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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks for u'r comments,i will post the next part soon,but for now plez check out my 2 vms of RanKan,i made them long time ago tho but still plez do check them out here r the links
Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai

Zara Sa

enjoy n plez tell me what u think 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
great VM's! 👏
continue with your FF soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
hi jst read da whole thing its awesome!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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....::::Part 10::::....

It was the first day of university.The gang met at the courtyard before class n decided to meet up at the cafeteria after class.Kanya n Ranbir were both nervous.Mostly Kanya,cuz she didn't really know anyone in her class.When she entered the room she saw a familiar face.It was Ranbir.

K:(thinks)at least i know someone here

She walks up to Ranbir

K:hey Ranbir
R:oh hey
K:looks like we r in the same class
R:yea come sit

They both sat together.Both Ranbir n Kanya felt relieved that they were in the same class together.After their first class,Ranbir n Kanya found out that they both had same classes.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
At The Cafeteria

The gang met up

N:so how's u'r class u guys?
J:oh i don't know, i was sleeping the whole time
I:hey me too(high 5's Jay)
P:(rolls her eyes)well my class was very interesting.i saw a rally cute boy there(looking at Jay with a sly smile)

Jay got mad

N:cool,so Ranbir Kanya how was u'r class?
K:good
N:u weren't nervous?
K:well first yea but then i saw Ranbir at ALL my classes
N:wow cool
They all had lunch n went back to their class.Days past by like that n there were only few moths left of university.On day at university Diya(me)has announced something

D:may i have u'r attention plez

Everybody was busy doing their own thing

D:i said may i have u'r attention plez

Still no response.That was it for Diya.

D:(shouts)YO LISTEN UP!!!!!

Everybody finally stops n stares at her

D(smiles)thank u.now the reason i have to asked for u'r attention is cuz we r going to be entering an "All University Dance & Fashion Show"competition.3 girls n 3 boys will be chosen to represent our university.n they r............from the girls it's Kanya,Neha n Prachi n from the boys it's Ranbir,Iqbal n Jay.give them a round of applause,k so boys u will be doing the fashion show n girls u will be dancing.good luck u guys n make sure that we win.u guys can continue on what u were doing

The whole gang started practicing a lot,cuz the had to win.The competition finally arrived.They were the last ones to go.Mostly all the other school(university)did bad.The judges weren't impressed at all.

It was finally Mumbai University's turn.First it was the fashion show.The boys did their walk with the song "Hey Dude"from the movie Goal(i think it suits the scene cuz u can imagine them doing their walk n looking hot n having a cool attitude saying "don't mess with me"type.here is the link.

Hey Dude

Bandh Kafan Hum Sar Pe Chale Hain
Khake Kasam Hum Ghar Se Chale Hain
Saar Jho Uute Hain
Nahin Jhuke Gein

One by one,the boys did their walk.All the girls were going nuts.They looked hot.Jay was the first one to do his walk

Dekhle Duniya
Dekhe Zamana
Bade Ga Bhari
Saamne Aana
Ham Tho Hain Ziddi
Nahin Rukhe Gein
Himat Bhi Hain
Thaqat Bhi Hain
Aur Jheet Ki Chahat Bhi Hain
Thqrao Ge Tho Mit Jao Gein
Ke Hum Log Hain Deewane

He did his walk.He winked at the girls n they practically lost their balance.

Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Meee
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me

He walked back,n it was Iqbal's turn

[Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey]3
Hey Hey Hey Hey Heyyyyyyy

abse Thamanna Jag Gayi Hain
Dil Mein Hummare Aag Lagi Hain
Aag Yeh Humne Khud Hi Lagayi
Dihan Mein Hain Bas Eak Nishana
Kehdo Diya Hain Karke Dikhana
Aar Par Ki
Aab Hain Ladayi
Jo Thaan Badan Jo Jaan Hain
Sab Jheet Par Khurban Hain
Hum Kaun Hain
Hum Kaise Hain
Nikkle Hain Hum Nibhane

Iqbal did his walk n just pointed his figure at the girls n they all screamed

Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Meee
Hey Dude Dont Mess With Me

Iqbal walked back n it was Ranbir turn

[Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey]3
Hey Hey Hey Hey Heyyyyyyy

Aabse Humara Dil Kehta Hain
Jagwalo Kho Dikhade
Hum Jho Bhi Chahe Kar Sakte Hain
Karle Jho Hum Iradhe
Hum Aandhiyon Kho
Muthi Mein Leinge
Hum Tho Sammandaron
Par Chale Gein
Hum Yeh Kareinge
Hum Yeh Kiyye Hain
Jitne Bhi Khudse Waade

Ranbir did his walk the way he did in Kuchh Is Tara,n he blew a big kiss to all the girls,n they fainted

[Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey]3
Hey Hey Hey Hey Heyyyyyyy

All the girls were going nuts about the guys.Prachi Neha n Kanya were shocked at how good the guys were.The judges
were impressed.It was finally the girls turn.

