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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
very nice part 👏 bt his drinking habit wen he gonna leave it 😡 😡 ........and wow wat ques he asked.mujhse shaadi karlo..........in that condition he was proposing kashish bt really d way is mindblowing 👏 , bt kashish's answerwas really very nice.
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Sujal nashay mei hai jo us ne kashish ko kaha shadi ka hmm i guess wo nashay mei hai par agar ye sach ho jaye tou balle balle lol gud going continue plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
k-mere mummy papa mujhse itna pyaar karte hain ki,kahin aur pyaar dhundne ki zarurat hi nahi. aur wsko milna hoga,wo khud hi mere paas aa jaega. aur rahi baat naashe ki,pyaar ka nasha hi hota hai ki,uske aage saare naashe phike pad jaate hain

s-[strts laughin drunkly & sarcastically] mom dad,mummy papa..pyaar.. 😆

k is little confused

s-tum..tumhari maa..tumhare lie khana banati hai..wo kya..hai naa..pyaar..pyaar karti hai...dhyaan rakhti hai


k-haan

s-no!..meri nahi..kyunki ..meri maa hai hi nahi...bhaag gai left me...chodke chali gai,kisi ke saath zindagi basane..when i was 3...meri ma...meri mother

k is shocked 2 hear this,her heart aches

a tera comes in her eyes

he frantically reaches for a drunk & gulps it

still laughin drunkly & sarcastically but the pain in his eyes is prelevant

k-ho..hosakta hai [she is chokin,naajaane kyun s ka dard k ko mehsus ho raha hai]..ho sakta hai..unki koi majburi,rahi ho

s-huh? majburi...? kya majburi? aisi majburi..ki aone 3..saal..ke bete ko..she jst left...uss..uss aadmi ke lie..she left her husband..aur waise bhi dad to humaesha se hi...kaam..kaam..kaam..aur wo unke pith piche...i hate..her

k-aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki,uss insaan se wo pyaar karti ho,islie unhone ye kadam uthaya,apne pyaar ke lie. pyaar ,bas pyaar hota hai,usmein sahi galat nahi hota.agar she was not happy with ur dad to shayad unhone islie ye kadam,kyunki agar wo ek loveless relation mein rehti to koi khush nahi pata

s jst smirks

k-aur rahi baat aapko chodne ki,wo ek maa thi,koi bhi maa apne bachche ko apne se alag nahi kar sakti,shayad unki majburi itni badi rahi ho ki unhe ye kadam uthana pada.aur shayad apne kabhi unki majburi ko janne ki koshish hi nahi ki,gusse se nahi,thande dimag se sochie. unko bass ek maa ke roop mein nahi,ek aurat ke roop mein dekhie.isle shayad humein rishta ussi se jodna chahie jisse hum sachcha pyaar karte ho,usse se nahi jiske saath humein bandh dia gaya ho.kyunki pyaar se insaan ko khushiyon ka jahaan milta hai,aur bandhano mein to insaan jeeke bhi nai jeeta ghuttha rehta hai



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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
s ek baar mein hi adhi bottle khatam kar dalta hai

eyes moist & red,panting a bit,supportin him himself on the table

k-achcha chodie wo sab! [tryin 2 change the topic] aapki kitni gal frnds hai? ya kaun hai jisse aapne pyaar kia ho? i mean who is the lucky gal?
😊

s looks up,his eyes r openin with difficulty

he is directly lookin onto her

s-gal frnds huh!...u mean gal frnds....bohot...many..31-32,many...time pass..all..time pass...par..[smirks]...i thought i was in love..& she was in love with me..but..i was so wrong...sab mujhe dhoka kyun dete hain...sab..kyun...

k is listenin,uski ankhen naajaane kyun dabdaba rahi hai

s ke paas rehna chahti hai wo

s-huh!...MBA karne gaya...abroad..usko chodke..yaad aati thi...phir phone aane band..contact band..samaj nahi aaya kya hua...kuch samaj nahi aaya...[gulpin more]....wapas aaya..khush khabri...dad had married...got me a step-mom..jaanti ho kaun thi wo..meri gal frnd..she was my love...

