Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 65

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Posted: 16 years ago

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update kahan hai madam?

aa raha hai madam.😆😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Here comes the next part:-

"Hello". He wished her.

"Hello Vatsal how r u?" she said happily.

"Apun theek hai anyways mubarak ho." He said.

"Thanx mai bhi bahut khush hoon ki aaj se mai tumhare saath '.oops means tum sab k saath kaam karoongi." She said excitedly.

"Oh," he said par phir achanak us ko kuch yaad aaya aur us ne kaha, "Mujhe ek cheej ki mubaarak aur deni hai."

"Haan kis cheej ki?" she asked.

"vo apun ko kal pata chala Sarthak se ki teri shaadi fix ho gayi hai na bus us ki." He said with a heavy heart.

"Sahi suna hai aap ne." she said smiling, "Vaise bhi Tanmay accha ladka hai."

"Haan apun k alawa sab acche hi hain tere liye." He murmured.

"Kuch kaha tum ne?" she asked Vatsal.

"Nahi apun to bus aise hi." He said.

"Accha beta ab hum ko lagta hai tum ko tumhara cabin dekha dena chahiye chalo." Her father said n brought her to her cabin.

"Oh, soooooooo beautiful dad." She became so happy to see it.

"Hum ko pata tha aap ko accha lagega." He said, "Vaise hum ko maana hoga ki aap k bhai sahab aap ki pasand na pasand acche se jaante hain."

"Wat, bhaiya n ye sab?" she amazed.

"Haan aap k bhaiya ne kaha tha vaisa hi kiya gaya hai yahan." Vatsal said to which she smiled.

"I love u bhaiya, kaash aap bhi yahan hote." She said.

"Hum ne bhi yahi chaha tha par shayad humari kismet me vo khushi nahi hai dekhna." His father said with a low voice.

"Come on dad aaj k din to kam se kam." She said.

"Ok ok theek hai, vaise tum ko batana tha aaj 4 baje Tanmay aayega tum se milne." He informed her.

"Par dad yahan office me." She said uncomfortably.

"Koi baat nahi tum dono bahar bhi jaa sakte ho." His dad suggested.

"Theek hai dad." She agreed.

Vatsal vahan khade ho kar sun raha tha aur us ko gussa bhi aa raha tha par vo kya kare vo kuch kar nahi sakta tha.

"Mai chalta hoon." Ye keh kar Mr. Malhotra to chale gaye.

"Apun ko lagta hai apun ko bhi chalna chaiye." Vatsal said .

"Vatsal agar tum chale gaye to mera kya hoga?" she said.

"Kya matlab?" he became shocked for a moment.

"Matlab ye ki kaam mujhe kaun samjhayega?" she requested.

"Koi aur hoga bula lena." He denied.

"Par mujhe bus tum chahiye ho." She said pleading.

"Mera bina kaam nahi chal sakta kya?" he said still not facing her.

"Kabhi nahi." She said dreamily.

"Ek baat bata apun ko." He asked her.

"Haan pooch na." she said in same tone.

"Apun tere liye kya maayne rakhta hai?" he asked directly.

Is se pehle ki koi jawaab aa paata ek peon ne knock kiya door par. "Come in." she said.

"Vo sir aap ko bade sahab bula rahe hain." He said.

"Theek hai chalo mai aa raha hoon." Vatsal said n left.

Mauli ne rahat ki saans li jab Vatsal chala gaya vahan se varna vo kya jawaab deti us ko.

She quickly dialed his bro's number and they made a plan for next step.

At four'o clock:-

"Mam Mr. Tanmay wants to meet u." her receptionist told.

"Send him in." she said.

Vatsal was also there.

A handsome lad entered in her cabin.

"May I come in?" he asked.

"Oh come on Tanmay tum ko kisi ki permission lene ki jaroorat hai kya?"

"Hello, nice to see u after long time." He said.

"Mai abhi chalta hoon thodi der baad aata hoon." Vatsal said n left.

Kuch der tak baat karne k baad dono kahin nikal gaye ye Vatsal ne dekha aur ab us ko lag raha tha ki us k sabr ka baandh toot raha hai.

