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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 12
Back At home.. (Rid's home)

Muskaan was jumping up and down down. "sach??.. Ridz tum jhoot keh rahi ho!! oh god... kal kya pehnu??.. i cant believe it!! woh kal hi karlega na? na?" she aked.. going completely crazy.

mujhe nahi pata... shayad kal.. par haan zaroor karlega" Rids sad giving muskaan a big hug.

"Oh!!" Muskaan was so excited.. She was trying to tame her curly hair."arre time dekhi?? its So LATE... i need my bauty sleep.. aakhir rahul... u no.. kuch nahi.. bye!!.. aur rids.. um thankz" completely red in the face!

"arre thankz ki koi zarrorat nahi hai!!"
she said and muskan jumped back into her room while Ridz switched on her laptop to see if armaan came online.

BB:hey...

Armaan online hai!!
FF: hi.. how are you????

BB: pissed!
FF:kya hua....
usse kya hua??
BB:arre koi classmate ki vajah se... acha chodo...aap ho na? mujhe khush karne ke liye.. ;)

clasmate? oh.. shit.. kaun ho sakta hai... shayad Atul ya rahul... akhir wo itni jaldi pissed nahi hota...

FF: tum theek ho na? dont worry ill make u happy..
BB: haan.. mein theek hu...mein aur worry.. woh bhi tumhare saath??
FF: hehe.. good.. you shouldnt.. ab batao.. tum bike riding karte kya? kuch race ke liye?

Rids and armaan chatted fer a while before falling into sleep..
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Next morning....

"Kab hua?"Rids asked completely excitedly
"kal raat!!" muskaan said putting on her kajal near the locker.
"mujhe bataya nahi???"
"tum to so rahi thi!!"
"mein biker ke saath cht kar rahi thi yaar!.. aaj subah to bata sakti ti!!"
"waqt kaha tha? hmmm??? muskaan asked putting her hands on her hips.
"kya? hum to ek hi ghar me rehte hai... aur college ek saath jate hai.. phir?"
"hai lkin aap.. armaan .. biker.. jo bhi ho.. ke baare mein hi baat karti rehti ho! mujhe baat karne ke liye time bhi nahi diya!!"

i talked soo much??? woh kya soch rahi hogi...rids blushed

"sorry.... ok.. now tell me.. kya hua.."
"theek hai theek hai.. batati hu! rahul ne mujhe kal raat ko phone kiya.. aur kaha ki wo mujhse PYAAR karta hai.. aur jab riddhima.. mane AAP.. usse bata diya.. to wah kal mujhe milkar propose karna chahta.. lekin.. he couldnt wait.. so he asked me out yesterday niht!!!!!!!!!!!! aur phir........."

Suddenly armaan walks up.. wid a few guys.. (rahul n atul arent there)

Hey macchar!! maine apni dusri wish ko soch liya hai!!" Armaan said wid a sly smile on his face.

"kya hai?"
macchar? phir se??

Armaan came closer to her... and spoke in a very serious voice..
"aaj aap lunch break mein tum vishal ko propose karoge..infront of everyone.. us locker ke samne... at hmmm 12:30 sharp..

"Vishaal kaun hai?? 12:30 kyo?? aaj hi?? riddhima asked.. getting very nervous..

"arre rids vishal ko nahi jaanti?? wo woh.. dimakh-hin.. seedha sadha.. tie pehne wala buddhu! kissi ladki ko dekh kar woh mar jata hai!!

"haan... wahi muskaan... aur mucchae tumhe kneel down karna bhi hai!!" Armaan said very satisfied wid himself

"its not tht bad.. theek hai.. karloongi!" Ridz thoguht after all.. armaan had given her worst things to do before..

"good theek 12:30.. isi jagah... " as he was goin he turned around.. and said " oh...haan... ur looking very beautiful today" he winked at her... looking at her completely dressed up.

"sach?? oh thankz armaan!!" muskaan said.. half blushing!

hes so nice.. toeveryone else.. but ME! rids thought.. a bit of jealousy sweeped over her.

Just then Rahul and Atul came.. from the other side.. Muskaan saw him.. vut acted as though she didnt.. she was obviously very nervous...
"he came.. mein kaise dikh rahi hu??? she said.. completely nervous.. and was fidgeting wid her hair..

"bilkul pari jaisi!! ... dont worry!! " rids assured her..

"hey riddhima... hey muskaan.." Rahul said... unlike muskaan... he kept his cool"your looking very pretty today."

"thsnk you.. " muskaan blushed.

"lagta hai.. hame in done love birds ko chod dena chahiye.. cmon rids.. " rids nodded.

walking away..
"tumne armaan ko kahi dekha?"
"haan woh abhi abhi mujhe 2nd wish batake gaya..."
"2nd wish??? i dont know anythin bout it... kya tha?"
"kisi vishaan ko propose karna... "
"kya? woh tie coat pehne wala buddu..."

"haan.. log usse yahi kehte hai." rids laughed..."tum sab usse kaise jante ho?"
ignoring his question. "kab karna hai?"

