**Captured By Love** POLL p.43 - Page 6

Awesome prologue! What a dark and insensitive world that our two heroes (well, hopefully future heroes) inhabit...Looking forward to chapter 1!

fab part
looks like Arman is smitten by Ridz...
continue soon

Originally posted by: tangina r

when will u continue? 😊

at night today probably, i going to hang out with my old roomie today so when i get back ill post it.

hey great prolouge.. continue soon.. 👏

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!! 👏

Hey Numera...
yaar m so glad u finally started ur nxt ff...
i loved the concept alot... nd cant waaaaiiiit 4 u 2 continue.. Angad nd armi seem heartless as thr willing 2 kill 2 innocent ppl. .. but eventually it'll change when they fall in love 😳

plz pm me when u update if u can
xx

😊

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Hey great concept.
Please continue soon.

thanks soo much! 😊

Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

OMG! Awesome character skecth! I have always loved your ff's! Can't wait to read this one! It sounds so intresting and i love the way you used back and red! 😉

thanks a ton! lol i love black and red together-- it looks wicked to me 😊

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice prologue
waitin for ur first part

thank so much! 😊

Originally posted by: tangina r

this is really interesting!!! cnt wait till i read more

i love armaan's charactrer😳 but the best thing i love is the description u put into ur writing like "forest green eyes" if i was a guy & had never seen Ridhima before nd i had read about her through ur ff then i would hve fallen in love with her tht instant nd the other thing i love is the versitality in ur writting after sweet revenge this was least expected and i like it😃😃

aww thank you so much! that's really sweet of you to say 😳! yes, i actually like changing the story topics up when i start a new one because i want to write about different things and different situations. haha one could also think that i may be getting depressed or something cuz my ff's are getting darker as i write more like from dosti mein pyaar to sweet revenge to captured by love... BUT IM NOT DEPRESSED LOL (just in case you were wondering, i wanted to clear that up)

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

wow!! soo goood!!!
the murder was cruel
but amusing in its own way
like how armaan was like "i didn't get to shoot him" lol!!
but this is what happens to traitors!!!
and awww they are gonna kidnap the pretty ladies!!
so armaan is a softie!!
he is already smitten by the girl in the photograph while angad juss looked at her once and didn't bother for anything else!!

neways awesome prologue!! can't wait for kripa's and ridz part!! loooved it!! 😃

i wanted it to be slightly comical, but not take away from the cruelty of the murder. i wanted even the humour to come out cruel. yes armaan is a sweetie at heart, but he understands his profession takes precedence above all. thanks so much!

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part
oo the murder was cruel but it was amusing at same time
cont soon

lol glad u thought so! thanks!!!

Originally posted by: **~SoniHinnU~**

very well written numzyyyyy.....I loved ittt:D cant wait for the kidnapping!! hehe
I guess armaan is already attracted to riddhima....I hope angad is attracted to kripa soon.....
u finished college?!?!?!....how luckyyy...i had my first exam today!! i finish next friday! lol

thanks a bunch! yup armaan is attracted, and we'll c about angad. yup i finished, but i wish i was back at college cuz its so much fun with my friends. its so boring at home.

Originally posted by: rima791

gr8 part numera 😛 👏
loved the armaan and angad's entry 😳 😉
eagerly waiting for girl's entry 😛
aaww looks like armaan is already in love 😳 😉
plz cont soon 😳 👏
by the way can you please post a schedule of your updates for this ff 😛

thanks soo much! actually right now im sorta having problems writing quickly with this ff so the updates are going to be up whenever i finish writing them. since its summer, i sometimes have unexpected plans come up so it also makes it hard. ill try to mention days ill post, but it will be difficult to determine exactly when. sorry sweety!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

nice part...its really interesting..i love thriller romance stories..hehe..cont soon! 😃

thanks so much!!

Originally posted by: prabhi

ahh!! loved the prologue! i like angad and armaan's entrance. can't wait for kripa and ridhimaa's entry! plz continue with the next part!

thanks a bunch!!

Originally posted by: 26javey26

👏 cant wait for the next part

thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Annie_14

Awesome prologue 😃 , can't wait until Kripa and Ridhimaa come in, and their story starts 😉. You right very well, and with a lot of good description. 👏 👏 👏

thanks a ton! glad ur liking it so far!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , mindblowing 👏 👏 👏

thank you!!! 😊

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

awesome prolugue; I like it. the story is exactly fit to the charcters. armaan soft hearted in a corner but still loves fun; you could tell with the extra bullet he shot and then his soft corner on seeing ridimaa's pic. angad cold hearted; totally devoted to his job; noticed the beautiful girl but didnt let her get in the way. awesome , I really liked it. hmm, lets see how it goes when they clash into kripa and ridimaa. lovely part. welcome back 😊

thanks so much!! yea i tried to mold the characters to fit armaan and angad's personalities. kripa and riddhima i just decided to make spoiled and stubborn.

