Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 43

Hello Guys,

update karne se pehle mujhe aap sab se kuch poochna hai.

LRL Forum k ek forum member ka kehna hai ki us ko pata chala hai ki meri is fic me koi bhi interested nahi hai to mujhe is baat ka jawaab chahiye agar aisa hai to bata dijiye mujhe.

Mujhe true answers chahiye banawati nahi bus sach . Us ka ye bhi kehna hai ki kyounki vo nahi padti hai fic to is k readers kam hain aur un k hisaab se bahut boring aur bakwaas fic hai ye.

Vertika

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Who is she to comment on your abilities???????????

n i have seen not read dere r so many fictions in this forum which r updated but no1 reads..coz no1 is interested..Here so many of us read your fiction n reply regularly whenever we have time..

I think this member has some problem ..May b she is jealous of your talent.Why r u bothered with others comment when they doesn't matter to u?

Originally posted by: nihatri

rocking update

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Who is she to comment on your abilities???????????

n i have seen not read dere r so many fictions in this forum which r updated but no1 reads..coz no1 is interested..Here so many of us read your fiction n reply regularly whenever we have time..

I think this member has some problem ..May b she is jealous of your talent.Why r u bothered with others comment when they doesn't matter to u?

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi dear

Update was really gud...👏Vedant is teasing Poorvi a lot..He isn't telling her the name of the girl he loves(ofcourse wohi hai) but still..😉

vo bahut jyada shaitaan hai itni asaani se nahi batayega ki kaun hai vo.😉😉😉

Muskaan n Sarthak were busy romancing.....Their scene was quite romantic..bina propose kiye hi sarythak n Muskaan mein kafi kuch ho gaya....😉..

lage raho na.😆😆😆

Their scene was brilliant

thank u.😃😃😃

She closed her eyes when she heard her name calling by him. She was feeling a sweet sensation in his voice.

'Tum bahut khoobsurat ho, pata hai tum ko.' He said coming closer to her.

She tightened her eyes. He moved closer to her. 'Tumhari aakhein duniya ki sab se khoobsurat aakhein hai jin me kisi ka bhi man doob jaane ko karta hai.' He paused.

'Aur?' she asked closing her eyes jaise koi ajeeb sa jadoo tha Sarthak ka jo us ko kheech raha tha.

He came more closer to her and held her chin with his hands and said, ' Chandani raat me jab chaand ki roshini padti hai na tumhare face par to lagta hai ki koi kamal khila hua hai.' He added.

'Aur kya lagta hai?' she again asked.

Sarthak held her more tightly this time, ' Tumhare hoth lagta hai jaise kisi gulaab ki petals ho.' He said looking her.

He traced her face with his fingers and she was melting in his arms, they were very close. Itna ki lag raha tha ki ab beech me kisi k bhi aane ki jagah nahi bachi hai. He traced her neck, her shoulders, her curves and each part with his fingers and she was really feeling seductive.

'Muskaan mai vo tum se''''..' he couldn't complete tabhi jor se bijli kadki aur Muskaan ne jor se Sarthak ko hug kar liya.

Sarthak was feeling very happy when she was in his arms but this time Muskaan realized the closeness and broke it soon. She turned n was about to leave when Sarthak caught her hand from behind and said.

'Mujhe tum acchi lagti ho aur kitna pata nahi, ye bhi nahi pata ki mai tum ko kaisa lagta hoon.' He said but got no response she has run from there.

Niki n Shikhar ke paas to romance ke alawa koi kaam hi nahin hai😍😍

Saari girls ne Niki ko kitna tease kiya👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...

accha kiya ab kam se kam sab ko pata to hai na dono k baare me.😛😛😛

Pls Sarthak ko mauli ke sath mat wapas bhejna..Uske liye Vatsal hai na😉😉😉..

jaana to hoga dad ne bulaya hai na.

Do update soon.

n thanx for informing

My friends r always welcome............n pls friends mein yeh thanx business nahin chalti

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

hey vertika dear....i completely agree wid suhana...nobody has d right to say something like dat to anyone....and if anybody feels like dat then ask her to stop reading simple....i think its really sad that somebody is trying to discourage u like dat....but u dont worry we luv u and ur fics....and u dont need to stop....

Hi Vertika