhathi hai... uske koi bhi rishthe mein kami nahii rehthi.. aur yeh sab mumkin hotha hai sirf aur sirf sujal ke saath, uske pyaar kii wajah se... very good yaar.. absolutely rocking parts.. waise beech mein joh sujal, kashish ka romance tha.. where sujal tells kashish kii he thinks it is time kii woh dono, do se theen ho jaye... pehle kashish ka mana karna.. sujal ka thoda naraaz hona.. and then kashish ka telling him something like if sujal wants something tho how will she deny him.. indirectly hinting that she is ready for the baby... awwwww... mazaa aagaya.. lovely, superb, fantastic, excellent, par excellence, brilliant, marvelous, amazing, awesome, bindaas, jhakkas, raapchik, dhassu... hyee.. hyee.. sujal, kashish ke romance par main fulltoo dida... main qurbaan...absolutely mind blowing parts.. i really liked reading them..... the emotions were perfect to the "T"... ⭐️ dear now coming to my guess on the forth coming parts... for the coming up parts first of all next part mein bohat saari khushiyaan hongi... karwachauth hoga... aur kashish tho anyway fast rakhegi, lekin sujal bhii kashish ko bina bataye fast rakhega... har taraf khushiyaan hii khushiyaan hongi... sujal, kashish ke beech mein thoda emotional talk bhii hoga.. aur mere hisaab se tho the next part has loads of romantic moments between our sweet couple sujal, kashish.. ched- chaad, masti-dhamaal sab kuch chaltha hii rahega... aur mere khayal se ab next part se we will get to see the true colors of rishi's family.. meri intution yeh kehthi hai kii rishi ek achcha insaan hai, lekin uske ghar waale are wicked... especially his mother and sister.. i may be wrong i don't know.. tho dear this is my guess for the coming up parts tho tumhe kya lagtha hai mera yeh guess sahii hai ya nahii.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know....😉 kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly..... 😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

Part-30

Aaj ki raat woh raat thi jiska her shaadi shuda aurat ko her saal uska besabri se intzaar rehta hai............kehte hai ki Karva Chuth ke vrat se patni aur pati ka bandhan aur bhi majbut ho jata hai...........aaj wahi aash leke Kashish bhi apne pati apne pyaar ke liye karva chauth ka vrat rakhnewali hai...........Raat ko hi Prerna ne Khushi, Mehek aur Heer ko Garewal House bula liya hota hai kyunki subaah me suraj nikalne se pehle unhe sargi deni hoti hai............ab subaah ke panch baje hote hai..........jab Khushi Kashish ke kamre pe knock karti hai............

Sujal: itni raat ko kaun hai...

Kashish: koi nahi aap so jaiye........woh mere liye aayi hai.......woh mama ne bulaya hai...........

Kashish jake darwaza kholti hai........

Khushi: Mama ne aapko neeche bulaya hai aadhe ghante me ..........

Kashish: main abhi taiyaar hoke aati hoon.........

Khushi: jaldi aana.........

Kashish taiyaar hone bathroom me chali jati hai.........aur phir neeche chali jati hai jaha pe sabhi hote hai..........

Mehek: dii......aap lagta hai raat bhar thik se soyi nahi........

Heer: jiju ne sone diya hoga tab na.........

Kashish: ek bar tum dono ki shaadi ho jane do phir pata lagega........aur ab aage kuch nahi ......woh mama aur Tai aa rahe hai............

Prerna: are tum log khade kyun ......betho aur jaldi apni sargi khao......

Khushi: mama.........lekin aap bataiye to sahi yeh Sargi kya hoti hai...........

Prerna: sargi woh hoti hai jisme chupa hota hai ek saans ka apni bahu ki prati pyaar......woh saans jo apni bahu ki maa se vaada karke layi hoti hai ki uski beti ka pura khayal rakhegi use bahu nahi beti banake rakhegi........woh saans apni beti jaisi bahu ko kaise bhukhi rakh sakti hai.........isi liye aaj ke din ek saans apni bahu ko sargi deti hai.............

Khushi; lekin meri sargi.......

Shanta Tai: kal raat ko tere ghar se aa gayi thi...........ab tum sab waqt barbad mat karo aur khao......pata nahi phir kab khane ko mile.................

sab log khane lagte hai..........

Heer: Mama...kuch aur bataiyena Karva Chuth ke bare me.........

Kashish: mama aap bhi apni sargi kha lijiye.........Heer main batati hoon ki hum Karwa Chuth kyun rakhte hai...........Karva chuth woh hai jisse ek patni ka bhagwan ke vishwas ke saath apni pati se aur bhi ghehra bandhan ban jata hai...........aaj ke din Pati ka sthan hum bhagwan ke saath mante hai is liye aaj ke din hum apne pati ki puja karte hai............aaj ke din hum bhagwan se jo bhi mangege woh hume dete hai aur isi liye aaj ke din her patni apne pati ki lambi umar ki dua mangti hai...............sahi kaha na maine mama..........

Prerna: tu to kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti............

Kashish: mama aap bhi na......

Shanta Tai: ab jaldi se khatam karo abhi sab ko mandir bhi jana hai puja ke liye...........

sab log sargi khake mandir ke liye nikal jate hai...............

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ab kareeban do ghante bad sab wapas aate hai...........Kashish Sujal ko uthane apne kamre me aati hai..............

Kashish; Sujal..........chaliye jaldi se uthiye...........aath bajnewale hai............

Sujal: bas do minute.....

Kashish: nahi......phir aap ko dairi hogi to aap mujpe chilayenge.......

Sujal: main tumpe chilata hoon.........

Kashish: haa..........jab aap dair se uthte hai to...........kashish meri tie nahi mil rahi..........kashish mere joote kaha hai..........kashish meri red wali file nahi hai........kashish mera wallet nahi mil raha............kashish tumne meri ghadi dekhi..........kashish meri car ki chabiyaan..........uff.......ek saans me kitne sawaal karte hai aap........aap ke saath aap muje bhi pagal karte hai..........

Sujal hasne lagta hai........

Kashish: ab aap has kyun rahe hai.........

Sujal: kuch nahi tum nahi samjogi.............waise aaj itni sawarke subaah subaah kaha gayi thi.........

Kashish: aap ko kuch bhi yaad nahi rehta..........aaj karva chuth hai aur main sargi khane ke bad sab ke saath mandir hoke aa rahi hoon..............ab aap jaldi se uthiye muje aur bhi bahot se kaam hai.........

Sujal: haa tumhare bechare is pati ke liye tumhare pass waqt hi kaha bacha hai...........sara waqt to tum ghar ke kaamo me nikal deti hoon........Mama ke saath kitchen me.......papa ke saath kabhi chess ke khel me......kabhi Rudra to kabhi Prem...........ab muje hi lagta hai mere liye koi dusri lana padega........

Kashish: hey..........aaj keh diya to keh diya.........meri saut laoge ti main aapke saath uska bhi khoon kar dungi aur bad me apna............

Sujal: itni jalan..........

Kashish: isse bhi jyada...........aap pe sirf mera hakk hai sirf mera............Sujal sirf Kashish ka hai.......baat samaj me aa gayi ho to aap bathroom me jane ka kasht karenge..........

Sujal: waise tumne sahi kaha............main tumhara hoon to tum bhi meri huyi .........

yeh kehte hi Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad ke use apni aur bed pe khichta hai.......

Kashish: Sujal...chodiye kya kar rahe hai........ghar pe itne sare log hai..........

Sujal: woh to ghar pe hai na.......yeh hamara bedroom hai........

Kashish: to iska matlab aap jo chahe woh kar sakte hai......

Sujal: haa main jo chahe apni jaan ke saath kar sakta hoon.............

Kashish: ab abhot mazak ho gaya...........chodiye muje waise bhi dair ho jayegi........muje abhi papa ka breakfast banana hai...........

Sujal: mera..........

Kashish: aap bhi khayenge aaj..........muje laga ki aap bhi mere liye karva chauth rakhenge........

