*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 35

Originally posted by: kdrs

Hey,
That was a very nice part.
Now Ridz has to win him, she will just like in DMG.
Continue soon.

Cheer Sweetie 😳

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey.. gr8 concept

Thx Sweetie 😳

just read the parts... nd loved them.. poor ridzz... 4 a minute i thought armi was serious when he was on his knees, until i realised wht had happened in the intro..lol 😆

Hahah .. Dww happens .. 😆

armi was being really harsh na... but u gotta love him...lol 😳 .. hope she wins his heart... SOON..lol

Now she has won him finally 😳

plz cntnue soon😊

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

HI my JAAANOOOOOOOOOO sweeeeeeeeetoooooooooo friend ASTI!!!!!!!!!

Sonu i miss you yaar

firstly kaisi ho??? not fine .. come online 😭
man v havent chat in 3 days n t seems lyk centuries...lolz!!!! more like 3 months now !!
waise lemme telll u first tht my computer is not working properly so i wont b able to chat wid u for sum more days 😭
and ya i am sorry i read ur PM but did'nt get a chance to reply....this stupid computer .. yep stupid thing
yaaar asti kasam se "MAAR DAALA!!!" Haha joka
i read the part tht u PM'ed me N now dis
wowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!i loved the intro and d first part yaar .. Thanx sonu 😳
awesummmmmmmmmmmmmm1!!!!!!!!!!!
my asti is riting another FF but i want d other one updated on time ok????lolz!!!!
hey btw thanks alottttttt for pm ing me yaaar
u r lyk the cutest n d sweeeetest frewnd any1 cud even dream of
hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeee asti
u know wht u made me hate armaan....lolz!!!!!not in real but in d FF i mean u have ritten it in such a SUPERB way tht the expressions u have tried to portray r very obvious
AWESUM WORK ASTI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oye hoyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
luv u asti
ur sonu

Thanx for ur cute komment sonu .. i miss u alot ... 😭 🤗

Love Your Asti 😳

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

wooooooooooow
im luvin it already
sooooooooooooo gd
it was great
uvin da concpt
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
updte soon plzzz 👏 👏 👏

cheers sweetie 😳

Originally posted by: spln

awsom....keep it rolling....n do update the other ff soon too...lov ur work!!!

Thanx 😳

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!! that part was stunning!!!!! so so sooooo well written!!!! luvd it!!! plz plz plz plz plz update soon!!!!!

Thanx 😳

Originally posted by: heyy_babyy

Wow...Such a cute FF...
Its going to be pretty cool watching Armaan fall for Ridzy...PLZ continue soon!!!

thx 😳

Originally posted by: shalika

awesome
luved the concept
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
👏

thx 😳

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey astha
good that uve started a new ff 👏 👏 👏 its really good
im sorry for late comments but im busy preparing for my exam so ill post a detailed comment later on once my exam is over
well this part was nice n im waiting for the next part n plz dont mind if i dont comment on time
👏

Aww Thx sweetie 😳

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow this is really great! please continue soon!

thx 😳