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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my godddd..... 😍 .......sujal ko kuch aage hi nikal gaya.....aur woh bhi Kashish ki aur aise.........kashish ka dil to fisal raha hoga... 😳 ......jab us aadmi ne kashish ko bulaya tab uaks mann to us aadmi ko do thapad marne ko diya hoga... 😡 .......lekin sujal hai jo kashish ko ek pal ke liye bhi dur nahi karna chahta..... 😉 ....jab kashish sujal se kehti hai ki wapas to woh Sujal ke pass hi aayehi .... 😳 ...tab uf sujal ka dil ka kya haal hua hoga..........dhak ......dhak dhak.........dhak dhak.... ❤️ .....i think they should played BAAHOIN KE DARMIYAAN DO PYAAR MIL RAHE HAI..... 🤗 .......agar kashish ki jagah koi aur hota to shayad SUjal ke saath dance karne ke liye to apna kaam hi chod de...........i can feel the love in the air........are kashish sujal ko sapno me dhundhna bandh karo kyunki ab to woh tumhare dil me basne laga hai.... 😍 ......aur tum to apna dil sujal ke pass chod aayi ho......aaj bhi kashish sujal ko apne aap me mehsus kar rahi hogi........aaj bhi sujal ke chune ka ehsaas uske jism ko chu raha hoga............aaj bhi woh sujal ki khusboo ko mehsoos kar rahi hai.......aaj use her jahag pyari lagti hai........aaj kashish ki halat pe muje ek song yaad aa raha hai.........KUCH TO HUA HAI KUCH HO GAYA HAI..... 😍 .....are baap re Sujal gusse me hai.. 😕 ...bechari kashish uska intzaar kar rahi hai aur woh akela rehna chahta hai.........sujal samja karo jab kashish jaisi saathi ho to apni pareshani bata karo...........SUJAL GAREWAL the handsome dude ke saath koi aise kaise kar sakta hai.... 😎 .....kaun hai woh badmaash jisne hamare sujal ke saath aisa karne ki sochi... 😡 .....shayad sujal ko personal aur business life ek nahi karni chahiye thi.........aaj use ehsaas nahi hai lekin un logo ko shayad aisa lag raha hoga.........kyunki itne sare log ek saath to jooth nahi bolenge.........un logo ko paise ki zaroorat hai aur tumhe apni company chalane ke liye unki zaroorat hai........ek haath se sabko khush rakho aur dusre haath se unse kaam karao.... 👏 ....yahi business ka rule hai.........party....i wonder is he going to throw the party at the bar..... 🥳 ...i wonder what is going to happen in the party.......i am also going to join them... ....i know i am not invited .......but hey it is sujal's party so every one invited..........good parts.... 👏 ...awesome.....ple ple continue karo...........thanks........

love

kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
awesome parts. sad to know abt sujal's past.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
wooooooooooooooooo a bigggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg part........................................................ .........................................................

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee e.................. so romance is taking in b/w both.......... they look dam cute together.......... yaar.........& kash is so understanding.......... tabhi to sujal loves him.......... & poor sujal kitna bura hua hai uske saath stupid gal.......... sujal ko bhulkar kisi buddha ke saath rehna chli gayi..........

well love da part..................................

do cont soon........... do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
omg wats amazing parts u av posted 👏 sorry for late reply actually i was busy ...bt really partyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yepeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 and that dance rocking................ bt wen they both r gonna cofess their feelings me waiting for that..plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
thanxs 2 readers 4 commentin,sp thanxs to goodkashish
4 givin such a wonderful comment,i hope all readers will give comments as big as her no actually far more bigger than her everytime hai naa!

now 4 the nxt part-

k-haan,party for ur employes,par plz no formal office party.total dhinchak kind party ki jisse unhe bhi pata lage ki thr boss is not a dud but a dude!

s doesnt say anythin

k- 😊 waise ek baat to bhul hi gae,aapke lie kuch lai hun!

s-mere lie?

k-haan,mumma ke haath ki bani hui,puri aur chole 😊 .,ujhe laga aapka roz roz yahan pe bahar ka khana thik nahi,aur waise bhi maine mumma ki itni tarif ki aapke saamne,to socha kuch banvaake le aau. i hope aapko pasand aega.

s-hmm

k-kyun pasand nahi hai to,bata dijie [k ka chehra thoda mayus to hota hi hai,par she forces a smile on it]

s-nahi aisi bata nahi,lagao to sahi

k smiles

k-haan abhi

k laga deti hai wo khana

s haves it

k is lookin at him

s-hmm,its really delicious!kitne dino baad aisa khana,aisa khana meri dadi banati thi!

