LUV AT FIRST OR AT MANY SIGHTS (FAN-FIC) - Page 7

guys wid comment give advice that what shud i write

It is really good
Focus on angad and kripa more

Kripa and angad became friends and continued conversation…..

K: main ne to tumhein apni poori biography bata di ab tum batao tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, tum kaisi ladki prefere karo ge… tell me?

A: the girl wud be mine wud be like an angel. When she is happy I will became happy and when she is upset I will also feel sad. That's all.

K: do u think u will get her….

A: for sure………….

K: to theek hai tum aur aaliyah ek saath shaadi kar lena

A: haan issi baat ke liye to aaliyah ne apni shaadi ki date unconfirmed kar di hai.

K: well, Kyonki who tumhein pyar karti hai….(murmur) mere liye to Koi aisa kare ga hi nahi.

A: kia

K: nothing ab yahan se chalo mujhe ghar jana hai……..

A: kripa to hum mil rahein hain na kal………

K: kal kyon

A: Prithvi aur aaliyah ki engagement main.

K: haan, main shayad aaoon

A: kia

K: (giggles) just kiddin'

A: thank god warna mujhe love birds ko disturb karna padta naa.

KRIPA'S HOME.

S: waise angad ki taraf se haan hai ke nahi.
G: pata nahi. Naina aur bhai sehab to razi hain……… aur Prithvi keh raha tha ke angad usse pasand karne laga hai….

S: achaa hai…..

G: par mujhe nahi lagta kripa usse pyaar karti hai.

S: gaytri main ne pehle bhi kaha hai ke kripa ki shaadi us ke saath hogi jisko main pasand karta hoon na ke vo aur agar baat hai us ke pyaar karne ki to vo ladki pyaar karna nahi janti………

G: par

S: bas angad ki taraf se jawaab aajaye to tareeq jaldi te kar dena . main nahi chahta ke vo bojh humare paas aur dino tak rahe…………

Saying this suryabaan left while gaytri was sorry 4 kripa…………….

G: kaisi maan hoon main apni bachi ko anaat ki Zindagi de ke ji rahi hoon. Mujhe maaf kardena

😭 i m feelin sad 4 kripa anyways plez continue

poor kripa 😭
fantastic story cont plz 👏

well kahani main twist bhi hona chahiye 😉

same always A-K had a ruh in college ....... family friends........ its a new thing 😉 😊 😃

wait 4 next part with popcorns 😉 😆

aur khabar daar agar roy to 😡

warna 😕 😕

warn main bhi ro doon gi 😆

ENGAGEMENT DAY…….

All were at a banquet hall for aaliyah and prithvi's (I hate him now) engagement. Angad was already there while prithvi's family wasn't there yet. When prithvi's family reached there Naina and dilip welcomed them and put the tilak on prithvi's forehead…….. Angad was not paying attention to all that rasam and was looking 4 kripa one by one every guest came inside but not kripa….. even not after her parents and bro…

A(to gayatri) : namaste aunty

G: namaste beta…. Kaise ho

A: theek hoon. Kripa nahi ayee

Gayatri was happy too see angad concern 4 kripa 2 much. Just then kripa enters. She was not wearing lehenga or sari she was wearing a moonlight maxi with beads on it and having matching jewelry and sandals of course. Angad was totally captivated by her beauty her every step forward makes his heart beats go faster and more faster…. Her angelic expression was making him fall in love with her….

Kripa gives the gift to aaliyah and Prithvi… and wished them, without noticing that angad is staring her. Her every act was inspiring angad. As kripa was done wid the gifts and wishes she just walked to her mom and brother without even realizing angad standing…..

Angad then call her 4 chit chat they were talking when naina came up and asked them to dance. Angad asked her to dance with him. Kripa agreed and angad and kripa walked over dance floor and started dancing. Kripa was smiling and talking to him. Angad was not listened her but was feeling her voice, the magic in her eyes and then party ended and A-K were separated.

At home angad was on bed having flashbacks of kripa's scenes and the conversation of Prithvi (that u love kripa, Prithvi said). These all things were not letting him sleep and he got to know that he loves kripa……. But what shud he do 4 the nite she was in every thing… towel, TV, cupboard and etc… he got up and knocked the door of aaliyah's room.

Aa: bhai aap itni raat ko….

A: aaliyah mujhe neend nahi aa rahi….

AA: to mom ke paas jao na she will sing song to make u asleep

A: aaliyah stop it….. i

AA: u

A: I …….

AA: aagay bolo… kia hai

Angad closes his eyes and speak off

A: I LOVE KRIPA.

Saying this he kissed on aaliyah's cheek and ran to his room... Aaliyah was shocked and happy too

Really nice 👏
Plzz continue soon

👏 kamal ki story plez continue

😃

aweeeeeeee.....i m so happy .in ki shaadi jaldi kerwaoooooooooooooooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😃