Sujal: main kyun.........aur waise bhi yeh to patni apne pati ke liye karti hai to main kyun karoon aur tum to janti ho muje khaye bina nahi raha jata..............

kashish: yeh bhi sahi hai...........ab aap jaiye na..........

Sujal: pehle meri morning kiss.........

kashish: aaj raat ko de dungi..........

Sujal: iska matlab double......

Kashish: haa double........promise me nahi bhulungi...........

Sujal: main bhulne bhi nahi dunga............thik hai main chalta hoon..........mere kapde nikal dena aur kuch special woh aaj ek bahot hi important meeting hai meri............

Kashish: jee............

Ab Sujal nahane chala jata hai............aur Kashish sab kuch taiyaar karke neeche aati hai.............

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Ab Sujal, Anurag, Prem, Rudra, Prerna aur Maya sabhi dining table pe beth ke intzaar kar rahe hote hai.................

Anurag: prerna..........nasta kab milega.....dairi ho rahi hai......

Prerna: abhi milega...........aaj aapko bahot hi achcha nasta milnewala hai............aapki char betiyaan jo bana rahi hai............

Prem: tab to main chala........main office me kar lunga..........

Anurag: oye beth.........aisa nahi kehte.........unme se do teri bhabhiyaan hai.............

Prem: main to Heer aur Khushi ki baat kar raha tha..............

Rudra: waise muje shak Mehek pe bhi hai............

Sujal: shut up.......jab dekho bechari ki burai hi karte rehte ho.................

Rudra: bhaiyaa Ram hum aapki Sita ke bare me nahi apne bare me baat kar rahe hai.......

Sujal: mama.........aap inki jaldi se shaadi kara do isse pehle yeh dono pagal ho jaye...........

Prem: Pagal hum nahi aap ho gaye hai Shaadi ke bad.........jabse Kashishbhabhi yaha aaye hai aap to kisi aur pe dhyan hi nahi dete........

Sujal: aisa kuch nahi......

Rudra: to aapne parso ki match kyun miss ki..........kyunki aap Bhabhi ke saath bahar gaye the...............

Sujal: ek bar teri shaadi hone de phir pata chalega.........kyun Papa.......

Anurag: haa.........shaadi koi mazak nahi...........patni ko khush rakhna bhi ek jimedari ka kaam hai aur yeh main aur Sujal hi jan sakte hai................

jab charo ladkiyaan nasta leke bahar aati hai...............

Anurag: kya baat hai khusboo to bahot achchi aa rahi hai..........Prerna main na kehta tha ki hum naseebdar hai jinhe itni pyari char char betiyaan mili..........

Prerna; haa woh to hai...........sach me hum to kismat wale hai ki hume teen bahu beti ke roop me mili..........

Sujal: mama........yeh sab baatein karke inhe apne sir mat chadao.........

Shanta Tai: tum teen kamchor beto se meri betiyaan so guna achchi hai...........

jab Sujal ke cell pe phone aata hai...........

Sujal: thik hai main abhi nikalta hoon..............bye.......

Rudra: kya hua Bhai sab thik to hai.......

Sujal: haa sab thik hai woh mere PA ka phone tha ki meeting se pehle kuch discuss karna hai is liye muje nikalna hoga................bye......

Kashish: lekin aapka nasta to karte jaiye.........

Sujal: nahi muje dair ho rahi hai..........main office me kar lunga........

Kashish: achcha suniye........yaad karke kar lijiye aur sham ko aapko jaldi aana hai ..........

Sujal:ok bye............

Sujal waha se chala jata hai............

Rudra: kuch sikho Kashishbhabhi se.......kitna khayal rakhti hai Bhabhi Sujalbhai ka.........aur tum teeno.......

Prem: sahi kaha aapne..........kuch kaam hi nahi karti.........aaj bhi sara nasta bhabhi ne hi banaya hoga.........

Kashish: khabrdar aaj ke bad meri behen aur meri dono devrani ko kuch kaha to...........

Shanta Tai: ab ladna bandh karo aur jaldi se nasta karke tum dono office niklo........

sab log nasta karke office chale jate hai.....

Sujal jab office pahunchta hai to apne PA se milta hai........

Sujal: Thank you muje call karne ke liye..........

PA; lekin sir aapne aisa kyun kaha..........

Sujal: woh bas maine subaah subaah mazak me keh diya ki main koi karva chuth nahi karnewala lekin actually maine bhi kuch nahi khane ka faisla liya hai is liye mera bhi vrat hai............aur agar main use bata deta to woh muje apni kasam deke bhi khilati is liye............

PA; kitna pyaar karte hai aap Kashishmam se..............

Sujal: pata nahi.......lekin ab hum kaam kare..................

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ab aise hi dekhte shaam ho jati hai.........Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai jab Sujal office se wapas aata hai.............

Kashish: aaj ka din kaisa tha...........

Sujal: bahot busy........

Kashish: lunch thik se kiya........

Sujal: haa.........

Kashish: waise aaj maine tumhari favorite dish banayi thi............aapko pasand aayi........

Sujal: bahot pasand aayi..........

Kashish: jooth........aapne aaj lunch kiya hi nahi kyunki maine koi lunch nahi bheja.........

Sujal; woh Kashish........

Kashish: aapne vrat rakha hai........mere liye aur aapne muje hi batana sahi nahi samja.............lekin muje batana to chahiye tha.....

Sujal; agar bata deta to vrat rakhne ka koi matlab hi nahi banta........

Kashish: isi liye aap naste kiye bina hi chale gaye aur office ka bahana nikala taki muje kuch pata na lage............aapne subaah se kuch nahi khaya na........aapko bahot pyaas lagi hogi office ke baad.......

Sujal; nahi Kashish ab to vrat tutega chand ko dekhne ke bad hi........

Kashish ki aankh se aanshu behne lagte hai........

Sujal: hey,,,,,,,,,,main apne chand pe aanshu nahi dekh sakta........ab ple ro mat.......tum janti ho na........

Kashish: I love you Sujal.......

yeh kehte hi Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai......

Sujal: i love my chand too.........(whispers) ..........Kashish........chand nikal aaya..........

Kashish: kaha......

Sujal Kashish ko aaine ke pass le jata hai.........

Sujal; woh raha mera chand............waise tumhe nahi lag raha ki aaj mera chand kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha hai..........

Kashish: kya baat hai Mr. Sujal Garewal bahot romantic ho rahe hai.........

Sujal: pata nahi aaj kuch jyada hi pyaar aa raha hai tumpe........mann kar raha hai tumhe dekhta hi jau aur dil se tarif karta jau........agar zindagi me muje kabhi bhi kuch ho jaye to tum dukhi mat hona aur aise hi sajte rehna warna meri aatma ko bahot taklif hogi..........

Kashish: chodiye muje.........

Sujal; kya hua.....

Kashish: muje aapki yeh baat bilkul achchi nahi lagti..........aaj ke din bhi..........

Kashish gusse me uthke khidki ke pass chali jati hai...........aur sujal uske piche jata hai..........

Sujal (whispers in her ear): main to sirf mazak kar raha tha......sorry.....abhi to hum so saal saath me jine wale hai.......aise kaise tumhara picha chod doon.......abhi to hume saath me bahot kaam karne hai..........12 bacho ki team banani hai......bada karna hai sabhi ko padhna hai.....unki shaadiyaan karani hai.........business ko sambhalne ke liye kabil banana hai aur uske bad jab main retire hoga tab ........hum budhe ho jayenge tab tum aur main durr seher se durr pahadi pe ek chota sa gharr banake rahenge.........aur phir hum dono ke alawa koi tisra nahi hoga.......sirf main aur tum pure waqt akele ghar me........aur hum woh pehle budhe honge jo apne dusre honeymoon pe jayenge.............

Kashish hasne lagti hai..........

Kashish: aap bhi na.........kuch bhi.......

