~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i love it plzzzzzzzzz contuied soonnnnnnn your next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Soni I was wondering if you could post another part today please... I will be extreamly happy if you can... if not then thats fine too
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Posted: 17 years ago
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By the way.... I LOVE THE COLLAGE THEME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hehe just thought i'd let you know! 😆 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yipeeeee a new ff. i am soooo happy, thanks for the ff and keep up the good work, loved the prolauge and part 1 it was totally mindblowing and thank u sooo much for this ff 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you! 🤗


Manya's cheeks grew red as Akash gave her a naughty smile.
A: Dushmani itni jaldhi bhool gayee?
Manya stood up quickly. Akash laughed and smirked. The car suddenly went over a bump and Manya fell on to his lap again!
A: Heyy!
M: OH-
Akash laughed. Her head was buried in his shoulder. She raised it and looked at him. He stared at her and smirked again.
Suddenly, he reached out and touched her face. Manya grimaced. He pushed her hair back from her mouth.
A: Baal khaane ki koi zarurat nahin hai. Bookh lagi hai, tho I'll take you out somewhere, sweetheart.
Manya narrowed her eyes at him and stood up angrily, taking a seat back.
M: Out, and that too with you?
A: Haan! KYun, koi problem hai?
Manya smiled.
M: Hai na.
A: Kya?
M: Apni shakal dekhi hai tumne?
Akash leaned back.
A: Yeah. It definitely is better than yours, isn't it?
Manya glared at him. Akash pretended to glare back.
A: Aankhein nikalna mujhe bhi aata hai!
From the driver's seat, Rehan pulled to a stop. Manya looked up as the rest of the guys piled out.
R: Later, yaar!
A: Later!
Om looked at Manya and smirked.
Om: Let her go easy, okay?
As Akash hopped in the driver's seat, Manya looked at him.
M: What does that mean?
A: What?
M: 'Let her go easy'...mathlab?
A: Ohh, English nahin aati tumhe?
M: SHUT UP! Stop the car.
A: No way.
M: I SAID STOP THE CAR!
Akash pressed the brake abruptly, bringing the car to a sudden stop. He turned to her angrily.
A: Jab se baiti ho, bakvas keri ja rahi ho! BLAH BLAH BLAH! Dho minute chup nahin reh sakti?
M: Shut up!
A: Koi aur English ke words nahin aate, kya?! Damn! Jai Shree College and its students...ugh!
Manya raised her finger in his face.
M: Ayee! Jai Shree ke baare mein kuch na kehna!
Akash looked at her finger, a smile forming on his face. Manya saw his smile and lowered her finger.
A: Jai Shree tho mahaan hai. Jai Shree ki JAI ho!
M: What?
A: Yeah, yeah, in fact, maine tho soch ke rakha hai!
M: Kya?
A: Ki jab main kisi ladki se pyar karun ga, woh Jai Shree se hi perthi hogi!
M: WHAT?
A: YES! Aur bil kul tumhari jaisi ankhein hongi uski-
He leaned close to her, staring into her eyes.
A: Yehi chehra...aur patha hai main ussai kya kahun ga?
M: Ky-kya?
A: GET THE HELL OUTTA MY CAR!
Manya jumped, shocked. Akash shook his head angrily.
A: Apni Jai Shree ki pooja kisi aur se karaana, you got that? GET OUT!
Manya gave him an angry look and got out of the car. She flung her hair angrily and began to walk away from his car.
He honked at her, and she turned.
A: Ek baat kahun?
Manya didn't answer.
A: Agay dead end hai, sweetheart.
Manya looked up and saw a railroad crossing ahead. Akash took a U-turn and laughed.
A: But it figures ki Jai Shree ki student dead end ki taraf hi jaye gi!
As he rode off, Manya bent down and picked up a rock, hitting his car angrily. He laughed and shouted,
A: MISSED! JAI SHREE STUDENTS ALWAYS MISS!!
M: UGGHH!!



Manya entered the principle's office after recieving a note from her teacher. As she entered, she gasped. The whole basketball team and cheerleading team was seated. AD's principle sat there angrily with their principle, Mr. Khanna.
MK: Aah, welcome, Ms. Sharma.
Manya swallowed and smiled a bit.
MK: Aapko tho patha hoga why you're here, am I correct?
M: Um...
MK: Don't try to lie like your teams.
Manya looked at Karan, who raised his eyes, motioning for to stay quiet.
M: Woh, uh....
MK: Manya, aap hamari achi student hain. We trust you to say the truth. Rest of you, get out!
Manya bit her lip.
MK: Kya aap kal AD College mein raat ko thi?
M: Uhh...
AD's principle, Ms. Jyostna, looked at her closely.
MJ: Mr. Khanna, AD se ek student ne dekha tho oos ladki ko jo college ke andher thi, lockerroom ne. Let's ask him.
Manya's heart raced as she waited. After about half an hour, the door opened and Akash stepped in.
A: Heyy, Ms. J! Mujhe yahan, Jai Shree mein kyun bulaya?
MJ: Akash, did you teepee Jai Shree College?
M: HE DID! Iss ne khud admit kiya tha!
Akash looked at her and grinned.
A: Tho main abhi kaun sa inkaar ker raha hoon. We did teepee Jai Shree.
M: Dekhaa!
MJ looked at Akash angrily.
MJ: Iss ke consequences bhi aap logoon ko pay kerne honge. But for now, kya yeh wohi ladki thi? Was Jai Shree the college who teepeed our hallways?
Manya groaned. Akash looked at her and smiled naughtily again.
M: Mar gaye, Manya!!
A: No.
Manya looked up, shocked.
A: Yeh woh nahin hai. I don't about the rest, but yeh ladki udhar definitely nahin thi.
Manya stared at him, surprised.
MK: Ms. Jysotna, I believe ki JAi Shree agar kuch karte hain, they do it in a team. And Ms. Manya here is the captain of the team. She would definitely be there.
MJ: Very well. I'm sorry for the trouble.
As they left and MK let Manya go, Manya raced out after Akash. He had reached his car when she shouted his name.
M: Akash!
Akash stopped and turned.
M: Woh...tumne jhoot kyun bola?
Akash grinned. He walked close to her, making her flinch...

Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wwwwooowww, just amazing, i wonder why akash lied🤔, just loved it , keep up the awsome work 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowowowow coollllllll partt plzzz contuied next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was awsome..plzz continue! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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asap!!!!!!!!!! u gotta continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luvd it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
great part
Akash is sooooooooooooo sweet

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