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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Part 34

"Hey bhagwaan ab kya hoga mai kya karoon Sakshi k liye." Muskaan was almost in tears. " Mai kya kahoon tum se Sakshi ki jo sapne tum dekh rahi ho vo kabhi poore nahi honge kabhi nahi."

Muskaan rok nahi paa rahi thi apne aansoon aaj. Kya kare vo samajh nahi aa raha tha us ko. Ek to Sakshi ko bachpan se bina maa k phir bina pyaar k????.hey bhagwaan tune kya kiya. Tumhe koi hak nahi tha.

Muskaan ko kuch bhi aacha nahi lag raha tha shaam k 8 bajne waale the tabhi Muskaan ka cell phone ring hua.

"Kahan hai tu? Maine kaha tha na ki tu jaldi aa jaana." Sakshi thi phone par.

"Haan mai abhi niklate hoon yahan sa." Muskaan said n cut the phone.

"Are is ko kya hua? Sab theek to hai na." Sakshi chuckled at her behavior.

Idhar Sarthak , Mauli aur Vatsal bhi ready ho rahe the jaane k liye. Sarthak fir se confuse hai dress ko le kar aur Vatsal to reday ho raha hai yahan Mauli bhi confused hai ki kya pehne vo.

"Yaar tum dono bhai behan ka problem kya hai? Tum dono ready hone me record time lagte ho." Vatsal was finally irritated.

Here in Sakshi's house:-

Sakshi ready kar rahi hai dinner tabhi Nikki pahuch jaati hai aur us ki help karane lagti hai.

"Are tu kab aayi?" Sakshi asked her.

"Bus abhi jab tu mere sab se acche dost k khayalon me gum thi." Nikki teased her.

Sakshi blushed achank us ko kuch yaad aata hai aur vo kehti hai Nikki se, " Aaj maine dekha ki tujh me aur Shikhar me aankhon aankhon me ishaare ho rahe the baat kya hai?"

Nikki blushed but managed her n says, "Baat kya hogi? Koi baat nahi hai."

"Haan vo to teri aankhein hi bata rahi hain na." Sakshi said mischievously.

"Kya bata rahi hain meri aankhein?" Nikki asked in same tone.

"Kahin u both rn't in love aur confess bhi kar diya ho kyounki aaj tum dono gayab ho gaye the na wahan se." Sakshi said.

"Kya yaar tu bhi na chal kaam karna late ho raha hai na." Nikki tried to avoid the topic.

Reason tha ki Nikki ko lagta tha ki Muskaan aur Sakshi, Shikhar ko like nahi karti hain .Pata nahi isiliye us ko ye baatein batani chahiye ya nahi.

Sakshi came in front of her n said, "Yahan aa." She pulled her into her room n made her stand in front of mirror. "Ab jara apni shakal dekh k bata ki ye gaal aise hi to laal nahi ho rahe hai na."

Now Nikki was blushing harder n harder. Vo nahi samajh paa rahi thi ki kya bolna hai.

"Isiliye maine aaj Shikhar ko bhi yahan bula liya hai." Sakshi said finally.

"Kya????????????????" Nikki puzzled.

"Are itna shock hone waali kya baat hai is me?" Sakshi asked in a cool way.

"Nahi vo bus???..aise hi." Nikki was surprised but she didn't say any thing.

"Ab bata bhi de na." Sakshi again pleaded.

Nikki samajh gayi ki ab nahi bataya to bahut maar padegi so she told everything except that romantic moments.

"Tabhi mai sochoon kya hog gaya hai aaj meri pyaari Nikita ko." Sakshi winked her.

She blushed the hardest now. Ab Sakshi ko comedy soojhi so she pulled her n started dancing with her.