"Mai kya karoon mai bilkul bhi bardaasht nahi kar paa raha hoon ye sab, par mai kahoon bhi to kya aur karoon bhi to kya?" He was really confused.

Us raat ko Vatsal ne bahut jyada drink kar li thi aur iteefak ya plan k according Sarthak us k saath hi tha tab jab us ne bolna shuru kiya tha Mauli k baare me ki vo kitna pyaar karta hai us se aur us k bina nahi reh paayega ab .Sarthak was only smiling at him.

"Pata nahi kab kahan kaise mujhe teri behan se pyaar ho gaya mai nahi jaanta. Mai tujh se kabhi bhi ye baat nahi keh paaya kyounki mujhe lagta tha ki tu pata nahi kya sochega. Ab dekho nahi kaha to vo kisi aur se shaadi karne jaa rahi hai. Apun sale ki zindagi hi aise hai, pehle apun ki maa chali gayi phir apun ka baap aur ab vo." Vatsal bole jaa raha tha aur Sarthak bus chup chaap sun raha tha us ko.

"Mujhe pata bhi hai ki tera baap, matlab dad pasand nahi karta mujhe. Mai gareeb jo hoon, aur us ko lagta hai ki mai khush nahi rakh paaonga us ki beti ko. Par vo ye nahi jaanta ki mujh se jyada pyaar us ki beti ko koi kar hi nahi sakta hai." Saying theses words he dozed off soon.

Next day morning:-

Office me aaj ek jaroori meeting hai to subah se Vatsal mil nahi paaya Mauli se. Meeting k baad jab sab conference room se jaa rahe the tab Vatsal ne Mauli ko roka.

"Mauli, vo''..mujhe tum se jaroori baat karni hai."

"Haan bolo." She asked perfectly knowing.

"Vo apun ye kehna chahta tha ki''.ki" aur Vatsal sahib ki himmat jawab de gayi.

"Bolo mai sun rahi hoon." She said in a hope that may be he would say that.

"Vo apun ko pata nahi kaise kahe par''''." Vatsal turned in another direction, "Apun ko tere se pyaar ho gaya hai aur '''aur apun tere saath apni family banana chahta hai." Vatsal ne sab ek hi saas me keh diya aankhien bund kar k.

She was overwhelmed that finally he confessed but she tried to play with him so she said sadly, "So what?"

"Kya matlab hai so what se?" he asked in a confused manner.

"U know Vatsal, I am going to engage soon with Tanmay. So it's pretty late." She told him hiding her smile.

"Apun jaanta hai ki apun late hai par abhi hue to nahi hai na teri engagement to kuch soch na ." he requested.

"Sorry, I can't" she said blankly.

Vatsal k dil k ek kone me kahin se badi tej dard utha par kya kar sakta tha vo bhi. "Accha theek hai apun ko ye bata tu kya chahti hai?"

She didn't expect this question from him. She stood silent there.

"Bata na tu kya chahti hai?" he asked again.

Kehne ko bahut kuch tha par kahe kya koi?

He moved closer to her n she moved a little back. They continued this until she bumped with the wall.

"Apun jaanta hai tu apun se pyaar karti hai." he told.

She lowered her eyes because his intense gaze was making her melt and she was unable to look in his deep eyes.

Kaho na kaho yeh aankhen bolti hain
O sanam o sanam, o mere sanam
Mohabbat ke safar mein tu hamaara hai
Andhere raaston ka tu sitaara hai


Vatsal was very much close to her. She was feeling the aroma of his body in her. She was shivering and was unable to resist the deep sensation in her.

'Kya hai in aankhon me aisa jo mujhe kahin na kahin kamjor bana raha hai jis se mai chahte hue bhi bahar nahi aa paa rahi hoon.' Mauli soch rahi hai.


Tu hi jeene ka sahaara hai
Meri maujon ka kinaara hai
Mere liye yeh jahaan hai tu
Tujhe mere dil ne pukaara hai


'Bahut kuch ehsaas bhare hue hain meri aankhon me tumhare liye Mauli aur mai bus ye chahta hoon ki sach kaho tum, kyounki mai ye bhi acche se jaanta hoon ki tum ko pata hai ki mai kitna pyaar karta hoon tum se.' Vatsal thought.