Sujal:are hum to prem ke deewane hai aapke deewane hai..........hum aapko chod ke gaye to yeh aapki chudiyaan thode hi hume jane degi..........tumhari chudiyon ki khanak se mere dil ki aawaz judi hai........aise to yeh rishta tut nahi sakta..............

Kashish: ho gaya Mr. Sujal Garewal........ab main taiyaar ho jati hoon muje dair ho rahi hai............

Sujal: mam.......aaj aapko Mr. Sujal Garewal taiyaar karenge.........

Sujal Kashish ko uske zumke pehnata hai,,,,,,,,,,phir use necklace pehnata hai............phir Sujal Kashish ko uska mangalsutra pehnata hai aur bad main uski mang sindoor se bahr deta hai.........

Sujal: janti ho......jab tum neeche jaogi na to sab ki nazar tum pe hogi.........kyunki aaj tumhari khubsurati ko tumhare pyaar ne sajaya hai...........

Kashish sharmake Sujal ke gale lag jati hai........

Sujal: waise kashish muje pata hai.....ki tumhe mere gale lagne ka shukh hai lekin abhi muje taiyaar hona hai..........

Kashish: woh main bhul gayi..........aap taiyaar ho jaye main aapke kapde nikal deti hoon..................

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ab thodi dair bad sab log hall me bethe chand ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai..............ab to pure sinha family aur Raheja family bhi aa gayi hoti hai ..........aur seher ke sabhi dost aur rishtedar bhi............

Anurag: abhi chand ko nikalne me to thoda waqt hai..........aur yaha aurato ke bhukhe pet chand ka intzaar karna muskil ho raha hai to......kuch gaane ho jaye......

Rudra; haa papa....aaj to kuch aisa ho jaye ki sara seher dekhta reh jaye.........

Prem: aur uske liye mere pass ek mindblowing idea hai...........aaj hamari pyari Kashishbhabhi Sujalbhai ke liye kuch gayegi............

Kashish; Prem pagal ho gaye ho........itne logo ke beech............

Rudra: galat kya keh raha hai.........kuch kahiye na Sujalbhai aap.......

Sujal;ab sab itna keh rahe hai to kuch ga dona..............

Kashish: ab aapko kaise na keh sakti hoon............

Rudra: oye hoye kya baat hai Bhabhi............

Sujal: woh hum dono ki kuch setting hai.......tu abhi bahot chota hai.........

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Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Kashish Sujal ki aur apna haath badhati hai)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (Sujal apna haath Kashish ke haath me deta hai)
Tere khushi se hai khushi tere gham se hai gham (Sujal Kashish ke aankh se behte huye aanshu ko pochta hai)
Tere naam se shoroo Tere naam pe khatam (Kashish apna sir sujal ke kandhe pe rakh deti hai)
Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Sujal Kashish ke sir ko sehlata hai)

Tum dekhogi jigar jigar nazar aaoonga (Jab bahar chand nikal aata hai)
Tere dil se nikalke Na dhoor jaoonga (sab log bahar jate hai kashish sabse pehle chand ki puja karti hai)
Yeh pyaare pyaare lamhe sa donge har kadam (Phir Kashish Sujal ki puja karti hai)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (Kashish chhali me se Sujal ko dekhti hai)
Mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam (Kashish sujal ke pair chune jati hai lekin Sujal use mana karta hai)

Tere peeche chalegi meri parchayiyaan (Sujal Kashish ko pani pilata hai lekin Kashish pehle Sujal ko pilati hai)
Meri yaadein cheen lengi Teri tanhaayiyaan (Sujal Kashish ko khana khilata hai lekin phir bhi Kashish pehle Sujal ko deti hai)
Mera chehraa rahega palkon mein sanam (Sujal Kashish ke chehre ki khushi dekhta hai jo kuch aur hi rang bata rahi thi)
Tere naam se shuroo tere naam pe khatam (sujal aur kashish ek dusre ke gale lagte hai)

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Rudra; hmm,........hmmm........

Sujal: tujse meri khushi dekhi nahi jati kya........ab to teri bhi mangetar hai jana tu uske pass.........

Rudra: lekin yeh aap sabke samne kya ho raha tha.......

Kashish: kuch bhi nahi...........

Khushi: waise bhabhi aap vrat todne se pehle sab kuch Bhai ko kyun khila rahi thi........................

Prem: Bhabhi check kar rahi hogi ki khana khane layak to hai.........

Kashish: aisi koi baat nahi............aaj tumhare bhai ne bhi mere liye vrat rakha hai....unhone bhi subaah se kuch nahi khaya............aur agar aaj main Sujal se pehle pani pi leti to mera karwa chuth kabhi pura nahi hota......patni kaise kha sakti hai jab uska pati bhukha ho..........mujse yeh paap nahi ho sakta.......isi liye maine jo kiya woh muje sahi laga aur sabhi aurat ko aise hi karna chahiye........

Mehek: lekin Dii......sabhi aap ki tarah lucky nahi hote......yeh mahasay jab se office se aaye hai muje pareshan karne ke liye kuch na kuch mere samne khaye ja rahe hai.............

Sujal: dusro ka pata nahi lekin maine is liye vrat rakha hai ki main akela 100 saal jike kya karunga...........mere saath denewali bhi to chahiye.............isi liye main chahta hoon ki main jab tak jiu kashish mera saath de...........aur mere jane ke bad bhi..........

Kashish: kitni bar muje aapko batana hoga ki aisi baatein mat kijiye............lekin aap to sunte hi nahi..........muje is bare me mama se aapki sekayat karni hogi........

Sujal: ab aage nahi hoga..........ab aajke din aise naraz nahi rehte..........aur waise bhi muje bahot bhukh lagi hai............aur mera manna hai ki bhukhe pet dard hota hai.........to kashish mera dard shuru ho raha hai.........abhi pet se leke upper aa raha hai..........

Kashish: aapna bache ke bache hi rahenge..................chaliye main aapka khana laga deti hoon...........

Prem: aur Bhabhi mera......

Kashish: tuje denewali hai....use keh ab..........ab mera picha chod..............

yeh kehke sabhi andar dinner ke liye chale jate hai.............

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#223

hey a really cute part ab mujhe lagta hai ki sk ko 2 se 3 hojani chaiye wat say cont soon

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Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#224

lmao.....hehehe!! it was a cute part..........!

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Sonali

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Posted: 16 years ago

#225

awesome job!😃 very cute!

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Samina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#226

awesome part kashish

i really loved the way u potrayed the love between kashish and sujal it was amazing.

the way u showed how important karvachaut is and why it is kept was really good.

i really enjoyed the song u added in the part it really went with the whole part and it was really intresting.

the way u showed how sujal also kept the vrat 4 kashish showed how much he loves her and cant live without her.

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heena mehta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#227

awwww that was very sweet part...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................gr88888888888888888888jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb kashish

