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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part darling
luved the way u expressed their romance but i donno y i always feel such parts r shrtšŸ˜›
neways keep up the gr8 gud wrk & looking 4wrd 2 read ur next part eagerly
hope u post it asapšŸ˜ŠšŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey kashish superb part........... šŸ‘ kashish ne itni sari ice cream pehk di kyun ke usee sujal ke face pe lagii ice cream khani thi wah kya pyar hai 😳
plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Fantastic partšŸ‘ Luved it.....Itz so romantic..i liked the convo between them in the end....looking forward for the next part..plzz continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-21

ab subaah subaah Sujal bathroom me hota hai..........jab Kashish darwaza knock karti hai.......

Kashish: Sujal.......kitni dair aur karoge..........kab se bathroom me ho.....kya kar rahe hai.........

Sujal: kuch nahi shave kar raha hoon..........

Sujal darwaza kholta hai...........

Kashish:shave karne me itni dair koi lagata hai..........

Sujal: tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise bahot bar kisi ko kiya ho..........

Kashish: aap na.......laiye aaj main karti hoon,,,,,,,,,

Sujal: tumhe aata hai.......

Kashish: haa bahot achchi tarah se aata hai..........ab do muje aur yaha bethiye...........

Kashish sujal ki shaving karne lagti hai........

Sujal: tumhe shaving karna kisne sikhaya..........

Kashish: kuch cheeze aisi hoti hai jo sikhni nahi padti...........

Sujal: muje nahi pata tha ki tumhe itni achchi se aati hai warna harroz tumse karvata..........

Sujal Kashish ko uski kamar se pakadta hai.......

Kashish: chodiye aur thik se bethiye.......

Sujal: itne pass se tumhe dekhne ke bad........

Kashish: nahi abhi nahi..........

Sujal Kashish ko gudgudi karne lagta hai.........

Kashish: aah.......sujal kya kar rahe hai chodiye na........aah Sujal.........lag jayegi aapko.....

Sujal: aauch.......

Kashish:dekha lag lagi na..........i am sorry.......i am really sorry.......aap yahi bethiye.......main first-aid leke aati hoon.........

Kashish room me se first-aid leke aati hai..........Kashish sujal ke zakham ko saaf kar rahi thi...........

Sujal: bahot khoon beh raha hai kya........

Kashish: nahi bas thoda hai.........ple muje maff kar do.........i am sorry.........

Sujal: ek shart pe.......yaha nazdig aao batata hoon........

Kashish Sujal ke pass jati hai aur sujal apne gal se kashish ke gal pe shaving cream laga deta hai.........dono hasne lagte hai..........

Kashish: yeh kya kiya aapne........

Sujal: ab lag rahi ho Sujal Garewal ki biwi.........

Kashish: ab muje phir se taiyaar hona padega..........aap bhi na........

Sujal: main madad kar doon.......

Kashish: koi zaroorat nahi.........

Sujal: nahi abhi tumne madad ki ab main kar deta hoon.....yaha aao .........

Kashish: ab aapki baatoin me nahi aanewali...........jaldi se shaving karo aur taiyaar hoke bahar niklo.......samaj gaye...........

Kashish Sujal ko chod ke bahar aake taiyaar hoti hai...........

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Sujal aur Kashish dono taiyaar hoke shopping ke liye jate hai kyunki aaj unka aakhri din hota hai.........

Sujal: ab kitni shopping karni hai tumhe Kashish........

Kashish: bas thodi aur...........woh sab ke liye maine kuch le liya lekin abhi maine aapke liye kuch nahi liya...........

Sujal: mere liye...........

Kashish: haa samaj me nahi aata ki aapke liye kya loon........kabhi kuch liya nahi is liye aapki pasand ka khayal nahi.........bataiye na aapko kya achcha lagta hai.......

Sujal: muje jo chahiye woh muje mil gaya........ab kuch nahi chahiye.......

Kashish: main sach me kuch lena chahti hoon......taki aapko use meri yaad rahe..........

Sujal: thik hai tum jo bhi leke aaogi muje pasand aayega........

Kashish: lekin........

Sujal; lekin vekin kuch nahi.........tum jao main samne coffee shop pe tumhara intazar kar raha hoon..........jaldi aana......

Kashish: jee...........

Kashish wapas shopping karne chali jati hai........thodi dair bad woh wapas aati hai..........

Sujal: mila kuch......

Kashish: haa dekhiye is ghadi ko kitni achchi hai na.......

Sujal: haa ......bahot hi achchi hai.......

Kashish: aur jante hai isse achchi baat kya hai........yeh dil ki dhadkan se chalti hai......yeh ek aapki aur ek meri.......isse hum dono ko ek dusre ke dil ki dhadkano ka ehsaas rahega.........

Sujal: iska matlab yeh ghadi tab tak chalegi jab tak main zinda hoon........

