FF : RanKan Love? Part20 - 9/7/08 Pg29 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
beautiful FF
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
wow that was so good 👏
aww ranbir being soo nice 😉
plz continue
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Part 5

Recap: Ranbir and Kanya locked in the room. Kanya gets hurt and Rabir takes care of her. Kanya is now sleeping on the sofa and Ranbir on another sofa.

So morning comes and the first one to wake up is Ranbir. He sees Kanya sleeping and smiles. In his head : kanya looks cute sleeping. Then he back to reality and just realizes that he still is hasnt gone back. Ranbir places the blanket on Kanya becuz she looks cold. As he was about to turn away from kanya and go she helds his hand. Ranbir turns around. Kanya is trying to sit up.

Kanya: Ranbir dont go yet i want to tell u something.

Ranbir: What do u want chipkali i dont have all day.

Kanya: First of all i was going to say sorry but now i wont becuz of her rude words.

Ranbir: Whats there to say thanks for. We arent even friends.

Kanya: Whatever, i just wanted to say thanx for taking care of me last time. Thats all now u can leave.

Ranbir: Your welcome (with a sexy and sly smile)

He turns and leaves.

In his and friends dorm room:

Sameer: Hey man where have you been all night?

Akshay: Ya dude where were u? What happened between you and Kanya last night?

Ranbir: Nothing happened between us.

Akshay: Come on stop lying i know u must of done something.

Ranbir: Ok i will tell you. When u guys left me and kanya were watching tv. We got into a little argument and she went to her room and slammed the door. Thats it. (Ranbir thinking:if i tell the guys the whole story they will think ranbir nanda has a heart or feelings or a inch of niceness. Ewww and for this chipkali)

Akshay: Hey Ranbir come back to reality. Hello Ranbir what happend?

Ranbir: Oh nothing

Sameer: Ranbir there is something ur not telling us.

Ranbir: Sameer i told u everything.

Sammeer: Ranbir, Akshay and me have known u for years. Ur hiding something from us and we will find out.

Ranbir: Come on u guys u think i am hiding somthing. Fine think that way becuz i am not hiding anything.

From there on he goes to the bathroom to take a shower and freshin up. Afterward he had to help the guys umpact some stuff because they college classes started tomorrow. So the guys started to work after ranbir finished freshing up.

While in Kanya and her friends dorm::

Kajol and Payal entered the living room and saw kanya laying on the couch watching tv.

Kajol & Payal : Good Morning

Kanya: Good Morning, how was last night?

Kajol: Fun is was the best.

Payal: Ya it was fun. So how did it go with Ranbir?

Kanya: Well.......you know how would u think a saaaaand like him would act if he has no manners and is rude toward ladies...

Kajol: Dont tell me u guys still didnt work this out.

Kanya: Kajol u know how he is..stubborn....

Payal: Kanya u are stubborn tooo

Kanya: Hey!!!! But last night i saw ranbir is very rude. (kanya thinking: if i tell payal and kajol that i think ranbir has a ounce no less than a ounce of sweetness and niceness they would keep annoying me. Its better off if me and Ranbir has hatred in our blood for each other. And anyway he is a saaaand).

Payal: Hey Kanya come back to life. Hey and anyway why are u sleeping on the couch for?

Kanya: Oh sorry. U kno i was sleeping on the couch becuz....ummm i fell asleep watching tv.

Kajol: Oh really, i know ur lying to me. What really happend.

Kanya: nothing kajol

Kajol: If ur not going to tell me fine! I will figure out sooner or later.

Then Payal and Kajol leave to fix their beds. Kanya tries to get up her foot keeps hurting. After so much pain she finally reaches the bathroom to take a shower. She finally finishes and comes out. Payal then takes a shower and afterward Kajol does. They notice Kanya in the kitchen but dont notice her limping. They are all eating breakfast then the door bell rings. Kajol opens the door and it Sameer and Ranbir and Akshay.

Akshay : Hey everyone

Payal: Hey good morning guys.

