*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 8

wow this is brilliant! your such a talented writter! im loving this ff! sooooooo good! ok he definately is falling for her, but is being, like kat said, a typical guy! uff
the sweet moments they share are very cute! and the dance was very romantic! omg what is armaan doing! i hope he realizes the mistake he is making! i think this grey shade of his is great, and the transition to a positive charater is going to be awsome!
im really excited for the next part, cant wait till friday!

m out of wrd
i cud judt say "AMZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
gr8 FF
plzz continue soon n plzz PM me after u update the next part if possible

hi astha awesome update yaar
but pls armi ko jaldi se achcha bana do.
continue soon

hey
awwwwwwwww.........
bechara armu naya naya hayna is feeling kay liya time to lagay ga samaj ne 😆
nice prt 👏
👏
cont super soooooooooooonnnnn
luv ya n tak care

WooooWWers!!
another inspirer of Katty 😳 !!! She's rullin the FF 😆

Must say ur FF it really!! GUD!, no wrds how to express it, like it a 'raw feelin'

Keep it up!!

One Req!
plz PM me when u update ur FF

Thks !

-Natasha

omg!
omg!
this was great!absolutely wonderful! 😃
You write very well sweetiee 😛

amazingggggg 😃

amazing ff 😳 !!!
you're a really good writer 👏 👏 👏 but i hope armi changes soon 😳 !

heyy...it was awesome....wonderful...very well written

the dance, kitchen scene was beautiful but yea the end was sad but as u said he will change soo its f9...it was nice he is feeling kind of jealous from ksg n he wore wat she removed...after all he is a human being bound 2 hav some grey shades n i like grey shades character

i loved the way u hav brought ksg hehe...its fun seeing it



sonia/sonu

HEY ASTI
firstly i say sorry i apologixe for such a late reply but tum toh sab jaanti ho na yaar...exams!!!!
well now tht i have read d 3 rd part i must say i can say nuthing but one thing tht i am speechless....one question"how do u cum up wid such ideas" haye haye yaar tum toh aksam se ek din maar daalo gi....yaar TOOOO GOOOD ASTI
awesum job yaar
sooooooooooooooo amazing....and beutiful
it is ritten so beutifully i jus loved every bit of it but i dun get one thing karan and armaan is d same guy in actual lyf n in d FFa rmaan is from DMG n karan is d actual actor but em reeeelly gettin confused if karan is karan den who is armaan n if armaan is armaann who is karan
?????????????????????
i guess i got u confused tooo
lolz!!!!
hunny it ws jus brilliant yaar...
SHOLON SI SHOLON SI
HAI AAPKI FF KI HAR UPDATE
HUMAARE LIYAY HAI
HUMAARE LIYAY HAI
luv ya asti
sonu