Kashish: aisa mat kahiye........aisa sochna bhi nahi chahiye........bhagwan kare aapko mari umar bhi lag jaye........aap aainda se kabhi aisi baatein nahi karenge...........

Sujal: achcha baba nahi karunga.............kyunki main janta hoon ki tum muje bachanewali jo ho........

Kashish: haa Sujal.........agar main aap pe aanewali her musibat ko tal saku to muje lagega mere jine ko maksat mil gaya..............mere hote huye aapko kabhi kuch nahi hoga.......

Sujal: janta hoon...........ab baatein hi karogi ki muje yeh ghadi bhi pehnaogi...........

Kashish Sujal ko woh ghadi pehna deti hai..........aur Sujal Kashish ko.........Kashish ki aankhoin me aanshu aa jate hai.........

Sujal: tumhe kya hua.........ab yeh mat kehna ki khushi ke aanshu hai........

Kashish: Sujal........aapko mujpe mere pyaar pe to yakeen hai na.........

Sujal: haa khud se jyada hai.......lekin aise kyun bol rahi ho..........

Kashish: bas aise hi......agar kabhi bhi hamare beech halat thik nahi huye to aap mujpe se yakeen karne to nahi chod denge naa.........

Sujal: nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga..........hamare beech kuch bhi ho jaye lekin ek baat kabhi nahi badlegi aur woh hai tumhare liye mera pyaar...........

Kashish: aap muje aise hi pyaar karte rehna ........muje aur kuch nahi chahiye...........

Sujal: aaj tum aise kyun baatein kar rahi ho.........

Kashish: bas kuch nahi..........darr lagta hai ki kahi hamari khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar na lage.......

Sujal: kuch nahi hoga..........humne bahot kuch dekh liya ab sirf khushiyaan hogi........

Kashish: Sujal........i love you........

Sujal: i love you too.......

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ab raat ka waqt ho jata hai.........

Kashish: Sujal muje kaha leke ja rahe hai aap.........

Sujal: shhhhhh............tumhare liye ek surprize hai.........

Kashish; surprize........kaisa..........

Sujal: aaj hamara yaha aakhri din hai aur main is pal ko bahot special pal banana chahta hoon tumhare saath.........

Kashish: mere liye aapke saath bitaya hua her lamha special hai...........ab bataiye na kaha ja rahe hai.....

Sujal: kashish.......chup........thodi dair me pata lag jayega............ab chup chap betho........

Thodi dair bad woh log ek jagah pe pahonchte hai.........

Sujal: apni aankhein bandh karo.......

Kashish: kya hai......

Sujal: pehle aankhein bandh karo...............karti ho ki nahi.......

Kashish: thik hai baba.......lo kar li.........

Sujal kashish ko pakad ke andar lata hai.........

Sujal: ab aankehin kholo.........

Kashish dheere se apni aankhein kholti hai lekin nazare ko dekhti hi reh jati hai..............samundar ke pass ki ek rasturant ko sujal ne pura book kar diya hota hai aur deck pe sirf ek hi table hota hai aur her taraf sirf candles hi hoti hai.........sari deck pe rose pedals hote hai....jaise aisa lage kisi jannat me aapke pair chu rahe ho.........

Kashish: itna khubsurat...........yakeen nahi hota...........

Sujal: rang hai sundarta hai lekin tumse thodi kam hai............pyaar hai khushiyaan hai bas intzaar tha is pal ka........hum hai to zindagi hai.......hum hai to sari khushiyaan hai.........saath denge zindagi bhar yeh hai is din ka vaada tumse..........

Kashish: thank you........

Sujal: yeh ek chota sa tohfa tumhare liye..........

Kashish: kya hai.......

Sujal: khol ke dekh lo........

Kashish kholke dekhti hai jisme ek chain ke saath ek pandant hota hai jisme ek khubsurat sa safed moti hota hai........

Kashish: bahot hi khubsurat hai.........

Sujal: lekin tumse jyada nahi........

Sujal Kashish ko woh chain pehna deta hai........

Sujal: Kashish is chain me mera bahot sara pyaar aur vishwas hai.......

Kashish: isme me apni jaan se jyada pyaar karungi.........sach batau main bahot khusnaseeb hoon jo muje aap mile.......

Sujal: nahi kashish khusnaseeb main hoon jo muje tumhare jaisi ardhangini mili........agar aaj tum mere saath nahi hoti to........

Kashish Sujal ke hoth pe apna haath rakh deti hai......

Kashish: hum aaj saath hai aur hum kabhi juda nahi honge..........

Sujal: haa kashish aur yeh sab tumhara pyaar hai.......

Kashish: nahi yeh hamara pyaar hai........bahot pyaar karti hoon aapse...........khud se bhi jyada..........i love u sujal........

