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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

can't wait to know wht angad is planning. gr8 part. the promo seems good šŸ˜‰

thnxx iamsmart


~Sana~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! šŸ‘



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 8

(Note: In this ff nor Aaliyah or Shabbir are Muslims.)

Aaliyah was very fond of Kripa from day one, she had heard of the little argument between her and Angad but had decided not to get involved. If it were someone else, she wouldn't have avoided the subject, but she knew Angad was giving a little too attention to Kripa and was teasing her a lot…so it would have annoyed anyone.

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Angad walked to Prithvi and Shabbir during free period and sat down on a small corner table. Shabbir was also in the 4th year, practicing law, and a very close friend of Angad. Angad respected him a lot seeing as he said whatever he felt like, rather than sticking to his side all the time.

'Hi… yaar kaissa hai tu', Angad hugged Shabbir and sat down, 'aur kaha tha itne din…?'.

'Hi… haa yaar maa ki tabiyat kharab thi to unne dekhne gaya tha Pune…', Shabbir answered.

Angad looked worried, 'Maa… kya hua Maa ko?… ab theek to hai na?... any problem…?', he barged Shabbir with questions. Angad was really close to Shabbir and his family, mostly because they treated him like their own son.

'Nahi yaar, ab koi problem nahi hai.. bilkul theek hai… acha chor inn baato ko.. tu suna kya chal raha hai aaj kal… suna hai kissi LADKI ne teri insult ki..', Shabbir joked and exaggerated on the word LADKI.

'Kya batao yaar…. Pata nahi kya samajhti hai apne aap ko… maine thoda mazaak kiya aur ulta mujhe itna lamba chora lecture de gayi, wo bhi sab ke saamne… mujhe to lagta hai bas attention ke liye hi kiya hai uss ne…', Angad replied sounding annoyed.

'O come on yaar… tera mazaak sab hi jaante hai… aur tu bhi kuch kam nahi hai… I can imagine what would have happened', Shabbir defended the girl. He was basically the most mature out of all his friends.

'tu mera dost hai ya uss ka,' Angad asked, 'kabhi kabhi to mujhe shak hota hai tujh par aur teri dosti par, yaar kabhi to meri side le liya kar!'. Shabbir smiled, 'Acha bol… any ideas?'.

'Uss ladki ka kuch karma pade ga..' Angad thought aloud to get Prithvi's attention.
'Ladki?.. kiss ladki ka', Prithvi answered absent mindely, he was too busy 'checking' out girls.
'Kripa ka aur kiss ka…', Angad replied sounding annoyed, 'tu ne hamari ek baat bhi suni yah nahi?'.


'H-haan sunni na… par nahi yaar… ab chod purani baato ko, bechari ko kuch zaada hi tang kar raha hai...' Prithvi defended her. Angad raised his eyebrows, 'aur uss ne jo mere saath kiya, usse main kaisse bhool sakta hoo…', Shabbir sighed, Angad wasn't the type of person that would forget everything easily. 'waisse,, tujhe badhi chinta hone laggi hai usski… hamesha uss ki side leta hai…kyun… kuch chal raha hai?', he continued and smirked, but then became serious, somehow he didn't like Prithvi caring for her.


Prithvi changed the topic, 'Acha bol, karna kya hai', and sighed.
Angad grinned, 'mere paas bohat acha plan hai… chutki main saari akar door ho jaayegee usski..' he clicked his fingers. Prithvi rolled his eyes, there was no way to talk his 'guru' out of something that he had made his mind up about already. 'Achha sun… aaj raat hum sab…', Angad whispered his so-called plan and discussed it with Prithvi and Shabbir who listened carefully to their instructions..


He smirked, 'waisse sab kuch to main hi karoo ga, tum dono bas Aliyah aur Harshu se baat kar lo'. Prithvi nodded like a puppet but Shabbir thought otherwise, 'Yaar… are you sure… tu kuch zyaada hi nahi kar raha bechari ke saath… mera matlab hai ke yeh galat hai… kissi aur tarha se bhi badla le sakta hai na, par sab ke saamne??'.

'Dekh Shabbir, I've made up my mind, tu ne madad karni hai to kar…. Warna na kar… per please don't tell me what's right and what's wrong', Angad said irritatingly.

