FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

179

Views

24k

Users

31

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

matwamango thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Part 12


Ranbir never knew love would feel like so good but was scared of feeling like this again after along time but had difficulty trusting in fate after Madhu. Kanya was differen from all the other women he'd met from over the years. Even Kat his on/off partner whom he thought knew the score had hurt him by playing her wacky games but he loved her in his own way as a dear friend. He looked at Kat if only she got her messed up life sorted. Always so indecisive at the age of 30 wasn't good. She was always lost and got herself into trouble but she'd gotten to used to one of the guys bailing her out. Every member from Ranbir's car had got to their room and to bed quietly not to wake Malika. Ranbir took Kat in the guest room as he didn't feel it was right to leave her alone in the hotel where she was staying. She kept on mumbling under her breath about past times and how she wished she could change the clock. She kept going on about being lonely. Ranbir hated seeing her like this but knew she had to toughen up.

K-Ranbir, Don't leave me please. Not you. I feel so alone. Nobody. No one. Everyone always leaves. I always leave. Tum believe.

R-You need to sober up. So jao in the morning everything always looks better.

K-Dobara don't leave. Hamesha you chale go.

Ranbir gives Kat a kiss on her forehead and leaves her to go to his room. Ranbir lays his head on the pillow and just drifts off to his sleep dreaming of Kanya and for the first time he has no doubts that what he is doing is right or wrong. No need for rationalising his thoughts he is simply following his heart. He is in a deep sleep that he doesn't hear his mobile ringing from the hospital calling about his other family members and Kanya. Everyone in the Nandas are unknown to the new crisis that will rock all family member really hard.

An hour before Ranbir's mobile started ringing a passerby had reported an accident not far from Kanya's home after an hour since the accident occurred. There were 5 people in the car. Car was totally smashed the left side. The truck that was driving was already dead on the scene. The passerby had checked for pulse and immediately called the ambulance to come quick and followed every step they gave him. He made sure that there were no dangers of the car exploding and so on. He moved any obstructions that maybe in the way and made sure that their airways were clear and that they were breathing fine.

Kanya's family are immediately notified about both Kanya and Pooja's condition which is really bad. Pooja sustained some serious injuries. As she'd been sitting in the front seat of the car she had a fractured skull with internal bleeding and the whole family were present at Leelavathi Hospital. The surgeons had done all they could to help but to no avail. Pooja was in the ICU and heavily sedated.

Akash was doing quite badly but his side of the car wasn't too bad and just managed to escape with swelling to the head and had the left side of his arm plastered. He too needed some stitches. Sidharth wasn't so lucky he had died on the spot and Aditya was in the critical list. Kanya was also in the critical list but she had lost consciousness and a lot of blood. Kanya had managed to say a few words before she lost consciousness to the doctors about Ranbir and about her unborn baby and that she wanted nobody to know but passed out soon after.

The doctors were prepping for Kanya's surgery to try and stop her bleeding which was looking like it wasn't stopping. Kanya was sedated and the operation lasted a good two hours. Once they's come out she seemed stable for now but the next 12 she'd have to be closely monitored. Kanya's mom and Dad spent the whole night praying for their daughters safety and well being both needed all the prayers they could get.

The next day back at the Nanda mansion everyone was up and gearing up for work and were in a good mood apart from those that had hangovers namely Kat, Shlok and Arth. Tom was used to his drink. Malika noticed that Aditya and Sidharth still hadn't arrived for breakfast.

M-Ranbir tere bhaiyon kahan hain. Abhi tak nich nahin aye hain.

R-Aap jaake Rewa bhabi aur Aastha bhabhie se poochiye.

M-Un dono ko pooch ke mere sar karungi unki beauty parlour aur social status ke aagi unke husband aur bache kuch nahin. Apne swath ke hi soch te hain. Us Rewa ko sirf uski hi parwa hain.

