Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
very interesting update.....and full of humourous dialogues...tooooooooo good di...thanks for this supercool update.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
ha ha ha...... hi dear... i am new reader of this fic.... simply terrific.. mindblowing....

jyadatar mai aise hi has rahi thi fic pad kar..
ye raj kya duffer stupid ulloo hai kya??
kuch bhi bolta aur gadbad ghotala karta hai...

pehle Naina ko force karta hai shaadi ke liye.. wo bhi usse khud nahi pata kyu?? arrey karne deta abhi aur akriti ko shaadi.. kya chala jata uska??
fir jab kar li shaadi to Naina pe shaq karta hai duffer.... aur uski shaadi ka koi fayda bhi nahi hua... abhi bhi bet-bet khel raha hai Naina ke saath..huh...

dekhte hai kya hota hai...

continue soon/..... waiting....

take care...
b bye...
keep smiling...
sheenu 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: rogerfan

ha ha ha...... hi dear... i am new reader of this fic.... simply terrific.. mindblowing....

jyadatar mai aise hi has rahi thi fic pad kar..
ye raj kya duffer stupid ulloo hai kya??
kuch bhi bolta aur gadbad ghotala karta hai...

pehle Naina ko force karta hai shaadi ke liye.. wo bhi usse khud nahi pata kyu?? arrey karne deta abhi aur akriti ko shaadi.. kya chala jata uska??
fir jab kar li shaadi to Naina pe shaq karta hai duffer.... aur uski shaadi ka koi fayda bhi nahi hua... abhi bhi bet-bet khel raha hai Naina ke saath..huh...

dekhte hai kya hota hai...

continue soon/..... waiting....

take care...
b bye...
keep smiling...
sheenu 😊

thanks a lot
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
Too good!!!!

Toh Raj ko Naina ko adat ho gayi hai 😆 😉 !!!Thats good!!!!

Par Jatin se insecurity uski barkarar hai 😆 😆 😆 !!!!Yeh Jatin bhi Naina se phir se paas aane ki try mar raha hai!!!

Abhi ne sahi bola....sirf 3 words kehne hai woh bhi nahi keh pata Raj 😆 😆 😆 !!!!

Yeh Raj toh ab uski insecurity mein Jatin ka kuch karega 😆 !!!!

Aur Raj ko airport pe kya ho gaya itni meethi meethi baatein kar raha tha 😕 😛 !!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!

Toh Raj ko Naina ko adat ho gayi hai 😆 😉 !!!Thats good!!!!

Par Jatin se insecurity uski barkarar hai 😆 😆 😆 !!!!Yeh Jatin bhi Naina se phir se paas aane ki try mar raha hai!!!

Abhi ne sahi bola....sirf 3 words kehne hai woh bhi nahi keh pata Raj 😆 😆 😆 !!!!

Yeh Raj toh ab uski insecurity mein Jatin ka kuch karega 😆 !!!!

Aur Raj ko airport pe kya ho gaya itni meethi meethi baatein kar raha tha 😕 😛 !!!!!

Raj dunia ka 8 th wonder hai..woh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
yaa di, i agree with u Raj duniya ka 8th wonder hai
kamaal ka story hai yeh to
Raj Naina ko miss kar raha hai, chalo acchi baat hai
& jatin se insecurity
very funny 😆
awsome
fatafati update
Raj er teen labz er wait kore thaklam
too good
plz continue soon, i am waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
Vo natak kar raha hai bus Naina ko api taraf lane k liye.Miss viss nahi kar raha tha vo Naina ko.Nice part update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
he he 😆 kuch jalne ki smell aarahi hai 😆

nice ud 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Nishttha

he he 😆 kuch jalne ki smell aarahi hai 😆

nice ud 👏

haa..😃RAJ ki sulagh chuki hai.😆.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80

2006,30 Januray..

Raj ne Abhi ko phone kia..

Raj--kaisa hai?

