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Posted: 17 years ago
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pleaz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wanna know what happens next!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
awww so cute
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
great update plzzzzzzzzzzz cotinue !!! 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks for commenting
u guys rock 😉

Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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....::::Part 14::::....

The next day Kanya woke up smiling. Thinking about how Ranbir confessed his love to her, then all of the sudden, Kanya's cell phone rang. It was a text message from Ranbir

"Good Morning jaan"

Kanya replied

"Good morning. Kya baat hai subha subha text message?"

Ranbir replied

"haan kya karo, tumhe miss bohut kar raha hoon"


Kanya just smiled n goes to the washroom. When she came out, she saw her bed had red rose peddles saying "I Love You" Kanya was surprised. She started blushing n smiling. Then all of the sudden somebody grabbed her from the back. It was Ranbir. He picked her up n spun her around a couple of times then both fell on the bed laughing.

K: tum yaha kyou aya?
R: kaisa laga mera surprise?
K: tumhe kya lagta hai?
R: ummm…… well agar tumhe acha laga to tum mujhe kiss karo gi, aur agar bura laga to mujhe apni kamre se bahar nikal dogi
K: tik hai then get up
R: what?
K: out
R: but Kanya
K: I said out

She pushes Ranbir out the door

R: but Kanya, does that mean u don't like my surprise?

Then Kanya gives him a really long kiss

K: (slow sexy voice) what do u think? (winks at him n shuts her door)

Ranbir just stands there for a while n smiles

R: she is so cute

Kanya heard what Ranbir said n blushed. After that everybody met for breakfast. Then the whole day, all 3 couples were somewhere alone being all lovey-dovey. In the evening they would watch the sunset together. It was a beautiful sight. Beautiful bright colors surrounded by the clear blue sea. Ranbir would hold Kanya in his arms, Kanya would rest her head on his chest n Ranbir rest his head on top of hers. Both never wanted to let go of each other, wished that the time would just stop n they would stay like that forever. That was how the whole gang spent their days at the cruise. One afternoon Ranbir n Kanya were sitting together n talking when Jay came.

J: hey u love birds
R&K: hey Jay
R: sup man
J: Ranbir I wanna marry her
R: Jay how could u marry Kanya? I thought u love Prachi
J: oh shut up man, I'm saying that I wanna marry Prachi
K: aww really?
J: well…yea. I want to spend the rest of my life with her
R: great man I'm so happy for u
J: thanks bro
K: so when r u gonna propose to her?
J: that's the thing, I need u'r help
R: I'll help u bro
K: u know I'll do anything for u guys
R: what about me jaan-e-man? (smirks)
K: (slow sexy voice) u too my darling

They both start to kiss when Jay interrupts

J: uhh hello enough with the lovey-dovey man I need u'r help so r u in?
R&K: yes!
J: cool
K: so when r u gonna do it?
J: I'll think about that, but one thing is for sure, when we go back to Mumbai, Prachi will be wearing the ring
R: well u better do it soon cuz we will be in Mumbai in like few days
J: (sarcastically) thanks man that's just what I need MORE PRESSURE!!!!!!!!!!
K: (laughs) it's ok yaar we said we'll help u
J: thanks Kanya

With that Jay leaves

K: Prachi is so lucky to have Jay
R: I know
K: hey when r u gonna propose to me?
R: ummm let's see……..uhhhhh (pretends to think) NEVER!!!!!!!!
K: what? (starts hitting him lightly) I hate u
R: (laughs) but I love u (hugs her n gives her a quick kiss oh the check)


i know i know not so good i'm sorry but it'll get better trust me

precap
J:will u marry me Prachi?
P:no!!!!!!


DON'T KILL ME U GUYS

Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago
Seebz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
such a wonderful update continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
that was a wonderful update...
pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
👏 👏 👏 brill so far continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
come on ppl i need more comments,don't u wanna know why Prachi said no to Jay????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
really cute update!
wuts wit prachi sayin no?
well better tell us y!
and pllz continue soon!!

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