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Posted: 17 years ago
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...:::Part 7:::...
Recap Prachi,Neha n Kanya plan for the dance
Jay n Ranbir r getting happy after seeing someone

J:Ranbir u have to come
R:i don't want to
"But u have to man"says a guy
Ranbir n Jay turn around n gets happy to see Iqbal(yesi have added the ever so hot Iqbal Khan)
R:array Iqbal tu yaha?(gives a manly hug)
I:haa woh kya hai na meri girlfriend ne university mein ek dance plan kiya hai to iss liya kuch kapdre kharid ne aaya hoon.Aur usse kal kuch mada chahiye,r u in?
R:sure why not
J:hey!I've been trying to convince u for the past 2 hours n u kept on ignoring me n when he asks u,u say yes?
R:yea,cuz he wasn't annoying me like u(starts to walk away)
Jay just opens his n Iqbal just laughs
I:it's good to have u back Ranbir
R:good to be back
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
The Next Day
Prachi,Neha n KAnya were at the university setting up the place.Neha played some music so they won't get bored.They started dancing n working at the same time.Just then Jay,Iqbal n Ranbir came in.
I:hey baby(smiles)
N:hey(hugs Iqbal)(btw they r dating 😉)
I:Ranbir this is my girlfriend Neha
N:hi
R:hi
J:hey Prachi
P:(rolls her eyes)hello Jay
J:u need some help?
P:yea put these over there
Everyone gets busy.Ranbir just walks around getting bored,when he saw a girl standing on a ladder.It was Kanya,but he didn't know that.
K:(thought it was Neha)Neha pass the tape
Ranbir didn't say anything n hands her the tape n smiles(he still doesn't know that it's Kanya)
K:thanks
Kanya starts to climb down but falls back but Ranbir catches her.They have an eye-lock.The song Tum Se Hi plays in the bg

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

They were lost in each others eyes

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati
Tumse hi tumse hi

The world around them had stopped

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse

They didn't care that everyone was looking at them

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

P:hello
Ranbir n Kanya finally gets back to their senses.Ranbir lets go of Kanya
K:tum yaha?
R:yea i'm going to be studying here n i'm guessing so r u
K:yea n thanks again for saving me again
R:hey no prob glad i could help
P:tum dono ek dusre ko jaan te ho?
R&K:yes(both laughs)
I:well well well who is she jaan?
N:well she is my best friend Kanya n Kanya this is the love of my life Iqbal
They both say hi n everyone gets back to work.Everyone was with partner.Neha n Iqbal (who were mostly making out),Jay n Prachi(Jay was trying to impress Prachi kept making himself looks like a fool)Ranbir n Kanya.They made a very good team.They were the first ones to finsih,then they helped the others.Soon all the decorations were done.Everyone was tired from all the work.They all grabbed a cup of coffee to get changed to the dance
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
At The Dance
All the people at the dance loved the decorations.When the 3 girls came in they all clapped for their awesome job.Finally the boys came n were shocked to see the girls
I:wow Neha u look hot
N:it's all for u babe
They hug n starts to kiss
P:okay get a room u 2
They both stopped n started blushing.Prachi,Kanya n Ranbir started to laugh.Jay was just staring at Prachi with his mouth open
R:ab bass bhi kar(closes his mouth)
Kanya starts to laugh n Ranbir notices her n stares at her beauty
R:(thinks)wow kitni khubsurat lag rahi hai
Kanya notices Ranbir was looking at her,she looks at him but he turns away.
K:(thinks)hmm he doesn't look that bad
Everyone starts to dance.Neha n Iqbal were dancing together(looking cute as ever),after asking a million times Prachi fianlly said yes to Jay,Ranbir n Kanya were left alone.They were left alone at the table
R:wanna dance?(brings out his hand)
K:sure(takes his hand)
They startes dancing un till a slow song came on.It was Pheli Nazar Mein from the movie Race.Ranbir takes Kanya hand n puts it on his shoulder,he takes his hand n wraps it around Kanya's waist,Kanya felt a shiver in her spine.They start dancing.

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

They gazed into each others eys

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

He spines her around n her back is facing him now

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

Prachi saw them Dancing n took a pic

P:say cheese
(((((((((((((((FLASH)))))))))))))))))))
The dance was all most over.They all danced to 1 last song.Manzar from the movie Sunday.The dance was finally over n they all go home.Ranbir was dropping everyone off.He already dropped the boys so it was only him n the girls
P:hey Kanya u'r staying at my house today remember??
K:oh yea but i don't have my clothes with me
P:it's cool i already talked to u'r mom she packed it for u.Ranbir can u plez take Kanya to her house then bring her back to mine?
R:sure why not
K:r u sure?
R:yea totally
Ranbir drops Prachi n Neha to Prachi apartment.
K:u really don't have to do this
R:hey u'r my friend.friends help friends
Kanya smiles.Ranbir smiles back n they start driving

ok guys that's all i can do for today.plez leave me u'r comments.hope u liked it
Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
great update! loved it
hope they realize there love soon
please continue soon 😊
Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
great update... pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
wow bootiful part yaar plz update soon...x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
gr8 updates yaar i havent been on IF in a while cuz of hw. HW SUXZ. Anyway ignore me and cant wait till prachi and jay fall in luv and if u make rabir's car get stuck ooo that would b awesome but im just throwin ideas here and there. Cant wait 4 the next update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
only 4 comments???is my story that bad??? 😭 i have lot of viewers but i don't have that much comments 😭 plez tell me what u think of it even if it's bad,i don't mind,as long as u'r honest,plez leave more comments. 😭i really wanna know what u think of the story.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
are you kidding me?!? its a great story! 👏
cant wait to find out what happens next:)
continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
excellent part.. continue soon... can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
thank u guys i will update the next part soon,just gimme few minutes
Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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....::::Part 8::::....