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part cont soon!!
amazing i cant waittt for the next part

thanks so much! 😊

Originally posted by: *MitiRasmalai*

The prolouge was absoloutly mindblowing!!....Really liked the way how you described everything....starting from the AA's personality, to their appearance...and to the scenes themselves...

thanks soo much!

AA bad boy image is certainlly HOT!!! 😳

I love bad boys in stories, they make it mush more interesting! And its fun writing about hot guys who know they are smoking hot!

I couldnt picture the whole scene right in front of my eyes.....with AA going after the guy to betrayed Dilip...and him trying to escape form them....everything looked to mysterious and suspenseful...

thanks a lot! i was hoping u guys could see it!

And when Armaan was like come out come out where ever you are...was a great touch...it added a slight humor in the middle...and when Armaan shots the guy again saying that he didnt get a chance was quite funny 😆 ..

haha it was a random thought! lol Armaan is always funny so i had to make him lighten the mood in this ff!

Omg so Rhidimaa and Kripa's dad is also involved in the undersworld?? 😕 ....It seems like him and dilip might be rivals...and this might be the secret which he is hiding from his daughters....wonder how they will react to it once they find out....they certainly wouldnt be happy tahts for sure

lol you'll find out eventually!

Aww....how cute Armaan is alreday attracted to Rhidimaa...and he was so nervous and worried about her 😃 ....

Armaan is cute and he feels bad about kidnapping such a pretty girl.

Angad on the other hand didnt really feel anything...it seems like he has buried his desires deep inside of him...once he changed after gettiing into this profession...and he thinks about nothing beyond his proffession and his dad....but lets see if Kripa will be able to bring back the old angad....

Yup, Angad tries his hardest not to let distractions come in between his work, but with a beautiful girl like Kripa in front of his eyes maybe even his defence will crumble.

Cant wait for the kidnapping and the intros of the girls...It will indeed be really interesting 😉 ...

haha hopefully!

great start cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏

thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: indn inn0cence

yay!!! i'm sooooooooooo happy you started a new ff!!! [:D/]
i've loved all your fanfics and im sure i'm gonna love this one too! 😉
angad-kripa and armaan-ridz have alwayz been one of my fav. couples 😳
cant wait till you continue! 😛

aww thank you!! yup they are my favorite couples too and the hottest pairs ive seen on television. their chemistry together is just amazing.

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Awesome prologue! What a dark and insensitive world that our two heroes (well, hopefully future heroes) inhabit...Looking forward to chapter 1!

thanks so much! yes, it definitely is!

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
looks like Arman is smitten by Ridz...
continue soon

thanks so much! yup he is!

Originally posted by: tangina r

ok will be waitin^^ 😃

thanks!

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great prolouge.. continue soon.. 👏

thanks so much!!!

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!! 👏

thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

Hey Numera...
yaar m so glad u finally started ur nxt ff...
i loved the concept alot... nd cant waaaaiiiit 4 u 2 continue.. Angad nd armi seem heartless as thr willing 2 kill 2 innocent ppl. .. but eventually it'll change when they fall in love 😳

plz pm me when u update if u can
xx

lol thanks so much!!! well they just know they have to kidnap them so far, but they don't know what is to become of them just yet. yeah ill let u know!

Thanks for those awesome comments guys! I'll be posting Chapter 1 in like 10 min . Keep the comments coming!

Lots of Love,

Numera ❤️

Chapter 1

A large mansion is surrounded by beautiful tall green trees and majestic iron gates. There is security guarding the grounds to serve and protect the small family within. It is a three story building, created to look somewhat like a modern castle. The mansion has many rooms and some are even hidden from a few of the inhabitants. Those inhabitants include the two beautiful daughters of Shashank Gupta, who is the owner of this magnificent mansion and a known rich industrialist in India.

Currently those daughters of his are sprawled out on a large pink bed in what looks like their party dresses from last night. One girl has silky black hair covering her entire face while the other has dark brown tresses falling over her eyes. A maid comes into the room and sighs looking at the state of the two girls at this hour. Shaking her head, she makes her way to the window to pull apart the curtains and then leaves quietly. The sunlight fills the entire room and brushes against the sleeping beauties' eyelids. The brown haired girl reveals her chocolate brown eyes as they flutter open because of the sun's intrusion on her sleep. She groans and turns to see her sister's body twisted in all angles from her efforts to find a comfortable position. She wonders what her sister is doing in her room anyways, but brushes this thought aside as she notices the time displayed on the clock.