'Hata lo Vatsal apni aankhien mere chehre se ye mujhe kamjor bana rahi hain.' She thought.



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. At last Vatsal has said it all. But I think now Mouli shud stop playing games wid him. Poor guy!!!! He must be feeling really bad na. Sarthak n Mouli r too naughty. But must say the ending was gr8. W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
a fabulous update.....tooo good bus ek bat ki kami thi Muskaan !
i missed her soooooooo much.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear
Thnx for d pm....
Just loved the update..Finally Vatsal proposed Mauli...But why is she playing games with him??????I really missed Sarthak n Muskaan in dis update..Nyways inki lovestory bhi ab start ho jaani chahiye
Do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowwo cool partt i love it so muchh
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Posted: 16 years ago
finally...mai tere zindagi main aa gayi...matlab tere fic 'zindagi bas yu hi' mai aa gayi...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
first of all...pure ud main maine sarthak aur mushkaan ko baht miss kiya...!!! par Vatshal aur Mauli k love story ko bhi to sahi track par lana tha na...!!! to bilkul sahi ud tha...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
'tum sab k sath karungi...' yeh mauli ne bilkul sahi tarike se baat ko badal di...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 bechara vatshal to pahle se hi dukhi tha...aur mauli use jhuthi kahaniyan sana kar aur jyada dukhi kar rahi hai...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
1...tum chale gaye to mera kya hoga...😉 😉 😉
2...par mujhe bas tum chahiye...😉 😉 😉
3...mere bina kaam nahin chal sakta...😭 😭 😭
...kabhi nahin...😉 😉 😉
yeh sabhi double meanings wale dial the...!!! par phir bhi stupid vatshal k samajh main kuch nahin aaya...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
lekin jise kahna tha...ab tak to nahin kah paya tha...lekin us k bhai se bol gaya...nashe main...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
thank god...k akhirkaar vatshal ne confess kar hi diya...!!! vaise us ka daarna sahi tha...mauli k father ko le kar...!!! lekin... "jab miyaan(vatshal) biwi(mauli) raji to kya karenge mauli k pujya pitaji"....!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
by d way...yaar...too gud ud...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! dekh le detailed comment kiya hai...!!! matlab mujhe yeh ud kitna achha laga...yeh ab bol ne jarurat to nahin hai na...!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
ab ek kaam kar jaldi se next ud post karde...achhi bachhi ki tarah...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HI VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE..
THE UD WAS...
AWESOOOOOOOOME............
AMAZING..
GR8.
SUPERB...............
MINDBLOWING..............
TOO GOOD.......
PLZ DO CONT. SOON..
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Good madam kya baat hai? 😃
Sab ki love story ko kitne acche se handel kiya jaa sakta hai koi aap se pooche.😉
Vatsal ko hint pe hint de rahi thi Mauli par us dhakaan prashad k kuch samajh aaye tab na.
Khair accha hua jyada bardaasht nahi kar paaya vo aur us ne aakhir Mauli se keh hi diya i love u.😛
ab aage jaldi se update karo.
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Here Muskaan n Nikki:-

"Bata na kya hua hai?" Nikki asked Muskaan almost shaking her.

"Are tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho?" Sarthak said entering.

"Hum log????.." Nikki asked confused.

Sarthak ki najarein Muskaan se milte hai par Sarthak ko us ki ankhno me koi udasi se dikhte hai.

"Bus aise hi", Nikki said.

"Hello guys." Mauli wished them n came in.

"Andar chale?" Vatsal asked.

"Oh yeah", Nikki said n all of them go inside whereas Sarthak called Muskaan from behind.

"Ek minute Muskaan." He called Muskaan softly.

She stopped but didn't turn.

"Kya baat hai tumhara face itna down kyoun lag raha hai?" he asked concerned.

"No nothing like that." She said still didn't turn.

