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Posted: 17 years ago
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only 7 comments 😭 come on ppl u can do better
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update
continue sooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks to all those who left comments,it really means a lot to me,n i will post the next part,just gimme few minutes 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 11

Kanya waved at him.He walks up to her smiling n looking happy

R:hi Kanya
K:hey Ranbir guess what!!Jay n i are dating!!!

Ranbir was heartbroken.How can she date Jay????

R:what???u r dating him??how can u date him??
K:relax yaar,chill.I'm not REALLY dating him.(haha scared ya 😉 😉 😉 )he just wants to make Prachi jealous
R:huh?i'm confused 😕 😕
K:u see earlier 2day Jay told Prachi how he feels about her,but Prachi took it as a joke n made him feel bad,so he came to me to be his PRETEND girlfriend to make Prachi jealous,u get what i'm saying?
R:(was relieved)oh u scared me for a sec.i thought u were REALLY dating him
K:how can i scare u??n what's wrong with dating Jay???he is a nice guy
R:yea but........but......u know.....it's just that......(couldn't find any excuse)

Just then the professor came in.Ranbir was saved.He took his seat n was trying to forget the whole thing.But Kanya wanted to know why,why she couldn't date Jay???but she didn't ask him.When the class was over Kanya told Ranbir not to tell anyone about this.Just then they saw Jay walking up to them n Prachi was in front of him.He winked at Kanya to start the dramma

J:hey babe

Prachi turned around n thought Jay was talking to her.She got mad,she was about to say something to him but then Jay walked past her n went n hugged Kanya.

J:how r u doing sweetheart??
K:good what about u babe?
J:fine as well

Prachi saw this n was boiling with anger😡.How could this happen??Prachi got really mad n left.Ranbir on the other hand was getting jealous as well,even tho he knew that they were faking it.Kanya n Jay were still in the hugging position.Ranbir got really irritated.

R:guys she's gone

Kanya n Jay broke off the hug n high 5 each other

K:Jay i don't think this is right
J:i know it's not right,but don't u watch Kuchh Is Tara 😉 Akashdeep is trying to make Dimple jealous so she would realize that she really loves him
K:yea
J:so we r doing the same thing
K:(smiles)u really like that show don't u?
J:yup,now come on we have to make Prachi even MORE jealous

So for the past few weeks,Jay n Kanya were acting like a cute couple to make Prachi jealous.n it was working,Prachi was boiling with jealousy.She wanted to be happy for Kanya,but she couldn't cuz she was dating someone SHE LIKES

P:(thinks)am i falling in love with Jay???no this can't be happening.i hate him or do i???

Few weeks later,the whole gang were having lunch together.Jay was feeding Kanya which was making Prachi really jealous,so was Ranbir,even tho he knew they just pretending.

K:mm this pickle is really good
J:yea 1 of the best pickle i've ever had
N:what is a pickle anyway??
J:well it starts of life as a cucumber
K:and.....
J:it hits puberty n turns into a pickle?i don't know just eat your pickle

Just then Diya(me 😉 )came n handed the whole gang tickets.

D:here(handed everyone the tickets)
I:what's this?
D:this my dear is a ticket
K:for what?
D:for a cruise
K:really wow!!
J:but why?
D:it's your prize for winning the competition
I:awesome
R:cool but i can't go
K:why??
P:yea Ranbir why?
R:i just don't want to(he didn't wanted to go cuz he will see Kanya with Jay n he'll feel bad)
K:oh come on Ranbir u have to,come plez for me?
R:(smiles)fine

Ranbir just couldn't say no to Kanya.Prachi didn't wanted to go either cuz of Jay,but then she thought that she wasn't gonna let Jay ruin her fun.She wanted to be strong so she decided to go as well

K:cool so everyone is going
J:cool n who knows,this trip might bring something new to us(looking at Prachi)

hope u guys liked it plez comment
Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
i love it
pls update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update
continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^ ^that's the plan make Prachi jealous n thanks for commenting u guys i will post the next part real soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was damn nice.
make prachi and ranbir come close like jay and kanya and make the latter jealous its just a suggestion .sorry if u think it is unneccessary
Edited by mimas_ence - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
lol i loved how u menthoined the show lol =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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....::::Part 12::::....