One of the servants go to check and say they aren't there. Ranbir assumes maybe they are at work already. Ranbir gets his mobile out to check if he was left any messages or calls and finds that he had 3 miscalls by the same number. He calls them to find out and gets the shock of his life. Immediately all the family rush out to Leelavathi hospital.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
Sallu- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#62
wow kya scene tha...plz update soon
katham kyun kardi!:(
ZaraCZaara thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#63
wow y did u stop! continue soon! SO I WAS RITE! SHES PREGGY!
Edited by ZaraCZaara - 17 years ago
suganain thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Leelavathi hospital. where all the celebrites go? hehehehe continue soon! 👏
matwamango thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: suganain

Leelavathi hospital. where all the celebrites go? hehehehe continue soon! 👏

I'm glad you got that Leelavathi Hospital thing. I thought i'd use it in my FF as Rnbir is a celbrity and his family members are well recognized because of him.

punjabi.princes thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#66
great update. omg kanya was pregnant?
plz continue soon and make her better!
matwamango thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#67

Part 13

Recap-Theres an accident and Everyone in the accident is in danger and are getting medical help. Ranbir gets the call of his life.

In the hospital both the Godboles and the Nandas were pacing up and down frantically. Rewa managed to get to the hospital and just looked as if she was in a bad dream. Sid was no more. She just burst out crying but tears wouldn't fall. Malika was shocked. In just a matter of a day her happy but weird family that was already in cracks had a pice missing like a jigsaw. Sidharth was gone and Adi was in critical condition. She felt for the Godbole family as she just heard that Pooja had no chance of making it dur to her internal bleeding and Kanya seemed to be heading the same way. Ranbir just looked frazzled as if it hit him hard she could tell her son was hit hard by all this and that he was in love. For the first time she could see her son in this same position after such a long time. He'd finally opened his heart to Kanya and probably blames himself just like he blamed himself for everything wrong that happens in his life. Yeah sab why?

Kanya was hooked up to an IV and machines monitoring her heart rate, pulse. Only immediate family could go in to see her. Ranbir felt like saying something but knew he wasn't part of her family but wanted to be. One accident changed everything in his life. Why did this always happen to him? He felt like he was cursed! All good things in his life get taken away. Now Sid is gone, Adi may or may not make it. Kanya who knew what was going on but he felt helpless. He just wished he could tell the family that he loved Kanya and wanted to marry her. What he wanted to marry her? Ofcourse he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her but she'd be better off without him. She's suffering all because of him. Why did he allow her to go in the car. He should have driven her but either way his family were going to suffer. This is why he avoided being close to anyone to avoid this.

Malika, Pammi were both comforting one another. They were both praying for a miracle. They held a virgil at the bedside of their loved ones. A doctor came from the ICU to let Anand know the bad news. Pammi, Anand, Harry and Adita went in to see Pooja for the last time. She ws in and out of consciousness and had difficulty speaking. She told everyone that she was sorry and that she loved her family so much and just like the heroines in her Soaps she was saying the same dialogues before she died but she meant it. She requested to see her baby sister Kanya one last time. Pammi told her she was unconscious. The doctors brought Kanya in. Pooja had tears in her eyes. Kash mein akhri baar Kanya ke saath do baatein karsakhthi.

P-Mom aap please akele mein mujhe Ranbir se milna hain.


Ranbir comes in to see Pooja. Not knowing why she wanted to see him after all he wasn't family. Pooja looked so limp and pale all the blood drained out. Ranbir felt squeamish and totally numb is this what then he turned around and saw Kanya who looked so fragile like she could break anytime. He was scared to go near her just in case he hurt her. It was all his fault. Bad things happen when he allows himself get close.

P-Ranbir. Mujhe dekho. Yaha ao. I know tum Kanya ke saath tumhara chakkar hain.

R-Pooja i can explain. Woh she didn't want the whole world to know.

P-Ranbir. Mujhe batao. Do you love my sister?

R-I .........I do. But i don't think we are meant to be dekho na this is all my fault.