Abhi--thik nahi hoon..Guddu ko dekhne ka bahut man kar raha hai...

Raj--achha ek kaam kar..aaj dopaher ko aja Mc Donalds me..main Guddu ko lekar ata hoon..

Abhi--thanks Raj..

Raj ne phone rakh dia..

Naina bathroom se nikli hai..

Raj--good morning..


Naina--kahe ka good morning..?

Raj--ok bad morning..ab khush?

Naina--subha subha main hi mili thi?itna paka kyon rahe ho?

Raj--sidhi tarha se baat tumko achhi nahi lagti?

Naina--nahi..main jaa rahi hoon..

Raj--kaha?

Naina--woh aaj club me lunch hai..dosto ne bulaya hai..usse pahle thodi si shopping bhi karni hai..

Raj--achha..us din jo kaha tha..yaad hai?

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--that..I want to be a father..

Naina--main kaha tha..na..subha subha main hi mili tumko..

Raj--isme pakane wali kyaa baat hui?shadi ko 5 saal ho gaye hai..abhi family nahi banayenge to kab banayenge?

Naina--bolne me galti ki Raj..Abhi se Akriti ne abhi tak maafi nahi maangi hai..aur main maangne nahi dungi..

Raj--Naina...this is unfair..Abhi Akriti k upar depend karta hai kya k humari zindagi me kyaa hona hai?

Naina--silsila tumhi ne shuru kia hai...

Raj--fine..pura mood kharab kar dia tumne..

Naina--welcome..

dopaher k 1 baje..

Raj Guddu ko ghumane k bahane le aya Abhi k paas..Mc Donalds me..

Guddu to apne papa dekh kar uchhal pada..

Guddu--papa..tumhara office ka kaam kab khatam hoga?jaldi ghar aao na!!

Abhi--mujhe kaam hai yeh kisne kaha tujhko?

Guddu--Mummy ne..

Abhi--dekha Raj..kitni jhoot bol rahi hai mere bete se..

Raj--to kyaa karti woh..bata deti k tum dono me jhagda hua hai?

Abhi--achha Guddu..tum ghar mat jaao..mere sath raho..Mummy ko main bata dunga k tum mere paas ho..

Guddu--nahi mujhe Mummy k paas jana hai..

Abhi--kyon bhai?main kya tujhko kaante chuba ta hoon?aur woh kaun se phool barsa ti hai tujhpar?

Raj--abe Guddu k sath aisi baat kyon karta hai?itna chhota bachcha..Maa k bina kaise rahega?

Abhi muh latka k baitha raha..

Raj--hello..kyaa hua tujhe?

Abhi--kuchh nahi yaar..aaj k din Bapu Shaheed hue the..isi lia dukhi hoon..

Raj--kaun Bapu?

Abhi--are..Mahatma Gandhi..

Raj--fek mat..itna mat fek..

Abhi--Raj..main abhi ghar laut jaaoon?

Raj--khabardar..jo aisa socha bhi to..

Abhi--kaisa dost hai yaar tu?

Raj--are tu ghar gaya...aur Naina degi talak...

Abhi--kisko?

Raj--jaha tak mujhe yaad hai..biwi meri hai..zaaheer si baat hai..talak mujhe hi degi..

Abhi--mere ghar jane se tere talak ka kyaa wasta?

Raj--are Naina se shart lagi hai..k agar tu ghar laut gaya..aur Akriti se maafi maang li..to main usko talak dunga..aur agar tu nahi gaya aur Akriti aai tujhse maafi mangne..to..

Abhi--to kyaa?

Raj--agar tu kamyab ho gaya Akriti se maafi mangvane me..to..humara bachcha hoga..ek saal k andar..

Abhi--main ek baat bolu?

Raj--bolna..

Abhi--Guiness Book walo ko phone laga..I think aisi shart pahli baar kisi husband wife k bich lagi hai..waaaaaaahhhh..are bachche paida karne hai.. to bhi ..tu shart laga raha hai?

