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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Ye sab baatein kaun kehta hai yaar? 😲

Maine to aaj tak kabhi aisa nahi feel kiya ki tera fic boaring hai yaar, jis ko lagta hai aisa vo na padhe is ko.😡
ab jaldi se update kar na fic.

it's all clear darling ab maine sab k opinion le liye hain n they all said they still read it.😉😉😉
thanks for being with me.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey Mahak thanks for this fic yaar,

i love Prachi n she is in this fic really good.

Maine abhi is ka bus first part padha hai jaldi hi baaki padh kar bhi comment karoongi.

ur welcome dear,😃😃😃
me too love Prachi very much.😉😉😉
N i hope mujhe jaldi hi aur bhi comments milenge.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE.............

HAPPY DIWALI TO U AND UR FAMILY.............
THE UD WAS............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOME.................
ROCKING..............
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JUST TOO GOOD..............
AMAZING....................
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WONDERFUL...............
TAKE CARE............
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PTITI.

thank u n happy Deewali to u too n ur family too.😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Please Update it soon

Originally posted by: varshita

kab hoga ye update yaar?

bus aa raha hai update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

"Par paa abhi to ''.." she couldn't complete.

"Aap aa jaiye hum phir baat karte hain." Saying this he hung the phone.

"Are kya hua? Sab theek to hai na?" Sarthak asked concerned.

"Paa ne kal wapas bulaya hai hum sab ko." Mauli said.

"Kya ???????? Par itni jaldi kyoun yaar?" Vatsal asked.

"Pata nahi vo keh rahe the ki kuch urgent baat karni hai." Mauli was tensed.

"Tu itni tensed kyoun ho rahi hai?" Sarthak asked whereas Vatsal was watching her face silently.

"Pata nahi kyoun bhaiya mujhe kuch accha nahi lag raha hai." Mauli said.

"Aisa kuch nahi hai. Mai abhi travel agent ko phone karta hoon aaj shaam ki tickets k liye." Vatsal said in assuring tone.

Sarthak was not ready to go so soon but it was urgent now so as being a son he must perform his duty know.

Mauli was tensed and Sarthak was not happy to leave here at once.

"Kya baat hai tum dono bade tense lag rahe ho baat kya hai?" Vedant asked.

"Vo hume aaj shaam ko nikalna hai." Sarthak said.

"Par achanak kyoun?" Muskaan asked in surprise tone.

"Vo dad ka phone aaya tha abhi thodi der pehle un ko koi jarori kaam hai hum se isiliye hume aaj hi jaana hoga." Mauli said.

Muskaan was now so much restless after hearing it all. Sarthak was watching her with love but she was lost somewhere.

"Hum log wahan pahuchte hi nikal lenge." Mauli told.

"Tickets ka arrangement ho gaya hai. Aaj raat ki plane hai hume airport shaam saat baje tak pahuchna hai abhi 12'0 clock hue hain." Vatsal said.

"Bus hum pahuchne hi waale hain kuch der me." Vedant said. "Par agar aap log kuch aur din rukte to accha hota." He said.

"Sorry yaar mai kya karoo mera bhi man nahi hai jaane ka par kabhi kabhi responsibilities jaroori hai na." Sarthak said watching Muskaan's face.

Muskaan's eyes were wet now. She was unable to hold it more so she hides her face with a newspaper and started crying. No one realize it except Sarthak. He became sadder now.

"Us ko bata dena jaane se pehle." Vatsal said.

He nodded because he knew that Vatsal knows him well and there is no profit to hide it with Vatsal.

Soon they reached Solan and went to pack their bags from the cottage. Sarthak was in mood to talk so he was doing his work silently.

He called Muskaan but she was not receiving his call.

"Shit," he said only.

"Muskaan ek baar to phone utha na vo jaa raha hai." Nikki said.

"Nahi mai nahi karoongi baat us se. Jab vo jaa raha hai to jaaye us ko meri thodi bhi parwaah nahi hai to mai kya karoon." She was still crying.

"Agar parwaah nahi hoti to phone kyoun karta vo tujhe baar baar?" Nikki asked.

"Haan yaar ek baar to baat kar le at least na." Sakshi requested her.

He called again and Nikki picked up the phone this time but before she could say something Sarthak said, "Muskaan please ek baar jaane k pehle mujh se mil lo pls. I will wait for u in Rose Garden with in half an hour." He hung the phone saying this.

"Kamaal ka ladka hai mere kuch bolne se pehle hi apna sab kuch bol gayaa." Nikki smiled at him.

"Kya kaha us ne?" Muskaan asked.

"Kya baat hai ab badi bechaini hai us ki baatein sun ne ki; pehle to baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi." Nikki teased her.

"Pls bata na." Muskaan pleaded.

"Mujhe kya milega badle me?" she asked naughtily.

"One night in Goa with Shikhar free." Muskaan teased her, "Vo kuch bhi kare tere saath sab free." again she said.

Nikki blushed really hard this time. "Daht shaitaan nahi to. Le sun adhe ghante me tujhe milne bulaya hai Rose Garden me akele." Nikki winked.

It was Muskaan's turn to blush this time.

"Accha jaldi se ready ho jaa varna wait karna padega bechare humare hone waale jee ja ji ko." Sakshi teased now.

Muskaan's cheeks were getting redder this time.

Here Mauli was trying to find her bhai but she was unable to find her brother.

"Offo ye bhaiya kahan chale gaye; mai kab se doondh rahi hoon in ko?" Mauli was murmuring.

"Kya hua yaar?" Poorvi asked. In kuch dino me Mauli aur Poorvi kaafi acche dost ban gaye the.

