LUV AT FIRST OR AT MANY SIGHTS (FAN-FIC) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey gr8 part plz continue soon...............


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P: angad tumhein usse dantna nahi chahiye tha

A: ek to tumhein us se bachaya aur tum mujhe par baras rahe ho.

P: tum kiya samjh rahe thay wo mujhe sach much marne wali thi. It's not like that. She is just showing that she is angry. The cushions surely haven't hurt me at all.

A: to ab tum usse sorry bol ke aao main chala

P: mar wayga kia bachane ke liye Koi to chahiye
And they giggle. Finally angad became ready to go to kripa's home to apologize.

P: hi aunty hi uncle.

S&G: hi beta.

S: Prithvi yeh kaun hai.

P: vo yeh aaliyah ka bhai hai.

G: oh, kaise ho beta.

A: first class, par bas aap ki beti ne tang kar rakha hai.

G: kripa ne…………

S: kia kiya us ne…………. waise agar din main kisi ko takleef nahi de to din pura nahi hota na us ka.

A: nahi main to mazak kar raha tha. She is very sweet. Waise vo hai kahan?

G: beta. Stair se 3rd room us ka hai. Wahin hai.

A: chal Prithvi.

P: tu ja main abhi aata hoon.
A: apologize tujhe karna tha (whispers)

P: haan par uncle aur aunty se baat karne baad aata hoon pehle tu usse pyaar se samjha bujha kar rakh

A: jaldi aana

Angad was eager to meet her again and see that mixed feeling in her eyes. He got near her room and as about to knock but the door was opened. He opened that slowly and saw that kripa is heading towards her window with a violin and playing it very nicely (kyph tune). He remained stood there and after some time he entered her room. Kripa was drown into her feelings and didn't know that angad is already there. He made steps forward and he was near study table and accidentally a pen was dropped. Kripa paid attention and looked behind.

K: tum yahan kia kar rahe ho.

A: sorry kehne aaya tha………

K: no use I will not accept

A: excuse me main nahi Prithvi kehne aaya tha

And they started arguing while Prithvi was telling kripa's parent about A-K's marriage and family background.

S: Yeh to bohat achaa hai. Hum angad ke maante hi shaadi ki baat shru kardein Ge.

P: angad to lagta hai jald hi maan jaye ga magar kripa …………..

S: fikr mat karo kripa wahiin shaadi kare gi jahan main kahun ga………….

Prithvi was speechless that why suryabaan was reacting like this. He ignores

KRIPA'S ROOM

K: Tum mein zara bhi tameez hai ke ladki ke kamre main aane se pehle knock karte hain.

A: ya but. Tum mein zara sharam nahi hai keh door lock karna chahiye.

K: mera door hai, mari marzi…

A: mera haath hai. Aur mera dil………. Samjhi. Well mein tumhein yahan samjhne aaya tha keh tum Prithvi ke behen ho aur mein Prithvi ka hone wala brother in law so agar tumhare aur mere beech mein in choti chotii baton par ladayee jhagre hon ge to……… Prithvi ko bura lage ga.

K: tum se dosti karoon. Par agar Prithvi se ladayee kar sakti hoon to tum se dosti kaise kar sakti hoon.

A: u r impossible…………. Tum se

He steps on the roller skates and falls on kripa's bed with kripa.

Angad stares her and hold her tightly and kripa was asking to leave her and trying to free her self. Al the words were silent and angad was drowned on the dept of kripa's eyes.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
nice fanfic continue soon
man u gave kripa way too much attitude love it
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nice work 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
plz cont soooon
can't wait
its really good 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kripa was trying to make herself free but angad was holding her wasn't knowing that why he is doing so. Prithvi enters see the scene and……..

P (to himself): main ne socha tha ke angad ko manane mein der ho jaye gi par ab lagta hai story sirf A-K ki reh gayee hai…. Chalo disturb kar hi deta hoon bhai sahib ki behen ko bhi to khush khabri sunani hai.

P: get up buddy……. (Lift him up from kripa). To kia ho raha tha kripa…..

K: mujhe kia pata tumis loafer se hi pucho……….

A: are main ne kia kiya…………….. Main to bas ………….

K: tum to bas kia………

A: Tumhari eyes colors guess kar raha tha.

K: what

A: haan but can't get it……… is it dark brown or black……

K: kia

A: I think its brown…..

P: what ever…. Angad……… main apna kaam to karlun

A: oh haan y not

K: pehle main apna kaam karun gi

P: tum

K: haan tum dono ko bahar nikalun gi.

P: sorry yaar………maaf kar do na…. vo kia hai ke mein apni hone wali mangeter ke saath bahar gaya tha…….

K: mujhe pata hai main bohat buri hoon isi liye tum sach nahi bol sake……. That y I m sorry……. (Crying)

Angad was feeling sorry 4 her. He was willing to know that the sadness behind her arrogant behavior. Y she is like this and he was knowing that she is the one who has inspired her in FIRST SIGHT.

A: well I m sorry too……… I know I was very harsh……..

K: I know u were right on ur place…

A: so friends….

K: main itni jaldi Kisi se friendship nahi Karti… it's only the third time we have met.

Angad was sad. And was driving back home wid Prithvi….. Prithvi can easily understand his internal feelings.

P: wat's up dude….. itne upset kyon ho…..

A: main nahi to…………….

P: jhoota

A: wat r u trying to say.

P: ke tum kripa se pyaar karte ho………

A: kia baat kar rahe ho Prithvi……………….
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
😳 how sweeeeeeeeeeeet plez continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats soooo cute i feel sooooooooo sorry for kirpa
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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A: kia baat kar rahe ho yaar main aur vo pressure cooker….

P: haan

A: I only offer her my friendship because I love making friends nothing else…….

P: aur vo udaasi…..

A: (smiles widely) see I m happy…

P: (sings) tum itna kyon muskura rahe ho kia gham hai jisko chupa rahe ho….

A: shut Prithvi .

P: kia main bas gana gaa raha tha if u don't like me to sing so play any song

l offer her my friendship because I love making friends nothing else…….

Prithvi calls some one. Hi kripa… angad pays attention….

P: kal tum 2.00 baje water edge hotel pe aa jana tumhein aaliyah se milwaoon ga. Bye.

A: kia ko phone kar raha tha….

P: kripa ko ….. us ne kaha tha ke usse aaliyah se milna hai… so main ne kal ka time de dia…… tu aaliyah ko le aana

A: f9 dude (angad was very happy)

NEXT DAY…

AA: angad Prithvi aur kripa aaye hi nahi….

A: pata nahi… kripa is really very punctual…..

AA: well what time did they have said….

A: 2.00 pm

AA: stupid its only 1.00 now….. Wasted my hour……

A: sorry galti ho gayee.

AA: kia ho gaya hai mere bhai ko….. jo kabhoi time pe nahi puhanchta tha aaj pehle puhanche gaya…. Amazing..

A: (made a wacky face) aaliyah shut up tat was only a mistake…..

[I'll cont later till then enjoy this part]

Edited by touchmenot - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 too gud yaar plz cnt soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
too good
plz continue soon

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