P-Ranbir marne se pehle i want to know my sister has someone to somfort her lover her. Jisse woh pyar kare use woh mile. Duniya ke sari khushi and that is you. She loved you from the first sight and would lay her life for you. I just want to know if you will be there for her?

R-Pooja. I'm cursed. She will never be happy with me. Kuch na kuch bura hota hain. Yeh accident. Tum, Sid, my ex, Adi.

P-Ranbir don't be stupid this was meant to be. Our time is up so we have to go. You had nothing to do with it. Please Promise me tum Kanya ko apna oge. Promise me tum is ka khayal rakho ge. Tum use dil aur hjaan se khush rakho ge. Ranbir its my only wish. In a short time mein tumhe ache tare jaanthi hoon. You're passionate. I can even now see the love for Kanya you have in your eyes.

R-Pooja. I Promise. I will love her and be with her always. (Ranbir gives Pooja a kiss on her forehead) You really are a brave person.

P-I know. Say a few words to Kannu. Usse millo.

R-Kanya. I love you more than life. I didn't know i could love like this until i met you. Come back to me. I can't bear this. Come back aur mere zindagi mein rang leke aajao na. Mujh ko satane. Kyunki tum mujhe rularahi ho. I'm a guy guys don't cry (Ranbir is crying a lot. His eyes are bloodshot and totally shaking Ranbir kisses Kanyas cheek and thanks Pooja for making him see his error.)

Pammi and her brood and husband come in to see Pooja and see a Ranbir in a new light. In tears. They've never seen him so broken in the whole time they'd seen him. Suhaas was in shock.

Pammi-Beti tu yikh hojayegi. Meine pratna ki hain i know you fit hogi.

P-mom its ok. This was meant to be.

Pammi- Tummhe kyun? Kanya kyun?

P-mom Kanya ki jaane ke samay nahin hain. Be happy with the time you had with me. Don't be too upset.

H-D don't speak too much. Conserve your energy.

P-Harpal mujhe aaj mat rokh.Roz tumhara khan paka thi hoon mere soaps ke bare mein par mujhe (Having difficulty breathing)
H-I love you D.

P-I know i love you too baby bro.

A-Beti mujhe naaz hain tu meri beti hain. Par hume aise akele mat chod ke ja. Kanya ki bare me soch waise bhi woh tere bin kuch sunthi hain kya. Har waqt Shanta tai ki saath. Ab use kehna ke woh ute.

P-Momma, Dad ap Kannu ke liye dua kijiye. Use mere bare mein soch ne mat dijiye. Aur aggar use koi Galati hojaye to please maaf karna. (Pooja knew about Kanya and Ranbir even if they were hiding it from the rest of the family) Think of me choti hain aura b use ab sab ki zaroorat hain. Use kisise pyaar hain un dono ko milana. Waqt aygi jab Kanya sab kuch aap logo ko bate............. (Now she's panting, struggling for air). I love you all. Kannu mein jaanthi hoon tu shayad mujhe sun sakhti hain D loves you alot. Mujhe bhoolna mat. Agar karegi bhi to tuje satane keliye aajoyungi. Akash ko kehna mein pehli baar pyar ko mehssoos....I love you.

With that Pooja passed away looking at her sister Kanya whom she loved more than life. Pammi screamed and Anand and family were unconsolable. they wer holding Pooja and the doctors put the sheetover Poojas face.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
punjabi.princes thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#68
that was so sad 😭 why did pooja have to die?
anyways it was a good update
continue soon! plz make Kanya better soon 😊
Sallu- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#69
awww sho shaddd..!!!
but extremely good part...plz update soon!
matwamango thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#70
I was tearing up when i wrote about Pooja too. But it had to be done tp progress and move the story on.

So glad you are enjoying this. punjabi.princes
princez-preciou, simran1285, ZaraCZaara, suganain
KC294 and to all the silent readers. I will update this after another 3 days as i am busy with my other two stories. Soulmate and Back to the Nanda.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".