k-aapko pasand aaya! [she grins ear to ear]

s-tum nahi khaogi,lo have some! [offers some frm his]

k-nahi,ye aapke lie hai,aap khaie,main ghar jaake khaungi,mumma ne aapke naam se banaya hai

s-mere naam se? tumne apni maa se kya kaha,ye kiske lie leke jaa rahi ho?

k-hmm..wo.. 😳 ..wo..[blushin automatically,neeche jhukake ankhen]..wo maine kaha ki..wo..mera ek khaas dost hai uske lie!

s-khaas dost! [repeats aft her,makin a naughty cute face]


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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
ab aage kya ho sakta hai jab kashish sujal ke liye ghar se khana lana shuru kar de to... 😳 .....dal me kuch kala hai....lekin muje to puri dal hi kali lag rahi hai.........kyun sahi kaha na kashish.. 😉 ...sirf khaas dost ke liye khana........hmmmmmm..... 😍 ....sochne wali baat huyi yeh to.........sujal socho......kashish ka ishara kya keh raha hai.... 😳 ....muje bhi puri chole ki yaad aa gayi........muje bhi maa ke khane ki yaad dila di..... 😭 ...mast part tha.......aage hi aise mast mast part likhte raho.... 👏 ...thanks

love
kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
nice parts and sujal is so cute and adorable... 😆 👏 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

abb s haves his fill,aur roz ki tarah chala jaata hai

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shaam hoti hai-

s ke aane ka waqt hai

k sees him at the door,enterin

s also sees her

& gestures her a hi frm thr

she smiles,in acknowledgment

s comes & sits at his place

s-hi! [a small smile]

k-hi! wo abhi,aapke khane ke lie keh dia hai,aa raha hoga,tab tak ye lijie drink!

s-thnxs! [takes it & takes a sip,looks at her]kashsih!

k-haan?

s-tum to inn sab mein se kuch nahi peeti hai naa!

k-nahi

s-em..m..nariyal pani to peeti hogi!

k-haan..wo to..par kyun..

s-emm..wo..emm..chalo phir,beach pe chalke peeke aate hain!

k-abhi? nahi nahi.main duty par hun. permission nahi hai

s-uski chinta tum mat karo,tum bass chalo.chal rahi ho naa!

k-paar...

s-par-var kuch nahi! bass haan! bolo haan!

k-haan!

s smiles thoda sa,paar bohot cutely

s-abhi aaya! jst wait a sec!

he goes & kuch der baad comes back

s-chalo,maine tumhare boss se baat kar li hai.come!





Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ab they reach to the beach-

both r walkin saath saath

kadam se kadam milake

thandi thandi hawa hai,bohot achcha mausam hai

dono hi chal rahe hain,dono hi ek dusre se kuch nahi keh rahe par,ek dusre ko teerchi nazaron se dekh rahe hain

dono ke dil mein ek ajeeb si khushi ke saath saath ajeeb sa excitement aur thrill hai

both r walkin so close ki chalte chalte kabhi kabhi jaane anjaane ek dusre ko chuu jaate hain

s-emm..kashish..! [with so much passion in this 1 word]

k-haan?

s-ek,ek baat kahun..emm..bura to nahi manogi [a bit hesitent]

k-kahie!

s-emm..wo...apne baal khol lo...achchi lagti ho...!

she looks at s for a while

he is lookin at her bit awkward

she gives a sweet smile

& unties her hair

& man! she is lookin gorgeous

s-thnx!
[small smile]

both r havin a unnatural mushy feelin in thier heart

both r so awkward,ki k is playin with her fingers,& s has kept his hands inside his pocket lookin here there

s-emm..n..nariyal paani peena tha,pie?

k-emm..haan!

s-aao

they both tak a nariyal paani each

s-aao wahan baithke peete hain

k-hmm

they go 7 sit,on a place where there is a rocky cliff kinda place,uske upar ,jahan se sea bilkul saaf aur pura nazar aata hai,aur asmaan aur sagar milta hua lagta hai,its truely beutiful sight!

as the place is a diffult & rocky terrain

s gives his hand 2 her

she looks into his eyes

& keeps her hand on his

& he safely guides her up,with his strng & protective arms & presence

they sit on top of the cliff

k sits & strts drink,aft keepin the nariyal on her lap

s apne nariyal ko rock pe rakhke straw lagane jaata hai

ki bass

dhaaaaaaappppppp!!!!!!!!!

nariyal sidha neeche

s is lookin at it with a dumbo expression with a straw in his hand

k-oh!

s-oh forget it!

k-arre,paar apne to...ye lijie! [offers uska nariyal to him]

s-nahi tum pio

k-arre nahi plz lijie naa,hum share kar lenge,plz

s-nahi tum..

k-[hak se] no..nahi-wahi,aap nahi pienge to main bhi nahi piungi bass!

