Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09

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Rituka

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#331

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take care and get well soon 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey ananya...its a v interesting story.... just hillarious... has has ke haal bura ho gaya... 🤣
get well soon....

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ANANYA ROY

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#334

Happy Dusserah and Happy Vijaya Dashmi to all..friends I have become so helpless..when I recovered totally then I had to go to the Bangalore Car Rally,when I came back,I discovered that my dear brother has formatted my PC..and all the text files related to fan fics..have been deleted..he didn't even take any back up..now I am reading my fic and copy-pasting them from IF and thinking about the next update and trying to write.I know..I am being so late..but trust me I am so helpless.😕😭

Please co-operate..and give me at least a week..then I can give the desired output..

Main jaanti hoon..Naina k 9 months pure bhi ho gaye..par kyaa karroon?Bhai ko agar kambal lapet kar pitoon..toh mere text files waapas nahi aane wale..

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Posted: 15 years ago

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All ur data ohh dear yeh to bura hua..

chalein koi baat nahi we will wait 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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koi baat nahin Anu...bhai ko kambal lapet kar mat peeto...😆bas apne dil aur dimag ko hamare liye thoda sa active karwayo...aur jaldi se ud post karo...!!!😛

waitingggggg......😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hiiiiiiiii

This is a very interesting concept 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Some times i cannot stop myself from laughing like crazy🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

waiting for your next update

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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@ Mahek

Thanks for the long comment..

Haan sahi baat hai..kis baat k peechhe kaunsi khatarnaak baat hoti hai..koi nahi keh sakta.Matre ne agar der ki hoti toh Raj ka ho chuka tha kalyan.Aur Naina ko achhi khasi sunni padi us investigation team se..Naina ko sochna chahie tha ek baar apni haalat k baare me..Raj ne situation achha handle kia..

@ Kads_8302

I agree..Naina owes an explanation to Raj..Raj is right this time.

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@ digimon_pokemon

Thanks for comment..Naina ko daant padhni hi chahie..

@danish1,vvdn,prerna1,pinka28,rituka,sun_423,sweet_shona,Lion_Priya,Sanskruti

A big thank you to all of you.

@ Varshita

Haan..Raj ne saabit kia k uske paas bhi dimaag hai..

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Accha hai jo Matre ne Bhairon Singh ko pakad liya aur Binjarwali lekar aa raha hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Iske peeche itni badi kahani thi!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲We had no idea that the plot could be this thick!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj ko Bhairon Singh batane ke liye unlogo ko paise diye gaye thhe taaki police ko gumraah kar sake!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

So Jayanti, Kamla aur Iravati were really Crime Branch officers!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊No wonder they could not recognise that Raj was not Bhairon!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina aur Raj ka patch up ho gaya tha tab Iravati ne Raj ko pakda!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yeh log toh Raj ke kisi bhi baat pe yakeen nahi kar rahe hai aur soch rahe hai ke he is lying!!!!!

Abhimanyu aur Matre bilkul sahi waqt pe aaye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Pata nahi agar woh sahi time pe nahi pahuchte toh kya hota??😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj toh phir bhi jhel leta magar Naina ish haalat mein kya karti!!!!!!!

Raj ne kaha uski izzat ko koi khatra nahi tha and Kaya informed him ke woh log usse bas kamre mein laakar marte!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

The lady officers were right that Naina was wrong and she shouldn't have done this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Indu aur Jia ne sahi kaha ke Naina ke saath kuch bhi ho sakta tha aur jo torture Raj pe huya woh Naina par bhi ho sakta tha!!!!

Finally the Bhairon Singh Bishnoi case is solved!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj isbaar bilkul sahi hai aur uske gussa hone jaayez hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is really scared thinking about what could have happened!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj is very serious and not to be messed with right now!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

He takes Naina straightaway to see the doctor and thankfully the doctor said ke sab kuch theek hai! and the baby is fine!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh Naina se baat bhi nahi kar raha hai!!!! Naina usse sorry bol rahi hai but he is not listening!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj is right ke kuch bhi ho sakta tha aur Naina ko kuch karne se pehle ek baar toh sochna chahiye tha!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina understood that Raj is very serious this time and was worried sick about her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Raj saying to Naina ke tumhe pata hai tum kitni badi pagal ho and Naina saying pata hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊That was really cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Abhi aur Matre sahi time par pahooche..varna Raj aur Naina dono ka kalyan aur ulhasnagar hota..is baat par koi shak nahi.Raj ne Naina ko daant padte dekha..aur sahi hai..Naina ko sunna chahie woh sab jo crime branch k logone usko sunaya..Raj bhi gusa hai..but finally Raj Pati ban gaya..kis tarha apni Patni ko handle karna hai..Raj sikh gaya. Naina ne bhi baat ko samajh lia k Raj par gussa dikhane k lia woh kitni badi ghalati kar rahi thi..but all is well that ends well.

