FF : RanKan Love? Part20 - 9/7/08 Pg29 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: They figure out Ranbir & Kanya were faking and wanted to get revenge. They all go to the chill out area in the College to hang out. A guy accidently spills coffee on Kanya and Rohit gets mad. They go to the girl's dorm to watch a scary movie without Rohit. Kanya looks cute. They watch a scary movie and she is so scared that she jumps into Ranbir's arms. Now Ranbir is holding Kanya lightly caressing her hair while Kanya is tightly hugging Ranbir. While not even noticing what had just happened.

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Ranbir: Kanya……lift your head.

Kanya shook her head.

Ranbir: Kanya….. (He lifted Kanya's head up with his two fingers placed on her chin)…look the movie's over; you don't have to be scared now. You could have told us that you didn't like scary movies.

Kanya: Ranbir I wasn't scared. I watch scary movies all the time. For your information.

Ranbir: Ya sure u weren't scared at all.

Kanya: I wasn't!!!!!!!

Ranbir: than why did you jump onto my lap and hug me…….

Kanya: BECAUSE!

Ranbir: Because what……

Kanya: Because Ranbir!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya tum joot bhot bolti hai.

Kanya: Fine Ranbir I was scared.

Ranbir: That's okay daarfoek (scared-ey cats)are like that.

Kanya: Ranbir tum bhot saaaand hai.

Ranbir: KYA!!

Kanya: Tum ek bina halewali gorilla hai. Meri ek friend ki friend ha – he is a new director and mey unsi keti choo that if he needs a King Kong type of man for any movie …..than I will inform him that I know someone like him….YOU!

Ranbir: What you 2 by 2 lizard.

Kanya: What!!!!!You are the biggest moron in the world and an clueless one at that.

Ranbir: You are like saying that you are that you are the greatest and smartest person in the world. You are nothing compared to Great…….you are more like a janwaar.

Kanya: Idoit! You shut up!

Ranbir: No,atleast get off me! I know you are enjoying the sexiest man on campus but I don't want your idiotic and smelly germs on me.

Kanya: Oh, like I really wanted to be by a smelly and ugly garbage man like you!!! Disgusting!

Ranbir: Than move.
Kanya: I am!

Kanya got up and so did Ranbir. Kanya got so angry that she took a a big cup of water that laid on the table and she poured it all on Ranbir and also spilled all the popcorn on him too! He got really bad. Kanya and Ranbir were now facing each other with anger. While everyone was shocked at what happened.

Ranbir: Mey tumshi chorungai nahi. Watch what will happen next sweetheart. (still angry) Did your mother teach you how to treat someone with a little respect.

Kanya's eyes started to form tears.
Kanya: Saand!

Ranbir: You watch!

Kanya: I am not scared of you! (still with tears in her eyes)

Ranbir started to walk to up to Kanya until she hit the wall. She had a scared look in her eyes while Ranbir just came closer and closer to her just staring away. He put his hands on the walls so Kanya couldn't move anywhere.

Ranbir: Are you scared of me now.

Kanya: Ranbir let me go! (still with tears in her eyes)

Ranbir: Just answer my question.

Just then Kanya managed to get out of Ranbir's and she then ran away to her room and slammed the door. Ranbir just watched her run away and headed back where the others were.

Sameer: Good Job Ranbir…….why do you have to make everyone upset……she is just a girl.

Akshay: Ya I didn't expect that from you. Dude you better go say sorry.

Ranbir: Why should I say sorry did you see what she did to me. She spilled icy cold water on me and you guys don't say anything….you just take her side.

Akshay: Ranbir she is our friend and so are you…..but you can't act that way toward Kanya……dude you can't speak that way to a girl or do that……now go say sorry.

Ranbir: I get what you mean I will say sorry but only for you guys.
Sameer: OK Ranbir now go.

Ranbir heads to Kanya's room. He opens the door to take a peak of what she is doing. He saw Kanya looking outside the small window at the sky . Ranbir came in the room and closed the door. Kanya noticed the door being closed. She turned around and didn't have a happy look on her face.

Kanya: What do you want…..did you come here to insult me more……she looked at him and then faced the window again. Ranbir came closer to her. He touched her shoulder which made her turn around.

Ranbir: Kanya I am really sorry…..please forgive me! (Ranbir saw Kanya with a million tears drops pouring down her cheek and he didn't know what to do)

Kanya: No Ranbir! I thought we were friends but I guess we aren't. We agreed that we would kid around making fun of each other. But you went too far Ranbir. I will never forgive you!.....she turned around again to look at the sky.

Ranbir: But Kanya…….

Kanya: No Ranbir just go!!!!I don't want to see you!

Ranbir left the room not knowing why she had tears in her eyes. He left for his dorm and so did Akshay and Sameer.

At the guy's dorm room:

Ranbir: hey guys do you know why Kanya was crying?

Sameer: Ranbir, Kajol told us that Kanya's mom passed away 2 years back. That's why she had tears in her eyes when you mentioned her mom.
Ranbir: Seriously?

Akshay: Ya.

Ranbir: oh I didn't know. She still hasn't forgiven me. Now I feel really bad. Guys what should I do.

Sameer: Hey Ranbir this is between you and Kanya. You think about it. Its your girlfriend....remember?

Ranbir: You guys are no help.

Akshay: Well you hurt her and made her angry so this is your fault.

Ranbir: That is true. I will think of something.

Akshay: Well we should go to bed we have our first class tomorrow and we sure don't want to be late. So, goodnight guys.