Now he goes in front of her n seeing in her eyes he says, "Pata hai tumhari ye jo aankhein hai na bahut kuch keh jaati hai quitet reh kar bhi."

Itna sunte hi Muskaan ki aankhon me aansoon bhar aaye par apne ko control karte hue boli, "I know. Bhaiya bhi yahi kehte hain."

"To fir batao na baat kya hai?" he insisted.

She was about to tell something when Mauli came outside n dragged both of them inside.

All the guys n Mauli were chatting but Sarthak was tensed because of Muskaan. He was feeling tensed about her.

Sahil thought to tell some one about his feelings. Us ko pata tha ki Vedoo ye jaanta hai fir kis se kahe vo jo us ki madad kare is maamle me.

Us ko koi samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo kis se baat kare is bare me. Us ko ye pata hai ki Vedoo jaanta hai ye baat phir bhi. Us ne socha Nikki se baat kare.

Par us ko koi baat batane ka matlab sab se gaana. Phir kaun bacha Muskaan haan vo sahi rahegi aur kisi se kuch nahi kahegi.

He called Muskaan in a corner n said, " Mujhe tujh se bahut jaroori baat karni hai Muskaan thodi der k liye bahar aayegi?"

"Haan bhaiya kyoun nahi? Bataiye kya baat hai." She said walking with him towards garden.

They both walked outside.

"Yahan baith." Sahil n Muskaan both sat on jhoola placed in garden.

"Ab jo mai batane jaa raha hoon vo meri zindagi ki sab se badi sachaai hai. Pata nahi tujhe kya aur kaisa lage par mujhe lagta hai ye baat sun ne aur samjahne k liye tujh se behtar koi nahi hai." Sahil said n paused.

"Bhiaya aise kya baat hai jaldi bataiye mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai." Muskaan was getting restless.

"Baat ye hai ki???" Sahil took a pause n after collecting all her strength he said, " I love Sakshi."

Muskaan was surprised to know it. Us ko bhagwaan par vishwaas nahi ho raha tha ki bhagwaan aisa bhi kar sakte hain. Ek taraf un hone Sakshi ka pyaar cheena aur doosri taraf unhone Sahil ko bhej diya us ki zindagi swaarne k liye.

"Pata nahi kab se, par jab se mai yahan tum logon k saath tha; bachpan se shayad me Sakshi ko hi chahta hoon. Tujhe pata hai ye baat Vedoo ko pata hai." Sahil told.

"Kya??????" again a shock.

"Haan Vedoo ko pata hai ye baat ki mai Sakshi se bahut pyaar karta hoon." Sahil told.

'Tabhi bhaiya ne Sakshi ki taraf kabhi pehle bhi is tarah ki najron se nahi dekha.Aur mai bhaiya ko hi galat samajh rahi thi ki vo Sakshi ko nahi samajh paaye.O God mai aisa kaise soch sakti hoon?" Muskaan cursed herself.

"Mai ye sab tujh se isiliye bata raha hoon kyounki mujhe tujh par vishwaas hai aur mai ye jaanta hoon ki tu meri madad karegi." Sahil has a hope in his eyes.

"Haan bhaiya , mujhe aap k pyaar par poora vishwaas hai aur is baat par bhi hai vishwaas ki aap Sakshi ko duniya ki har vo khusi denge jo jaane anjaane me u se chin gayi hai. Pyaar me bahut takat hoti hai. Mai ye jaanti hoon ki aap se accha ladka Sakshi ko koi nahi milega." She said.

"Thanks Muskaan mujh par trust karne k liye haan tujhe ye bhi batana tha ki mom ko maine ye baat kal bata di hai. Shayad vo jaldi hi baat karengi Sakshi aur meri shaadi k liye." Sahil said n he tried to hide his blush.

"Oye hoe tab to mujhe bahut late me saari baatein pata chali not fair bhaiya." Muskaan said in complaining tone.

"Nahi yaar abhi to maine Poorvi ko bhi nahi bataya hai." Sahil tried to tell her.