The brown eyed girl shakes her sister gently saying, "Riddhima wake up! It's already 12 o'clock!" Riddhima suddenly awakens and widens her forest green eyes as she glances at the clock. Riddhima smacks her forehead and complains, "Crap! Kripa remember dad wanted to tell us something last night… he must have already gone to the office by now. I hope he doesn't get mad at us for sleeping in." Kripa smiles at her innocent sister and laughs replying, "Ha-ha that's so funny! Dad and get mad? Yeah right…"

Just then the maid walks in again and says, "Your father wanted me to inform you that you two are to attend the Kapoors' Anniversary Party at their estate tonight. He intends to send a driver to pick you two up at exactly 7 o'clock so do not be late or the car will leave without you. He will be joining the both of you at the party. If you both do not show up, he will be very upset and will refrain from conversing with you two for some time." Kripa and Riddhima nod and dismiss the maid swiftly. As Kripa walks towards the bathroom, Riddhima asks, "Kripa what are you going to wear tonight? I don't think I have anything formal that I have not worn yet." Kripa pauses to contemplate her clothing options as well and comes to the conclusion that they immediately have to go on a dress hunt to find something suitable for the occasion.

They get ready to go shopping and leave the mansion as fast as possible. This is a normal occurrence in their life. High society parties and the rich and famous lifestyle go hand in hand. Kripa and Riddhima are young and carefree girls, who take life as if comes to them. They have grown up with the idea that the world is their oyster, which has made them rather spoiled and stuck up.

They run around department stores looking for elegant dresses that will accentuate their remarkable curved figures. Finally Kripa comes across a beautiful maroon silky evening gown with a halter neckline and Riddhima finds a classy emerald green silky gown with a deep back for tonight. They make sure to purchase some matching accessories and handbags to go along with their new dresses. Since they are relieved of the stress of finding the perfect dresses, they now start shopping for fun. Money has never been an issue for them since "daddy" always wants his daughters to have the best no matter what is on the price tag.

After thoroughly buying every attractive item in the expensive store, they make their way back home to get ready for tonight. Even though they have three hours to get ready, it is still not enough time for them. They are very high maintenance girls and love to be the center of attention at any high society party because the boys there are always sizzling hot. Kripa and Riddhima go into their separate bedrooms, which are connected by a door in between. They go to their bathrooms within their separate bedrooms and take a relaxing bath.

They both come out of the bathrooms with their hair styled in loose curls. They close the curtains in their rooms in order to change privately and not give the guards outside a free show. Their rooms become darker because of the loss of sunlight. Kripa and Riddhima change into their evening gowns and glance in the mirror, but are unsatisfied considering the lack of light in the room. They both turn on the light switch, but it fails to turn on. They realize that the power must have gone out.

Kripa yells, "Riddhima is the light in your room working?" Riddhima replies, "No, it's not. I just lit the candles in my room." Kripa sighs, "Yeah okay, I'll do that too." Kripa lights the candles unaware that behind those dark shadows awaits two predators just waiting for the right moment to take advantage of their prey.

In Kripa's room, she starts putting on a silver and maroon necklace on her delicate neck. Just then she hears something fall from behind. Her head immediately turns to see what had fallen. Next to the plate of fresh fruit on the bedside table across the room, she no longer sees the pretty blue vase carrying a lone flower. She inches closer to the window and sees a blue broken vase lying on the floor with a single red rose. Kripa picks up the rose and then hears the howling wind from the window next to her. She taps her head lightly with the flower and blames the wind for destroying the poor vase. She slowly breathes, "I'm going crazy! There is no one here, but me. Just calm down Kripa and relax!" Kripa isn't a very big fan of being in the dark and that too alone, but she has every reason to be worried right now considering who is waiting for her. Just then a gust of wind comes in through the window and blows out the various lit candles around the room. Kripa starts to panic because of the sudden loss of light.

Kripa stands up hesitantly and feels a gloved hand cover her mouth from behind. Surprise and shock is evident on her face, which causes the rose to drop from her hands and onto the ground. A tall man stands behind her, pulling her body smack against his own as he tries to drown out her screaming. He pushes her roughly up against the wall and comes in front of her while blocking her path with both hands. She turns around to face him and notices him coming threateningly close to her face. He somehow manages to keep his hand on top of her mouth. Her big expressive chocolate brown eyes lock with his brown eyes with golden specks. Angad for the first time realizes how beautiful his target is and he begins to stare at the beauty in his arms. Kripa stops struggling as she notices the loneliness in his eyes due to their close proximity. They both temporarily forget the kidnapping in progress and stare into the depths of each other's eyes.

