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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starasdf

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘g8 update yaar๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thank u.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณsarkhat muskaan se milna chata hai hmmmmm๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
kuch kehna hai aur kuch sun na hai.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›poorvi n mauli teasin eac otha๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
lage raho.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
poor poorvi she is so upset n shame on u vedooo
sach me bahut shaitaani karta hai vo.
๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰lookin forward to the rose garden๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
me too.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
COnt. soon
Starโญ๏ธ

just going to update dear.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

yeh sarthak, vatsal aur mauli itni jaldi kyoun ja rahe hain...yaar?? unhe thoda aur nahin rok sakti hai kya...?

mai kaise rok sakti hoon yaar in k dad ne wapas bulaya hai na to batao mai kya karoon?
mushkaan ro rahi hai....jahir si baat hai is baat se sarthak to dukhi hoga hi.
haan mujhe pata hai hona hi hai us ko dukhi.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
sayad muskaan thoda jyada hi naraz hai us se...isiliye us k phone ko avoid kar rahi hai...!!!!! lekin yeh baat achha hai k nikii ko sab pata chal gaya.๐Ÿ˜›
gandi ladki nahi to ek to vo jaane waala hai ye nahi ki kam se kam us ka phone to uthaye.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
poorvi aur mauli ek hi condition main hain...phir bhi ek dushre ko tease kar rahe hai....!!!!๐Ÿ˜† dono k ek hi prob hai...loves me...loves me not...!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜•
is me bhi apna ek maza hai na.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
now main yeh hope kar rahi hoon k next part main sarthak mushkaan ko apne dil ki baat kar hi de...!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
mujhe bhi umeed hai ki jaldi hi is buddhu ko akal aa jaaye.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
ab tere abilities par aati hoon.....tujhe doubt hai na us par....!!! tu bahat achha likhti hai...koi kuch bhi bole tu plz likhna band mat karna.๐Ÿ‘
thank u Priya darling.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
is ud k liye main is se jyada aur kuch nahin kahungiโญ๏ธ
LUV.....PRIYA๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank u bus jaldi hi update karti hoon.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey today i read two more parts the third n second one.

Both were truely superb yaar.
Thanks a lot dear par thoda speed up ho jaa jaldi se.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

I like the way u described all of them and i loved it all.

Thanks again.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

NOOOOOO !!! ye Sarthak aise kaise jaa sakta hai ๐Ÿ˜•


Bechari Muskaan ki toh Muskaan hi kho jayegi
Don't worry dear Muski se bol k jaayega vo.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

waise m egerly waiting to c what Sarthak going to tell Muskaan, sooooooo update dear....

Bus hope so ab keh de vo Muski se apne dil k baat.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›


Just going to update n thanks dear.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yyyy

awesome update dear

Thanks to both of u friends.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA............

HOPE UR FINE............
THE UD WAS..............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME..............
SUPERB............
ROCKING.............
AMAZING................
WONDERFUL.............
BEAUTIFUL...............
JUST TOO GOOD...............
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

Thank u Preeti dear.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Ye hue na baat, koi kuch bhi kahe bus apna kaam karti jaa. ๐Ÿ˜›

Acche baccho k yahi gud hote hain.๐Ÿ˜†
Thank u mam.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I love u for this๐Ÿ˜Š but i hate u for waht u did in this update.๐Ÿ˜ก
ab kya hua?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Yaar ye Sarthak itni jaldi kyoun jaa raha ha? Ye bhi koi baat hue๐Ÿ˜•? Roko us ko na meri Muskaan ro rahi hai na.๐Ÿ˜ญ
Don't worry sab theek ho jaayega.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜ญVedoo chala gaya to Poorvi jj bhi dukhi ho rahi hain.
well nice one,๐Ÿ‘
thank u dear ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š , Vedoo bhi na kya jaroorat hai Poorvi ko chod kar jaane ki.๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
us se kaho pehle apne dil ki baat bataye tab jaaye๐Ÿ˜ฒ, vaise i hope ab bata dega bahut ho gaya hai.๐Ÿ˜‰
yeah right.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
update soon.

Thanks for reply n i will update soon.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Two more parts now.