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 15 years ago

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PART 30(a)

Insaan ki kismat..pata nahi kab kyaa rang badle..varna Naina ne socha tha kuchh aur hua kuchh.Raj usko footi aankh nahi bhata tha..par ussi Raj se usko shaadi karni padi.Dekhte dekhte paanch saal beet gaye..ladhte jhagadte Raj k saath uski zindagi guzarti gayi.Raj ka sankhipan din raat Naina ko irritate karta raha..par andar hi andar Naina k dil me ek sukoon sa tha.Sukoon is baat ka k Raj usko pareshan karta hai..har pal daurata hai..jo hua Naina k saamne hi hua..

Raj Naina ko dress k colour ko le kar irriate karta raha..par yeh bhi hai k Raj ko jo colour pasand aaya Raj ne ussi colour ka dress Naina k lia kharida.Kisi aur k lia nahi..

Emerald se Raj ko chidh thi,Naina k haath se emerald ki ring Raj ne utaar li.. par Naina k lia hi Raj ne diamond ki ring kharidi,kisi aur k lia nahi.

Din bhar ki outing k baad bhi Raj ghar laut kar Naina se kehta tha khana banane ko..Naina ko gussa aata tha..par Raj kabhi gussa ho kar khana chhod kar nahi gaya..Naina ne jaisa pakaya..Raj ne chupchaap khaa lia..kisi aur k paas yeh shikayat nahi ki k Naina ne theek se khana nahi banaya.

Kabhi kabhi Raj neend me baatein karta tha..kharrate bharta tha..Naina ko gussa aata tha..par Naina ko is baat ki tasalli thi k Raj ussi k bagal me soya hai..kisi aur k saath nahi.Jab kamre se bhi Raj ko bhaga deti thi Naina..tab bhi jaanti thi Raj guest room me ya drawing room me reh lega..par darwaza khol kar ghar k baahar nahi jaayega.

Ladhai hui..jhagda hua..par Raj k saath hi hua..kyunki Rajveer humesha Naina k paas tha..agar Rajveer sach me kisi aur se rishta jodta..tab Naina kyaa karti?Kis ki shikayat karti Akriti k saamne?Yaa fir jhagda kisse karti?

Aaj bhi Naina ko yaad hai..Jatin k paas se laut kar Naina kis tarha ro rahi thi.. Raj hi usko chup kara raha tha..aur fir hotel k room se Raj aur Abhi ka pakde jaana..Matre se kharikhoti sunna..Naina ka kab uske seene se nikal kar Raj k dil me sama gaya Naina ko ehsaas hi nahi hua.Aur jab Naina yeh baat samjhi..tab Naina bhaag gayi.Ghar se door..Raj se door.Naina jaanti hai.. sach kyaa hai..asal me Naina khud se hi bhaagti fir rahi thi.Jis tarha Jatin se uska rishta toota aur Raj k saath uska rishta jooda..Naina ko kabhi laga hi nahi k Raj k lia Naina k dil me kabhi koi jagah banegi ..par jagah nahi bani.. bal pure dil par Raj kab chhaa gaya..Naina samajh nahi paai.Raj se pyaar nahi karegi..shaayad aisi koi kasam khaa rakhi thi Naina ne..shaayad tab Naina ko woh kasam yaad aa gayi..khud se nazre nahi mila saki..issi lia bhaag gayi.

Par jab Naina Rajasthan me chhup rahi thi..tab mann hi mann chaah rahi thi k Rajveer usko dhoondh kar nikaale..agar Raj nahi pahooch pata Naina tak.. tab sab se bura Naina ko hi lagta.