k snatches straw frm him,& dips it inside the nariyal paani

s kuch nahi kehta

jst sits besides her

both strt drinkin frm the same nariyal

lik the long lost lovers

both holdin the nariyal in btw

s ke fingers r touchin her

bohot dheere dheere he is movin his fingers twrds her's

her heart knws whts happenin

she jst shies,blushes & gives a smile,nazre jhukake

both r lookin into each others eyes,without blinkin

in the process the nariyal pani is over

k-emm..khatam ho gaya! [tryin 2 hide her sharam apne balon ko kaan ke peeche karke]

s-emm..oh haan!

k-isko kahan fekna hai,yahan dustbin to nahi hai!

s-arre dust bin ki kya zarurat yahin kahin fek dete hain,kitni khali jagah hai!

neeche pure rocks hote hain

s nariyal uthake zorrrrrrrrr se throws

s-ye lo ,ho gaya!

a guy with his gf gusse mein shrieks at him

g-abbey kya kar raha hai andha hai kya dikhta nahi! yahan log hain! kuch bhi phek dega!

actually they were hidin behind the rocks

uski awaaz sunke,unn rocks se cuple hi couple khade ho jaate hain,as shor se unki privacy mein khalal ho rahi hai

& all r starin at s & k

s looks at k & k looks at s

k grabs s ka arm

k-chalo yahan se!

aur s ko wahan se le jaati hai






Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
muje her waqt yeh sham ka intzaar rehta hai ki kab sham ho aur sujal kashish se milne aaye..... 😍 .....jab pyaar hoga to nazar to darwaze pe hi tiki rahegi na.......jab samne aapka khud ka pyaar ho aur hotho pe hasi aur aankhoin me nami kaise na hogi..... 😳 ......muje lagta hai ab to us jagah pe ek bada sa board likh dete hai SUJAL GAREWAL.........aaj pehli bar sujal ne haske kashish ko hi bola.... 😊 .....kya baat hai..........how cute........kitni ache se puch raha hai........i am so jeoulos of her.... 🥺 ......muje bhi nariyel pani pina hai..........ab kashish to aise puch rahi hai jaise woh nariyel pani me zeher dene wala ho... 😲 ....beach pe aur woh bhi chand ki chandni me.... ❤️ ......kya ho raha hai yeh sab.......are kashish kam ko maro goli.....jab pyaar itne pyaar se keh raha hai to chalo jao.........waise bhi tumhe naukri karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.........shaadi ke bad sujal tumhe thode hi kam karne dega..........lekin kashish hai jo kam pe sirf kam karti hai lekin koi baat nahi hamara sujal jo hai..........to phir pareshan kyun ho rahi ho........sujal to jaise uske samne rat laga raha hai.........are yeh huyi na baat........aakhir sujal jeet hi gaya.... 👏 ...are waah boss se bhi baat kar li .....manna padega sujal ko.....kya dimaag hai........jab dil mil gaye hai to kadam to milenge hi......ab sirf manzil ka milna jyada zaroori hai............haye pyaar ki yeh pehli nazar hi o mar deti hai.... 😳 .....sidha dil chir jati hai........dil me kuch kuch to ho raha hai lekin darrte hai ki pehle kaun apne dil ki baat karega..........haye.....haath ka woh chuna... 😉 .....jaise badan me ek bijli khol uthi ho.........sujal agar tum puchoge to kashish kaise bura man sakti hai....kyun kashish sahi kaha na.........baal khol do ka kya matlab.....khud hi nikal le pin........bechari kashish ka to dil zor se dhak dhak karne laga hoga..... 😳 ...to aakhir sujal ke kehne pe baal bhi khule kar diye.......kash woh aadmi ke pass ek hi nariyel pani hota.....to kitna maja aata na........chandi ke neche do pyaar karnewale ek hi nariyel pani se pi rahe ho...... 🤗 ....kuch aur nahi to sirf haath ka milan to ho hi gaya..........good job sujal..... 👏 .....nariyel aise kaise neeche gir gaya......muje to shak hai kahi sujal ne jaan bujke to nahi giraya.. ...are kashish ne to mere dil ki baat sun li.....bahot ache kashish ja rahi hai..... 👍🏼 ....kash main us waqt beech pe hoti to ek photo to khich hi leti.........yeh nariyel pani itni zaldi kyun khatam ho jata hai..............aise hi sujal ne dekhe bina fek diya........oh baba... 😲 ...yeh kya kisi ko sach much me lag gayi.. ...ab to tu gaya sujal........agar aaj kashish sujal ko khich ke na lejati to........sujal to gaya tha kaam se...........bahot hi achcha part tha... 👏 .....dil khush ho gaya......ab jaldi se aise hi part likhati rehna........shukhriya.........

kashish

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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