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Posted: 17 years ago
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he jst looks straight & comes close & wraps his arms arnd her waist

k curls her lips in her desire & also wraps her arms arnd his neck

k-oh!..

par realisation strucks her

k-emm..sujal plz..chalie..yahan..koi aa jaega..plz,lts go!

k usko support karke pakdke uthati hai,aur usko wahi bar stool mein bitha deti hai

aur takes her usual posion in the bar

s-[still drunk]..1 more whiskey! plz!

k-[firmly] no! no drinks for u! aapki tabiyat kharab hai!

s-its..its..jst happens...its nothing!

k-i said no drinks!

s-to yahan kyun lai ho?

k-paani aur medicine dene ke lie

k pours water aur medicine nikalke gives

k-ye lijie,u'l feel beter!

s is shakin badly,even to realise wht he is supposed to do,his brain has got numb

so k takes the tablet aur s ke mooh mein puts,aur s apne haathon se paani pila deti hai

k-ghar jaake rest karie,plz!

s-tum..mujhe..bhaga rahi..ho!

k-nahi,aap apna khayal to rakhte nahi,islie aapka wo kaam main kar rahi hun! driver hai abhi?

s-driver? i can drive!

k-no ur drunk u cannot! & u'l not! chalo apna mobile do! [bade hak se]

s-huh? [drunk 2 understnd straightly]

k-give me ur mobile!

s dhund dhandke nikalke gives 2 k

she is doin somethin with the mobile

k-driver ke naam se saved hai? mil gaya! hello,aap hotel aa jaiye mr sujal garewal ko lene,jaldi aaie aate hi phone kariega!

k gives the ph back 2 s,par she knws s ko kuch dhyaan nahi rahega,safely s ke pocket mein rakh deti hai

k-aapka driver aa raha hai,aapko lene.gaadi kahan hai aapki?

s-p..parkin..lot..

k-kaunsi car hai? kaisi dikhti hai?

s-m..mercedes..c-class. its black

k-ok. aaie main aapko gadi tak chod deti hun

s-no,i'l manage.u dont have..to..phir tumhe..raat ..mein..akele aana padega..yahan tak

k-nahi,thrs is no prob. chalie

s ko sahara deti hai

she is helpin him walk,while he is staggerin all the while



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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
aur s ko safely gaadi mein bith deti hai

k-driver bhaiya! inka khayal rakhna

driver-jii madam

the driver drives s safely to home

aur k bhi wapas aa jaati hai

pata nahi kyun a smile playin on her lips,& those flashes of those unforgetable moments they spent today

she feels,am in gettin attracted 2 him/

nah!

y not! he is not bad! he is goodlookin,& is a nice guy!


& i knw he way be a sort of introvert but he has a heart of gold

but i dont knw anythin abt him as yet

so wht its jst likin,harmless likin nothin else!

abb agli raat-

s aake sits on his usual place

k-tabiyat kaisi hai?

s-better. u dont hav 2 worry it was jst the usual thing ppl do aft..

k-[she completes]..drinkin excesively!

s doesnt give any rxn 2 her comment

s-my drink plz

k turns & pours some oure mineral water & gives it to him

s-whts this?

k-water

s-i knw,i wanted a..

k-[k completes again] a drink.but u knw wht,maine pata lagaya,pdke ,puchke net se ki aapko kal vomits kyun hue,aur wo hua dehydration ki wajah se,alchohol body ka water absorb kar leta hai, so u had deficiency of water,islie aapko drink ke beech mein pani peena chahie,islie wohi de rahi hun. aur sabse achcha ye ho ki aap khali pet nahi,khana khake phir drink kare. aur i knw u skip ur dinner hai naa! aur sabse achcha to ye ho ki aap drink karehi naa!

s-ok ok ok. stp givin lectures. kya karna hai mujhe?

k-iss pani ko pijie,

aur mudke plate mein pasta laake rakhti hai

k-aur ye khaiye,saara khatam karie,tab drink milegi aapko

s-arre jab mujhe nahi khana,i jst want my drink

k-[strictly] u'l finish it,u'l get it

s-dekho,main kisi aur bar mein chala jaunga

k-chale jaiye,main to serve nahi karubgi jo bhi ho!

k is lookin at him with a grin

s is gettin irritatedmhe pauses & looks down thinks

& then again looks at her

s-pata hai! pata hai! problem kya hai! ki..ki..jab saamne wale ko aapki kamzori pata hoti hai.tum..tumhe pata hai naa..main nahi jaunga..islie tum..

k-drink chaie to jaldi se kha lijie aur pani pii lijie

s is helpless,k raises an eyebrow 2 signal 'eat'

s strts eating

s-tum nahi khaogi,kuch?

k-nahi,main diner ghar pe karungi,jaake.abhi kuch kha lia to ghar pe nahi kha paungi. phir mumma datengi. waise bhi meri maa bohot achcha khana banati hai,so i dont wanna miss my ma ke haath ka khana.

s jst nods,in a pensive & philosphical mood

s finishes pura plate pasta,& full glass of water

k smiles

k-abb aapki drink hai naa.

s-pet bhar gaya,pet mein jaagh hi kahan bachi?

k-achcha hai aisa hi hona chahie

s-tumhara hi nuksaan hai

k-kareebi nuksaan ke lie,dur ka faida nahi bhulna chaie. hai naa mr sujal 'businessman of the yr' garewal!

s-sure,miss kashish 'future business woman' sinha!


Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
heeeeeeeeel wat a sweet and cute part....... 👏
wow wat a lecture kashish had given to him just a doctopr like and how sweetly he frowned in concentration..damn gud 👏 . i m waiting wen sujal gonna leave his drinking habit 😳
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Great prts👍🏼 so finally sk paas aa rahay hain:D aur kashish jo kehti hai sujal wo kar bi raha hai wowww👏 ye donu ab zayada waqat sath rehtay hain hmm thtz gr8 acha hai kam sy kam kisi ko tou pyar hoga hi na😉 jaldi sy conti.karo plz cnt w8:D tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooo kash i8s so caring.................becharasujal kabse drinks pee pee kar apna pet bhar raha tha............. aakhir kar usne kuch khaya to sahi,,,,,.......... congo 4 tht.................

do cont soon do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
gr8 part 👏 ab kashish ki baat sujal mann raha hai.Fantastic

continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
abb k pors him

& he strts his usual drinkin scedule,par in regular intervals k is givin him water

he is half drunk

lookin at the drink

s-baat puchun?

k-hmm

s-tumhe kaunsi drink pasand hai? let me guess scotch,martini,bacardi?champagne?

k-nahi,main nahi peeti

s-u...mean..u dont drink. not even matine ,its so light,a woman's drink

k-haan then also

s-itni..saari..sharaab ke beech mein..rehkaar bhi..u dont..drink? [srts laughin drunkishly]

k-no,i dont drink

s-to pata kaise lagati ho,drink kaisi bani hai

k-aap! yaane,customer hai naa batane ke lie,waise bhi customer ka taste imp hai,mera nahi

s-hmm,u knw wht...i think..i shld get married to u...

k looks at s eyes full widened

k smirks a bit

k-aap hosh mein nahi

s-no..no..listen..ur ..the perfect match..jst apt...ur..intelligent..business skills & all,subah v can wrl together...raat ko u can mak me drinks,& phir then khubsurat to tum ho hi..to shaadi matlab din ke saath mero..raaton ki bhi saathi bann jaogi. right! [hic]

k-aapko chad gai hai

s-kyun?..u lik some1..kaun hai? itne boy frnds hai tumhare? ...kitne relationships?

k-ek bhi nahi,naa koi bf naa koi rshp

s-jhuth..itni khubsurat,smart ladki aur..

k-nahi hai jab

s-matlab,...kisi bhi..admi ke saath kabhi koi relation ..nahi?

k-nahi

s-arre tum to sadhu ho..naa sharab..naa koi relation...!

k smiles

k-mere mummy papa mujhse itna pyaar karte hain ki,kahin aur pyaar dhundne ki zarurat hi nahi. aur wsko milna hoga,wo khud hi mere paas aa jaega. aur rahi baat naashe ki,pyaar ka nasha hi hota hai ki,uske aage saare naashe phike pad jaate hain

Edited by belanila - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
great part yaar!!!!!!.....finally sujal neay apne dill ki baat kheh die "kya tum mujhse shaadi karogie???" 😳....leaving kashish shocked 😲!!!!!!!!!!.........kya baat haina sujal kashish kie personal life itna interest lera ha hay 😉.....asking if she has a BF ..... i wonder if she said yes that she has a boyfrind would sujal gotten jealous 😛??????......par shaadi wali baat par dehan dena hoga ....don't ya agree???????..........great part neelu............continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
it is a really great story.... 👏 ...i loved every bit of it... 😛 ....but i just dont like being drunk... 😭 ..becuase i am a volunteer worker for rehab for drunken and drug problem......and i have seen some ery bad cases.....it is very hard to solve this kind of problem......but you know what everyone says in that rehab.......true love and care can change person's life.......so i may think that kashish is the person that he can change.. 😳 ....ple ple continue soon as it is getting excited ...........i want to know sujal's past........rocking story...... 👏 .....thanks for making it.......

love

kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its awesome.............. sujal ki baatein uffffffffff apne aap ko tasali kara raha hai ki kash ka koi bf hai ya nahi.........aur to aur usne kash ko propose kar diya wah............

loved da part............. do pm me when u will cont

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