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#228

Cute part Kashish.. the whole Karvachauth epi was gud............ Sujal is so smart in keeping the vrath... Plzz continue soon.... looking forward for the marriage......😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#229

kashish me here with my comments on Aks... i hope tumko mera comment achcha lage... sorry main thoda late hogayi.. hope you understand..😊 kashish dear the whole part which you have written was very good.. the part from the first sentence , first word, to the last sentence, last word all was so very good... the karwachauth whole thing was very nice.... and what i really liked in the part is the way you put forth the customs.. the way you talked about , explained about karwachauth... tumne bilkul sahii kaha is din ka intezaar har patni karthi hai, woh din jis din ek patni apne pati ke lambe umar ke liye prartna karthi hai... jis patni kii dua se uske pati kii zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaathi hai.. ek aurat ke liye karwachauth ka vrat rakhna is a punya ka kaam... ek lady bhooka rehkar apne pati ke liye lambi umar kii prartna karthi hai.. this shows kii ek lady apne pati ke liye tho kuch bhi karr sakthi hai... chahe woh apne pati ke liye duniyaan se lad jaane kii baat ho ya phir apne pati ko maut se mooh se wapas laane kii baat ho, lekin ek patni kabhi apne farz se, apne kartavya se peeche nahii hategi... i liked reading the bit where you explained the rituals & customs.. you know dear tum hamesha riti-riwazon ko bohat achche se present karthi ho.... it is really very nice to read.& to know about the different customs & cultures... heer aur mehek kii vrat rakh rahe hai.. good to know.... jis tarah heer aur mehek , kashish ko chidathe hai.. mazaa aagaya.... aap subaah ke aath baje sujal mahashay kii subaah ho hii jaathi hai.. aur ab sujal ko subaah subaah bhi romance hii soojing.. yeh sujal ko na har waqt romance soojtha rehtha hai, subaah, shaam aur raat ko... hmm.. tho iska matlab kashish was expecting kii sujal bhii kashish ke liye vrat rakhe, lekin yeh sujal na bas kashish ko pareshaan karne ke liye mana kar detha hai.. and kashish being the sweet wife sujal kii yeh baat maan jaathi hai, even without getting angry, or without sulking once.. i'am sure sujal soch raha hoga kii ab kashish usse naraaz hogi, uspar cheekegi, lekin kashish tho kabhi sujal par cheekegi nahii , chillayegi nahii... she is a calm person... jiska sujal par ghussa hona no chance, it is almost next to impossible.... sujal ka romancing ith kashish, unki hasi, unki khushi, unka saath, kabhi na chute.. jab thak sujal, kashish ka saath ho, woh dono koi bhi mushkhil parr karr sakthe hai... har toofan ka saamna karr sakthe hai.... the dinning table family scene was very well written... jaise rudra aur prem sujal ko chidathe hai... sab ke beech kii bonding itni achchi hai... they all indeed share a very strong bond.. unka parivaar, aur unke parivaar ka saath kii un sab logon kii sabse badi taakat hai.. aur shayad yeh bhi kaha jaa saktha hai kii unka parivaar hii unki sabse badi taakat aur sabse badi kamzori bhi hai...... sab khush hai.. & me very khush..... lekin yeh kya sujal nhastha kiye bina chala gaya.. aur office jaatha hai tho patahj chaltha hai kii usne apni PA , se jhoota call karwaya taaki woh kashish ke liye vrat rakh sake & kashish will not force him to eat... how sweett... i knew it, kii sujal aise hii kuch na kuch karega... the evening scene of sujal, kashish was very well written.. it touched my heart.. the pyaar between sujal, kashish seriously bought tears to my eyes... the chaand scene where sujal tells kashish kii kashish is his chand.. awwww shoo cute.... then woh bachon ke baare mein discuss karna.. sujal ko barah bachche chahiye.. hehe.. is baat par mujhe sujal se kehna hai sujal soch lo agar barah bachche honge tho tum tho kashish ke saath romance tho kya, usse theek se dekh bhi nahii paaoge, kyunke woh bachon ko sambhal ne mein busy hogi.. so bas soch lo.. hehehehehehehe.... the whole vrat thodne ka bit was nice.. i liked kashish's song for sujal... then prem ka kashish se poochna kii why did kashish feed sujal first, kashish ka giving explanation kii sujal bhi uske liye bhooka raha hai, i'am sure kashish ke liye yeh bohat hii garv kii baat hogi joh usse sujal, jaisa chah ne waala mila... aur mehek ka kehna kii how rudra is troubling her... aur phir sujal giving such a chottu, sweet explanation kii kyun usne vrat rakha.... this shows sujal, kashish ek dusare se kitna pyaar karthe hai.. kitna mayine rakhthe hai woh dono ek dusare ke liye.. kashish hai tho sujal hai.. kashish nahii tho sujal nahii... then joh baat sujal ne kii wohii woh aadat se majboor hokar durr jaane kii, marrne kii , ab kashish ka usse naraaz hona, sujal ka usse manana in his own sweet little way... this was raapchik... loved it.. it was very cute... waise jab prem ne kashish se uska khana maanga, aur phir kashish ka jawaab kii woh heer se pooch le... i found this very funny... lekin i think i know kashish aisa kyun keh rahii thi, mere hisaab se woh aisa isliye keh rahii thi kyunke woh chahthi hai kii rudra-mehek, prem-heer ek doosre ko behtar jaan le before they get married... in short a very well written part.. absolutely rocking.... keep up the good work going... i'am seriously liking the way the story is progressing..👏 ab dear coming to my guess on the next coming up parts. uske liye mera guess yeh hoga kii there will be many masti moments, happy moments in the family.. shayad some moments of romance between sujal, kashish... lekin i also think kii in khushiyo ke baad some toofan is going to hit the family... koi undekha toofaan, problem will crop up.. i think there will be some misunderstandings , some darrar which will be created... well yeh misunderstandings , yeh darrar shayad sujal, kashish ke beech ho sakthi hai.. lekin on the other side i think kii yeh darrar sujal , kashish aur unke pariwaar ke beech aayegi, by pariwaar i think it will be with prerna, shayad aise koi circumstances create ho jaye kii prerna ko sujal apna soutela beta lagne lage & she starts showing disparity... well i'am not sure kii kya yeh darrar sujal, kashish ke beech hogi, ya phir prerna aur sujal-kashish ke beech, jiski wajah se pariwaar toot jayega... so dear is my guess right.. mujhe zaroor batana....😉kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for it eagerly... and dear agge kii kahani ke liye mere pass ek idea hai, i'll give you that idea when we chat on ym.. continue soon....😊

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#230

Part-31

Ab dekhte hai ki sagaai ke ek din pehle Garewal Mension me kaun si taiyariyaan ho rahi hai...........are yaha pe to sagaai ke dance ki practice chal rahi hai..........Prerna, Shanta tai dono milke Kashish, Mehek, Heer aur Khushi ko typical punjabi dance sikha rahe hote hai..............

Shanta Tai: oh ho Prernajee.........yeh ladkiyaan to koi josh hi nahi dikha rahi...........

Prerna: to aap madad kijiye.........

Shanta Tai: pata nahi kaise haath pair hila rahi ho.........main batati hoon kaise nachte hai asli punjabi style me............

Kashish: woh kaise tai...........

Shanta Tai: aise zara zor se thumka dalke josh ke saath...........

Khushi: tai......aap muje woh sikhaye jo aap muje bachpan me.........

Shanta Tai: uske liye mere dharmendra ke gaane ka hona zaroori hai.........uske gaane se mere pair chalte hai ...........main nahi nachungi........

Heer: aap to tai...........

Mehek: Tai please..........hamari sagai hai kal...............

Shanta Tai: aise na bol......chalo sikhati hoon.........lekin mujse yeh 1 2 3 nahi hoga........main to apne style me......chalega.......

Kashish: daudega............

Shanta tai: prernajee.....shuru kijiye gaana.............

Prerna music on karti hai aur phir Shanta tai sabko nachna sikhane lagti hai............jab bahar se Prem nikalta hai aur andar ki aawaz sunke woh thoda sa darawaza kholke jakke dekhne lagta hai apni heer ko.........Prem puri tarah se Heer ko dekhne me khoya hua hota hai jab piche se Rudra aata hai..............

Rudra: kya dekh raha hai..........

Prem: woh Bhai.......bhai woh.......

Rudra: achcha to ab chup chup ke Heer ka dance dekha ja raha hai............tu yeh pagalo wali harkate bandh kar de............warna kisi din pitega...........

Prem: nahi bhai pitunga main nahi aap..........kyunki koi mujse kuch puchega to main yeh kahunga ki aap Mehekbhabhi ko dekh rahe the...............aap hi chup chup ke Mehekbhabhi ko dekh rahe the jab main yaha aaya..........

Rudra: tu kahega aur sab teri baat man lenge..........chal ab....nahi to apne saath muje bhi pitwayega.....

Rudra wapas darwaze bandh karne jata hai jab woh andar Mehek ko dekhta hai aur dekhte hi reh jata hai.........Prem bhi Rudra ke saath Heer ko dekhne me kahi kho jata hai...........jab waha pe Sujal aata hai........