Recap-Ranbir gives Kanya a ride home

K:u really don't have to do this
R:hey u'r my friend,friends help friends
Kanya smiles.Ranbir smiles back n starts to drive.While Ranbir was driving he put some music on.Ranbir started singing n asked Kanya to join,but she refused,but after a while when the song "Khwab Dekhe" from the movie Race came on she started sing.

K:Khwab De Ke Jhoote Moote,
Batiya Banaye Kaise
Sajna Anari Baiman

Hey Mista
You Say You Want Me As Your Lova
But Tell Me Now
Are You A Player
Say What Ah
Chika Chika

R:(joined in)Jabhi Dekhe Tujhko Nazar
Baby Ghayal Ho Jaye Jigar
O O O Ho Hoho
Hai Mere Hai Sason Ka
Asar Baby Tujhko Manu Hamsafar

Teri Har Ada Ne Mujh Pe
Yeh Kaisa Jadoo Kiya Re
Love's The Game I Wanna Play
I Am Craving For Your Body Now

R&K:Khwab De Ke (Sexy)
Jhoote Moote (Lady)
Batiya Banaye (Kiss Me)
Kaise Sajna (Crazy)
Anari Baiman (Be My Baby
Baby…Give Me All Your Love Me Now

K:Kaise Batau Tujhe Baat Jiya Ki
Janu Main To Janu Sari Chaal Piya Ki

Jaan Mera Loote Loote
Ratiyan Jagaye Mujhe
Sajna Anari Baiman
Ah…Chika Chika…
Jaan Mera Loote Loote
Ratiyan Jagaye Mujhe
Sajna Anari Baiman

R:Saaasien Hai Behki Behki
Pagal Armaan Mere
Sochu Har Pal Main Chu Lun
Bhigey Yeh Lab Tere
Kaise Mushkil Hai Yara
Kaise Na Kar Pau
Aise Nashe May
Main Deewana Na Ho Jau
Lyricsmasti.Com
Waqt Madhosh Hai
Mujhko Na Hosh Hai
Love's The Game I Wanna Play
I Am Craving For Your Body Now

R&K:Khwab Dekhe (Sexy)
Jhoote Moote (Lady)
Batiya Banaye (Kiss Me)
Kaise Sajna (Crazy)
Khaladi Baiman (Feed My
Baby…Give Me All Your Love Me Now

K:Hey Mista
You Say You Want Me As Your Lova
But Tell Me Now
Are You A Player
Say What Ah
Chika Chika 2

Ranbir n Kanya both singing like crazy n were enjoying themselves.Then came a slow song "Take Me To Love" from Bride & Prejudice(i really liked that song n thought it would fit the scene,both driving in the middle of the night,relaxing n listening to a romantic song u know?...)plez click here

Take Me To Love

They both stopped singing and listened to the song.Kanya had a soft smile n laid back n enjoyed the ride.Ranbir was driving,then he looked at Kanya n just admired her beauty in the moonlight.They finally reached Kanya's house.
K:u know u can go home.i don't mind.i'll take a taxi or something.i don't want to put too much trouble.
R:it's ok yaar,u go i'll wait for u
K:(smiles)thanks
Kanya get out of the car n goes in the house.Ranbir was watching her leave.
R:(thinks)how sweet,she doesn't want to put me in trouble(smiles)
Few minutes later,Kanya comes back with a bag.She gets in the car.
K:chale?
R:(smiles)let's go
While they were driving the song "Aao Milo Chale"from the movie Jab We Met started playing.Both didn't talk through the whole ride.They finally reached PRachi's appartment.
K:thanks for the ride
R:dosti mein,no "sorry"no "thank u"
K:(smiles)k then bye(gets out of the car)
R:bye(leaves happily)
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
At The Appartment
Prachi n Neha were dancing n playing around like little kids.As soon as Kanya came in both girls hit her with pillows.
K:hey not fair,i don't even have a pillow
Prachi hands her a pillow n they have their pillow fight.After a while they stopped n rested for a while.They started talking about girl stuff.When the ystarted talking about boys,Prachi started teasing Kanya.
P:u n Ranbir make a pretty cute couple
K:what?kya bukwuass kar rahi ho?
P:nehi such keh rahi hoon
K:to main bhi ek such kaho?
P:haan haan kaho
K:tum aur Jay bhi mash-allah
Prachi gets mad n starts hitting Kanya with a pillow.Neha tried to stop them but both Kanya n Prachi started hitting her,so she ended up joining as well.After a good long pillow fight,everybody went to sleep.Everybody except Kanya.She went to the balcony n stared at the moon n was thinking about tonight,how she danced with Ranbir n just smiles.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Back To Ranbir
Ranbir was in his room,also out in the balcony looking at them moon n thinking about Kanya,how they danced tonight n how they were singing in the car.He smiles.After a while both Ranbir n Kanya take 1 last look at the moon n went to sleep.

that's all i can do for now
hope u liked it
i need at least 10 comments
come on people it's only 10,i know u can do it
Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago

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