~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08}

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Ever since Pooja has announced that we are allowed to continue our fanfics, I've been dying of excitement😆Soo here I am, once again, baaack with another Akanya FF!😉This time, there will be no rich-poor problems...its just a story based on LOVE!😉 And I've decided to call it...

Pyar Ki Ek Kahani

As you probably guessed already, the FF "Song" will be Pyar Ki Ek Kahani from Krrish.😉

Here's a Character Sketch:

Manya Sharma: A Daddy's girl, but still sweet and talented.

Akash Rathod: Believes his Cinderella will come one day and he will sweep her off her feet.....but till then.....he likes to flirt with every other girl he sees...With others he's the boss, but around his father....not so much!

Om: Akash's best friend, indeed a funny and sweet character who has lost himself in Roopa's eyes ever since he saw her...

Roopa: Manya's best friend. Charming and sweet, but not interested in Om whatsoever!

Karan: Spoiled and rich; used to getting all the things he want, whether they're eligible for ownership or not. Akash's arch rival in college.

PKEK takes place in Mumbai, where the gang studies in college.

PROLOGUE:

Manya Sharma's hands flew up in one last jump as her cheer came to an end. She and her cheerleading team from Jai Shree College jumped, clapping and screaming.

She was a cheerleader, in fact, the most popular one. It had been her dream to cheer; the stunts, the enthusiasm, the screams..she just loved it. They stood under the warm May air, cheering for their team. Manya watched Karan, from her college, run with the basketball.

M: Goooo Karan! Yehhh!!!! Jai Shree College ruuules!!!

Roopa, her best friend, jumped alongside with her. The game was tied. One more shot, and Jai Shree would win. They were playing against their arch rivals, AD College. This game would start another fight between the colleges for sure, but at least Jai Shree would win it!

Manya jumped up. She wasthe most enthusiastic right now. Karan was near the hoop when suddenly someone grabbed the ball from under his nose. Manya's pompoms lowered as she stared, shocked. From besides Karan, with the ball, stepped out another boy, dribbling the ball with ease, grinning. Manya heard his name being chanted in the stands.

"AKASH! AKASH! AKASH!!!"

M: Dammit! COME ON, KARAN!!

Akash ran with the ball, pushing past her college team, and throwing the ball in the hoop. Cheers went out from the AD College crowd as the buzzer rang. Karan punched the wall angrily. Manya groaned and sat down, shaking her head.

Suddenly, she saw someone approach her. She looked up and saw Akash Rathod, drinking from a water bottle.

A: Scream harder next time, sweetheart.

Manya glared at him as he winked at her, walking past her to a bunch of cheering AD girls. The beginning music of "Pyar Ki Ek Kahani" played as he looked back at her once and laughed....

Sooo....do you guys think I should continue and post this for Pooja in the FF section?😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG plzz continue Sonia!! <3 u Sonia!! tht u started a new FF..i was dyin to read another FF about Akanya tht u wrote..i <3 ur FF's!! plz plz plz continue!!! 😳 😆
CAN'T WAIT!!! 😳 😳 Thank u sooo much 4 savin my life!! 😆 😆
Edited by s3exicuti4lyfe - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yess plzz contuiedd i love it soo much your new ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!!!! thats really good sonia!!! plzzzz...continue! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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totally continue..but i have a question..is this akanya or karan manya?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okay i'm sorry..i saw akanya.. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: aqsa_h

okay i'm sorry..i saw akanya.. 😛

yup😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakirani

omg!!!! thats really good sonia!!! plzzzz...continue! 😃

sure is

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you! 🤗


Manya threw her bag in her black car, driving to college the next morning. She stopped at a red light, humming the song "Aaja Nachle."
She heard someone whistle, and then call out,
"Losers bhi kitne style mein drive kerte hai, na?"
Manya turned and looked out her window. Akash sat in his car with some of his friends, also stopped at the red light. Manya glared at him. He laughed and sped away as the green light turned.
Manya groaned and hit her steering wheel angrily.
M: Khud ko samajte kya hain! Ek game kya jeet gaye, apne aapko baadshah samajne lage!