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Rajasthan se laut kar hi Rajveer ne pura intezam kar lia Naina k lia..ek Nurse aur ek Aya ko rakh lia ghar pe.Naina ka sidhi se utarna chadhna pura bandh..Naina k lia neeche kamra ready kia gaya..Naina ne sirf itna hi kaha tha,"Raj..tumhare khaane peene ka kyaa hoga?"...Raj ne wheel chair ka intezam kar dia..taa k Aya Naina ko wheel chair me bitha kar kitchen tak le jaa sake..aur Naina Cook ko instruction de sake.

Goad bharai ki rasam bhi ho gayi..sab kuchh theek thaak..

Aise me...kuchh aisa hua..jiski kisine kalpana tak nahi ki thi..Rajveer ko kisine kidnap kar lia..maamla kuchh aisa hua..

Jab Naina Rajasthan me bhatak rahi thi,,tab Jatin gaya tha Dubai..modeling k assignment k lia.Wahi par hua bawal.Jis upcoming model k saath Jatin ka short term affair hua..woh nikli Dubai k ek Don ki Beti..chakkar kuchh aisa chala..k Jatin ko us ladki se shaadi karni padi..gun point me hi hui shaadi.. aur Dubai k Don ne apne India ka karobar samhalne k lia Jatin ko incharge bana dia..dulhan aur ek Gang ki zimmedari le kar Jatin Mumbai laut aaya.. usne socha tha Dubai k is assignment k baad Sydney chala jaayega..par Jatin ka tharkipan bahut bhaari pada us par..Jatin ko khud ko prove karna tha..usko ek rich businessman ko kidnap kar k extaursion money claim karna tha..Jatin ki itni himmat nahi hui k kisike sar pe bandook rakh kar usko kidnap kare..

Raj ko Jatin ne phone kia..

"Hello..Naina ka naya number do..usse mujhe milna hai.."

"Abe..ab uske peechhe doom hilana chhod..Biwi hai meri..kuchh hi dino me Maa bhi ban rahi hai..sharam kar kameene.."

"Mujhe Naina se milna hai.."

"Saale..khabardar..usse milneki koshish bhi ki toh.."

"Milna zaroori hai..usse keh dena..akhribaar..milna chaahta hoon..main India chhod kar jaa raha hoon..usko bolna.."

"Chup.."

"Main ghar aa jaata hoon fir.."

"Khabardar.."

"Toh fir Naina ko bhejo..Boot House k paas..hum aksar wahi mila karte the.. kal shaam ko..6 baje.."

Jaisa Jatin ne socha tha waisa hi hua..Raj aaya..Raj ki car dekhte hi Jatin ne apne admion ko alart kar dia ,"Jaise hi yeh admi meri taraf aaye..tum log isko pakad lena..".

Raj aaya..Jatin ki taraf..Jatin k saamne aate hi..Raj k naak par ek kapda daala kisine..aur fir sab andhera ...Naina ko kuchh bhi pata nahi..

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Matre chidh gaya..Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ab khud kidnaped hua hai..is admi ko aur koi kaam nahi mila?Dhatt..!!

Naina pareshaan ho gayi thi..Matre ne kaha ,"Aap chinta naa kare..main dekhta hoon..par kuchh toh bataya hoga unhone..kahan gaye..aisa kuchh..."

Naina--No clue..Office se waapas aaya hi nahi woh..uske mobile par phone kia..tab ek anjaan admi ne kaha k Raj ko unlogone kidnap kia hai..aur paise naa milne par..

Matre--Kitna maanga..?

Naina--Paanch crore..maine Abhimanyu ko bola bhi..k paison ka intezam kare..lekin kahan paise pahoochane hain..aisa kuchh pata hi nahi..

Sub Inspector Ghodpode ka phone aaya Matre k paas..nahi..yeh kaam kisi naye Gangstar ka hai..informers se yehi khabar mili hai..jaan pehchaan k admi nahi hain..

Matre--Waise Madam..main jaanta hoon..Shekhawat Saab ka jo nature hai.. aadhi duniya unki dushman hi hai..par fir bhi kisi par koi shak hai aapko?

Naina--Mujhe koi idea nahi..kasam se..main kyaa karoon..samajh me nahi aa raha..

Matre--Main dekhta hoon..

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Par jisko Naina handle nahi kar paai..us Rajveer ko mamuli mawali kab tak jhelte?Jatin ko idea hi nahi tha k usne zindagi ki sab se badi ghalati ki hai Raj ko kidnap kar k..