she is surprised lik hell

he is laughin sarcastically,ankhon se asoo aa rahe hain,full drunk

k-par..par..aisa..aisa kyun kia unhone?

s-kyun?..kyun kia?..paisa..money..baby money...usse laga sari garewal industries mere naam hai..par baad mein she knew wo to dad ke..naam thi,so i was useless for her..hai naa...

she is surprised lik anythin

she doesnt knw y she is cryin slowly

k-..par...

s-par..its life..yehi zindagi hai...pata hai phir maine kya kia...apni pehchaan banai..sujal garewal ki pehchaan...jo ksi ka..beta nahi tha...paar kya faida..tab bhi yahi tha,aaj bhi yahin hun,waisa hi,akela....[tears r rolling]..to bass...sikha maine..jitna girunga..utna uthunga...kaise bhi jeeto..kaam..kaam..kaam..phir apne aap ko madhoshi mein dubo dp..yehi hai the sujaaaaal..garewaaaall..


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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
very emoyinal parts 😭 .......i felt like crying for sujal.. 😭 ....he just had bad experience in his life......but i think kashish's love will change him one day........i want to see a girl who can lieave son for father........she must be a B****... 🤢 ...i hate the whole sujal's family. 😡 .bade logo ki bade bade aiso aaram....i want to see him happy not sad .. 😛 ....i cant see him crying and drinking... 😕 ....he is spoiling his life for nothing.......ple ple help him kashish....otherwise i am coming to help him........nice parts.......ple ple continue soon......thanks

love

kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
he still gulpin his drinks,jaise his drinkin wld eradicate his pain & loneliness

failke sits on the bar stool,apna sar peeche tek lagae

k is lookin at him,her eyes ful of true sincere concern & care

the tears r automatic & significant,on his flushed face

k cant take more,her heart is gettin torned seein him lik this

she keeps her hand on his

tears flowin frm her eyes equally

s ankhen kholta hai apni,looks at her hand & then looks at her

both can feel somethin,somethin lik a connection btw thier hearts tht is speakin the unspoken

s leans twrd the table,twrds her hand

he is takin his face closer to her hand

& presses his lips to her hand

she sighs in exctasy & closes her eyes

he makes an eye contact with her,movin more & more closer 2 her

in this moment 4 both of them only each other exist & nothin else in this whole world has a least significance


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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
nice part.....i hope he doent kiss her infront of the bar in her work place....ple continue..it is getting excited.......thanks

love

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
she is stndin thr,jst lost in the trance,in this dream

his face is veryyyyyy closer to hers

apna haath badhata hai,badhake opens her tied hair

uske baal chehre pe bikhar gae,makin her look more sensual

she cant niether ,react or resist,coz she is so lost somewhr to think or do anythin

he is comin closer & closer ,& closer to her face

his eyes hav a purnin intense passion in them,& those yes r jst fixed on her

waiter! tak the order!

some1 shouts this frm somewhr,k comes back to reality,& strts to go in direction of the voice

s grabs her hand

with a voice full of intensity & eyes fixed on her

s-kyun jaa rahi ho?

k-kahan jaungi,akhir mein tumhare paas hi to wapas aungi

she goes kehke

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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
abb she is takin thr order

while s is all the while,drinkin her with his eyes

then a guy,requests to play a romantic no. & strts dancin with her gf

& all other couples in the grp join in

k comes back with the order,she has a smile on her face,seein the cute couples

& s is jst lookin at her cute smile

k aati hi hai,& she passes s

ki s gets up aur k ke saamne jaake khada ho jaata hai

k is all confused

k side se jaane lagti hai

but he grabs her 1 hand & with his other hand holds her waist

& strts swayin with tht romantic no.

k is all perplexed & puzzled

samaj nahi paa rahi ye kya ho raha hai

k-emm..sujal..ye..aap..kya..plz...

he is not listnenin he is jivin her

makin her move round,swayin with her,all the way lookin into her eyes,& she protected in his arms

k-ye..ye..sab kya..i am..on duty..plz..aap ye..kya..bohot kaam hai...