Sujal: kya hai yeh sab.........

Rudra: bhai woh..........

Sujal: apni umar to dekho..........aise chori chipe........waise dekh kya rahe the.......

Prem: woh ladkiyaan andar dance ki practice kar rahe the to hum log sirf dekh rahe the........

Sujal: pehle muje janch karne do ki andar kuch dekhne layak hai ki nahi.........phir main tum dono ko batata hoon andar dekhna chahiye ya nahi............

Sujal jab andar jakta hai to Kashish ko dekhta hi reh jata hai............is baat ka faiyda utake Rudra aur Prem bhi jakne lagte hai...........

Sujal: haye aaj bhi wahi ada hai..........pehle bhi marti thi aur aaj bhi..........

Prem: aap dono neeche rahiye....muje dikhai nahi deta...........

Rudra: dhaka kyun mar raha hai...........

Sujal: bandh karo apni ladai....muje dekhne do shanti se.........disturb mat karo..........

Rudra: disturn me nahi prem kar raha hai.........

Sujal: chup raho tum dono........

Prem: main nahi Rudrabhai ko kahiye............

in teeno ki baatein shanta tai dekh leti hai aur chupke se jake darwaza khol deti hai jisse teeno andar aake girte hai.........jisse sab log hairan hoke hasne lagte hai................

Shanta Tai: dekha......lagi na zor se...........dekhiye Prernajee apne beto ko.....chup chup ke.........

Prerna: yeh sab kya hai..........

Prem: muje nahi pata Rudrabhai se puchiye........

Rudra: nahi nahi muje nahi pata..........main to yaha Sujalbhai ke piche aaya...............

Sujal: mama yeh dono jooth bol rahe hai............

Kashish: aapko sharam nahi aati..........apne saath saath ab aap apne chote bhaiyon ko bhi bigad rahe hai..........aap inhe chori chuke kisi ke kamre me jakne ki training de rahe ho.......

Sujal: meri baat to suno...main kaha bigad raha hoon......main to yaha se ja raha tha.................chori chuke to yeh dekh rahe the.....to maine in dono se kaha ki main dekh ke batata hoon ki andar dekhne layak kuch hai ki nahi..........

Kashish: kya keh rahe hai aap..........

Rudra: waise bhi..........tum log kaha kuch khass dance kar rahe the...........jise hum chup chup ke dekhe..........kyun Prem.......

Prem: haa bhai........bakwaas.....aisa bhi koi dance hota hai...........mood bigad diya..........

Sujal: tum dono bhi na.........ab in ladkiyon ko kya pata ki naach gana kise kehte hai..........

Shanta Tai: bas ab to yeh baat mere dil ko lag gayi............ab meri ladkiyaan tum teeno ko harake dikhayegi.............to ho jaye mukabla............

Heer: haa haa ho jaye..........

Khushi: bata dijiye bhabhi hum bhi koi kam nahi...............

Sujal, Prem aur Rudra pareshan hone lagte hai.......Rudra ishara me Sujal se kuch karne ko kehta hai............

Sujal: waise mukabla barabar walo se kiya jata hai...........tum logo ko harake hume kya milega............

Kashish: jo chaho woh milega pehle jitke to dikhao...........pehle zara naach ke to dikaho warna hume lagega ki aap log darr ke mare bhag gaye...........

Rudra: hum darr gaye woh bhi aap se...........

Prem: kaise hasnewali baat ki aap ne...............muje to bahot hasi aa rahi hai..............

Sujal; hum aur woh bhi ladkiyon se darr jaye...........to phir kya kehte hai mere bhaiyon ho jaye mukabla.............

All: ho jaye................

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Khushi: aaiye aap sab ka Garewal Dance compition me swagat hai...........hamare sabse pehle couple ka naam hai Prembhai aur Heerbhabhi..........taliyaan............

Balle balle je soniya de rang dekhlo (Prem aur Heer ek dusre ke samne aate hai)
bina dor di uDh di patang dekh lo (Heer apna dupatta kas ke bandhti hai aur Prem ki aur aage badhti hai)
Aj munde hue enhan de malang dekh lo (Prem piche jane lagta hai)
bina dor di uDh di patang dekh lo (Prem jake Sujal aur Rudra se takrata hai)
Ay kudiyan kudiyan, ay tikhiyan churiyan (woh dono wapas use khel ke medan me dhaka marte hai)
kudiyan jawan hath na aawan (Prem uska haath pakad ke use yaha se yaha ghuma raha hota hai)
ena pundiyan de maare hue tang dekh lo (Heer zor se Prem ko tang marti hai jisse Prem gir jata hai)

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Khushi: ab aap jante hi honge ki is round ki winner hai hamari choti bhabhi yani Heerbhabhi..............
Shanta Tai: sabash meri sherni............yeh huyi jitne wali baat.........ab dekhte hai ki dusra kaise tikta hai........

Khushi: ab hamare dusre couple hai Rudrabhai aur Mehekbhabhi........taliyaan....................

Tera Rang Balle Balle, Teri Chaal Balle Balle (Mehek aur Rudra ek dusre ke samne aate hai)

Tera Roop Balle Balle, Tere Gaal Balle Balle (Rudra Mehek ki aur aane lagta hai jab woh sharmake jane lagti hai)

Dekha Tujhe To Mujhe Pyar Ho Gaya (Rudra uske dupatte ko khich ke apni aur karta hai)

Tere Khayaalon Mein Yeh Dil Kho Gaya...(Rudra use pakadta hai)

O Naiyon Naiyon Mainu Dil Tera Naiyon Chaahida (Mehek Rudra ko dhaka mar deti hai aur phir se nachne lagti hai)

Ik Tu Hi Mere Naal Naiyon Naiyon Janchda...(Rudra phir se Mehek ke pass aake uska haath pakadta hai)

Dhol Jaani Dhol Jaani Mere Paas Aa Teri Meherbani (Mehek apna haath chudane ki koshish karti hai)

Jhoot Bol Na Jhoot Bol Na Neeyat Mein Hai Teri Beimaani (Rudra Mehek ko gol gol ghumane lagta hai jisse chakar aake Mehek gir jati hai)

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Heer: this is cheating.....................

Kashish: Rudra tumne jan bhujke.......

Rudra: to Heer ne bhi to jaan bhujke Prem ko giraya.......ab hisab barabar............

Khushi: abhi aap dekh hi chuke honge ki yeh round ke winner hai mere bhai yani Rudrabhai...............

Mehek: Rudra ki to........

Khushi: ab bari aati hai the most romantic couple ki..........jee ha sahi suna aap logo ne............sabse romantic bhai Sujalbhai aur sabse romantic bhabhi Kashishbhabhi ki........taliyaan..............

Baliye De Mukhde Pe Dil Lalchaave (Sujal aur Kashish ek dusre ke samne aate hai)

Laungda Ve Lashkaara Jaan Le Na Jaave (Sujal Kashish ki aur nazdig aane lagta hai)

Dekhe Bina Dekhe Tenu Raha Bhi Na Jaave (Sujal Kashish ke bal ko side pe karta hai)

Roop Salona Tera Sono Changda (Kashish Sharmake wahe se jane lagti hai)

Duppatta Tera Nau Rang Da, Haaye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (Sujal Kashish ka dupatta pakad leta hai)

Jaan Meri Jaan Hoy Teri Sadke, (Kashish mudke Sujal ke pass aati hai)

Teri Sadd Ke Haan Teri Sadke (Kashish Sujal ke haath ko apne haath me leti hai)

Jana Naiyo Jana Kabhi Jana Mainu Chad Ke (Lekin Sujal Kashish se durr chala jata hai)

Mainu Chad Ke Kabhi Mainu Chad Ke (Sujal jaha pe hota hai wahi se wapas aata hai)

Saari Khusi Duniya Ki Tujhpe Lootaau Do (Sujal aake Kashish ke pass aake aanshu pochta hai)