Ranbir & Sameer : Good Morning!

They all come in.

Payal: Do u guys want to eat some breakfast.

All of the guys: Of Course,Sure.

Kajol: What do u guys want?

Sameer: I want cofee,u,and a kiss

Kajol gives Sameer a kiss on the lips.

Akshay: Can i have a apple.

Kajol: Sure. How about u Ranbir.

Ranbir: Ummm...How about some coffee.

They sit at the big round table. Akshay sits nexts to Payal. Sameer sits next to Kajol. And Ranbir forcingly had to sit next to kanya.

Ranbir: whispers to kanyas ear..."hows ur foot kanya?"

Kanya: It still hurts a lot

Ranbir: really.......in a concerned tone

Kanya: Ya

Ranbir: Did anyone notice

Kanya: NO

Ranbir: oh,ok

Kanya: hey saaand amazing that u called me kanya...

Ranbir: Well i forgot that time chipkali....thanks for reminding me.

Then the doorbell rings and Payal opens it....

Who could be at the door...Read the next update to find out.

Ok guys
What do u think about my update
Leave Comments whether positive or negative or both
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
please continue soon.
u write very well.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
theres nothing negative about it its great !
please continue soooooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
luved ur ff uptil now
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Recap : Before leaving Kanya says thanks to Ranbir. When he goes to his dorm room his friends question him what went on with him and Kanya. Same happened with Kanya. No one noticed her limping. The guys came over to their dorm to eat breakfast. A worried Ranbir whispers to Kanya how her foot feels. She answers and then the door bell rings. Payal opens it



Part 6



Payal opens the door.

Payal yells : Oh my gosh Rohit tum!!!!!!!!

Pic. of Rohit: Go to this website : http://www.dnaindia.com/imageshow.asp?objid=1033769
(HE IS SHARAD KALKAR)

The guy enters the room he was a good looking guy who was 23. Rohit was a very close friend of Kanya , Payal , and Kajol but escipicially Kanya. he wore a black collered shirt with his sleeves rolled up to his elbows and dark jeans. Rohit was a really good looking guy and all the girls liked him but his heart was layed out for Kanya but she didnt know that. He walked up to Kanya.

Rohit: Hey Kannu!!!!

Ranbir thinking : What the hell Kannu its Kanya.

Kanya: Hey Rohit!!!!

They gave each other a big hug. Ranbir was standing there angry as hell.

Ranbir thinking: Why should I care. I dont care. Its okay. Ranbir Nanda doesnt give a damn about Kanya or this bast...........

Kanya was leaning on the chair so her foot wouldnt hurt that much when she stood.

Rohit: So how is my sexiest - sweetest - smartest friend ever!!!!

Kanya: Fine I see you havent changed a bit.

Rohit: Well so how's my other 2 lovely ladies, Kajol and Payal doing these fine day?

Kajol + Payal: Great now come here and give us a hug.

Rohit came over to give a hug to Kajol and Payal. They were all smiling.

Rohit : So who are these guys?

Kajol: This is boyfriend Sameer.

Sameer: Nice to meet you man.

Rohit: Sup

Payal: This is Akshay, Sameer's friend and now our's too.

Akshay: Whats up dude

Rohit: Nothing much nice to meet u

Akshay: You too

Kajol: And this is Ranbir

That whole time they introducing the boys Rohit's arm was around Kanya's shoulder.

Ranbir just gave harsh looks at him because of this.

He meanly said: Hi

Rohit: Hey

Rohit whispered into Kanya's ear : What's up with this man he seems scary and looks like a dead zombie .

Kanya whispered to him: That's just Ranbir u know but sometimes he is okay.

Rohit whispered in to Kanya's ear: Are you friends with him?

Kanya whispered to: No, we are aqauntinces. Most of the time we are making fun of each other or being mean to each other. Once in a while we are nice to each other.

Kanya outloud: So Rohit what are you doing here?

Rohit: What I can't surprise my friends and anyway from now on I will be attending at this college.