Tumhein Pata To Hoga

Tum Hi Pe Main Fida Hoon

Tumhein Hai Jab Se Chaha

Hawaon Mein Udta Hoon

Tum Hi Mere har Pal Mein

Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Tumhein Pata To Hoga

Ke Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai

Chalo Kahe Deti Hoon

Kabhi Nahin Jo Kaha Hai

Tum Hi Mere Har Pal Mein

Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Tum Jo Gussa Bhi Karo

To Mujhe Pyaar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun

Main To Jo Bhi Kahoon

Tumhein Ikraar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun

Chhodo Bhi Yeh Ada

Paas Aake Zara

Baat Dil Ki Koi, Keh Do Na

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Saari Duniya Ko Chhod Ke Maine Chaaha Hai, Ik Tumhein

Maine Zindagi Se Maanga Hai To Sirf Maanga Hai, Ik Tumhein

Ab Isi Chah Mein

Ab Isi Raah Mein

Zindagi Bhar Mere, Tum Ho Na

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Tumhein Pata To Hoga

Tumhi Pe Main Fida Hoon

Tumhein Hai Jab Se Chaha

Hawaon Mein Udta Hoon

Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein

Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Hey Shona Hey Shona

Shona Hey Shona

Hey Hey Shona Hey Shona

They both were lost in dancing comically.

Sahil jo abhi abhi aaya hai Poorvi ko le kar dono ko dekhta hai care free ho kar dance karte hue. Sakshi k face par khushi jhalak rahi thi jis ko dekh kar Sahil bahut khush hua.

"May I join u ladies?" Sahil asked mischievously.

They both embarrassed. Poorvi who was watching all this giggled.

"Yeah shure." Nikki said in same tone.

"Ok than." Sahil said n three of them started while Sakshi was watching them smiling.

"Are Sakshi come on yaar." Poorvi called Sakshi.

"Nahi u guys carry on bahut kaam hai mujhe." Sakshi tried to avoid.

"Hey come yaar." Sahil pulled her closer.

Kuch ajeeb sa feel hua Sakshi ko Sahil ki aakhon me. They all started dancing madly. Poorvi changed the track.

"Na hai ye paana , na khona hi hai;

Tera na hona jaaneeeeeeeeee,

Kyoun hona hi hai,

Tum se hi din hota hai,surmai shaam aati hai,

Tum se hi -2.

Har ghadi saans aati hai zindagi kehlati hai,

Tum se hi, tum se hi.

Na hai ye paana????????

Na khona hi hai????????

They all stopped when they heard a sound "shall v?"

Soon Muksaan n Vedant joined them.

Poorvi was dancing with Vedant where as Sahil was with Sakshi .Sakshi was enjoying it n so as all of them.

Aankhon me aankhein teri'

Bahon me bahein teri,

Mera na mujh me kuch raha,hua kyaaaaaaaaaaa

Baaton me baatein teri,

Raatein saugatein teri,

Kyoun tera sab ye ho gaya

Hua kya?????..

Mai kahin bhi jaata hoon ,

Tum se hi mil jaata hoon.

Shor me khamoshi hai,

Thodi se behoshi hai

Tum se hi-2

Na??????????????.

Both of guys were spinning the gals in their arms. Vedant was lost in Poorvi completely where as Sahil was lost in Sakshi's smile.

Muskaan was feeling uncomfortable at this scenario. She pulled Nikki's hand n said "chal jara mujhe tujh se kuch baat karni hai"

"Are Muskaan sun to achank kya ho gaya is ladki ko?" Nikki was surprised.

She went out side with her.

"Kya hua bata to yahan aise sab ko chod kar kyoun chali aayi tu?" Nikki asked.

Adha sa wada kabhi;

Adhe se jyada kabhi,

Jee chahe kar loo is tarahhhhhh;

Wafa kaaaaaa;

Tode na tute kabhi,

Chode na choote kabhi;

Jo dhaga tum se jud gaya,

Wafa kaaaaaaaaaaa

Mai tera sarmaya hoon,

jo bhi mai ban paaya hoon;

Tum se hi-2

Raste mil jaate hain,

Manjile mil jaate hain,

Tum se hi-2

Na hai ye paana , na khona hi hai;

Tera na hona jaaneeeeeeeeee,

Kyoun hona hi hai,

Tum se hi din hota hai, surmai shaam aati hai,

Tum se hi -2.