Aaja Teri Raah Me Main Jindagi Bicha Du,(Khud zameen pe beth ke apni Kashish ka haath chumta hai)

Rup Salona Tera Sono Changda (Kashish sirf Sujal ko dekhti hai)

Duppatta Tera Nau Rang Da Haaye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (Sujal Kashish ko khich ke dance ke liye le jata hai)

Yaar Mera Yaar Saare Jag Se Juda (Kashish Sujal ko apni aur karti hai)

Jag Se Juda Saare Jag Juda (Kashish Sirf Sujal ko dekhti hi reh jati hai)

Pyaar Main To Pyaar Karu Uspe Fida, (Kashish Sujal ke haath ko apne haath me leti hai)

Uspe Fida Karu Uspe Fida (Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai)

Roop Salona Tere Sono Changda (Sujal Kashish ko apne aap se durr karta hai)

Duppatta Tera Nau Rang Da Haaye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (Kashish ka dupatta leke uske sir pe dal deta hai aur dono apne sapno ki duniya me kho jate hai)

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Jab Prerna aake dono ko sapno ki kahani se nikalti hai......dono sharmake idhar se udhar jane lagte hai.........jab Prerna dono ka haath pakadti hai..........

Prerna: aaj ki asli jeet to yeh hai.......mere Sujal aur Kashish ka pyaar.............agar koi muje puche ki kya maine pyaar ko dekha hai to haa maine dekha hai.........Sujal aur Kashish me........itna pyaar maine aaj tak kahi nahi dekha..........main bahot khush hoon ki yeh mere bache hai...........

Khushi: to aaj ki compition ka winner kuch ajeeb sa ho gaya hai..........lakde aur ladki dono hi jeet gaye hai...............

Prem: haar jeet ki chamchi...........kal Rishi ko aane de teri sari sekayat karta hoon...........

Khushi: bhai aisa aap kuch nahi karenge...........

Prem: main abhi phone laga raha hoon........

Khushi: Sujalbhai kuch kahiye na...........

Sujal: Prem.........Khushi ko tang karna chod........aur tuje phone karna hi hai to uski saas ko kar.............

Khushi: Kashishbhabhi............

Kashish: yeh teeno aisa kuch nahi karenge......tu pareshan mat ho.........ab chal kal ki taiyariyaan bhi karni hai.........

Sujal: Rudra.......Prem.......tum dono bhi jao..apni apni amanat ko uske ghar chod ke aao...........aur haa wapas jaldi aana........

Rudra: pehle jayenge to aayenge na...........

Prerna: ab jao.......bhi...........

Prem aur Rudra dono Mehek aur Heer ko chodne chale jate hai...........

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Ab raat ko Kashish kal ke kapde nikal rahi hoti hai.....jab woh Sujal ki shirt ko dekh ke hasne lagti hai.........

Sujal; akele akele kya muskura rahi hai...........

Kashish: kuch nahi jane dijiye..........

Sujal: ab batao bhi........taki main bhi thoda bahot has loon...........

Kashish: aapko yeh shirt yaad hai............

Sujal: Kashish muje meri shirt nahi yaad to kiski hogi.........

Kashish: nahi isse judi kuch yaadein..........

Sujal; haa maine shayad yeh shirt 15 -20 bar to peheni hogi to muje kuch yaad nahi ..........

Kashish: aapko kuch yaad nahi ya yaad nahi karna chahte.....khair main hi batati hoon..........aapne yeh shirt jab hum pehli bar mile tab pehni thi..........ab kuch yaad aaya........

Sujal: oh woh.........haa haa muje sab yaad hai......tum logo ko lagta hai muje kuch yaad nahi..........

Kashish: bahot pata hai...........aisa hai to bataiye maine kya pehna tha.......

Sujal: tumne..........tumne shayad red dress pehna tha..........

Kashish: jooth..........maine koi red dress nahi pehna tha...........maine white dress pehna tha..........ab kahiye ki aapko sab yaad hai.........

Sujal; nahi jaan woh baat yeh hai ki main to us waqt tumhare is haseen chehre ko dekhne me kahi khoye huye the to rang ka kya hai...........aur maine to tabhi tumhe dekh ke tai kar liya tha ki ab to tumpe ek hi rang lagega aur woh hai mere pyaar ka............ab tum hi bata do ki rang chada ki nahi...........

Kashish: rang to bahot achche se chada hai MR. Sujal Garewal........mere khayal se aisa rang chada hai ki saat janam tak nahi utrega..........yeh sab chodiye waise aapse kuch baat karni thi.........

Sujal: haa kaho.......

Kashish: kya kaha tha aapne.............aap ko lagta hai ki main achcha dance nahi kar sakti............

Sujal: woh kya hai na main sabke samne to tumhari tarif nahi kar sakta...........tum to muje janti hi ho ki main kis andaz me tumhari tarif karta hoon.........aur muje lagta hai ki yaha koi hai bhi nahi................

Sujal jake Kashish ko apni baahoin me uthata hai..........

Kashish: kya kar rahe hai.........utariye muje.........

Sujal: pehle suno to sahi apni tarif............tum aaj sabse achcha dance kar rahi thi........shayad isi liye tumhe chori chupe dekhne me ruk gaya...........dance me tumhara mukabla aur koi kar hi nahi sakta...............

Kashish: achcha .........aapne to kabhi muje kaha hi nahi........

Sujal: kuch kaha nahi to isse thodi sachchai badal sakti hai..........ab muje hi dekh lo main tumhe kehta nahi lekin pyaar to karta hoon na..........

Kashish: kya kaha..........

Sujal: yahi ki main kuch kehta nahi iska yeh matlab to nahi ki main tumse pyaar nahi karta.............

Kashish: achcha.......to yeh sab subaah se leke raat tak aur raat ko hota hai woh kya hai.............

Sujal:woh to tumhare pyaar ke nashe ka ek haseen chota sa jawab hai.........

Kashish: sach me........

Sujal: sach me tumhari kasam..........

Kashish: aur agar joothi huyi to

Sujal: agar joothi nikli to tum muje teen thapad laga dena........

Kashish: to kab lagau.........abhi chalega.........

Sujal: abhiiiiiiii............

Kashish: abhi to aapne kaha............

Sujal: Kashish tum muje marogi.......apne Sujal ko...........

Kashish: abhi abhi aap to keh rahe the ki main aapko teen thapad laga sakti hoon........aur muje lagta hai ki aap mujse jooth bol rahe hai............ab muje neeche utariye main aapko teen thapad lagaungi..............

Sujal: thik hai...............

Sujal Kashish ko neeche rakhta hai..........

Kashish: ab aankhein to bandh kijiye..........

Sujal: kyun........

Kashish: aapko dard kam hoga.........

Sujal: how sweet......tum mera kitna khayal rakhti ho........

Kashish: kuch jyada hi.........ab aankhein bandh kijiye,,,,,,,,,,

Sujal aankhein bandh karta hai..........Kashish dheere dheere sujal ke pass aati hai........she kissed his left cheek........

Kashish: yeh pehla thapad........

She kissed his second cheek...

Kashish: yeh dusra thapad.........aur yeh aapka aakhri thapas......

Kashish just brushed her lips to his...........kashish piche hatti hai lekin sujal pulls her to him ........and this time he started the kiss and it turned out to be the most romantic one ever........sujal picked up kashish and they had a perfact tomantic night one more time.........

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ab dekhte hai agle din kya hota hai.........sab log idhar se udhar bhag rahe hote hai kyunki ab sagai me sirf ek ghanta reh gaya hota hai.............Sujal aur Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahe the.......

Kashish: Sujal......jaldi kijiye ........pata hai aap ladki se bhi jyada waqt lagate hai........

Sujal: jee aise koi baat nahi........tum yaha aao tumhe batata hoon kuch..........

Kashish: kya hai........