They were on the stage sitting on a chair.They were wearing black shorts with belts n chains hanging down,with a plain white tank-top,with black boots,n a black hat.They were also black half-cut leather gloves(use u'r imagination to picture them).They danced to the song "Chhaliya"from the movie Tashan.here is the link to the song
Chhaliya

Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna
Aaa
Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna

Naaa… naa…

The girls gets up from their chair n kicks it back n starts dancing

K:Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya
Chhaliya chhaliya ohhh chhaliya
Haath na aao mein hu aisi chhaliya

P:Mmm
Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya
Chhaliya chhaliya ohhh chhaliya
Haath na aao mein hu aisi chhaliya

N:Oos lehar hu, dhoop sehar hu
Baath mehar hu
Bach ke jayega kahan

K:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that mahi
P:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that boy
N:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that mahi
All:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy

K:Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya
All:Ruh churalo mein hu aisi chhaliya(does a sexy pose)

K:Raat hun, taaro mein mil jaoo
Har mod pe mein aaho ki bahon mein khil jaoo
P:Chal hun, tujpe mein chal jaoo
Tu na janega kab baazi mein dhoke se maar jaoo
N:Bhikhre dil ka mein haal hun
Aur gulib ka mein khayal hun
K:Mein noor hun
P:mein hoor hun
N:Bach ke jayega kahan


K:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that mahi
P:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that boy
N:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:Don't look at me like that mahi
All:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy

Chhaliya chhaliya chhaliya

Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna
Aaa
Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehna

K:Mmm
Raaz hun, hoton ko sil jaoo
Tere hatoon se me reth banke phisal jaoo
P:Boond hun, tujhpe baras jaoo
Jo na buje, woh pyaas banke mein tarsaoo
N:Chalki pehali chaal hun
Mein sulja ulja jaal hun
K:Im the noor
P:Im the hoor
N:Tu jayega kahan

K:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:(shouts)Don't you look at me like that mahi
P:Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
All:(shouts to all the boys)Don't you look at me like that boy

Their performance was awesome.All the boys were cheering n going crazy.Ranbir Iqbal n Jay couldn't believe how well they danced,but mostly how hot they looked.They were impressed,so were the judges.

I:wow u guys were awesome
N:thanks.Kanya choreographed it
I:really?woow good job Kanya
J:yea u go girl
K:(laughs)thanks u guys
R:well done Kanya
K:thank(smiles like she was waiting for his comment)

Later on the judges announced the winner.It was none other than Mumbai University.The gang got up n took the trophy.Soon it was time to leave.Ranbir was dropping Kanya home.While they were at the parking lot,a bunch of goon or gundas or w/e u wanna call it comes n starts flirting with Kanya n does what the gundas usually do.Ranbir got really mad n was about to beat them up,but Kanya stopped him.Later on when they were walking he notices Kanya crying.That was it for Ranbir.He couldn't take it anymore.He ran back n beat up the guys real badly.Kanya saw the whole thing n couldn't believe that Ranbir was fighting for her.When Ranbir came back he had cuts,bruise n blood all over him.Kanya got really scared.She took Ranbir to his house.She cleaned all the blood n applied medicine

K:why did u do it?
R:do what?ow
K:the fight.why did u do it?
R:wo tumhe cher rahe the
K:to tumhe kya?
R:mujhe accha nehi laga
K:kyou?
R:tum meri sub se acchi dost ho,aur agar tumhe kuch ho jaye to mujhe bura lage ga
K:(smiles)thanks Ranbir

She gave him a soft kiss on the cheek

K:u'r a sweet guy(smiles n leaves)

Ranbir smiled n touched the spot where Kanya had kissed him.That kiss took all his pain away.He got up turned on the radio n changed his clothes.Then on the radio played the song "Kya Mujhe Pyar Hai"from the movie Woh Lamhe.He paid close attention to the lyrics

Kyon Aaj Kal neend kam Khwab zaada hai
Lagta Khuda ka koi neek iraada hai
Kal tha Fakeer aaj dil shezada hai
Lagta Khuda ka koi neek iraada hai

Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya

R:(thinks)is this really happening to me?am in love?

The next day at university,when Ranbir went to his locker he found a "Thank You" card n a red rose from Kanya.Ranbir just smiled.

R:(thinks)is she really the one?

When he went inside his classroom.He saw Kanya talking to her friends.She saw Ranbir n gave him a really sweet smile.

R:(thinks)yes she is the one.I'm in LOVE(smiles back n thinks)i love u Kanya,I LOVE YOU!!!!❤️❤️❤️

k u guys it's midnight n that's all i can do for now
hope u liked it
gimme at least 15 comments
come on people it's only 15 u can do it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
just read the entire fanfic.. cool fanfic.. .keep up the good work.. hope you continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
dat was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
little promo

Ranbir walks up to Kanya
R:hey Kanya
K:Ranbir guess what.Jay n I r dating!!!!!!!

plez don't kill me u guys 🤢 🤢 🤢
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
awww....tat was a nice update....cont soooon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
that was a brilliant update...
pls continue soom
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
dat was awesome ...plz update sooon!

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