Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#461

yeh sarthak, vatsal aur mauli itni jaldi kyoun ja rahe hain...yaar?? unhe thoda aur nahin rok sakti hai kya...?

mushkaan ro rahi hai....jahir si baat hai is baat se sarthak to dukhi hoga hi.

sayad muskaan thoda jyada hi naraz hai us se...isiliye us k phone ko avoid kar rahi hai...!!!!! lekin yeh baat achha hai k nikii ko sab pata chal gaya.😛

poorvi aur mauli ek hi condition main hain...phir bhi ek dushre ko tease kar rahe hai....!!!!😆 dono k ek hi prob hai...loves me...loves me not...!!!!!!😕 now main yeh hope kar rahi hoon k next part main sarthak mushkaan ko apne dil ki baat kar hi de...!!!!😃 ab tere abilities par aati hoon.....tujhe doubt hai na us par....!!! tu bahat achha likhti hai...koi kuch bhi bole tu plz likhna band mat karna.👏

is ud k liye main is se jyada aur kuch nahin kahungi⭐️

LUV.....PRIYA😊

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#462

Hey today i read two more parts the third n second one.

Both were truely superb yaar.

I like the way u described all of them and i loved it all.

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#463

NOOOOOO !!! ye Sarthak aise kaise jaa sakta hai 😕

Bechari Muskaan ki toh Muskaan hi kho jayegi

waise m egerly waiting to c what Sarthak going to tell Muskaan, sooooooo update dear....

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362035

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Posted: 16 years ago

#464

HII VARTIKA............

HOPE UR FINE............

THE UD WAS..............

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME..............

SUPERB............

ROCKING.............

AMAZING................

WONDERFUL.............

BEAUTIFUL...............

JUST TOO GOOD...............

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#465

Ye hue na baat, koi kuch bhi kahe bus apna kaam karti jaa. 😛

Acche baccho k yahi gud hote hain.😆

I love u for this😊 but i hate u for waht u did in this update.😡

Yaar ye Sarthak itni jaldi kyoun jaa raha ha? Ye bhi koi baat hue😕? Roko us ko na meri Muskaan ro rahi hai na.😭Vedoo chala gaya to Poorvi jj bhi dukhi ho rahi hain.

well nice one,👏

us se kaho pehle apne dil ki baat bataye tab jaaye😲, vaise i hope ab bata dega bahut ho gaya hai.😉

update soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#466

Two more parts now.

Such a brilliant fic par yaar 👏parts i mean updates are very short 😕but the pace is nice.😊I will wait when they are going to meet.😉

They both are opposite in nature😆 , Muskaan is naughty and Sarthak is sensior😛 . Sarathk is a writer, such nice plot.😃

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#467

When will u update dis??????????/

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
updt was awesome...loved d convo btwn poorvi n mauli...also d gals convincing muskaan .....part was too good....

Gals convience kar rahi hai Muski ko par vo bhi pata nahi kyoun mere Sarthak ko tadpa rahi hai ? not fair na.😕😕😕

thank u buddy for reply.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Update was really gud...👏👏👏But Sarthak.Mauli n Vatsal r leaving...😲😲😲..
Un dono k dad ka aadesh hai maana to padega na.

I didn't like it. sab kitne khush the n they were enjoying so much dere..But work is also important..Muskaan is crying n Sarthak is so sad to see her like dis...😭

Yeah he knows the reason but soon they both will confess there feelings for each other.😉😉😉

Why was she not receiving Sarthak's call??? n the result was that Niki heard everything..😉😉😉 ...So he fianlly wants to meet her one last time b4 going..Its time to propose 👍🏼 ..

Yeah, she is angry with him that's y she is doing childish deeds.😆😆😆

Mauli loves Vatsal but she is not sure whether he loves her or not(Cant u see dis fool..He is head over heals in love with u)..Same is the case with Poorvi..She is in same state as Mauli..(Pls give dem some brain....😳😳😳)

Vedoo ne to shaitaani ki jo nahi bataya Poorvi ko 😆😆😆 par really Vatsal loves her a lot.😛😛😛

I am waiting for the next update where Sarthak will propose Muskaan ..Pls update dat part fast...........................😛......................

Thanks darling bus mai jaa rahi hoon update karne.😃😃😃

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Shree85
Hi Vertika
Hello Shree dear😊😊😊

The part was awesome. U have updated it after such a long time but waiting was worth it.

Thank u yaar.😛😛😛

Now Sarthak is going to propose to Muskaan and Poorvi is also doing her best so that Mauli can also confess her feelings for Vatsal.

Ek pair tp kar lega na confess doosre ka mai nahi bata paaongi.😕😕😕

Waiting for the next part eagerly. Do update it soon.

Thanks n haan bus aa raha hai update.😃😃😃

With lots of Love and Wishes

Shree