Har ghadi saans aati hai zindagi kehlati hai,

Tum se hi, tum se hi.

Na hai ye paana????????

Na khona hi hai????????

Aa aa aa aa aa aa??????..

Song was finished but our beautiful couples were still there with each other in same position.

Vedant ko pata nahi kya hua tha ki us ko lag raha tha kaash Poorvi us ki bahon me huemsha aise hi rahe.Poorvi ka man bhi aisa hi kuch soch raha tha. Vedant k haaton me haath aur kamar par haath rakhne se Poorvi k man me kuch hulchul ho rahi thi.

Sahil ka haal bhi Vedant se juda nahi tha jis ladki ko vo bachpan se itna pyaar karta hai aaj tak us se izhaar nahi kar paya hai. Pata nahi kyoun Sakshi ko dekhte hi Sahil sab kuch bhool jata hai. Us k hothon ki hassi dekh kar us ko lagta hai ki us ki poori duniya Sakshi ki hassi me hi simat gayi hai. Vahan Sakshi ka bhi dhyan nahi tha aaj Vedant par vo Sahil ki aankhon me kuch alag sa mehsoos kar rahi thi apne liye. Kuch tha Sahil k andar jo bahar aane k liye tadap raha tha par vo kya hai.

Sakshi was the first one who notices that the song has been finished. She came out from her thoughts n said, "Hey guys song has finished."

Poorvi n Vedant came out from their dream land n smiled.

Good going yaar.👏 U choose both my fav songs in this update darling i just love them 😊 n the situation is also fantastic.😃 Aaj pehli baar Sakshi ko Sahil ki aankhon me dosti k alawa bhi kuch aur dikh raha hai na yahi to pyaar hai jis ko vo deserve karti hai.😳 Tabhi kuch der k liye vo bhi kho gayi us ki aankhon me 😉 par fauran vapas bhi aa gayi apne khayalon se.😛 amazing n wonderful.🤗 Vedant ko to vaise bhi aaj kal Poorvi n us ki cuteness bahut acchi lag rahi hai na.😆
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye raha next part guys:-

"Kyoun na hum log kal Siddhi Mandir aur Gurner chalein?" Muskaan suggested.

Tabhi Nikki ka mobile ring hua koi msg aaya tha. She checked it. It was Shikhar's sms ki he has reached here n waiting for her in garden.

She sneaked out from there b/w the discussion n went straight to garden.

"Kabhi socha hai is tarah agar mai milne aayi tum se aur kisi ne dekh liya to?" Nikki asked.

Shikhar turned n smiled at her. "Keh dena apne pyaar se milne aayi thi." He said with naughtiness.

"Aur tum kya kahoge?" Nikki asked him again.

After thinking he said, "Mai kahoonga ki mai apni jaan aur zindagi se milne aaya hoon." He came closer to her.

Nikki's eyes filled with tears.

"Aie kya hua?"Shikhar was very close to her now. He wiped her tears with his lips.

Nikki was feeling a warm sensation when he moved closer to her n sucked her tears with his lips.She could hardly reply.

"Kuch nahi. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujh se itna pyaar kar sakte ho." Nikki said. She was feeling sinking in his eyes.

"Mai tum se kitna pyaar karta hoon ye to mai words me bata hi nahi sakta." He was silent n looking straight in her eyes.

The eyes which were showing love, care, affection n every thing to him. A desire was rising in their hearts to be with each other always like this to touch each other , to love each other with no limitations. Their desires were getting heated up as the weather.

Soon their lips met n sealed in a long n deep kiss He kissed her with full passion. Her eyes were closed tightly. He was rubbing her thighs. They both were lost in each other.

Here in room:-

All have discussed about Siddhi Mandir aur Gurner. Ye Solan se kuch hi door tha par laut k aate aate raat ho jaati isiliye ye decide hua ki sab log vahin night stay karenge.

"Chalo khana lag gaya hai sab k sab khana kha lete hain." Poorvi called them.

"Haan aa rahe hain hum sab." Vedant replied which made Muskaan giggling.

"Oh shit", Vedant embarrassed in front of his sis.