"Theek hai maaf kiya par aage se aisa nahi chalega samjhe aap." Muskaan said n gave a sisterly hug to him. "Aur mai aap ko vishwaas delati hoon ki Sakshi aap ko accept kar legi." She smiled saying this.

Here Muskaan n Nikki:-

Muskaan almost dragged her out of kitchen.

"Are kya hua kuch bolegi ya nahi?" Nikki was shocked at her such behavior.

"Tu yahan se chal mai abhi batai hoon." Muskaan said.

They both came in a silent corner n Muskaan was breathing heavily.

"Kya hua kuch to bol? Sab theek hai na?"

Us k baad jo Muskaan ne bataya vo sun kar Nikki k paron k niche se jameen hi nikal gayi.

"Ye to accha hai ki Sahil bhaiya us ko pyaar karte hain varna hum kya karte?" Muskaan said while Nikki was speechless.

"Kya hua yaar?Tum log yahan aise kyoun khade ho?" Vedant asked coming in opposite direction.

"Nahi bhaiya bus aise hi koi kaam ki baat thi." Muskaan tried to hide it.

"To aap Poorvi se pyaar karte hain?" Nikki asked looking straight ih his eyes.

Vedant got surprised by her this question. He gazed Muskaan, Muskaan was equally shocked at her way of asking this question.

"Kya poocha tum ne?" Vedant asked again. Jab ki vo jaanta tha ki Nikki ne kya kaha hai fir bhi.

Here in room:-

"Kahan chale gaye ye theeno bhai behan?" Sahil n Sakshi were searching for them.

"Tum ruko mai dekhta hoon." Sahil said.

"Nahi tum vahan dekho mai idhar dekhti hoon." Sakshi said.

"Hey guys kahan kahan kya dekha jaa raha hai?" Sarthak asked.

'Kitna pareshaan hai bechara Muskaan k bina aur humari Muskaan ko koi fikr bhi nahi hai.' Sakshi thought in her mind n said, "Kuch nahi kuch kho gaya hai."

"Mai aap logon ki help karoon?" Sarthak asked.

"Nahi bus abhi hum Muskaan ko le kar aate hain." Sakshi k muh se nikal gaya.

Sahil saw her face in amazement whereas Sarthak embarrassed. Sakshi also thought that she has said much more.

"Accha chalo; itna confused sa expression kyoun diya hua hai." Sakshi dragged Sahil's hand.

"Ye kya tha?" Sahil was still confused he finally asked it to Sakshi.

"Tum chalo bhi . Are mai bhool gayi chalo tum vahan jaao mai idhar jaa rahi hoon." Sakshi said tried to avoid the topic while indicating him the way n left.


Kya karta bechara gaya aur dhoondhne laga sab ko.

Kuch der baad sab drawing room me apne aap pahuchte hain. Nikki ka face thoda tense hai jab ki Muskaan khush hai ye jaan kar ki Sahil loves Sakshi.

"Are kahan the aap log?" Sarthak asked Vedant watching in Muskaan's direction.

"Yahi to bahar garden me." Vedant replied there was a slight restlessness in his voice.

"To kal ka kya prograame hai?" Mauli asked.

"Yaar Sahil is baar ka programme tu hi bana." Vedant said.

Are yaar ye Sarthak bhi na itne important baat us ne batane nahi di Muskaan ko Nikki se.😡 Chalo koi baat nahi baad me to pata chal hi jaayega na. Muskaan ki aankhon ki bhasa ab Sarthak ji samajhne lage hain vow very fast.😉 Koi itne jaldi kisi ko itna kaisa jaan sakta hai na?😕 Par ye dono bhi to jaldi hi humesha humesha k liye ek hone vaale hain na.😊 Par jab Muski ne ye baat Nikki ko bata hi di tab Nikki ka directly Vedant se ye poochna ki does he love Poorvi mujhe kaafi daring act laga .👏 Mujhe lag raha hai pata nahi kyoun na hi Muski na hi Nikki is baat se khush hue hain.😒
Sakshi k baare me mai pareshaan hoon par kehna hi hoga Sahil hai na humesha se us k liye.😃
Good work dear.👍🏼
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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