*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

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hey astha
will comment later
sorry for late comments but im having an imp exam coming up so im a bit busy with its prep so ill coment in detail later on but ill be reading the updates
sorry
😭 😭 😭

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Asthu........ 🤗

Aaahhhhhhhh wat a wonderful part......superbly excellent....just brilliant.......gosh wat beautiful description of emotions.........specially i loved the way armaan was feeling bad.......

WHY DID I FEEL BAD? He quested himself as he punches the punching bag. Taking all his anger out on it as what just happening few mins ago flashed in his mind. He walks back in the room just to find her combing her hair all dressed in a beautiful pink sari.As the cold water drops start to hit on his body he remembers her face. WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH ME. WHY IM I FEELING BAD FOR WHAT I DID TO HER TODAY.
He remembers her words "You don't have any rights". DO I REALLY DON'T.
He bangs the wall behind him, coming out of the bathroom his eyes look round for he

Those lines are superfantabulous......goshhhhhh

*Jia stands up to give Asthu standing ovation*......

Next Ridz too simply awesome........her thoughts.......abt men being pigs.....lol it craked me up....then the way she melts..and then cums back to her senses.......outstanding......
BTW the promo..........first scene awesome.........
But the next one...............ridz shouting..him wild.........OMG........continue soon yaar.........

Am already superduper addicted to ur ff........usual orders frm my side......u better continue soon.......or.......... 😉 😈

Love ya
Jia 🤗

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

awwwww its a wonderful ff...really loved the concept...n he way u hav written is brillant, mind-blowing...n yea beautifully written the description of AR'S emotions......... i loved the way armaan was feeling bad...

every line is writen soo nicely, brillantly...hays off 2 u...i wan 2 giv long comment but im very tired now as i had a long day, so sorry 4 a short comment

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

please continue soon

Kabhi zindagi ke pannon ko ulat kar dekhiyega,aapko ek shaksh yaad aayega,bhool jaaoge zamane ke diye saare gham,jab hamare saath guzara waqt yaad aayega.....

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: pink_09

Promo

AR dancing , lost in eachothers eyes.

New Entry *

Armaan angry , Ridhima shouting trying to get a beast of her.
Ridhima Crying , Armaan outside angry and wild , throwing stuff round
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She could see the Shame in his eyes as he took a sip of his coffee

wow love to see how u pen this😳

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VIDUSHI

@vidu93

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

hi astha
another ff???
lage raho.but the ff is really nice.i love the starting and i dont wanna say but i hate armaan's character.how could he be like this that too to riddz. 😡
i hope he comes back to track
could u pm me whenever update another part pls
continue soon

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Maria

@mariaa.xo

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

cant w8 2 read d nex part astha....n u betta do it 2moro az u promised or else 😡 😆 😆

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

omg dat was sch an emotional part
especialy 2 da end
poor ridz 😭
bt stil luvin it cnt wait 4 da updte
luvin it as usual
wot else cn i say left me speechless again lool
really gd updte
plzz try n updte b4r fri cnt wait dat lng lool
n thx 4 da pm
updte sooon ~Xxx~

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urmila

@urmila_17

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

hey
its amazing excellent wonderful 👏 karan grover 😆 great so finally u r making arman jelous over karan[real arman] good thought
hmm yaar when will arman change
he is hurting ridz a lot
but iam happy he is finally falling for ridz good
loved it a lot
thanks for ur pm
pls update soon

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sweet=me

@sweet=me

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#60

Heyy!!! That was such an emotionally charged part....but I loved it....especially the way Armaan was falling for Ridz...Only the end was sad...When will Armaan change himself n stop hurting Ridz?? She loves him sooo much....Oh well I'm sure he'll change soon n for the better...Btw,Muskaan n Angie are too funny.. 😆 😆 Do continue soon....Can't wait...Thanks for the pm....
Love,
Ananya