Sujal: i love you too..............

Woh log aise hi haseen pal manate hai...........

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ab wapas hotel ke room me subaah hoti hai.....Sujal wash room se taiyaar hoke bahar nikalta hai jab Kashish pareshan hoke bed pe bethi huyi hoti hai...........

Sujal: Kashish.........jaldi se taiyaar ho jao............hume ek ghante me nikalna hai flight ka waqt ho raha hai.........

Kashish: jee aapne kuch kaha humse...........

Sujal: kaha kho gayi....kab se baat kar raha hoon.......jao jake taiyaar ho jao.........

Kashish: Sujal.........woh main..........main......Sujal........

Sujal: kya........yaha aao.........batao kya baat hai..........

Kashish: woh hum ghar aise kaise jaye......

Sujal: ek minute me abhi aaya..........

Sujal almari me se jake ek bag leke aata hai........

Kashish: yeh kya hai........

Sujal: khud dekh lo........

Kashish kholti hai to usme ek bahot hi khubsurat sa salwar suit hota hai..........

Kashish: yeh aap kaha se.......

Sujal: main janta hoon is waqt tum yahi soch rahi thi na ki tum ghar kaise jaogi in kapdo me.............main samaj sakta hoon ghar pe mama papa aur bua ke samne.........tumhe sharmindi utani padti jo main kabhi nahi chahunga is liye kal jab tum mere liye woh ghadi kharidne gayi tab waha se........

Kashish: aapko meri itni fikar rehti hai...........pata nahi main upperwale ka sukhriya karoon ki aapka..........

Sujal: mera yeh farz banta hai ki main tumhari izzat, aatmsanman aur vishwas ki hifazat karoon..........kya maine kuch galat kiya.......

Kashish: aap kabhi galat nahi ho sakte.........lekin jab yaha pe hamare kapde milte the to aapne mujse jooth kyun kaha.......aur aise kapde kyun pehnaye........

Sujal: ab muje wapas ghar jake tumhe aise kapde me dekhne ka moka kaha milta..........

Kashish: to aap ko mera saree pehnna achcha nahi lagta.......

Sujal: nahi aisa nahi hai...........janti ho saree me tum sab se jyada khubsurat lagti ho.......pata hai main jab bhi mama ko saree me dekhta tha tab hamesha se khawaish thi ki meri patni bhi hamesha saree hi pehnegi.......kya tum saree nahi pehnogi.........

Kashish: jaisa aap chahte hai waisa hi hoga............ab main taiyaar hone ja rahi hoon............

Sujal: jaldi karna.....warna dair ho jayegi........

Kashish: main yun gayi aur yun aayi...........

thodi dair bad dono wapas apne usi haste khelte aashiyana ki aur nikal jate hai........

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Posted: 16 years ago
the part was very well written.. the parts you have written shows kii sujal aur kashish ka rishtha is slowly and steadily developing to a strong bond... aur un dono ka naata mazboot ban raha hai.. and i like it very much...waise sujal , kashish ke beech ke scenes bohat hii sweet , bohat hii cute hai... their romance.. uske baare mein main kahoon tho kya kahoon..it is just awesome.. unke beech ka romance padkar ko main sharam se paani , paani ho jaathi hoon.. hyeee..hyeee... ishq mein un dono ke main sadke jawaa... unki mohabbat , unke pyaar par main varijawaa...hailaa..the ice cream scene joh tumne likha hai na dear..it seriously stole my heart away... they both are just too good.. woh jaise ek dusare ko tease karthe hai.. lekin ek dusare ke saath hii woh sabse zyada khush rehthe hai..aur joh baatein sujal , kashish ne ek dusare se kahii , woh baatein mere dil ko choo gayi..so emotional.. really heart-warming.... waise yeh sujal bada shararthi hai..he knew kii us jagah Indian clothes milthe hai , lekin kyunke he wanted kashish to wear Western outfits, usne kaha kii us jagah pe Indian outfits nahii milthi... hahahaha... he even understands kashish sabse zyada iss wajah se pehle hii he has purchased a Indian outfit... very good..i completely love it...šŸ‘ do continue soon..me waiting for the next part very very very damn eagerly..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice part...... šŸ‘
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part
it was a cute part
i liked the shaving scene
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi Kashish
Wow....awesme part yara I just luved it....it was soo well written šŸ‘Shaving ka scene kaphi romantic tha its romantic, lovely and emotional part aur yeh sujal bhi naa bahut naughty hai....I luv readin ur ff its great aap bahut acha likh rhi hain bas aapke ff parne ka hameh nasha hai..

Keep it up n plz continue soon
take care


Edited by ajnabi_sahil - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing, luvd it how sujal cared for kashish ..cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
very cute part kashish............ i luved ur way of writing sk's lovely and cute moments very much..............šŸ‘

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