Everyone packed their clothes n left for the cruise.The whole gang were really excited.When the ship took off the gang were waving goodbye to everyone.Jay was right beside Prachi,while she was waving,Jay grabbed her hand,Prachi noticed,it felt strange,strange but good.Prachi smiled but didn't show it.Then later on Jay let go of her hand

J:oh sorry i thought u were me Kanya

Hearing that Prachi felt a bit upset.His Kanya?????

J:Kanya baby where were u???(goes n hugs her)
K:(whispers)Jay i think u'r doing a bit too much,she is upset now
J:(whispers back)don't worry,everything will be ok

They break off the hug

I:ok lets get to our room n freshen up a little n we'll meet for lunch.kk?
N:sounds like a plan to me

They all go to their rooms,n get settled.Then they meet for lunch(don't worry no pickle scene here lol 😛 )

I:k so guys what's the plan
P:plan?
I:yea what r we gonna do today?
N:oo how bout this?
K:what is that?

Neha hands her a little card.It was an invitation to a party.

I:cool so guess we'r all going
R:sounds like a plan to me
J:cool so we'll meet at 8:00
P&K&N:k

It was 8:00,the whole gang met up at the hall where they were having the party.The girls were dressed up looking hot as ever.

Prachi wore something like this

it was simple yet nice

Neha wore something like this


Kanya wore something like this


The boys couldn't take their eyes off the girls.They were all dancing together.Then a slow song came on.Neha & Iqbal were dancing together.Jay & Kanya were dancing together

K:Jay i think u should dance with Prachi
J:no if i do then she won't get jealous,this is the perfect opportunity to make Prachi jealous
K:Jay u'r too much
J:plez just stay with me
K:fine(rolls her eyes)

On the other hand,Prachi was getting upset that Jay didn't ask her to dance.But Ranbir saw her n felt bad.

R:hey Prachi,wanna dance(brings out his hand)
P:(gives a soft smile)sure

They both start dancing together.Kanya saw them dancing together really close.All of the sudden Kanya felt a bit anger inside her.She didn't know why.They were still dancing together,Prachi noticed Jay n Kanya were looking at her n Ranbir,as soon she turned to them they turned back.She saw Jay was telling Kanya something funny n she was laughing.Prachi remembered how Jay use to tell her jokes n how she use to just ignore it.Prachi wanted to be happy for Kanya but she was with the man that she LOVED.That's right,Prachi just realized that she is in love with Jay.But Prachi couldn't say that to Kanya.They were still dancing together when something goes in Kanya's eye

K:ahh
J:what happend?
K:i think something went in my eye
J:here let me have a look

Jay went really close to Kanya.It looked like they were kissing,but they weren't.That was it for Prachi.She walked up to them,grabbed Kanya's hand n took her outside the hall.

K:Prachi,choro mujhe,how dare u??
P:how dare i??how dare u?
K:what?
P:how dare u dance with Jay?how dare u kiss him?
K:well he is my boyfriend n why do u care?
P:why do i care?WHY DO I CARE(she was about to blow up)because I LOVE HIM!!!!!
K:(sarcastically gasp)no
P:yes.I'M IN LOVE WITH JAY.I LOVE GOD DAMN IT!!!!
K:ok that's it Jay come on out

Prachi turns around n see Jay walking up to them.Prachi was confused.

P:what's going on?
K:meri pyari pyari Prachi.Jay n i were never dating
J:we just did to see if u love me or not
K:n look u do(laughs)
P:u guys r mean
J:(laughs)i'm sorry(hugs Prachi) i love u
P:(blushes)i love u too
K:i think i'll leave u two alone

Kanya left n Prachi n Jay kissed each other,then the kiss broke off into a hug,they hugged each other really tightly never wanting to let go of each other.

that's all for now folks
i need u'r comments,even if it's bad,i don't mind as long as u'r honest,that's all it matters

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