"aaj.. lunch break..support deneke liye aoge.. " rids smiled and asked..

"sorry.. par mujhe apni baccho ko kanna pilana hai yaar..."said as if armaan expected rids to know tht.

"bacche?? tumhare pass bacche hai??' rids asked completely confused.

"haan bacche .. woh meri plants hai na?? !! Atul explained.

Rids giggled.. "oh.. haan tumhara plants.. sorry i mean tumhare bacche.. " rids giggled

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Posted: 17 years ago
aww cho cute rahul also loves muskan
cannot wait for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
sooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeee
is dat vishal by ny chance armaan only.
plzzz contdd
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!! Armaan also na....so evil.. 😆 😆 Poor Ridz.... Awwww....Armaan was really upset when he thought that something was going on b/w Rahul n ridz... 😳 😳 lol...do continue soon...can't wait for the next part...
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
looool
great updte
poor ridz 😆
muskan is a jokr gtin shy lol
really nce upte as usal
updte soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
no.. vishal isnt armaan... don worry...hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tht was so cute........i was readin this lyke for so long but as i had logged in thru my psp i cudnt reply.as i cudnt write so much.im sry for tht....plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago

oh thankz... thankz fer commenting....

but it gets a bit serious now... so don mind.. but keep reading... it gets better... this is just the beggining...

Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazin update
feel so sorrry for riddz
plzz contineu soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 13
At 12:30.
"WOH VISHAAL HAI?" Rids asked muskaan..
'haan .. best of luck rids."

Riddhima walked over to a boy who wore a black coat and brown tie.. very very thin.. and very nervous looking.. his pants were a bit too high.. and his socks definetly did not match his outfit
Since they were bright red

Ridzy looked back. She saw armaan and a whole lot of other guys laughing behind her.. Armaan gestured her to go forward… he didn't look too happy..

Take a dee breath..! sirf ek hi dare hai!! Rids kept telling herself.
Vishaal turned to see riddhima walking towards him.. and the commotion tht followed.

"Hi.. im Riddhima… aur.. ummm mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai.." riddhima said taking a deep breath and wanting to finish the dare as soon as people
She saw Armaan tell her to kneel down.. so she did.

"I ..umm..i used to see you walking.. umm in this hall.. and well I always have liked you….. aur… umm mujhe aapse kuch poochna hai!"

The whole area was in fits and giggles.. all but Armaan. Riddhima kept looking back at him.. wondering if he would come and stop the whole thing…
As she looked around.. she realized tht there were people there who didn't even have lockers in that area… she understood now tht he must have called them…

"ummmm….." vishal said and blushed..

Shit …. Im doomed… sab log dekh rahe hai! ARMAAN tumne kya kiya?? Shit mujhe jaldi se finish karma hai.. aur phir mein kal se apni sir duppata se chupa lungi!

" Kya aap…" but just as she was about to…

"Miss Riddhima Gupta!!.. kya aap mujhe bataa sakti ho ki aap kya kar rahi ho in sab ke samne?? Miss keerti asked…

Imidiatley people began to run away… some acted as though they were studying.. others opened their lockers. Armaan turned around… but continued to listen.
Rids got up to her feet..

"sorry… sorry maam"
"out off all these people.. I wouldn't have expected you.!! Tum… yeh sab kya hai? Koi play hai kya? "
"nahi.. maam… actually ek dare tha.. sorry maam"
"ENOUGH! i don't care… yeh ek college hai… kisi game show nahi! Kuch hi dino mein koi proffessors aane wale hai… agar unhone yeh dekhliya hoga….."

"im very sorry…"

"mujhe …i.. I had a good impression of you… par ab… " she said shaking her head.
"aina aise phirse kuch ho jayega… to mein personally tumhe suspendkar doongi!"
And she walked away leaving riddhima alone..
Armaan had seen this… he crossed his hands… he had planned this..

"Im sorry vishaal.. im just very sorry" and Riddhima turned around and ran fer the restroom shedding her tears..
Armaan watched muskaan run after her… he closed his eyes and leaned back againt the locker..
Rahul had been watching him.. and walked up to him…

"Armaan mujhe aapse isi waqt baat karma hai…"
"not now.. rohoool.." in a very disgusted voice wid out opening his eyes.
"pehle tum mujhse baat nahi karte… aura ab aap riddhima se itna bura prank play karte ho!"
"I said not now! … leave me… " Armaan said opening his eyes and punching the locker.

"u have played sooo many pranks on her… armaan.. par itni buri prank??? Mujhe pata hai ki aapko pata tha ki keerti yahan inspection ke liye aati hai!"

"agar aap mujhe nahi chodne wale ho.. toh.." armaan was about to say something.. but then realised tht rahul was a friend.. " good bye rohooool" in a very very angry tone and he walks away pushing rahul aside

Watching armaan go.. rahul called up Atul from his cell phone.

"Atul.. mujhe tumse milna hai… Armaan ke bare mein.. arre yaar.. gardener ko bata do.. uska kaam hai yaar!... tumhare bacche hai to kya? … theek hai? College ke baad… bahoot serious matter hai!...bye"

Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago

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