Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 45

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

😡😡 dis is really bad...........kisi ek ki wajah se apne kabiliyat par shak karna thik nahin hai

we have read ur previous fics n dos wer brilliant n so is dis....

plzz dont stop dis.....

u r awesome.........n dis is honest answer

Originally posted by: srojaleen

Dekh.....agar tune is fic ko band karne k bare main socha bhi na...to mujh se bura koi nahin hoga......😡 samjhi....!!!!!

yaar itna naraj hone ki jaroorat nahi hai😉😉😉 par mai apne fics se bahut jyada attach hoon aur mai un k baare me genuine baaton k alawa aur kuch nahi bardaasht kar paati hoon.

are yaar...koi kuch bhi bole tujhe kya farq padta hai.....!!!! hum sab hain na tere sath...!!!! tu fiqar kyoun karti hai.....!!!! agar tere readers ko tera yeh fic pasand nahin aata to woh tujhe comment hi kyoun karte...!!!!

thank u Priya.😃😃😃

tujhe kisi ek k nahin balki hum sab ki sochni chahiye....hum sab tera fic padhte hain aur use appreciate bhi karte hain....phir tu dukhi kyoun hoti hai.....!!!!!

main nahin janti k kis ne tujh se kya kaha .....!!!! in fact main janna chahti bhi nahin hoon...!!!! main sirf itna us se kahna chahti hoon k agar woh encourage nahin kar sakti to kam se kam dis-courage to na kare.....!!!!!!

mai kya kahoon maine khud kabhi aisa nahi socha tha ki koi kahega aisa.😕😕😕

tu bindaas ud bhej....hum sab hain na use appreciate karne k liye.

luv.......PRIYA👍🏼

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Vertika,

Fabulous update dear....i know m tooooo late for comment but i missed 2 updates of it....😕😕😕 i just catch up with them read it, n i simply luved it....i really feel Bad for Saakshi 😭😭😭 poor girl
n most important Sarthak n Muskaan part was Owesome....he is damn cute dear n finally he is able to tell Muskaan what he feel for her😳😳😳
yaar yeh Shikhar ka kuch nahi ho sakta....he is so much in luv with Nikki....😳n what a Plan made by all the girls, waah!!!
i didn't Muskaan itni naughty hai ...kya kya sawal puchati hai......
well in all fantastic update n waiting for another one...

Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi Vertika

Yaar how do you think these type of scenes. They are too good yaar. They are so romantic. I love the scene between Muskaan and Sarthak. Please continue soon.

HAPPY DIWALI

With Lots of Love

Shree

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

fantastic updt👏

Originally posted by: rituka7

update was excellent
update soon long asap

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud.cont soon.............

Originally posted by: srojaleen

hiiii vertika...dis ud was amazing dear. vedant ne purvi ko tease kiya.....lekin akhir tak us ladki ka naam nahin bataya.......😉😉 wowwwwwww mushkan aur shathak k bich romance chalu hai....bina ek dushre se apni feelings express kiye...itz tooo good😛😛 sare girls ne kya plan banaya tha...nikki ko range hathon pakad ne k liye...itz funny😆😆aur nikki ne apne hi muhn se sab kuch kabul kar liya.....😆😆

once again itz toooooooo gud dear...cont.soon.

Hey Mahak thanks for this fic yaar,

i love Prachi n she is in this fic really good.

Maine abhi is ka bus first part padha hai jaldi hi baaki padh kar bhi comment karoongi.

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey bahut bahut bahut hi accha aur romantic update tha yaar.👏👏

thanks yaar.😊😊😊

ab mai bhi soch rahi hoon ki kyoun na mai bhi ek fic likh daalon na.😉😉

offcourse u have started na.😃😃

Muskaan aur Sarthak ka romance vow😉😉, mujhe nahi pata tha ki dono itne romantic hain.😳😳

mujhe bhi nahi pata tha yaar.😛😛😛

Muskaan ko bhi ab kuch kuch ho raha hai mano ya na mano.😛😛

tabhi to bahut kuch hoga na.😳😳😳

Jaldi hi mujhe umeed hai ki Muskaan aur Sarthak ek doosre ko i love u bol hi denge.😳😳

bilkul bus kehne hi waale hain yaar.😉😉😉

Shikhar aur Nikki to hain hi shararati na.😛😛

Sab ko pata chal gaya ab na ki Shikhar aur Nikki ek doosre ko pyaar karte hain.😃😃

agar ye plan na bana hota to kisi ko bhi na pata chalta Nikki aur Shikhar k baare me.😆😆😆

Bechari Poorvi, Vedoo bhi us ko tung kar raha hai na.not fair na Poorvi kitni pyaari hai na.

bahut ganda baccha hai na Vedoo us ko bata dena chahiye na Poorvi ko bekaar me us ko sata raha hai.😕😕😕

update soon yaar.

Originally posted by: Naughty*f*nice

⭐️great
nice story