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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 14
" Armaan ko kya hua? Rahul asked as he met him in the field ..

"pata nahi.. lekin who badal gaya hai… basket ball bhi theek se nahi khel raha hai"

"Hes not picking up my calls… hes not talking to me.. aur mujhe rahoooool rahoooool bula raha hai!!"

"kya aapne usse kuch kaha kya?? "
"nahi yaar… kuch nahi kaha.. mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha hai ki kya ho raha hai!!" rahul said as he wondered if he had said anything!
"I didn't even get to tell him bout muskaan!!.. aur ab yeh riddhima ki plan"

"armaan aise kyon karega ??" Atul asked completely confused

"Riddhima ne usse kuch kaha kya?"

"nahi… baat kaha karti hai usse?

"haan… woh to hai.." rahu said

"since when hasn't he been speakin to you?"

"pata nahi… actually.. shub sir ke free period se… morning to woh armaan jaisa hi tha… " HAAN!!" Atul jumped up.. "woh.. aap dono kdekkar… bahoot jal raha tha!!!"

"muskaan???Oy Muskaan kyo yaar??… ab yeh problem hai!!!" rahul said very disappointedly.. he didnt wanna give muskaan up.. "Big problem yaar"

"nahi.. muskaan nahi… riddhima… aap dono akele mein baat kar rahe the… shub ke free period mein! He was looking at only both of you…"

"ohhh…. To armaan ko lagta hai ki main ridsy se pyaar karta hu!!??!!"

" iska matlab hai ki…ARMAAN RIDZ SE PYAAR KARTA HAI!" Atul exclaimed!

"hmmmm.. we need to talk to him then! Chalo.. who kahan hai?" rahul asked.

" arre woh gar gaya hai…" Atul just rembered…

"to phir kal baat karenge…uske ghar jaa kar.'
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Next moring was a Saturday … Rids was at home feeling very very hurt and angry

"plz Rids aisa mat karna…. " Muskaan said.

"kyon?? Who mujhe hurt kar sakta hai.. aur mein kuch nahi kar sakti???"

'wat will you gain rids .. isse kya faida hai ?" muskaan sat on the bed beside her.

"khushi… satisfaction.."
"khushi?? Kya tum sach much maanti ho ki aap khush ho jaogi…?? Tum biker se pyaar karti ho… tum Armaan se pyaar karti ho…. Is tarah se tum khush nahi hogi!! Mat karma plz"

"armaan se pyaar? Woh admi jisne 3 saal se mujhe takleef hi takleef di? Woh armaan jisne mujhe sab ke saamne embaress kiya? i.. i h-hate hi-m-m…."Rids started to cry

"agar aap armaan ko hate karti ho.. to phir aap har roz armaan se kyon chat karti thi?? Aapko pehle se hi pata tha ki armaan biker hai… phir?? Aap theek se "I hate armaan " kyo nahi keh sakti ho?? Dekho.. trust me.. yeh mat karma…"

"plz muskaan… dont stop me… mujhe rokna mat…" Rids started to cry

Muskaan took her in her arms… she sighed." I cant stop you… par.. soch lo.."

Riddhima got off and wiped her tears.. "soch liya kal.. april 1st par.. armaan ko bulakar.. usse pyaar ka naatak mein phasa doongi…"

"phir? …" riddhima didn't have an answer… she just wanted to hurt him and end it there… "aur phir?? Kuch nahi.. hai na?
"mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye.. iske hone ke baad.. mein aur armaan.. we go our own way…."
rids and muskaan didnt say anythin fer a song time
"armaan is online" she said.. looking at his name flashing..muskaan nodded.. she couldn't do anything..

FF: hi
BB:hey
FF: listen biker .. mujhe aapse kal milna hai… we have known each other fer a while.. and I think mein aapse pyaar karti hun… kya aap mujhse milne ke liye tyaar ho?

WOW… mujhse milna chahti hai… armaan was so excited as he read the message… finally something good was happenein.. he had felt completely miserable from the past few days!

BB:sach?
Agar flower meri zindagi mein aa jati. To mein riddhima ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhul sakti hu.

I need to make it seem as natural as possibe
FF: haan… mujhe aise hi lagta hai… soo.. milloge mujhse? Ya kya aapko lagta hai ki mein koi jaldi kar rahi hu?? Agar haan… to koi baat nahi mein samaj sakti hu…

BB: nahi nahi.. I think mein phi aapse pyaar karna laga…kaha mille? Tum to ho .. jo meri zindagi ko khushiyan deti ho..
thinkin bout how rids had hurt him so badly.. he remembered the hug.. and how she avoided him .. and how she stared at him and melteed when he touched her. even though she felt somethin fer him.. she still walked out wid someone else!

Rids began to shed tears again…
FF:kal subah.. little italy main… 12:30
BB: don't worry mein aajaonga! Dekho mujhe abhi jaana hoga… bye. Take care..
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Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wooow
ur on a role
n cnt wait 4 da nxt updtes
anvr amazin updte cntinue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazin part 14
i hate riddz. so mean why is she playing armu's feelings
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my god wht's going to happen i'm biting my nails plsssss update soon yaar 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey vini yaar i hv jst read ur all prts nd it ws absolutly rckng yaar i lvd it sooooooooooooo mch wow yaar armaan ka irritate karna nd fir feelng fr her omg yaar armaan playd sch bt ridz she cnt do ths 2 hm whn he gt 2 know tht ridz is flowr bechara bikhar jayga nd she wntd 2 hurt hm as he did omg yaar ye kya ho gaya i cnt wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sab kuch thik kardo ................
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏
do update soon coool part
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Posted: 17 years ago

Fabulous upd8s!!
cnt wait 4 da next 1!

do pm me n continue soooon!!

Marisha
Edited by perfectpiscean - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i never even knew you updated =O
plz plz plz PM me after every part PLZ
super duper amazing parts
im in love with your FF
will you FF marry me? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey good one!!!thanx for such quick updates!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
No!! They both love eachother! Plz continue soon.

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