Such a brilliant fic par yaar ๐Ÿ‘parts i mean updates are very short ๐Ÿ˜•but the pace is nice.๐Ÿ˜ŠI will wait when they are going to meet.๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank u dear friend that u like my fic.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
They both are opposite in nature๐Ÿ˜† , Muskaan is naughty and Sarthak is sensior๐Ÿ˜› . Sarathk is a writer, such nice plot.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Really but have u heard that opposite attracts.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks for reply n i will try to ud soon.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

When will u update dis??????????/

Bus karne jaa rahi hoon yaar update,๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 39

Here Muskaan and Sarthak:-

Muskaan reached there on time but she found Sarthak was waiting for her impatiently when he saw Muskaan entering his heart beats started racing.

"Hello", Muskaan said.

"Hi." He said holding his breath. She was looking pretty in that white suit looking like goddess of love.

"Aap ne mujhe yahan kyoun bulaya hai?" Muskaan asked.

"Tumhe nahi pata hai ki kyoun bulaya hai maine?" Sarthak asked looking at her.

"Nahi mujhe kaise pata hoga? Bulaya aap ne hai na." Muskaan was unable to look into his eyes .

"Muskaan tum ro kyoun rahi thi jab maine bataya ki mujhe aaj wapas jaana hai." He asked staring at her.

Muskaan was blank she doesn't know what to answer for such question. "Nahi mai kahan ro rahi thi." She lied.

"Accha ro nahi rahi thi to saare k saare tissue paper kahan use ho rahe the tumhare?" Sarthak asked in teasing manner.

"Vo mere tissue paper hain mai jahan chahoon us ko use karoo aur kaise bhi use karoon." Muskaan said turning her face against him.

"To meri aankhon me aakhein daal kar yahi baat kaho Muskaan." Sarthak said standing just in front of her.

"Aap kyoun mere peeche pade hain maine kaha na kuch nahi hai aisa." Muskaan said irritatingly now. Par vo jaanti thi ki sach kya hai shayad is such ko ehsaas nahi karna chahti thi isiliye is tarah se bol rahi thi.

Sarthak was hurt by her behavior. He said, "I am sorry. Maine aap ko bekaar me pareshaan kiya. Aap jaa sakti hain ab." He turned with teary eyes.

"Oh shit mai bhi gadhi hoon kya bol gayi." She thought and turned and saw Sarthak walking out.

"Sarthak suno ruko jara." She said sweetly.

He stopped after hearing his name from her mouth, "kya baat hai Msuskaan?" he asked while didn't turn.

"Tum ne mujhe yahan kuch kehne k liye bualaya tha na?" she asked.

"Haan par ab mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe chalna chahiye, Vaise bhi der ho rahi hai na." he said.

Muskaan was surprised by his changed behavior, kyounki itne dino me us ne jis Sarthak ko jaana tha vo bahut pyaara aur sweet tha vo kisi ko bhi hurt ya kisi se rudely bhi baatein nahi kar sakta tha, her eyes moistured but she remain calm and asked, " Sach me kuch nahi kehna hai tum ko?"

He turned and faced her, "Muskaan mai ........" he saw her teary eyes it ached his heart, "Muskaan mai tum ko hurt nahi karna chahta tha par vo mai''" he stopped. " Sorry Muskaan." He said with pain in his eyes.

"Sorry, sorry kis liye Sarthak, tum ne to kuch kiya hi nahi. Maine hi theek se baat nahi ki na tum se." she lowered her eyes.

For sometime Sarthak didn't realize anything he gazed her for some time and slowly he started moving closer to her. Muskaan realized his steps and moved a littlie back.

He was so close to her now. She lowered her eyes and Sarthak touched her chin. His touch made her shiver. He held her chin and rose it to him, "Mai in khoobsurat aankhon me aansoon nahi dekh sakta hoon."

They were lost in each other's eyes.

Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere - 4
Aankhein Teri - 2, Kitni Haseen
Ki Inkaa Aashiq, Mein Ban Gayaa Hoon
Mujhako Basaa Le, Iname Tu
(ishq Hai
Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere - 2) - 3

Ki Inakaa Aashiq, Mein Ban Gayaa Hoon
Mujhako Basaa Le, Iname Tu

Mujhase Yeh Har Ghadi, Meraa Dil Kahe
Tum Hi Ho Usaki Aarzoo
Mujhase Yeh Har Ghadi, Mere Lab Kahe
Teri Hi Ho Sab Guftagoo
Baatein Teri Itni Haseen, Main Yaad Inko Jab Kartaa Hoon
Phoolon Si Aaye, Khushaboo

Rakh Loon Chhupaa Ke Main Kahin Tujhako
Saayaa Bhi Teraa Naa Main Doon
Rakh Loon Banaa Ke Kahin Ghar, Main Tujhe
Saath Tere, Main Hi Rahoon
Julfen Teri, Itni Ghani
Dekh Ke Inako, Yeh Sochataa Hoon
Saaye Me, Inake Main Jiyoon
(ishq Hai
Maula Mere, Maula Mere Maula Mere, Maula Mere - 2) - 3

(meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa, Meraa Dil Yahi Bolaa,
Yaara Raaj Yeh Usane Hai Mujh Par Kholaa
Ki Hai Ishq Mohabbat, Jiske Dil Mein
Usko Pasand Karta Hai Maulaa) ' 3

"Kyoun nahi dekh sakte meri aanhkhon me aansoon?" Muskaan asked innocently.

"Ye to tum bhi jaanti ho Muskaan , kaho tumhara dil nahi batata tum ko kuch jo mera dil kehta hai mujh se?" he asked looking in her eyes.

"Nahi kuch nahi kehta hai mera dil mujh se." she tried to escape from his grip though she did not want that.

"Mai tum ko batata hoon ki tumhara dil kya kehta hai tum se. Vo kehta hai ki Muskaan Sarthak tumhara apna hai, vo tum ko apna manta hai, us k dekhne se tumhare andar hulchul hone lagti hai; us k paas aate hi tumhara dil jor jor se dhadkane lagta hai, us k choone se tum madhosh hone lagti ho, us ko yaad kar k tumhare hothon par muskurahat aa jaati hai, vo tumhare dard ko apne andar sama lena chahta hai bolo lagta hai ya nahi aisa?" Sarthak asked.

Muskaan was just watching his face, she didn't say any thing.

"Dil aisa kyoun kehta hai Muskaan jaanti ho?" he asked.

She shook her head in negative way.

"Kyouki vo jaanta hai ki I love u. Mai tum se bahut jyada pyaar karta hoon aur karta rahoonga aur mai bhi jaanta hoon ki tum bhi mujh se bahut pyaar karti ho." Saying this he left her from his grip.

She doesn't know what to say she remains stood their dumbstruck . Sarthak's cell rang,

"Hello kahan hai jaldi aa na." Vatsal asked.

"Haan bus aa raha hoon kuch der me." He said and hung the phone.

"Theek hai Muskaan mujhe tumhara jawab mil gaya mai jaa raha hoon aaj k baad pata nahi fir milenge ki nahi. Par mai humesha ye chahoonga ki tum jahan bhi raho khush raho." He turned and started moving.

'Mujhe rok lo Muskaan ek baar rok lo, ek baar apne gale laga lo, ek baar mai tum ko pyaar karna chahta hoon jaanse se pehle.' Tears were coming out from his eyes.

Muskaan was lost in another word; she doesn't know how to respond. "Rok le Muskaan us ko, koi aisa jo tujhe pyaar kare aisa koi kismat se hi milta hai, jaane mat de us ko apne paas se; rok le ,rok le us ko........." Us ka dil bola.

"Ruk jaaiye Sarthak, pls meri khatir." She called him.

It made Sarthak stop; he was unable to control his tears.

Muskaan ran to him and hugged him tight, "I love u Sarthak." She said holding her breath.

He too hugged her with his full force, "I love u Muskaan, mai tumhare bina ek pal nahi jee sakta hoon." His tears knew no boundation of joy."Pata nahi par mujhe laga ki kahin maine tum se sach bol kar tum ko kho to nahi diya hai na."

"Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai kabhi, pyaar to mai bhi karti thi bus keh nahi paayi na. Aur mujhe ab tum se koi bhi juda nahi kar paayega." Muskaan said.

lamha lamha doori yun pighalti,
haijaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai,
ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti;
haijaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti, haikhwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti haila la la ...

"Mujhe chod k to nahi jaaogi kahin Muskaan, mai mar jaaoonga tumhare bina." He said breathing harder.

Hello guys to ye raha vo part jis ki aap sab ko bechaini se ab maine finally dono ko mila diya hai I hope aap sab khush honge aur I am sure that I will get good number of replies for that.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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