FF : RanKan Love? Part20 - 9/7/08 Pg29 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
desaigirl101
it's allready the end of the weekend
and you didn't update 😡 😡
your punishment is that your next part must be
looooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggg 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys I have busy going to street hockey practices and alot of indian wedding functions.Its been hectic and I was really tired.But,I am all good now and I hope you guys enjoy this next update.Thanks for all the comments.ENJOY!

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Recap: Ranbir makes Kanya breakfast and apologizes to her.. Kanya says its not not his fault. They become friends again. The whole gang comes over to the girl's dorm to have breakfast and talk. They tell Ranbir and Kanya that they knew about them faking about the dating thing.

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Ranbir & Kanya: WHAT!! 😡

Sameer: Duh!Dude,we knew from the beginning!We aren't that stupid@

Kanya: What! Then...then..then what was up with this kissing act! 😡

Akshay: Well,we wanted to see if you guys are that stupid to do and for a second there I thought well we thought you were going to kiss.

Ranbir: You know I am going to strangle you guys.

Kajol: Also,even if you two went through with this kiss it would mean that you have feeling for eachother. You know more than a friendship or whatever type of realationship you two have,its hard to tell. Like lovey dovey feelings devolping.

Ranbir: Hahahaha...me and this chipkail!...have feelings for eachother..hahahahahahhe

Kajol: Good joke Kajol! And Saand don't call me Chipkali!

Ranbir: Okay,I will call you a....ummm....a Hideous Lunatic...Happy?

Kanya: You are such a.....Mentally Retarted Jerk!

Ranbir: Don't talk to me like that Kanya 😡 (getting really mad)

Now they are like a inch apart facing each-other(very very close). With Ranbir points his finger towards Kanya's face.

Kanya: Then stop this nonsense!

Ranbir: What Nonsense!!

Kanya: Why can't you just call me Kanya and not this retarted names! Why can't you just be nice to me like you are to Kajol and Payal and everyone else.You just a jerk.

Ranbir: I am jerk ya sure.... 😡.

Kanya puts his finger down. Everyone looks at them two arguing.Rohit them just walks in and sees them fighting. He comes up to them and separates them a couple feet apart and he stands between them.

Rohit: What is wrong with you two!

Kanya: You ask him!

Rohit: Ranbir?

Ranbir: Its not my fault. You ask her!

Payal: I will tell you Rohit. Ranbir and Kanya now know that we also knew they were faking dating.We told them that if they were going to kiss-which we dared them to that would mean they would have feelings for eachother. So,they joked about that about and started arguing.

Kanya: I didn't start this fight!

Ranbir: Yes you did!

Kanya: No I didn't!

Ranbir: Why do you always want to fight with me!

Kanya: I dont but you start the fights so what am I suppose to do.

Ranbir: Yes you do! I woke up in early in the morning to make breakfast and bring coffee just for you just so you can forgive me. I shouldn't even care if you are mad at me but I did this for you and you don't even care.You just want to fight!We even agreed to be friends but....

Kanya: Ranbir I didn't tell you to make breakfast or anything. I know we are friends but I guess we can't be friends because of this...So goodbye Mr.Ranbir Nanda. Come on Rohit.

Kanya went out of the room dragging Rohit along. They are walking to their first class and are talking on the way. Ranbir still was at the dorm at the same position while everyone surronded him.

Sameer: Hey dude you alright?

Ranbir: Ummmmmmm....ya...i guess

Akshay: Well,you don't seem okay.

Ranbir: I am okay guys...don't worry...why would I care if she is my friend or not.(he said in a sad tone)Ummm...so I guess I will be leaving now.

Sameer: Dude.

Ranbir: What Sameer!

Sameer: Nothing.

Ranbir left out of dorm and walked to his first class.

On the way to class:

Ranbir thinking...Oh god what is up with the chipkali?She is such a lunatic.One minute she is happy and we are nice to eachother and enjoy ourselves but the next minute she is just so ughh... 😡 Whatever!I should just focus on college.

Ranbir bumps into a young-lady his age.She is about to fall when Ranbir catches her. His hands are around her waist. Just then Rohit and Kanya see them. Kanya is shocked. Ranbir makes the young-lady stand up straight.She puts his hands on his one hands and they are just smiling.Kanya is just so shocked and walks up to them.

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What do you guys think?
I hope you all enjoyed!
Also,feel free to leave positive and negative comments.
I want to hear some constructive critism.
I will update soon!

Edited by desaigirl101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
looooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee it 👏
yaar plz plz plz update soon
and why dont you make it long 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
ooo brill update continue sooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
i felt for ranbir...
aw man... it was goood... pls update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx,
really want to know kanya's reaction soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^Thanks for the comments everyone.This part is kind of weird to me because there is this friend/enemy(a guy) who is a friend of my friend and I had to talk to him sometimes because my friend was friends with her.And whenever we talked we use to always argue and call eachother name's.Such as I called him a idiot,loser,hippo,etc and he did the same. But when we did get along(usually never) we use to fake fighting just to annoy our friend.So,this update reminds me of the fights we had. But I tottaly DESPISE & HATE him.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Omg wow this is really cool plz cont soon i liked it hehe..wow this is realy sweet and u and your frind ..frind.haha funny
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^Thanks Sania.
And him and I aren't friends we are like frinemies 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: desaigirl101

^Thanks Sania.
And him and I aren't friends we are like frinemies 😆

No Problems

😆 omg frienemies i hope 1 day you wil become frinds 😆

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