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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Soooooooooooooo sorry Vertika mai yahan aayi nahi thi kaafi dino se. Abhi aayi to dekha tera fic choot gaya tha reply karne se. 😔

Good that finally u r here darling,😃 😃 😃 no probs dear,😉 😉 😉
Mujhe maaf kar dena yaar gussa mat hona.🤔
ab bus bhi kar na.😆 😆 😆
Bahut accha tha update yaar,😊 Sarthak k plan me dum tha maana hi padega. Kitne aaram se us ne Vatsal se nikalwa liya na ki vo pyaar karta hai Mauli se. 😉
Akhir apni setting us ne youn hi thode na ki hai?😉 😉 😉
Mauli bhi baar baar us ko hint de rahi thi aur vo samajhne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.😲
Gadha hai thoda tube light jaisa hai der se jalta hai.😆 😆 😆
Mauli se aakhir keh hi diya us ne aur us se raha nahi gaya ab us se.😛 Ye fark Tanmay k aane se jyada pada tha i think.😆
very true dear.
well update fast dear.

Bus karti hoon abhi.😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 46
Vatsal was also feeling the same thing in him. He has a desire to kiss her hard but firstly confession was necessary n deep in his heat he was shure by the way she was behaving that she too loves him.

Kaho na kaho yeh saansein bolti hain

O sanam o sanam, o mere sanam

Labon pe naam tere bas hamaara hai

Yeh tera dil bhi jaana hamaara hai

"Ek baar bus ek baar keh do na Mauli ki tum bhi mujhe utna hi chahti ho jitna mai tumhe. Jaise mai feel karta hoon vaisa hi tum bhi mehsoos karti ho mere liye.Jab mai tumhare kareeb aata hoon tab tum ko accha lagta hai.Jab mai tum ko youn dekhta hoon to tum pighalne lagti ho." He continued.

Kaho na kaho yeh aankhen bolti hain

O sanam o sanam, o mere sanam

Mohabbat ke safar mein yeh sahaara hai

Vafa ke saahilon ka yeh kinaara hai

Mauli was in a state where her mind stop working and she can feel only his heart beats which were taking his name and saying , 'Mauli bahut pyaar karta hai ye tum se aur tum bhi karti ho na ab maan lo is baat ko.'