Sarthak was watching her face lovingly n Muskaan was not aware of it. Pata nahi Muskaan ka hasta hua face dekh kar us ko itna chain pada jaise us k dil se kitna bada bhojh kam ho gaya ho. Where as Sakshi was watching all of them.

"Ab is ko kya hua?" Sahil was confused. He asked Muskaan, "Kyoun has rahi hai?"

"Aao na sab." Poorvi called again.

"Chal yaar chod is ko na." Vedant said n gave an angry look to Muskaan.

"Pyaar kiya to darna kya?

Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya?

Pyaar kiya koi chori nahi ki;

Chup-2 aanhein bharna kya?

Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya?-2"

Muskaan was humming the song intentionally. But two people were getting it n blushing. They were no one else our Sahil n Vedant.

Sarthak was surprised to hear her song humming. Vo is baat se anjaan tha ki koi ladki itna accha humming kar sakti hai to gaati kitna accha hogi vo.He was giving a cute smile n continuously gazing her. Soon she realized his look which made her uneasy so she stopped singing.

Vatsal was watching it all he whispered in Sarthak's ear, "Abe yahan nain mattka karega na to pata nahi kya haalat karenge is k bhai humara."

Sarthak gazed him. He smiled. Mauli ko kuch nahi samajh aa raha tha ki ho kya raha hai he asked Sarthak, "Bhaiya is everthing fine?"

"Yeah offcourse kya hoga?" He replied tried to sound normal as usual.

They were about to start when Nikki n Shikhar entered there.

"Are waah khaane k time aaye ho pehle nahi aa sakte the kya?" Sahil asked Shikhar in a teasing manner.

"Are yaar tu to jaanta hai na office khatam hote hote itna time to ho hi jaata hai na." Shikhar tried to explain.

"Chal bahane banana bund kar aa baith. Tujhe baaki k logon se milwata hoon." Vedant called him n made her sit besides him n introduced with all.

After intro Sakshi asked Nikki intentionally, "Tu kahan mile Shikhar se. Aur tu thi kahan?" in a teasing manner.

Nikki had nothing to answer. Sakshi was smilng whereas Nikki was blushing so finally Shikhar said, "Actually ye garden me thi jab mai aaya to hum vahan se saath baate karte karte aa gaye andar." Kya bolta aur kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha use.

Sakshi was about to laugh at his excuse but before he could say any thing. Vedant as a senseior bro asked Nikki, "Tu is time garden me kya kar rahi thi?"

Ab kya kare? Koi aur jawaab dhoondhe to fir question nikal aayega. Vaise bhi Vedant is so protective towards his both sis so he asked.

"Accha bus bhi karo khana start karo na." Sakshi said trying to avoid the topic n winked Nikki.

All of them left soon in night so they can prepare for tomorrow.

Sarthak didn't find time today to talk her. He decided to talk her tomorrow. They all went to there places.

Now Sakshi's house has become totally empty. Ab us k andar itni der se chipa hua dard bahar aa hi gaya. She started crying harder n harder. Itna to aaj tak kabhi bhi na royi thi vo jab se thodi samjhdaar hue thi. She was totally lost. Her tears were flowing continuously.

Bejaan Dil Ko Bejaan Dil Ko Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda KiyaPhir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya Pata nahi kyoun par aaj Sakshi ki aankhon k saamne bachpan se aaj tak k saare manjar aa jaa rahe the. Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Us ko yaad aa raha tha ki kaise Vedant, Poorvi, Muskaan, Sahil , Nikki aur vo poora apna time ek doosre k saath masti kar kar k beta betate the aur sab ki daat bhi khate the.

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Fir us ko yaad aata hai ki kaise sab Sakshi ko padhaku padhaku keh kar chidate the par vo Vedant hi tha jo humesha Sakshi ka saath deta tha.

