**Captured By Love** POLL p.43 - Page 5

wow!! soo goood!!!
the murder was cruel
but amusing in its own way
like how armaan was like "i didn't get to shoot him" lol!!
but this is what happens to traitors!!!
and awww they are gonna kidnap the pretty ladies!!
so armaan is a softie!!
he is already smitten by the girl in the photograph while angad juss looked at her once and didn't bother for anything else!!

neways awesome prologue!! can't wait for kripa's and ridz part!! loooved it!! 😃

gr8 part
oo the murder was cruel but it was amusing at same time
cont soon

very well written numzyyyyy.....I loved ittt:D cant wait for the kidnapping!! hehe
I guess armaan is already attracted to riddhima....I hope angad is attracted to kripa soon.....
u finished college?!?!?!....how luckyyy...i had my first exam today!! i finish next friday! lol

gr8 part numera 😛 👏
loved the armaan and angad's entry 😳 😉
eagerly waiting for girl's entry 😛
aaww looks like armaan is already in love 😳 😉
plz cont soon 😳 👏
by the way can you please post a schedule of your updates for this ff 😛

nice part...its really interesting..i love thriller romance stories..hehe..cont soon! 😃

ahh!! loved the prologue! i like angad and armaan's entrance. can't wait for kripa and ridhimaa's entry! plz continue with the next part!

Awesome prologue 😃 , can't wait until Kripa and Ridhimaa come in, and their story starts 😉. You right very well, and with a lot of good description. 👏 👏 👏

awesome prolugue; I like it. the story is exactly fit to the charcters. armaan soft hearted in a corner but still loves fun; you could tell with the extra bullet he shot and then his soft corner on seeing ridimaa's pic. angad cold hearted; totally devoted to his job; noticed the beautiful girl but didnt let her get in the way. awesome , I really liked it. hmm, lets see how it goes when they clash into kripa and ridimaa. lovely part. welcome back 😊

great part cont soon!!
amazing i cant waittt for the next part

The prolouge was absoloutly mindblowing!!....Really liked the way how you described everything....starting from the AA's personality, to their appearance...and to the scenes themselves...

AA bad boy image is certainlly HOT!!! 😳

I couldnt picture the whole scene right in front of my eyes.....with AA going after the guy to betrayed Dilip...and him trying to escape form them....everything looked to mysterious and suspenseful...

And when Armaan was like come out come out where ever you are...was a great touch...it added a slight humor in the middle...and when Armaan shots the guy again saying that he didnt get a chance was quite funny 😆 ..

Omg so Rhidimaa and Kripa's dad is also involved in the undersworld?? 😕 ....It seems like him and dilip might be rivals...and this might be the secret which he is hiding from his daughters....wonder how they will react to it once they find out....they certainly wouldnt be happy tahts for sure

Aww....how cute Armaan is alreday attracted to Rhidimaa...and he was so nervous and worried about her 😃 ....

Angad on the other hand didnt really feel anything...it seems like he has buried his desires deep inside of him...once he changed after gettiing into this profession...and he thinks about nothing beyond his proffession and his dad....but lets see if Kripa will be able to bring back the old angad....

Cant wait for the kidnapping and the intros of the girls...It will indeed be really interesting 😉 ...

great start cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