Sujal: yeh dekho.....yeh tasvir .......pata hai tab main shayad 12 saal ka tha.........aur yeh dekho Rudra aur Prem.......tum janti ho Rudra hamesha cheating karke jeet jata tha......aur Prem ko main jeeta deta tha.........kitne khush lag rahe hai dono........

Kashish: aap jaan bujke harr jate taki aapke bhai khush reh sake.........

Sujal: unki khushi me to meri khushi hai......tum janti ho main apne in bhaiyon ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.......aur janti ho muje to abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki aaj Rudra aur Prem ki sagai hai........mujse to ab intzaar nahi hota ki kab woh dono ghodi chade aur main aage dil kholke nachu........main tumhe bata nahi kakta ki kitne khawab maine dekhe hai is din ka............pata hai main na apne haathoin se dono ka sehra bandhunga..........aur hum na.........hum bhi in logo ko honeymoon ke liye New Zealand hi bhejenge........aur na phir tum bhi ghar me akeli nahi hogi .......Mehek aur Heer hogi tumhare saath.........tum subaah se shaam tak sirf shopping karna..........aur phir in dono ki shadi ke bad to papa bhi office aana bandh kar denge........to muje to dair ho jayegi aane me lekin tum apna khana kha lena.........aur na tum.......

Kashish: bas bas..........kitni baatein aap ek hi saans me kar denge..........main to bhagwan se her din yahi mangti hoon mere Sujal ki her ek khawaish ko mukam mile.........aapki her ek khawish ko main aapke saath puri hote dekh saku...........aapka yeh khawab bhi bahot jalad pura hoga..........jiske pass itna pyaar denewala dil ho......jiski aatma me sach ho......unke khawab to bhagwan sabse pehle pure karte hai...........aur aap ko to pata hai ki Shivjee meri baat kabhi nahi talte.......aur unhone khud kaha hai ki mere Sujal ko duniya ki sari khushi milegi.............

Sujal: tumhe yakeen hai to muje bhi yakeen hai..........

Kashish: muje khudse jyada aap pe yakeen hai........aur yeh yakeen saat janam tak bana rahega...........

Sujal: Kashish........ek baat kahoon.........bura to nahi manogi........

Kashish: nahi bataiyena..........

Sujal: muje pata hai ki dil se sochna.......dil ki baatein manna achcha hota hai.........lekin had se jyada dil pe yakeen karna pagalpan hai.........kyunki kabhi kabhi aisa bhi ho sakta hai jo humne dil se socha ho woh na mile......to bahot chut lagti hai........aur main kabhi aisa nahi chahunga ki tumhe koi aisi gehri chut lage.......is liye had se jyada apne dil pe aitbaar karna chod do.......

Kashish: agar dil se hi sochna main chod dungi to aapse kaise baat karungi............dil pe yakeen nahi karungi to apni is haseen zindagi ke lamho ko main kaise yaad karungi...........dil ke rishte ne muje aapko joda hai..........kaise ab main is dil pe se aitbaar karna chod doon........aap hi bataiye kaise main bewafai kar loon..............

Sujal: tum janti ho.......tumse jitna namumkin hai..............

Kashish: aur aapke bina rehna namumkin hai........ab chale neeche sab intzaar kar rahe honge.........

Sujal: haa chalo........aur ab kya pata woh dono bhi taiyaar huye hai ki nahi.......

Kashish: haa chalo.................

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Sujal aur Kashish jake Rudra ke kamre me jate hai jaha pe Rudra aur Prem ek dusre ko taiyaar kar rahe the.............Sujal aur Kashish sirf darwaze se khade dekh rahe hote hai.........

Prem: are...Sujalbhai aap bahar kyun khade hai....andar aaiye...........

Rudra: waise aap dekh kya rahe the......main janta hoon ki hum aapki tarah handsom to nahi lag sakte sirf koshish kar sakte hai..........

Sujal: nahi aaj dekh raha tha ab kitne bade ho gaye........yaad hai tumhe Prem jab hum school ke liye taiyaar ho rahe hote the to sabse jyada Rudra tuje pareshan karta tha........her baar woh tuje teri cheeze chupake.........lekin aaj dekho aaj khud Rudra tumhari madad kar raha hai.........ab jante ho ab muje koi fikar nahi kal main rahoon ya na rahoon........ab muje pura yakeen hai ki mere is parivar ko tum dono sambhal longe.........kyun Kashish.........

Kashish kuch jawab nahi deti..........

Sujal: kaha kho gayi.........

Kashish: kabhi aapne socha hai jab aap humse durr jane ki baat karte hai to hume kitni taklif hoti hai........lekin aapko kisi ki talkif ki kya.......

Prem: sahi kaha bhabhi ne........aapke bina to hum kuch bhi nahi........hum sab to sirf aapke liye jite hai........kabhi aapne socha hai ki hum aapse kitna pyaar karte hai.......itna pyaar karte hai ki aapke bina hum reh nahi sakte............

Rudra: aur aapne kaise socha ki main aapko kahi jane dunga........mere hote huye aisa kuch nahi hoga........aur aaj ke din kisi ko bhi aise baat karne ki izzat nahi......are aaj khushi ka din hai aaj to khush rahiye.........kyun bhabhi.......

Kashish: bilkul sahi........yeh lo tum dono ke liye kuch layi hoon............

Rudra: yeh kya hai Bhabhi.......

Kashish: kal Mandir se tum dono ke liye rudraksh leke aayi thi.........isi tum meri aur se mera nek samaj lena ..........tum dono isi pehnogena.........

Prem: bhabhi aap layi hai aap hi pehna dijiye...........

Kashish: betho........

Kashish dono ko woh rudraksh pehna deti hai.........Rudra aur Prem kashish ke pair chute hai.......

Kashish: yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho.......

Rudra: pata hai aapke pair chuke aisa lagta hai ki hum mama ke pair chu rahe hai.........

Kashish: aajkal jabse teri sagai tai huyi hai to Mehek ki sangat me kafi samajdari wali baatein karne laga hai.......chalo neeche sab intzaar kar rahe hai aur tumhari behen ka teen bar hotel se phone aa gaya hai........to chale.......

Sujal: ha chalo...........

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ab sab log Hotel pahunchte hai..........yeh sab sinha parivar ka intzaar kar rahe hote hai jab woh log aate hai........sab ek dusre ka swagat karte hai....ab sab log stage pe jate hai aur sagai ki rasam puri karte hai..........

Khushi: mama thank you so much......aaj aapne muje meri teeno bhabhi de di.......i am so happy for my 3 brothers.......mama janti hai yeh sab Sujalbhai ki waje se hai.....agar woh hume pyaar karna nahi sikhate to hum to kabhi Pyaar ko samaj hi nahi pate.........

Sujal: baat to teri sahi hai lekin muje bhi pyaar ka yakeen tab hua jab main Kashish se mila.............pata hi nahi chala ki kab main usse pyaar karne laga,,,,,,

Rishi: aur Bhabhi aap.........

Kashish: jab se inhe dekha hai inse hi to pyaar kiya hai.......ab to mere liye Pyaar ka dusra naam hi Sujal hai.......

Prem: oye hoye bhabhi kya baat hai.......aap to bhai pe fida ho gayi.......

Sujal: kya kare......upper wale ne mere pyaar ko banaya hi aisa hai.....inke kadmo ke aage hum apna sir juka dete hai.......aaj ishq ko hum salaam karte hai jo khud chalke hamari zindagi me aaya hai.........

Kashish: achcha......aapne to kabhi bataya hi nahi.....aur haa shaadi ke pehle baat alag thi.......Rudra yeh tumhare Bhai hai na woh kehte kuch aur hai aur karte kuch.......yeh kadmo me girnewale nahi balke muje giranewalo me se hai.........chal Khushi hum chalte hai............

Kashish waha se jane lagti hai .......