Jo log Raj k saath the unlogo ka naam tha Mansukh,Mazong,Mandy aur Mehru..M ki chaukri.

Raj--Kandyyyyyyyyy...

Mandy--Mera naam Mandy hai..bolo ..kyaa chahie?

Raj--Tumhara pura naam kyaa hai?

Mandy--Tumko kyaa karna hai..?

Raj--Nahi..Mandy ladkion ka naam hota hai..aur tum dikhte bhi chikne ho.. agar kisika tum par dil aa gaya toh..?

Mandy--Arre..apun issi koshish me laga hai k koi ladki ka dil apun par aaye..

Raj--Ladki nahi..agar koi ladka tum par aashik ho gaya toh?

Mandy--Bole toh..ee..kaam ki baat kar..

Raj--Apne Boss ko bulao..aur maine kaunsi gaai maar di tumhare Boss ki..k usne mujhe uthva lia..?

Mandy--Teri gharwali se hum ne paanch khoke ki maang ki hai..?

Raj--Khoke?

Mandy--Crore ko Khoka kahte hain..chambu..

Raj--Mere lia paanch crore?Saale..thoda aur bolna tha..meri Biwi k saamne meri izzat do kaudi ki nahi rahegi..bolegi..k main kitna gaya guzra hoon..k sirf paanch crore ki maang hui hai..

Mandy--Tu choop baithega k ghoda dabaoon?

Raj--Ghoda..kahan dabaoge ghode ka?Ghoda laath nahi maarega?

Mandy--Mansukh...Bhai..tu samhal..

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Mansukh ko Raj ne share me investment k baare me bataya..sunte sunte Mansukh ki khatiya khadi ho gayi..finally usne kaha ,"Mere ko baksh do..aap bade raees ho..pata hai..agar share bazar hi jaana hota toh is dhandhe me kaiko aata?Bas karo..".

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Mazong ki duty padi..Raj ne poochha.."Tumhare Mummy Daddy ne kya tumko Majhong khelte khelte paida kia tha?"

Mazong--Mere saat pushton me yeh khel kisine nahi khela..yeh kyaa game hai?

Raj--Lo..Chinese game hai..waise tumhari Maa Chinese hain ya tumhare Dad?

Mazong--Tere Baap ka kyaa jaata hai?Chinese ..khaane ka mann kar raha hai toh seedhe bolna..paka mat..

Raj--Chinese..nahi..Indian Chinese..

Mazong--Woh kyaa hai?

Raj--Lo ..tumko nahi pata..Indian Chinese..meri Biwi..Naina..badhia banati hai..basically.......................

Raj ne Chinese aur Indian Chinese Cuisine ki puri history Mazong ko suna dia..

Mehru ki haalat aur kharab ho gayi..jab Raj ne suna Mehru Hyderabadi hai.. tab Raj ne kaha "Hyderabadi biriyani ki recipe likh kar do na..ek yehi chees hai..jo ab tak meri Biwi ne paka kar mujhe khilaya nahi..ghar jaate sab se pahle Hyrderabadi biriyani hi banvaoonga..."

Mehru--Tu toh bol raha tha..teri aurat pet se hai?Is haalat me biriyani soojh rahi hai tujhe?

Raj--Agar itni fikar hai..toh mujhe chhod do na..promise..ghar jaate hi paanch crore main khud pahoocha doonga..

Mehru--Chup baithna..

Raj--Nahi ..socho..agar is beech usko labour pain hua..aur operation karna pada..tab form par mere hi sign chahie honge na...tab kyaa hoga?

Mehru--Maine itna aage ka socha nahi..ghar me aur log nahi hai kya?

Raj--Nurse hai..Aya hai..

Mehru--Family me aur log nahi..?

Raj--Nahi..

Mehru--Teri aurat bahut bahadur hai..family me aur koi nahi..aur akele tujhe jhel rahi hai..ab tak bhaag jaana chahie tha usko...

Raj--Bhaag gayi thi..paanch maheene pahle hi bhaagi thi..aur tum logone paanch crore ki demand ki..ittefaak..

Mehru--SAALE TERE ITTEFAAK KI MAA KI...CHOOP BAITHEGA?

Raj--Okay..take it easy...cool..chill...

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