FF : RanKan Love? Part20 - 9/7/08 Pg29 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was great...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
dat was awesome
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thu bhi comments demand karthi hain huh!
anyhow was excellent ..continue soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys
Sorry for the delay.
I would of updated last weekend but I had to study for my finals.
But here is the next update.


Recap: Everyone meets Rohit. Kanya & Ranbir fool everyone by acting like they love eachother. Ranbir & Kanya head out of the room and starting laughing and talking. What they didn't know was someone was watching them all along.

PART 7

Ranbir and Kanya were still standing there giggling.
While someone was listening to every word they said.
And it was no other than Akshay.

Akshay: (thinking) oh so they were just playing around with us....lets see whats happens when i tell everyone.

Akshay headed back inside the dorm where everyone else was. While Ranbir headed back to his dorm and Kanya headed to the cofee shop.

Inside the girls dorm:

Akshay: Hey guys,guess what I just heard?(in a bit angry tone)

Everyone: WHAT?

Akshay sat down on the sofa.

Akshay: Well...the scene that shocked you the most of Kanya and Ranbir saying they love eachother...WAS JUST AN ACT!

Everyone: WHAT!!!

Akshay: Ya,I heard them two talking to each other and saying that they fooled us....and both of them were giggling.

Sameer: What!....We have to make a plan!

Kajol: Ms.Kanya Godbole and Mr.Ranbir Nanda won't know what him them!They mess with us we mess with them!

Now all of them starting to talk about what they were going to do next for their PLAN: REVENGE!

Payal: So, everyone understand what they are going to do?!

Everyone: Ya!

Payal: So,lets start today!

Later on that day everyone met up in the hang-out area in college campus that everyone goes too.(i am not in college so i just made up the hang-out area)

Rohit: So,Ranbir you are seriously going out with Kanya?

Ranbir: Yes,why dont you guys believe me!?

Sameer: No its not like that. We just wanted to make sure.

Kanya: Okay?!

They were all sitting around this big round table. Ranbir was sitting by Kanya and Rohit.

Kanya: Hey I am going to ge some coffee anyone else want anything?

Everyone: NO

Kanya: Okay

When Kanya turned she bumped into this guys who had hot cofee in his hand. All the hot coffeee spilled on her.
Everyone looked at her and the guy.

Rohit:(in an angry tone to the guy)Do you have any manners you just bump into girls and spill really hot coffee on them.God! (now in a nice tone to kanya) Are you okay Kanya?

Kanya: Ya,but don't have to yell at the guy.

Rohit: Sorry! Maaf Kardo!

Kanya: Ok

Guy: Sorry, I didnt mean to.

Kanya: Its ok it was just an accident.

The guy walks away.

Payal: Oh my god Kanya are you okay!!!??

Kanya: Ya its ok! I am just going to go back to the dorm!Its already 10:40pm

Akshay: well we should go to!

Sameer: ya ur right man

Kajol: No,plz Sameer....and guys come with us to the dorm we could chat there.....pleaz(she didnt want sameer to leave)Pleaz...plz....

All the Guys: Okay!!!

Rohit: but i am gonna go back to my dorm and sleep. Its been a long day.

Akshay: Okay dude, we will see you tomorrow.

Everyone except Rohit head to the girls dorm room.

Kanya gets change while everyone else is sitting by the couch,with dim lights,watching a horror indian movie. Sameer and Kajol are very close to each other with a blanket covering them on the couch. Akshay is on a comfortable chair and Payal is on anther comfortable chair too. Ranbir is sitting on the floor leaning against the couch.
Kanya comes out wearing a white tank top and light pink shorts that were up to her knee. Her hair looked beautiful and she had a cute silver neklace that had a heart with a K in it. She looked cute.

Ranbir: thinking.....oh my god she looks cute.....wow.....wait what is this i am thinking that this 2 by 2 lizard is cute.....what the he** am i thinking....whatever let me just watch the movie.

Payal: Hey Kanya!

Kanya: Hey, see...i go for 2 minutes and you guys dont leave me any seats.

Kajol: Well there is a perfect seat by your jaan...ranbir...sit there.

Kanya: Oh......ya......i didnt know

Kanya sits my Ranbir. They are digusted that they have to sit this close to each other. They were friends but that didn't changed of how they acted to each other.

Kanya tried eating some popcorn from the bowl Ranbir was holding but he kept snatching it away from Kanya just to make her angry.


Kanya: Ranbir share the popcorn!!!!

Ranbir: No!!!I wont't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: Kem!!!???

Ranbir: Because I dont want to!!!!!

Kanya: Kem!!?

Payal: Oh, here we start again. Its like two old married couples!

Both kanya and ranbir: Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sameer: What u two arent't a couple?

Ranbir: yes we are.

Kajol: Well atleast stop fighting!

Kanya & Ranbir: FINE!

Now Kanya and Ranbir were really close to eachother but didnt notice it. Ranbir put the popcorn bowl on the floor.Then suddenly a scary part came in the movie.
Kanya hugged onto to Ranbir tightly with her head near Ranbir's chest. Ranbir was surprised to Kanya reaction and just sat there.

Ranbir: Kanya...the scary parts over you can let go now

Kanya: you are not lying...right?!

Ranbir: Ya kanya now lift up your head.

Kanya lift up her head but right when she did there was another scary scene. Now she jumped into Ranbir's lap. She had her head by ranbir's chest and her arms wrapped around him tightly. Ranbir just looked at with an innocent smile on his face. He caressed her hair and held her lightly.

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So what do you guys think?
Pleaz leave a lot of comments negative or positive.
I really want to know what u guys think.



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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
very cut part! plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
cute cute cute
continue continue continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
so cute...
i totally loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
such a cute part
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
👏 👏 really good!
ur a very goooood writer continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg dat was a cute scene
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
Guys I am not going to continue until I have some more comments!!!!!

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