Ajab Hai Ishq YaaraPal Do Pal Ki KhushiyaanGam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain Jab se is dil ne dhadkana shuru kiya hai tab se vo Vedant k liye hi dhadak raha hai par aaj us ko meri feelings ka jara bhi dhyaan nahi hai, aaj tak uk ko mehsoos hi nahi hua ki mai us k liye kya feel karti hoon. Milti Hai TanhaiyaanKabhi Aansoon Kabhi AaheinKabhi Shikve Kabhi NaaleinTera Chehra Nazar AayeTera Chehra Nazar Aaye Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon MeinTeri Yaadein TadpayeinTeri Yaadein Tadpayein Raaton Ke Andheron MeinTera Chehra Nazar Aaye Kaafi kuch tha Sakshi ki zindagi me jo kahin na kahin Vedant se gehre se juda tha par na jaane kya ho gaya ek hi pal me ki us ka sab chin gaya. Us ne apne kaano se aaj Nikki, Vedant aur Muskaan ko ye baat karte hue suna aur apni aankhon se dekha tha sab. Machal Machalke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein Ek baar Sakshi ko kuch ladkon ne tease kiya to Vedant ne unhe bahut buri tarah mara tha."Par kyoun har baar mere saath hi hota hai aisa? Maine kisi ka kya bigada hai bhagwaan?" Agar Mile Khuda ToPoochhoonga KhudayaJism Mujhe Deke Mitti KaSheeshay Sa Dil Kyon BanayaAur Us Pe Diya FitratKe Woh Karta Hai MohabbatWah Re Wah Teri KudratWah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya KismatKabhi Hai Milan Kabhi FurqatKabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat Hai Yehi Kya Vo MohabbatWah Re Wah Teri KudratSisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

"Maine to aaj tak kisi ka dil bhi nahi dukhaya na bhagwaan fir tum kyoun mere saath kar rahe ho aisa? Bachpan se aaj tak mujhe vo nahi mila jo mai chahti thi par ab nahi hota sehan pls mujhe de do mera pyaar wapas, pls bhgawaan."Her tears were flowing constantly because of her pain.

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi HaiMujhko Saza Di pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah KiyaTo Lut Gaye Haan Lut GayeTo Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Vaah re mohabbat kaise kaise rang dekhati hai to sab ko, kisi ko ansoon kisi ko hassi deti hai tu.

Oh my god,😲 kitna bada jhatka laga hai Sakshi ko,😭 us ko shak tha is baat ka par jab us ko apni frnd k muh se ye sach pata chala to ............ that's really very much hurting yaar.😳 Koi bhi ladki bachpan se jis ladke ko chahti hai achanak us k baare me aisa sun kar kaise vo bear kar sakti hai 😒 i am really feeling unhappy for her yaar.😔 Ye Shikhar aur Nikki to har jagah chaloo ho jaate hain na 😳 aur Muskaan ka in dono ko tease karne ka program bhi chal raha hai.😊 Sarthak ko to vaise bhi aaj kal Muskaan k alawa kuch nahi samajh aata hai. 😆 Vo to us ki har ek cheej se aaj kal impress ho jaata hai na.😛 Lage raho.😉
Perfect song for such situation.👏
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. At last Vatsal has said it all. But I think now Mouli shud stop playing games wid him. Poor guy!!!! He must be feeling really bad na. Sarthak n Mouli r too naughty. But must say the ending was gr8. W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

Thanks dear,😃 😃 😃 Mujhe lagta hai ki Muski k saath rehte rehte Sarthak ko aaj kal kuch jyada hi shaitaani karna aa gaya hai.😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

a fabulous update.....tooo good bus ek bat ki kami thi Muskaan !
i missed her soooooooo much.....