Prithvi got up, 'Theeke tera kaam ho jaayega… main coffee lene jaa raha hoo, tujhe kuch chahiye?'.


'Haan, get me some coke… and make sure its cold', Angad called behind him arrogantly.
'Yes boss!', Prithvi smirked and did a little salute and walked towards the counter.


'Ab aaye ga mazaa MISS Kripa Sharma… bohat garoor tha na tumhe apne upper, ab main dekhta hoo tumhari akkar kaisse nahi theek hoti… tum ne mera sab ke saamne mazaak uraya na… ab tumhara krya hoga?', he grinned and thought to himself.

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'Aaliyah', Shabbir called after her from behind. 'Hi…kaissi ho', he smiled. Shabbir and Aaliyah had been engaged since last year, they had been together since childhood, and knowing unknowingly had fallen in love.

Aaliyah replied, 'Main theek hu… tum kaisse ho'.

'Kuch der pehle tak to acha tha… par ab shayad nahi', he replied.

'Kyun kya hua', she asked worried, 'ab Maa kaissi hai… koi problem ho gayi kya..'.

'Nahi aissi koi baat nahi hai… actually meri bet laggi thi Angad ke saath… par main haar gaya', he looked down innocently as he lied. Aaliyah laughed and defended her brother, 'Tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ke mere bhai se shart mat lagaya karo, kabhi nahi jeeto ge Mister'.

Shabbir looked affended, 'Tum hamesha apne bhai ki taraf daari hi kyun karti ho…' then whispered, 'Shaadi ke baad batao ga tumhe, agar phir apne bhai ka naam liya to…'. Aaliyah blushed.

Shabbir changed the topic before he got carried away with his romance, 'To actually, shart yeh thi ke haarne waale ko sab ko treat deni ho gi… to maine socha sab ko khana khila loo… par Angad demanded a party instead… to main soch raha tha ke agar tumhare ghar party rakh le… kyunke kaafi zyaada dost aayege… aur mere dad bhi gar par hoyege… par tumhare parents to ghar par nahi hai na, abroad ge hai Angad ne bataya… to maine socha ke..', Aaliyah looked at him curiously, she could tell when he was lying.

Shabbir quickly replied, 'Tum fikkar mat karo… hum kuch aissa waissa nahi kare ge… aur haa saara harcha main uthao ga…. To tumhe fikkar karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai', he smiled at her. Aaliyah nodded, 'Party kab hai?'

'Aaj raat… takreeban aath baje sab aajayege…'.

'Ok… acha ab main chalti hoo… class ka wakt ho raha hai, bye', she quickly kissed his cheek and started walking away.

'Er,…. A-Aaliyah ruko…', he had almost forgotten the main part of the plan, 'kuch aur bhi hai… ab itna harcha ho raha hai to thode aur se kya fark parta hai.. to maine socha tum bhi apni friends ko bulalo… warna tum hum sab ladko main akeli par jaoogee', he grinned to act normal.

'Theek hai… I'll call some friends'.

'Hmm… Harshu ko bhi bula lene… bohat din se uss se baat nahi hoyi', he added as she smiled and left.

'O God!... that was hard.. yeh Angad bhi na pata nahi kiss museebat main daal diya mujhe', he thought and walked to his class.

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Angad ran through the empty hallway and muttered under his breath, 'O God… aaj phir late… aaj to main gaya…'. He turned around the small corridor only to bump into someone.

He rolled over grabbing the person along with him. Unknowingly they both ended up on the floor, with Angad on top. Angad looked up angrily, here he was getting late for his class and now he's stuck here.

He lifted his head up slightly, only to be lost in someone's angelic face. Their lay Kripa, crushed under his heavy weight, eyes tightly shut. He watched the movement of her chest as she breathed heavily, her lips parted and her hair once tied up now all lose and falling all over her face. She looked even more prettied from this close.

He looked at her pink, slightly parted lips, a sudden urge came over him, he wanted to know how they'll feel against him, know how they'll feel against his. He wanted to feel the soft, delicate petals. Feel whether they were as soft as they looked. He looked at her long, graceful neck. He felt like kissing the soft skin and to feel whether it was as soft as her hands that he had earlier touched. He wanted to feel her body against his, caress her, and touch her.

