Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AK) Part14 / pge 40

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#271

NEW READER HERE!!!! Hey good job!! Love ur story. Cant wait till they satrt the game, Pm me when u update plz.. Harji. :)

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#272

hey dear thank for the pm and continuing this part

this part was the best and awesome part looks like angad is falling for kripa

awwwwwwwwww it was so cute conversation b/w angad and kripa thank god angad really cares for her and want to give her lift by looking she is standing alone

i think angad is really gonna take care of her and i hope that this picnic will bring them really together and hopefully they confess to eachother soon

i like the way u pick the part very fast i think u should write like this and make angad and kripa fall for eachother

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon hope fully u continue really soon

love ya

mittal

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Rhea

@rheuji17

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#273

ahhhhh u finally continued thnks for the pm,

i love it and ur are not slowing down the pace

of this ff but i really want ak action, angad and

his dreams, always thinking osmething naughty

about kripa, i wonder wat else he fantatises about

her lol😆, angad is watching her like a dog cant

take is eyse off of gods most wonderful creations

lol😆, u really made laugh in this part, finally angad

said some thing to that misti😡🤢, awwww angad

was only mean to her because of his dadi that really

sucks, any wayz fantabulous part im waiting for more

plz cont soon.

Love Ya Loads

Rhea🤗

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#274

heyy ji...when r u gng to continue???

i'm waiting 4u to do so...

coz, this ff is excellent...

and, i am waiting to know what happens next...

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Kiran

@Smilesx3

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#275

Hey

I just caught up with this FF

I love how they started on a hate realtionship to attraction. Angad loves to irritate her. Aww..she made parathas for him. The singing of Kripa in a drunken state was funny. I loved how Angad stood up for Kripa at the end.

I think the pace of this FF is great. Not slow or too fast.

Hope for more romance between AK.

CONTINUE SOON!!!

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Jannat

@NYPunjabii

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#276

This is an awesome FF.
I love the way you showed Angad and Kripa...It resembles the way their characters was in the show..Angad arrogant and Kripa shy and timid...Nice plot of the storyy and description of things going o around and the way you portray everyone's feeling whether good or badd...I can actually imagine the scenes going on in my head...great job in writing...
Continue Soon