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Ishq hai...(Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad ke uske samne beth jata hai apni palke juka ke)

teri aankhon ke matvaale kaajal ko mera salaam (Kashish Sujal ka haath pakad ke use khada karti hai)

zulfon ke kale kale baadal ko mera salaam (Kashish mud ke jati hai jab Kashish ke bal Sujal ko ko chute hai)

ghayal kar de mujhe yaar tere paayal ke jhankar (Kashish chali jati hai lekin uska paayal gir jata hai)

hey soni sone teri soni har adaa ko salaam (Sujal use utake Kashish ko dikhata hai)

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (jo uski aur chali aati hai paayal ko dekh ke)

ho teri mastaani anjaani bataon ko mera salaam (Kashish uske haath se lene jati hai)

rangon mein doobi doobi raaton ko mera slaaam (lekin Kashish kuch kahe usse pehle Sujal uske samne beth jata hai paayal leke)

khwaabon mein kho gayi main deewani ho gayi main (Kashish apna pair aage karti hai)

soney soney aisse soney har adaa ko salaam (Sujal Kashish ke pair me woh payal pehna deta hai)

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (kashish sharmake Mehek aur Heer ke pass chali jati hai)

ho teri hathhawitch mehandi ka rang khila hain (Kashish apne dono haath me Heer aur Mehek ka haath leti hai)

tujhe sapano da changa mehboob mila hain (Sujal waha pe Rudra aur Prem ko leke aata hai)

meri banno pyaari pyaari sari duniya se nyaari (Mehek aur Heer Kashish ke gale lag jati hai)

ise doli mein tu leja doliyaan, doliyaan...(lekin Kashish Mehek ka haath Rudra ko aur Heer ka haath Prem ke haath me rakh deti hai)

teri meri nazar jo mili pehli baar ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar (Rudra Mehek ko apni aur khichta hai aur dono ek dusre me kho jate hai)

dil hai kya dil hai kya jaan bhi tujhpe nisaar maine tujhe kiya aitbaar ho (Rudra Mehek haath ko pakad ke use chumta hai)

main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi deewanapan kya kar gayi (Mehek sharmake Rudra ke gale lag jati hai)

meri har dhakan betaab hai palkon vich tera khwaab hai(Mehek apni palke upper karke Rudra ko dekhti hai)

ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari jaaniya ko salaam (Rudra Mehek ki aur muskurata hai aur dono hosh me aate hai)

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (jab waha pe Rishi aur Khushi aate hai)

main tere ishq mein do jahan vaar doon mere vaade pe kar le yakeen (Prem Heer ko waha pe pada ek rose deta hai)

keh rahe hai zameen keh raha aasman tere jaissa dooja nahin (Prem nazdig aake Heer ki bali ke saath khel raha hota hai)

ho aisse jaadoon na daal ve naa aaon tere naal ve (jab Heer ko andaza lagta hai ki woh uske kitne kareeb hai)

jhooti tereefein chodh de ab dil mere dil se jod de (Heer use dhaka deke waha se jane lagti hai)

ho jo abhi hai dil se nikli uss dua ko salaam (Prem use khich ke beech me lejata hai dance ke liye)

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (jab waha use Rudra aur Mehek bhi saath aate hai)

rab se hai iltija maaf kar de mujhe main toh teri ibaadat karoon (Kashish ja rahi hoti hai Jab Sujal uska haath pakad ke use apni aur khichta hai)

aye meri soniye na khabar hai tujhe tujhase kitni mohobbat karoon (Sujal Kashish ke forehead pe kiss karta hai)

tere bin sab kuch benoor hai meri maang mein tere sindoor hai (Kashish apne haath se sujal ke hoth ko chuke use apni maang me bhar deti hai)

sanson mein yehi paigaam hai mera sab kuch tere naam hai (Kashish Sujal ke gale lag jati hai)

ho dhadkanon mein rehnewaali soniye ko salaam (Sujal Kashish ko apni baahoin me le leta hai)

teri aankhon ke matvaale kaajal ko mera salaam (sab log aake unhe alag karte hai )

zulfon ke kale kale baadal ko mera salaam (aur aise hi sab saath milke bahot nachte hai)

khwaabon mein kho gayi main deewani ho gayi main (aaj aisa lag raha tha ki sari duniya ki khushi yaha is waqt ho)

soney soney teri soney har adaa ko salaam (sab ke chehre pe jo khushi thi use shabdo me bayan nahi kar sakte)

salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (aaj jo bhi tha waha sab ko pyaar pe yakeen hone laga tha)

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ab sagai ke bad sab log apne apne kamre me hote hai..........Kashish kapde badal ke aati hai.......

Kashish: aaj sab log kitne khush the na.......

Sujal: haa sab khush the........aur aaj ka function bhi kafi achcha tha.......

Kashish: haa aaj bahot maza aaya.........ab to hume shaadi tak intzaar karna hoga........lekin woh bhi bahot jald ho jayega..........

Sujal: haa woh sab to thik hai.........waise kal muje jaldi jaga dena.........

Kashish: kyun.......koi zaroori kaam hai......

Sujal: haa woh muje site pe bhi jana hai aur uske baad ek meeting hai........

Kashish: thik hai main jaga dungi.........

Sujal: Kashish.........main pichle kuch dino se soch raha tha ki kyun na tum bhi phir se apni job shuru karo........

Kashish: kaun si......event manager ki..........

Sujal: nahi lawyer ki......yeh tumhara sapna tha na to ab to sab thik ho raha hai to yeh bhi to pura hona chahiye............

Kashish: haa woh to hai........lekin muje lagta hai kahi aap kangal to nahi ho rahe jo apni biwi se kaam karane ki soch rahe hai.........

Sujal: ab tumse kya jooth bolna.........woh tumhe kaam pe lagake main kuch dino ke liye chuti pe janewala tha........

Kashish: muje kaam pe lagake kiske saath jane ka irada hai........

Sujal: hai meri ek nayi girlfriend.........

Kashish: achcha........dikhne me kaise hai............main hi bata deti hoon......50 -60 saal ki........yaa phir usse bhi badi lakdi leke chalnewali........aur haa woh na aapko kya kehke bulayegi............sujalbeta.......aur ha Parsi GF hogi na to woh aapko sujal dikra kehke bulayegi..........

yeh kehke Kashish zor se hasne lagti hai..........

Sujal; ab has liya ho to main apni gf ke bare me bolu...........waise woh hai 23-24 ki..........aur uski aankhein haa kya batau....zeel ki tarah hai.......aur uske hoth jaise gulab ki nami ho ........aur jab woh mini skirt pehen ke aati hai na to......

Kashish: kya kaha......abhi batati hoon.......

Kashish bed pe pada pillow leke Sujal ko marne lagti hai...........jab Sujal uska haath pakad ke use dusri aur kar ke rokta hai........so now he was on top of her.......

Sujal: puchogi nahi uska naam kya hai........

Kashish: muje koi interest nahi.......

Sujal (whispers in her ear): Kashish..........

Kashish: sach........

Sujal: sach......

Kashish: lekin main to saree pehenti hoon............

Sujal: lekin main apni honeymoon wali Kashish ke bare me baat kar raha tha...........

Kashish: oh woh.......thik hai main kal se phir se mini dress pehen ke shopping karne jati hoon........

Sujal: uski koi zaroorat nahi.........tum janti nahi yaha ke logo ko.......

Kashish: jalan ho rahi hai......

Sujal: haa bahot........aur tum na yaha to yeh saree me hi thik ho.......

Kashish: lekin abhi abhi to aapne kaha.......

Sujal: mera kya main to kuch bhi kehta rehta hoon.........lekin tum aisa kuch nahi karogi......lekin sach to yeh hai ki tum saree me kuch jyada hi mere liye sexi lagti ho........

Kashish: really........

Sujal: really........

Kashish: achcha ab aap bhi so jaiye aur main bhi so jati hoon..........aur waise bhi kal aapko jaldi jana hai........

Sujal: aur tumhari job ka........

Kashish: pehle mama se baat karungi......aur soch ke bataungi.........ab so jaiye aur muje bhi sone dijiye......good night........

yeh kehke Kashish Sujal ki baahoin me jake so jati hai...........

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