"Are yaar pata nahi bhaiya kahan chale gaye hain mil nahi rahe hain." She said looking tensed.

"Tera bhai kuch kaam se thodi door tak nikal gaya hai us ko aane me time lagega tab tak tu ready ho jaa aur haan us ka samaan apun pack kar lega." Vatsal said n was about to leave when Mauli said.

"Thanks Vatsal," she said and he smiled at her before leaving.

"Chal mai teri help kar deti hoon." Poorvi said bringing her in her room.

They both went busy in packing and finally when it was all done Poorvi asked Mauli, "Ek baat pooch? Bura to nahi maanegi tu?"

"Come on yaar pooch na doston ki baton ka bura nahi maana jaata hai." Mauli said combing her hair.

"Tere aur Vatsal me koi chakkar hai na?" she asked her.

Mauli was amazed to listen this from any one else. She stopped combing her hair and looked at Poorvi.

"Bata na kya baat hai? Kahin maine aisa to kuch nahi pooch liya na jo mujhe nahi poochna tha." Poorvi gave a confused expression.

"Pata nahi mujhe kyoun aisa lagta hai ki mai Vatsal ko pasand karti hoon bus is se jyada aur kuch nahi hai." Mauli said.

"Ohoooo" she said in a teasing way, "To aap pasand karti hai Vatsal ko. Good aur us se aage aapne kuch socha nahi." Poorvi said in a teasing tone.

"Haan yaar pata nahi jab vo mere aas paas hota hai to mere man me hulchul muchti hai. Vo jab mere paas aata hai to meri dhadkane badh jaati hain aur agar vo kabhi galti se mujhe touch kar leta hai to saare bandan me jaise bijliyan daudne lagti hain jab vo mujhe dekha hai to sharam aa jati hai mujhe. Pata nahi kyoun aisa lagta hai mujhe?" Mauli was saying all this in a dreamy tone.

"Ye pyaar hai my dear pyaar, love, ishq, mohhabat , prem jo tu karti hai Vatsal se aur me karti hoon Vedant''''.oops." she bit her lower lip ki kya bol gayi vo.

"Oho to aap pyaar karti hai Vedoo se kyoun?" , now it was Mauli's turn to tease her.

Poorvi knew that there is no need to keep this as a secret any more so she decided to accept the truth, "Haan mujhe accha lagta hai Vedoo aur really I love him par'''" she stopped.

"Par kya?" Mauli asked.

"Vo kisi aur se pyaar karta hai kyounki us ne mere se kaha ki us ladki se vo jaldi hi mujhe milayega." Poorvi said it sadly.

"Kya?" Mauli shocked.

"Haan yahi sach hai." Poorvi was disappointed.

"Koi baat nahi yaar ek din jab us ko pata chalega to mujhe lagta hai vo tere pyaar ko samjhega aur tujhe hi milega." Mauli said .

"Accha mera chod apna bata ki tune abhi Vatsal ko bataya ki nahi?" Poorvi asked.

"Yaar pata nahi Vatsal kya sochta hai mere bare me? Kaise kya bataoo us ko samjh nahi aa raha hai." Mauli said thoughtfully.

"To pehle batana to padega na us ko tab dekh kya bolta hai vo." Poorvi said.

"Haan par agar vo bhi kisi aur se pyaar karta hua to?" Mauli asked.

"Mujhe nahi lagta." Poorvi said.

"Kyoun nahi lagta hai aap ko?" Mauli asked with a confused face.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
updt was awesome...loved d convo btwn poorvi n mauli...also d gals convincing muskaan .....part was too good....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starasdf

👏👏👏heyy great ff i just ran through it too understand that story and itz simply great but dun separate the couples they are soo cute 😳😳😳

yaar jaana to hoga hi na Sarthak ko n thanks.😊😊😊
😡😛😡how mean vedant is habing fun while poorvi is tensed😡😛😡
shaitaani kar raha hai Vedoo bus.😆😆😆
😳😳😳Muskan just confess to sarkhat if not than sarkhat should confess 😳😳😳
bus coming soon.😉😉😉
could u plz pm me when u update if itz not problem thxx
shure y not yaar.😛😛😛
Star⭐️

sorry yaar ye mere se miss ho gaya tha.😕😕😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
Update was really gud...👏👏👏But Sarthak.Mauli n Vatsal r leaving...😲😲😲..
I didn't like it. sab kitne khush the n they were enjoying so much dere..But work is also important..Muskaan is crying n Sarthak is so sad to see her like dis...😭
Why was she not receiving Sarthak's call??? n the result was that Niki heard everything..😉😉😉 ...So he fianlly wants to meet her one last time b4 going..Its time to propose 👍🏼 ..
Mauli loves Vatsal but she is not sure whether he loves her or not(Cant u see dis fool..He is head over heals in love with u)..Same is the case with Poorvi..She is in same state as Mauli..(Pls give dem some brain....😳😳😳)
I am waiting for the next update where Sarthak will propose Muskaan ..Pls update dat part fast...........................😛......................
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
The part was awesome. U have updated it after such a long time but waiting was worth it. Now Sarthak is going to propose to Muskaan and Poorvi is also doing her best so that Mauli can also confess her feelings for Vatsal. Waiting for the next part eagerly. Do update it soon.
With lots of Love and Wishes
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏👏👏g8 update yaar👏👏👏
😳😳😳sarkhat muskaan se milna chata hai hmmmmm😳😳😳
😛😛😛poorvi n mauli teasin eac otha😛😛😛
poor poorvi she is so upset n shame on u vedooo
😉😛😉lookin forward to the rose garden😉😛😉
COnt. soon
Star⭐️

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