Finally Kripa remembers what is happening and starts to resist violently while Angad just continues to press his body against hers in efforts to keep her struggling to a minimum. His eyes remain locked with hers and a slow, breathless, "Beautiful…" escapes his lips. The angry look in her eyes goes unnoticed by him because the innocence her eyes express is what captivates him. Kripa's eyes catch sight of the knife lying on a plate of fruit on the bedside table and she desperately tries to reach for it. Finally she gets hold of it and immediately places it threateningly close to Angad's neck. As soon as Angad feels the cold, thin metal against his neck, a smirk appears on his lips and his eyes significantly darken. Kripa becomes slightly fearful of what he may be plotting and tightens her hold on the knife. He breaks free of his trance completely at that moment and he remembers his old philosophy on women. He wouldn't let a girl like Kripa have the opportunity to toy with his mind and try to take advantage of his newfound attraction to her.

Angad growls in a deep voice, "I was hoping I didn't have to do this." He spins her around and holds the same knife against her neck with her back pressed firmly against him. Both their breaths become heavy as they stand momentarily still. With a swift hand movement, he pulls a chloroform dabbed cloth from his pocket and roughly places it over her nose and mouth. Soon enough, the struggling stops and Kripa collapses in his strong arms. Angad smirks, "So much for innocent…"

In Riddhima's room, she stares at her reflection in the mirror and seems unhappy with the loose curls in her hair so she decides to wash her hair once more. She takes a quick shower again and after drying herself, she puts on her emerald green dress that compliments her eyes so well. She comes out the bathroom dying her hair with blue towel and hears a loud thump in the room. Riddhima turns away from the mirror and scans her room looking for the source that could have possibly made that noise. After finding nothing she shrugs her shoulders and continues to dry her hair, while a grey-eyed stranger watches her secretly from behind the curtain. Seeing her exposed back, makes Armaan's eyes glaze over with passion. He stares at her with immense desire, but quickly realizes the task at hand.

Armaan slowly approaches her while she continues to dry her hair in front of the mirror and hum a comforting melody. Armaan then stands directly behind her and waits for her to notice the intruder in her room. Eventually she throws the towel aside and feels the heat radiating from an unknown source. She immediately stops humming as one thing becomes clear to her, which is that the heat is definitely not coming from the candles. A plausible explanation for this could be the man standing behind her while slowly breathing against her neck. It makes her body shiver and she looks into the mirror to see a handsome trespasser with an evil glint in his grey eyes. Riddhima turns around quickly to face Armaan and in the process her slightly wet hair hits his face. Armaan closes his eyes as he feels the collision and the water droplets traveling down his face. Riddhima's eyes widen and her mouth opens in efforts to scream for help. She does not realize he is here to kidnap her because rape seems like a more reasonable possibility considering Armaan's hazy state.

Armaan slowly opens his eyes and sees Riddhima is just about ready to scream. He quickly covers her mouth with his bare hand and she starts to struggle. He barely pays any heed to her muffled screams against his hand and is more focused on the movement of her soft lips grazing his skin. Riddhima heated green eyes glare at Armaan and she decides to bite his hand. Armaan grabs his hand as he yells in pain and wishes he had listened to Angad about wearing gloves. Riddhima gives him a dirty look and is barely able to run two steps away from him.

Armaan quickly regains composure and grabs her hand, making her body collide with his. He manages to grab both her hands and holds them tightly behind her back. This causes her to wail. According to Armaan, this is the oldest trick in the book so instead of feeling guilty he raises his eyebrows as he gives her a how-stupid-do-you-think-I-am look. Since she doesn't get the sympathetic response she wanted, she throws another dirty look his way and then tries to knee his manly goods. He smirks seeing her tactics and says, "Feisty… I like it!" She looks utterly enraged hearing that comment so Armaan pulls out his handkerchief covered with chloroform to prevent her from causing any actual damage. She soon stops struggling to knee him and passes out in his muscular arms. Armaan stares at the beautiful girl in his arms and smiles, "So much for innocent…"

Thank you guys for commenting!! Hope you guys liked the part, i tried to make it somewhat romantic. The next part will be about getting the girls to their new home. I don't know when it will be posted, im guessing Wednesday at the latest.

Lots of Love,

Numera ❤️

That was wonderful. I loved the first chapter and I love your Armaan!! 😳 Just loved the way you wrote the whole sequence 👏

gr8 part 👏
wow both bros are same 😉
loved ridz daring oops "feisty" character in armaan's language 😛 😆
awesome kidnapping scenes 😳
love the way how angad fell for kripa 😉
plz cont soon 👏