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Zaara

@ZaraCZaara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

ooo let me guess, prachi's humsafar 😉 2 luv stories plzzzzz
ignore me im an idiot but ur work is fantastic, continue soon!

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Sadiya

@diya219

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

thanks to those who commented.n thanks to all the silent readers(if there is any lol)n Zarra no u r not an idiot actually u r going on the right track 😃

....::::Part 5::::....
V:hey dude!!!!!
Ranbir turns around n sees a guy with kiss mark all over his face
R:(shakes his head)tu kabhi nahi sudhre ga Jay
J:ab maine kya kiya hai?(looking innocent)ab ye ladkiyan maere piche parti hai to main kya karo??
Ranbir n Jay both starts laughing n gives each other a manly hug,n heads home.Ranbir n Jay were talking in the car when Jay's cell phone rings
J:hello
"Ranbir ka plane land hoa kya?"
J:ha land hoa hai aur main usse la kar aa raha hoon
"Tik hai main rak ti hoon"
R:kyon tha?
J:aur kyon.teri maa.aaj subha se sub ka saar kha chuki hai.ke Ranbir ke liya yeh,Ranbir ke liya wo kar.bohut excited hai
R:ye maa bhi na
Ranbir n Jay finally reach home.When Ranbir entered the house,everyone was happy to see him.He was also happy to see his family again.Later on he gave everybody gifts,n everyone was happy.After that they had dinner n everyone went to sleep,except for Ranbir.For some reason,he can't go to sleep.He was thinking about Kanya,how she was grooving to the music,how he saved her from falling,how they talked n how she hugged him.He couldn't take his mind off of Kanya.
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Kanya on the other hand was thinking about Ranbir.
Pa:Kanya beti soo joa,raat bohut ho chuki hai.
K:ok mama good night
She takes a look at the moon n smiles n goes to sleep

precap-P:plez Kanya plez mari madad karo
why was Prachi asking Kanya for help?????

Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

great update
please continue soon! 😊

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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hey just cught upid ur story and its koool hope u update soon n make it longer lol ;)

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Sadiya

@diya219

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

....::::Part 6::::....

In the morning,Prachi comes to Kanya's house.
P:morning aunty
Pa:morning putter aj tu subha subha a gai
P:ha wo Kanya ko kuch university ki baat batani hai
Pa:accha tik hai,wo ouper kamre me hai
Prachi walks up to Kanya's room n sees that she was still sleeping.She tried waking her up,but she wouldn't wake up
P:hmm.........u leave me no choice Kanya
Prachi takes a glass of cold water n pours it on Kanya face
K:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Kanya jumps out of bed,her face was freezing
K:WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH U???!!!!!
P:i had no choice,u weren't waking up,anywayz i need u'r help
K:with what???
P:decorating for a dance
K:what?
P:u see every year our university has a dance before the it starts.n my friend Neha is planning it,n she needs all the help she can get,so can plez help me??plez Kanya Neha ki mada karo(i added a new character to the story.she was the girl that played Kripa in Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai)
K:sure but when is the dance??
P:tomorrow
K:how r we gonna do everything by tomorrow??
P:don't worry Neha will get more help.now let's go meet her
K:k
Kanya gets ready n goes out with Prachi to meet Neha.They meet at a caff'
P:hey Neha
N:hey Prachi
Both hugged
P:well this is Kanya.the 1 i told u about
N:yea hi I"m Neha
K:Kanya
Both hugged n sat down
P:guess what??Kanya is going to help us with the dance
N:really??that's great.I"v got Jay to help us too.he said that he'll try to bring his other friend to help as well
All of the sudden Prachi got irritated
K:kya hoa Prachi?
N:wo main batati hoon.wo Jay mera dost hai.magar Prachi usse pasand nahi karta
P:only cuz he is a a show off.which i hate
N:ok ok chill.let's go shopping.we need to get our dresses
P:k
K:sounds cool to me
So they go to the mall n try out a bunch of dresses until they found the right one
Neha bought a dress that looks something like this

Prachi bought something like this

And Kanya bought something like this

When their shopping was done they go n buy a smoothie
P:by the way when Jay gonna come??
N:ooo looks like somebody is dying to meet Jay(smiles)
P:what shut up(hits Neha)
Kanya just laughs
K:so when r we gonna start decorating?
N:tomorrow
P:when?
N:we'll meet around 11:00,n don't worry Jay will be there too
P:shut up
K:will be able to finish?
N:yup don't worry
K:k then i'm gonna go,see u guys tomorrow then bye
N&P:bye
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
At the mall
J:Ranbir u have to come
R:but i don't want to
"But u have to man" says a guy
Ranbir n Jay turn around n get happy
who is the guy???
hope u liked it

Edited by diya219 - 17 years ago