Khwaabon mein tujhko sanwaara hai

Jazbon mein apne utaara hai

Meri yeh aankhen jidhar dekhe

Tera hi chehra nazaara hai
"Theek hai ab mujhe lagta hai ki mai tumhare saath jabardasti kar raha hoon." He left her and was about to leave the room when'''''''''
'"Ruko apni baat keh di vo bhi itna late ab kya meri baat sune bina hi chale jaaoge." She called him.
Vatsal stood but was unable to face her.
"Maine pata nahi kab se man me apne ye ehsaas chipa rakha tha aur humesha is baat ka intezaar kiya ki shayad kabhi tum khud kaho par aaj tum ne kaha bhi to is mod par. Sach hai ye haan sach hai ki mai tum se pyaar karti hoon." She said all.
Vatsal ko laga ki kahin anjaane me us se koi bahut bada accha kaam hua tha jis ki vajah se us ko us ka pyaar mil gaya aur vo Mauli ki taraf muda to dekhta kya hai vo chup chaap ro rahi hai.
"E pagal kai ko apne ansoon barbaad kar reli hai kuch apne vidaai k liye bhi chod de." He teased her.
"Tanhaiyo me muskurana ishq hai,
ek baat ko sab se chhupana ishq hai,
yu to nind nahi aati hume rat bhar,
magar sote sote jagna or jagte jagte sona ishq hai."
She smiled at which he moved closer n hugged her tightly.
Later:-
It was really very hard to convince Mr. Malhotra about Mauli n Vatsal's marriage because he never liked Vatsal. Sarthak n his massi tried their best to do so but he was a hard nut to be crack.
Finally after a lot convince he became ready as he frighten may be Mauli would do court marriage. It was decided that their engagement would take place after two months and marriage will be after 10 months.
Vaise bhi ye do maheene kaise beet gaye pata bhi nahi chala aur Muskaan k exams bhi khatam ho gaye the. Sarthak aur Mauli ki special request par Poorvi, Nikki, Sakshi aur Muskaan bhi aaye the. Vedoo ne apni new job join kar li thi n so as Sahil. They all also joined them.
Sarthak ne apne farm house me sab k rukne ka arrangement kiya tha.Vatsal ko bheja tha us ne sab ko airport se pick karne k liye aur seedhe farm house bhejne k liye.
"Ok guys, ye hai aap sab k rehne k liye aur I think aap sab ko koi problem nahi hogi yahan." Vatsal said showing them.
Muskaan se ab raha nahi gaya actually jab se vo aayi thi tab se us ne Sarthak ko nahi dekha hai. "Vo Sarthak kahan hai?" she asked with hesitation.
Vatsal smiled and said, "Bhabhi jee naraj mat hoiye aap. Aaj shaam ko aap 7 baje ready rehna ek gaadi aap sab ko lene aayegi; aur mujhe lagta hai aap k liye alag se koi gaadi aayegi aur aap ko us me baith kar Sarthak se milne jaana hai." He told.
Muskaan blushed on calling bhabhi.
"Ab itna blush mat karo kuch humare dost k liye bhi chod do na." he teased her.
"Accha vo sab chodo ye batao mujhe mai kaise nikloongi?" she asked.
"Ab is k liye to plan aap ko hi banana hai." He winked.
"Par mai yaar kya problem hai meri bhi." She murmured under her breath.
"Aur haan us ne ye letter diya hai aap k liye." He handed a letter to her n left.
"Meri Jaan, meri Muski,
Kaise ho?
Mujhe pata hai tum mujh se bahut naraj hogi aakhir mai tum se milne nahi aaya na. To mujhe maaf kar dena is galti k liye kyounki mai aaj shaam ko hum dono k liye kuch khaas banane ki koshish kar raha hoon.
Mai chahta hoon ki jab tum yahan aao to kuhd apni aankhon se dekho ki maine apne pyaar k liye yahan kaise sab kuch khud ready kiya hai.
Tumhara pyaar aaj tumhara intejaar karega shaam 8 baje.
Driver tum ko lene bhi aayega, Tum ready rehna bus fir dekhna tumhara ye pagal deewana ashik aaj shaam ko
Tumhare liye kitna khoobsurat bana deta hai.
Tumhara bus tumhara
Arth
"Hey bhagwaan ye Sarthak bhi na, ab mai kya sochoo?" she thought a plan n went to Sakshi.
"Sakshi mujhe tere help chahiye." She said .
"Kya hua? Sab theek to hain na?" Sakshi asked in confused tone.
"Sab theek hai baba par pehle mujhe ye bata ki mere dono bhai kab join kar rahe hain hum ko?" Muskaan asked worriedly.
"Kyoun?"
"Pehle bata na kitne sawaal poochti hai?" Muski said in complaining tone.
"K, vo dono kal subah I think 12 baje tak aayenge. Vaise bhi new job hai na. Sahil ka phone aaya tha mere paas." She informed.
Muski was so happy after listening it.
"To ab bata tu ye kyoun pooch rahi hai?" Sakshi asked suspiciously.
"Vo baat ye hai''''.." and Muskaan told her everything whatever was told by Vatsal to her.
"Hmmmmmmm tabhi mai soch rahi thi ki madam kyoun CID vaalon jaise pooch taach kar rahi hain." She teased him.
"Kaun CID join karne jaa raha hai?" Nikki asked entering.
Teeno ne mil kar ek plan banaya aur bus ab shaam ka intezzar ho raha tha. Muski k saamne sab se badi problem abhi ye thi ki vo kya pehan k jaaye jo Sarthak ko pasand ho. Kam se kam ek ghante k baad madam ko kuch aisa mila vo bhi apni friends k help se jis se vo aise dikhe ki'''. jo Sarthak pehle hi pagal hai un k pyaar me vo bilkul pagal ho jaaye.
Here Sarthak's home:-
"Kya kar rahein hai bhai, engagement meri hai aap ki nahi." Mauli teased him.
"Chup kar tu, tujhe pata hai aaj kitne dino baad mai us ko dekhne jaa raha hoon." He said dreamily.
"Kuch sharm karo bhai mai aap ki choti behan hoon aap ko mere saamne is tarah ki baatein karte hue sharm nahi aati kya?" Mauli said with fake anger.
"Chup kar, sharm aati na to mai teri love life set karne k bajaay us Vatsal ki pitai karta najar aata samjhi." This time Sarthak teased him.
"Ok baba theek hai kal k liye aapne dress select hi kar li hai to aaj k liye itna confuse kyoun hai aap?" she asked him.
"Mai kuch alag sa lagna chahta hoon aaj, u know na aaj humari pehli official date hai." Sarthak said still trying to find a suitable dress for him.
"Ok wait," she tried.
After 10 minutes she gave him a dress which he liked so much n ran fast to get ready.
"Tum sab ready ho na chalein?" Poorvi asked them.
"Haan par ek choti se problem hai." Nikki said.
"Kya hua ab?" Shikhar asked.
"Vo Muski ki tabiyat theek nahi hai thode loose motions aa rahein hain." Sakshi informed.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Interesting part. At last Vatsal n Mouli r getting engaged. Sarthak is just so romantic. W8ing 4 their 1st official date. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
thanx for the pm...so finally Mauli accepted that she loves Vatsal..both of them r just so happy to confess..😛
Mr.Malhotra is really very srtict but finally he agrees to their marriage..
Muskaan n others r invited for Mauli's engagement..Vatsal is teasing Muskaan a lot..😉😉😉
She is missing Sarthak so much..But he has some special plans for her..
mauli is teasing Sarthak so much but he gave a gud reply in return😆😆😆
Both Muskaan n Sarthak r taking so long to select their respective dresses.Ha ha😆😆😆
Just waiting to read abt their first official date
Bye
Yes 1 more thing I thought u'll b updating Unknown Desires but u have totally forgotten abt it...Pls update dat
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey mujhe nahi pata tha this time ur so fast in updating. 😛 Abhi mai reply kar k gayi hoon bus abhi aayi to dekha madam ne update kar diya. 😲
Just too good 👏, so finally Mauli n Vatsal r one n Mr. Malhotra agreed for this relationship 😃 haan aakhir dar jo gaye the.😆 Par maana padega Sarthak is really the best bro.👍🏼
Yahan Muski bhi aa gayi hai engagement party attend karne k liye aur vo bhi sab k saath.😊 Raha nahi gaya aakhir pooch hi liya apne dewar se apne hone waale un k baare me.😉
Sharmati aaj kal bahut hai madam.😳 Vaise just waiting for their date.😍 Par agr itna hi time lenge kapdo k liye tab to mushkil hai kuch bhi hona.😔
jaldi se aage likho na.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry 've not been able to reply earlier part

both d parts are awesome n wonderful.....

updt soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gr8 part....finally vedoo n Mauli r getting engaged n most imp. m waiting for a moment when mukaan n sarthak gonna meet.......keep updating.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update.
Finally Vatsal andn Mauli r getting engaged. I am eagerly waiting for that special moment when mukaan n sarthak are going to meet.......keep updating please
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE............
THE UD WAS..............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOME............
SUPERB................
GR8............
JUST TOO GOOD.................
DO CONT. SOON....................
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

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