Ranbir: Good Night!

Sameeer: Good Night!

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So this is my update.
What did you guys think?
Please leave positive or negative comments.
At least leave 10 comments. Pleaz!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
hello..................well i loved every word awesome👏👏
thu bi bohod chalak hogayi hain....aab comments bhi limit lagathi hain!😡😡 lolz!
continue sooooooon!
Edited by princez-preciou - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
great part

plz continue sooon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Hey guys long time since I updated so I hope you like this update. Enjoy!

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Recap: Kanya god scared while watching the movie and jumped Ranbir's lap. They got into a huge argument and Ranbir tried saying sorry but Kanya still had tears in her eyes and didn't forgive him. Ranbir figured out why she was crying. The guys headed for the dorm and went to sleep.

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Part 8



The next morning Ranbir woke up bright and early and got dressed first he packed all his things he needed for class and went to the coffee shop. He knew that he needed some way that Kanya had to forgive him so he thought that bringing her fresh coffee in the morning may cheer her up a little because she loved coffee.
Ranbir headed to her dorm room.

Ranbir......thinking....why am I doing all this for Kanya. I never did this for anyone except for mom and dadi when they were mad at me so why am I doing this for Kanya...well this is the last time I am caring about someones feelings and anyway Sameer and Akshay will be mad at me if Kanya is still mad at me.

He reached the dorm and knocked on the door. Payal opened the door.

Payal: Hi Ranbir what are you doing so early in the morning here? You know u woke me up from a great dream! 😡

Ranbir: Well I brought fresh coffee for Kanya and myself. I found out the real reason of why she was upset - Sameer and Akshay told me.

Payal: Oh,well come on in. Your such a sweet boyfriend to Kanya,(sarcastily said)

Ranbir: Oh...thanks is Kanya still sleeping?

Payal: No...she just went in the bathroom to get all freshend up. I don't know how she can be up at this time.

Ranbir: Oh well I will go in the kitchen.

Payal: Alright. If you need me I will be sleeping.

Ranbir waited in the kitchen waiting for Kanya to come out. He knew girls took forever to get ready so he thought of making some breakfast. Ranbir made some pancakes for Kanya and cut apples and made a bagel for both of them. Ranbir hoped that Kanya would forgive him.
Kanya finally came out wearing this:
http://www.radhikasarees.com/popup.html?Q186en.jpg

Ranbir just stared at her angeletic(angel-like) beauty. He snapped out of it when he realized she was coming closer and closer to him.

Ranbir: Hi,Kanya. Good Morning. First listen to me before you say anything. Kanya,I am really sorry what I did before last night. I didnt know anything about your mom so please forgive me.Only Akshay and Sameer told me after we left your dorm. Look, I even did all this for you - I made you pancakes,bagel,woke up early in the morning to get you the best and fresh coffee,and other things. So,do you fogive me.

Kanya: Ranbir,you shouldn't be saying sorry. I should of not poured the water and popcorn on you. You didn't need to do all this for me and anyways you didn't know about my mom. (Kanya started to get a little teary).

Ranbir: Well,we are still friends?

Kanya: Of COURSE!

They gave a friendly hug and smiled at eachother knowing they are still friends. They sat down to breakfas while chatting and laughing and enjoying themselvs. Later on the whole gang came except for Rohit.

Sameer: So,you two love birds work things out.

Ranbir: Ya,my sweetheart and I can never be apart. Right Kannu?

Kanya: Ya.

Akshay: Well,if thats true than probably u guys kissed afterward right?

Kanya: ya...of course...she studderd while saying that.

Payal: Well,Ranbir go kiss Kanya then.

Ranbir: WHAT!...I mean Kanya doesn't like kissing infront of people.

Payal: We aren't strangers...so go kiss Kanya.

Ranbir: Ummmmmmmmm......okay......i guess 😕

He started walking towards Kanya closer and closer he came. Kanya thinking...oh sh*t why are our friends doing this to us. I better just tell them.
Ranbir was leaning in for the kiss when....

Kanya: Stop...Guys me and Ranbir aren't going out. Okay,we just wanted to see how long you guys are dumn enough to fool for our joke.

Ranbir backed away. He was upset but at the same time realieved about the kiss.

Ranbir: Ya,me and Kanya aren't going out.

Akshay: Dude, we already knew that.

Ranbir & Kanya : WHAT!

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Hey guys I will continue soon.
Please leave coment: Positive or Negative
This time I am not making an exact amount of comments you guys want to leave...just leave comments about how you feel the story is going.

Edited by desaigirl101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
oo great part !!
contiue soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hey just caught up with ur ff n must say its excellent plz write the next part soon can't wait =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
i jus read and its brill
u gotta continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
offu kal hi tum ne kaha ke read my ff
then plzz update soon plz plz plz
plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
are kitni baar
kahu ke update soon 😡
or kitni comment chahiye.
jab tak tum part 9 nahi
bejoge tab tak koi koyn comment kare.
plzz mene 2 baar comment
kiya na to plzz mere liye update karo
plz plz plz plz
btw it's a great update
yeh rohit bhi na kabab me haddi
pata nahi kab chala jayega but my other part sayz
it good that he is there because he have to mek ranbir yalouse
anyway's plzz update soon


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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Hey guys sorry I didn't update for awhile its just that I have been busy going to these Indian wedding functions. I have been tired and busy.If I have time I will update this weekend.Though,thanks for all the comments! 😃

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