He lifted his hand up slightly and gently tucked the lose tendrils of hair behind her ears. Kripa suddenly opened her eyes as she felt someone's hand brush against her cheekbone. She looked at him shocked. Chocolate brown eyes met light- brown. For a moment, nothing else existed, just the two of them, looking longliy at each other. His desired-filled gaze was fixated on her, looking deep into her eyes, he could see his reflection in them. Suddenly, Kripa become aware of her position, she could feel her tiny legs crushed between his. She moved her head slightly only to find herself a breath's distance away from him. She moved her lips, ever so slowly, to be afraid if she talked faster, they'll touch his. 'A-Angad… u-u-tho', she whispered, her breath blowing on his face. She looked at him awkwardly,, Angad smiled at her awkwardness.

He bent down near her ears and whispered, 'Tum…. Theek.. to ho na', his lips slightly brushed past her tiny, shell-like ears as he spoke. She coulod feel his hot breath resting on her neck. She closed her eyes to collect herself, what was happening, she thought, what was he doing? She nodded yes and struggled under him, trying to get up. 'Angad… main late ho rahi hoo…'. She finally managed to whisper and pushed against his chest, gently, 'Get off me…'. Angad slowly got up and smirked at her uncomfortable ness. Though he was glad, he himself would have gotten carried away if he saw her again.

He held out his hand for her as she collected her belongings. She looked up at him, his gaze still fixated on her, aissa kya dekh raha hai… pehle kabhi ladki nahi dekhi kya, she thought. Then she realised he was offering her a hand to get up, she looked at him curiously. Why was he helping her, aaj subah tak to gusse main tha.. ab kya hua.. shayad apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai isse. She looked at his hands doubtfully, whether she should accept it or not. Angad interrupted her chain of thoughts, 'Don't worry… yeh haath main zindagi bhar ke liye nahi thamoo ga', he smirked.

Kripa put her tiny hands in his masculine ones. At once he cupped her hands between his. She felt as if a chill went down her as she lifted herself up. She looked at him and then her hands, he still had a tight grip around them, 'Thanks..' she whispered and looked away. Angad quickly let go and winked, 'it's ok..'. She looked at his desire filled eyes and turned around to walk away. She felt embarrassed at herself for getting lost in him. Hopefully, he wouldn't have noticed. Who was she kidding? He was staring back at her… it was his fault they were stuck on top of each other, he should have released her when she asked him too. Angad watched after her as she disappeared in her class, he sighed and walked away himself.

He couldn't concentrate throughout his lessons that day. He kept imagining her, imagining her light-brown eyes staring at him. Thinking about her awkwardness, how she had struggled under him, he smirked. How her delicate body felt with his. He kept thinking of those lips, those soft, pink lips. He smiled but soon shuddered out of his thoughts, No.. he couldn't get attracted to her, he had to show her the real Angad Khanna. The one she dared to mess with.

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OK Guyzz… sorry 4 the delay… I tried 2 make this part extra long to make up 4 the lastšŸ˜‰ā€¦ plz leave comments and suggestions. I know u guyz were expecting to read abt Angad's plan, but the part was getting too long with just their fallšŸ˜†. I tried 2 make this somewhat romantic.. but not too much otherwise Angad's plan won't turn into action..lol

Next Part: Angad's plan

Plz comment😳

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Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesoem part; hmm, shabbir seems nice but he's ivolved in the plan; I hope the plan isnt too bad, I dont want kripa upset. it was sweet how they stared at eachother , lovely part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

awesoem part; hmm, shabbir seems nice but he's ivolved in the plan; I hope the plan isnt too bad, I dont want kripa upset. it was sweet how they stared at eachother , lovely part



thnxx Faiza
Shabbir's in the plan against his will... he's kinda forced by AngadšŸ˜•
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Posted: 17 years ago
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truly awesome.plz cont soon this time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ...plz cont soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

wonderful part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ...plz cont soon 😃


thnxx sweet honey
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Posted: 17 years ago
wen angad said "dont worry ye haath mein zindagi bhar ke liye nahi thamun ga." how can he be so sure. he can be wrongšŸ˜† wonderful part.


~Sana~

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