then the music stps

& all ppl applaud 4 couples

k blushes so much her cheeks full red & ankhen jhukake,aur s se anken churake bhaagke order serve karne goes 2 ppl
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
abb k ghar pe hai apne

naajaane kyun wo lamhe jo usne s ke saath guzare hain naa hi unko ek pal ke lie bhi apne zehen se alag kar paa rahi hai naa,apne aapko blush karne se rok paa rahi hai,aur wo geet koi naa koi romantic gaana to bass hothon pe chada hi hua hai

bed pe leti hai,lookin at ceinlin,ankhein ceilin par hai,par nazro mein to s ka chehra maano bassa hua hai,aur chehre pe haya,aur gun guna rahi hai-meri zindagi mein aae ho,aur aise aae ho tum,jo ghul gaya hai saanso mein wo geet lae ho tum

kabhi ye gaana-

'tu mera jaannu hai tu mera dilbarr hai,neri prem kahaani tu hero hai'par prem granth ke panno parrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr tu mera hero hai!

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abb raat ko khushi khushi k is workin in the bar

nazre kisiki raah dekh rahi hain

she is doin some work thr

turns to sees s apni jagah aake baitha hua hai

its surprised a bit

k-arre aap kab aae ,maine to gaur hi nahi kia
😊

he is lookin visibaly angry today

s-abhi aaya. drink!

k-kya hua koi pareshaani hai?

s- 😡 koi pareshaani nahi,i jst want a drink!

k-pehle batao kya baat hai. gussa thuko.

s-koi baat nahi!kaha naa! 😡

k-thik hai,nahi batana to....

s-main!main sujal garewal hun! mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain wo log! ehsaan farosh! bl**dy b**tards!

k is listenin,walks a bit closer 2 him

her eyes r askin him,wht happened?

s-main,meri company no. 1 hai. main no. business man hun! par ye employees those mere employees! pehle to sincrely kaam nahi karte,har waqt chutti,jaldi jaana hai,ye wo.phir kuch karne ko kaho to bass!u knw kashsih!

k-hmm'

s-aaj it was like a poll on most job satisfied ppl,jis company mein job satisfaction is most employer keeps the employs happy & productive!

k-oh i c. kya hua?

s-hona kya tha! those donkeys! u knw kya kaha meri company mein job satisfaction nahi,they r over worked stressed,& above all ill treated by me,& thr is no frndly relation between me & my employs!god damn it! kaam karne aae hain,office mein celebrate karne aae hain kya!!!!! 😡 aur phir kya haan,i am insensetive twrds them! saare ke saare bloody kaam chor! 😡

s is getiin furious

k saamne keeps his drink

he gulps it in one go!

s-thanxs i badly needed it!

k-hmm,abb suno meri baat dhyaan se, dimaag thanda karke,gussa bhulke

s looks at her lik,say

k-sujal! shayad kahin naa kahin wo sahi hain!

s-wht??????????? tum bhi!!!!!!!!!! tum bhi aisa! haan main hi galat hun naa! 😡

gusse se uthke jaane lagta hai

she calmly holds his hand & gestures him to sit

k-sujal hamesha tum sahi ho aur wo insaan galat jo tumse position me chotta hai ye sach to nahi naa.bolo.dimag garam karke kuch nahi hoga,problem hai to problem ka solution kya hai.tumhare employs ne aisa kaha ,koi to reason hoga naa.kya tumhe lagta hai,ur truly friendly with them. wo zyadatar waqt office mein guzarte hain,they shld lik the place & atmosphere hai naa.offcourse u'l remain thr boss who will give them direction,par director aur dictator hone mein fark hota hai,hai naa!agar inse kaam lena hai to tumhe bhi kuch hadd tak inko samajhna hoga,dosti badani hogi.mutual understndin nahi hogi to kaam kaise hoga.kaho agar main kuch galat keh rahi hun to.

s doesnt say anythin for a while

s-to abb?

k-abb ek idea hai

s-idea? kaisa idea?

k-tumhe unse dosti badhani hai,agar tum chahte ho ki wo tumse darre naa balki tumhari respect karein to for makin them at ease with u jst simply,throw a party!

s-party??????????

k-haan,party for ur employes,par plz no formal office party.total dhinchak kind party ki jisse unhe bhi pata lage ki thr boss is not a dud but a dude!


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