Manya found a big crowd gathered in front of Jai Shree College. Eyes turned to her, for everyone knew the cheerleaders, as she parked her car. She stepped out and saw Goppu.
M: Kya hua?
G: Dekho na, Manya!
Manya gasped as she saw the red brick building, Jai Shree College. It was teepeed!
Tissue paper had been flung all over the college building, a big banner that read "LOSERS" stamped in the middle.
Manya ran towards the basketball team, where Karan stood angrily.
M: Karan!
K: Manya! Look what they did!
M: You mean, AD ne yeh sab kiya?
Goppu came and nodded.
G: Of course. Aur kaun karega?
Manya groaned.
M: Don't worry about it, guys. Hum bhi kisi se kam nahin!
Karan looked at her and grinned.
K: I knew it. Tumhara damaag kuch na kuch tho soch le ga. Kya plan hai?
Manya smiled.
M: Unnai hamari bulding teepee ki. We'll do worse!



The cheerleaders and the basketball team spread out once they reached AD College in the nighttime. Goppu had already been in there, making sure the gates weren't locked. He opened the windows and snuck them inside.
Holding rolls of tissues, they all snuck inside. Manya split halfway and entered a lockerroom.
She could hear the Jai Shree team whispering and giggling as they teepeed the whole hallway of the college.
Manya threw her tissue rolls all over the lockeroom. She stopped near an open locker and opened it.
Inside was a basketball and sneakers. She saw a picture of Akash pasted, holding a basketball.
M: Oh? Tho yeh iska locker hai!
She grinned evily and threw the roll of tissue inside, circling it and bringing it all around.
Just as she was doing it, someone grabbed her wrist. Manya's heart raced as she looked up, shocked.
AKASH!
He smiled naughtily and knowingly, staring at her. He raised his eyebrows.
M: Uh-haath chodo mera!
A: Waah! Chor ki chori pakri gayee, aur devar uske malik jaise?
Manya glared at him. She tried to get out of his grip.
M: I said, leave me!
Akash smiled.
A: Tum mere locker mein kya ker rahi thi?
He peered in and saw the roll of tissue.
A: Ohhh! I see ki Jai Shree ne apna college subha dekh liya tha.
Manya glared at him.
A: You guys are losers, man! Humnne poori building teepee ki, aur kisi ne nahin dekha. And you-you just got caught red-handed, sweetheart.
Manya threw the roll of tissue in his face and pulled her arm out of his grip. She flung her hair and began to walk away.
A: Ayee, sweetheart!
Manya stopped. She turned and glared at him.
M: My name is Manya Sharma.
Akash grinned.
A: I like sweetheart better.
M: Sweetheart my foot!
He grabbed her wrist again as she walked away. She stopped and stared at him angrily.
A: Aaj tumne yahan aker acha nahin kiya, sweetheart.
M: Acha? Kya ker lo ge?
A: Its on, sweetheart.
Manya smiled.
M: Bring it on!
Akash nodded, pretending to be impressed at her confidence.
A: Okay. Tum jao aur apne-un Jai Shree losers ko kaho-to meet AD at the basketball court tomorrow morning, 9 AM sharp.
M: Done!



Manya got out of Karan's car the next morning, dressed in a black skirt and red tee that read "Game On."
She stepped into the basketball court. Akash was dribbling a basketball, talking to his friend, Rehan. The AD College team had already reached.
Manya entered the court. A wind blew and her hair flew. Akash looked up and looked at her, smiling naughtily again.
A: Aiye, sweetheart. Aapka tho intezar tha!
K: Aye!
A: What, huh?
Roopa groaned.
R: Guyss! Hum yahan basketball ke liye aye hain, not fighting each other. Come on!
Karan stared at Akash.
K: I don't know, Roopa. I think inko basketball ki haar se zyada ek PUNCH ki zarurat hai!
A: Oh yeah? Let me give it to you!
He raised his fist just as the police sirens rang.
K: DAMN!
R: Come on, guys! Police tho jaanti hai Jai Shree aur AD ki fights ke baare mein! RUN!
Jai Shree team jumped in their cars as AD jumped in theirs. Manya was still running when Karan, without realizing she wasn't on the car, sped away.
M: HEY!! STOP!
A police officer stepped out.
P: WHAT'S GOING ON HERE!
Manya's heart raced. She jumped as a hand reached out to her. She looked up and saw Akash sitting in the back of a car, grinning at her, his hand outstretched. The music of "Pyar Ki Ek Kahani" played as the wind blew. He stared at her as she looked away.
P: DON'T TRY TO RUN THIS TIME! STOP!
Manya suddenly grabbed his hand. As her hand landed in his palm, he tightened his grip on her hand and pulled her up on the car, grinning. She fell in and ontop of him.
The music played as he leaned back, startled, staring at her as she stared back...









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Posted: 17 years ago
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i luved it!! plzz continue soon..and i luv the story too..all college type 😆 plzz continue soon 😊

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