Thanks namita dear,😛 😛 😛 i know u missed them but in this update u will come to know about their plans.😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Thnx for d pm....
Just loved the update..Finally Vatsal proposed Mauli...But why is she playing games with him??????I really missed Sarthak n Muskaan in dis update..Nyways inki lovestory bhi ab start ho jaani chahiye
Do update soon

Hello Suhana dear,😊 😊 😊
ab baar baar thanks for pm keh kar mujhe sharminda mat karo na.😳 😳 😳
Mauli itna ghumaa rahi hai tabhi ab vo bolne jaa raha hai i love u varna pata nahi kab keh paata.😆 😆 😆
Ab is part me thoda plan pata chal hi jaayega tum ko dono ka (Arth n Muski ka).😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowwo cool partt i love it so muchh

thank u dear.😳 😳 😳
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Originally posted by: srojaleen

finally...mai tere zindagi main aa gayi...matlab tere fic 'zindagi bas yu hi' mai aa gayi...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

thanks madam.😃 😃 😃
first of all...pure ud main maine sarthak aur mushkaan ko baht miss kiya...!!! par Vatshal aur Mauli k love story ko bhi to sahi track par lana tha na...!!! to bilkul sahi ud tha...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
kuch to karna hi tha na in dono k liye tabhi yahan aisa karna pada.😉 😉 😉
'tum sab k sath karungi...' yeh mauli ne bilkul sahi tarike se baat ko badal di...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 bechara vatshal to pahle se hi dukhi tha...aur mauli use jhuthi kahaniyan sana kar aur jyada dukhi kar rahi hai...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
1...tum chale gaye to mera kya hoga...😉 😉 😉
2...par mujhe bas tum chahiye...😉 😉 😉
3...mere bina kaam nahin chal sakta...😭 😭 😭
...kabhi nahin...😉 😉 😉
yeh sabhi double meanings wale dial the...!!! par phir bhi stupid vatshal k samajh main kuch nahin aaya...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Sach me yaar how can someone b so buddhu.😡 😡 😡
lekin jise kahna tha...ab tak to nahin kah paya tha...lekin us k bhai se bol gaya...nashe main...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
apne dil ki baat bus apne dost se hi to kahega na.😳 😳 😳
thank god...k akhirkaar vatshal ne confess kar hi diya...!!! vaise us ka daarna sahi tha...mauli k father ko le kar...!!! lekin... "jab miyaan(vatshal) biwi(mauli) raji to kya karenge mauli k pujya pitaji"....!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
sach me aisa hi hota hai.😉 😉 😉
by d way...yaar...too gud ud...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! dekh le detailed comment kiya hai...!!! matlab mujhe yeh ud kitna achha laga...yeh ab bol ne jarurat to nahin hai na...!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
thank u so much dear.😛 😛 😛
ab ek kaam kar jaldi se next ud post karde...achhi bachhi ki tarah...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Bus abhi aane jaa raha hai.😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HI VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE..
THE UD WAS...
AWESOOOOOOOOME............
AMAZING..
GR8.
SUPERB...............
MINDBLOWING..............
TOO GOOD.......
PLZ DO CONT. SOON..
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

Thank u so much Preeti jee.😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Good madam kya baat hai? 😃

thanks Drishti 😃 😃 😃
Sab ki love story ko kitne acche se handel kiya jaa sakta hai koi aap se pooche.😉
thank u again.😛 😛 😛
Vatsal ko hint pe hint de rahi thi Mauli par us dhakaan prashad k kuch samajh aaye tab na.
sach me poora dhakaan hi hai Vatsal.😉 😉 😉
Khair accha hua jyada bardaasht nahi kar paaya vo aur us ne aakhir Mauli se keh hi diya i love u.😛
kehna hi tha bus samajh nahi aa raha tha na us ko ki kaise kahe vo.😕 😕 😕
ab aage jaldi se update karo.

Thank u so much darling.😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Soooooooooooooo sorry Vertika mai yahan aayi nahi thi kaafi dino se. Abhi aayi to dekha tera fic choot gaya tha reply karne se. 😔
Mujhe maaf kar dena yaar gussa mat hona.🤔
Bahut accha tha update yaar,😊 Sarthak k plan me dum tha maana hi padega. Kitne aaram se us ne Vatsal se nikalwa liya na ki vo pyaar karta hai Mauli se. 😉 Mauli bhi baar baar us ko hint de rahi thi aur vo samajhne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.😲
Mauli se aakhir keh hi diya us ne aur us se raha nahi gaya ab us se.😛 Ye fark Tanmay k aane se jyada pada tha i think.😆
well update fast dear.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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