Raj--varna woh raazi nahi..

Abhi--baat yeha tak kaise pahuchi?

Raj--are maine zada bahes kar lia uske sath..aur mauka dekh kar usne challenge kia..

Abhi--are..tere baap banne k chakkar me main door kyon rahoon apne bete se?bola tha maine pahle se..k panga mat le Naina se..aur tu shuru se le raha hai Naina se..panga..

Raj--maine kyaa kia?

Abhi--kyon..dhamki dekar shadi ki..usse..

Raj--pasand thi isi lia..

Abhi--to pahli foorsat jakar batana tha usko..k usko pasand karta hai tu..aur tune..beta this is democracy..haa...bullet ki bhasha bahut log kahte hai..par kuchh log hai jo sirf ballet ki bhasha samajhte hai..tujhko kahna tha Naina se..k please mujhse shadi karo..par tu utar aya dhamki pe..aur ek baat kah doon..agar us waqt Naina nahi maanti..to tu koi aur raasta apnata..

Raj--nahi..

Abhi--aisa hi hai..ek baar himmat kar k kah dena tha..shadi k 5 saalon me tu bol nahi paya..k Naina mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Raj--pyaar nahi karta usse main..

Abhi---to fir mujhe mere family k paas wapas jane se kyon rok raha hai?talak de de usko..

Raj--izzat do kaudi ki nahi rahegi meri..

Abhi--are raeeson me divorce status symbol mana jata hai ajkal..

Raj--its not a solution..

Abhi--kitna time lagta hai..?haa..ek bachcha paida karne me?ab yeh mat bol.. tu ab tak Naina se door rehta hai..

Raj--main kuchh samajhne k haalat me nahi hoon..

Abhi--samajh mat..kuchh kar..par pyaar se..are aurat ka dil mom ki tarha hota hai..do mithi baatein kah dega to jail me nahi dalegi tujhko..

Raj--par tu thode dino k lia ghar mat jaa..

Abhi--zada der nahi ruk paoonga..zaroorat padi to Akriti se maafi maang lunga..

Raj ne Abhi se haath jode..

Raj--aisa gazab mat karna..varna tujhe to apna Guddu mil gaya..mujhe nahi milega..Naina raazi nahi hogi..

Abhi--ek idea deta hoon..jab ghar pe chori karna mushkil lage..jab ghar ka malik bahut chaukanna ho..tab chor kyaa karta hai?tujhe malum hai?

Raj--kyaa?

Abhi--behoshi ki davai..soch le..

Raj--aur kuchh?

Abhi--nahi..achha sun Akriti kaisi hai?

Raj--achhi hai

Abhi--mere bina?

Raj--tere bina hi woh better hai..

Abhi--tu ja abhi..

Raj Guddu ko lekar chala gaya..

traffic jam hai..

aur Raj magazine padhne laga..

aur dekha..Sydney me..ek Model..Indian Model..Jateen Kumar..bahut famous hai ajkal..

Raj ki sulagh gai..sala jaha jata hai famous ho jata hai..kahi Naina ne yeh magazine padh lia to..nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..

jis din Naina New York se lauti..usdin bhi bahut jhamela hua tha Raj aur Naina k bich..

ghar laut te hi Raj baras pada..

Raj--Jateen..kyaa kar raha tha?

Naina--kyaa kar raha tha matlab?modelling kar raha tha..

Raj--sirf modelling ki usne k tumhare saath bhi..

Naina--shut up..


Raj--kyon?batao..kyaa hua..

Naina--woh gaya tha waha..coincidence,,isse zada kuchh nahi..aur tumhine to kaha tha..k jaao..New York..

Raj--tumhara uske sath koi chakkar to nahi hai na?

Naina--nahi..mujhe apni zindagi me aur mushkile nahi badhani..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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