Kajol: Thats perfect!!!

Rohit: I knew you would be happy!!!!

Ranbir thinking to himself: Great this duffer is staying here!!!How pleasant!!

Kajol,Payal,Sameer,Akshay,and Rohit went to sit on the sofa to catch up on things. Ranbir got up Kanya was about to fall becuz she felt unbalanced becuz of foot she closed her eyes. Kanya hear a THUMP sound so she opened her eyes she saw Ranbir staring at her and they had an eyelock. Everyone stared at them thinking.....whats going on between this 2........ then....

Sameer: Ranbir get over here!Come on man!

Ranbir : Ya sure man, coming

Kanya stood up straight and started walking where everyone else was. She was trying not to limp but she did. Her foot hurt so badly. Ranbir was about to sit on the last seat of the sofa , but for some reason he sat on the floor and let Kanya sit on the sofa. Kanya saw this and gave him a smile while no one was looking. She hoped no one noticed her limping but......

Akshay: Hey Kanya whats up with her foot why are are u limping?

Ranbir and Kanya thinking: Damn it he noticed.

Kanya: Um.........well something fell on it...thats all.

Akshay: Oh lets me see ur foot. Is it bruised.

Kanya: No! I mean no. It doesnt matter.

Rohit: It does matter. Later on today I will bring some cream it cures foot injuries in a couple of hours.

Kanya: Thanx Rohit. You are the best.

Rohit: No prob. I cant see my Kanya in pain.

After what Rohit said Ranbir got more than angry but he tried not to show it.

Kajol: So Sameer do you know what happened between Ranbir and I last night. Kanya denies telling me.

Sameer : Same with Ranbir! Come on guys tell us!

Akshay: Let me guess , its kind of like wat happened when kanya almost fell and ranbir caught her and gazed into each others eyes. I bet they kissed or something.

Ranbir: Ewwwwww to Kanya the chipkali!!!

Kanya: Ya ewwwwwwwww

Sameer : So what really happened!

Ranbir: Nothing.

Payal: Really?!!!!!! ........said sarcasticaly

Ranbir : Ok do you guys really really want to know what happend

Everyone: YES!

Ranbir gave Kanya the look that he is faking it and to play along with the game. She gave Ranbir a look that said yes.

Ranbir : Ok, me and Kanya. I mean we both.....kissed each other for ours. We loved each other.

Everyone stood still not one said a word.

Kanya: What you guys dont believe us then fine! But in our hearts we love each other and know the this is the truth. Come on Rannu sweet heart lets go!

Akshay : WHAT THE HELL!!!!!

Ranbir was trying to hold his laughter. He hid his smile from covering it with his hand.

Ranbir : Come on jaaan! Lets go out and have some fun! Instead of some paraliyed people staring at us thinking we are the ones crazy.

With that Ranbir picked Kanya up in his arms and went. They were shocked just to hear what they said.

While outside Ranbir and Kany were laughing so much.

Ranbir : Hey did u see them! Oh my god......

Kanya: They really believed us.....that was hilarious.....she still laughing.

Ranbir: This was a great ........i havent had so much fun since a long time.

Kanya: Ya me 2.

She started to calm down and so did ranbir.

Ranbir : So chipkali I know we hadnt have a great start but do think we could be ummm.........friends.

Kanya : Let me think about it.............still thinking.......umm......

Ranbir : You know I dont have all day

Kanya : Ok ok i will be ur friend but that still doesnt change how we act ot each other. But be nicer once in awhilt

Ranbir : Alright!

Ranbir lets out his hand and kanya shakes it.

They both smile at each other and both are still giggling of what happened to their friends reactions. &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp;

What they didnt know was someone was watching and listening to them from all along.

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Who was listening to their conversation!?

What will happen next?!..............Read the next update

Ok so guys what do you think!

Leave positive or negative comments.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
cute update! plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww so cute ranvir jealous of rohit😆

I think its Rohit listening to them 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
that was so cute
continue soon 😊

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