LUV AT FIRST OR AT MANY SIGHTS (FAN-FIC) - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
shaadi to jaldi ho gi par 😊

abaadi mein der lage gi 😭 😭 🤢

so wait with pocorns in ur hands 😉 😆 😆

bye
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
it simply rocks...its awesome ...pls continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
aww...so finally he realised tht he loves her...pls post the next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
I love the story hun.
It's amazing and I can very well understand Kripa's character.
Please continue soon
amazing fan-fic 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
Angad ran to his room jumped in his bed and after sharing his feelings with aaliyah he was able to sleep and a slight smile was there on his face while sleeping….

In the morning aaliyah told the matter and can say gud news to naina and dilip, who were so happy that they can't even resist.

They went to the room of angad and saw that he is sleeping peacefully and a slight smile is on his face. Naina sat down on the bed and ruffle his hair which made him wake up….

A: morning mom

N: good morning beta

A: mom, dad, aaliyah aap itni subha ko

N: Beta hum yeh kehne aye hain ke aaj 3.00 baje hum kripa ke ghar jaane wale hain…. Kripa kahoon ya mere bete ke princess…..

A: Mommmm (they all laughed)

N: ab naha dho kar neechay aao naashta kar lo aur phir

AA: aur phir tyaar hone mein bhi to time lage ga……….

A: aaliyah

D: aur nahi to kia……. In laws se milne jaa raha hai….

A: dad u 2. khich lo khich lo jitni chahe uthi baar taang khinch lo….. aaj hi din hai…

They all left and angad went to take bath and was very happy

KRIPA'S HOME

K: mom sirf ek hafte ki hi to baat hai. Mujhe apni friends ke saath goa jaane do na…..

G: mere haath mein hota to…. Tujhe rokti hi nahi…… par tere papa

Suryabaan was listening to all this but not interrupting suddenly phone rang he picked it up.

S: hello, suryabaan here…

D: namaste samdhi ji. Main dilip

S: ji

D: bhai mera beta aur aap ki beti shaadi kar lein ge to humare beech yehi rista ho ga na.

S: matlab angad ne rishte ke liye haan kar di…. (softly that kripa won't listen)

D: haan? Khushi ke mare jhoom raha hai…. Ab bas kripa ki haan ki deri hai…..

S: kripa to pehle se tyaar thi par ladki hai na kehne se sharma rahi thi ab baat paki ho gayee hai to pandit ji ko bula kar tarikh te kar den ge.

D: theek hai main yeh khush khabri sab ko sunaata hoon aur aaj teen baje hum aaa rahe hai….

S: theek hai

Calls ends and suryabaan walked to his wife and daughter where kripa was appealing to go…

S: let her go… kripa tum jao…. Flight kitne baje ki hai…..

K: 2.00 baje ki

S: it's 11.00, get ready….

Kripa was kinda surprised and rushed to her room…

G: aaj aap maan kaise Gaye. ( smiling)

S: Kyonki angad ki family kripa ka haath mangne aa rahe hain….

G: to.

S: to main nahi chahta ke vo Koi scene create kare. Baad main tum usse raazi kar lena…. Aur ………

G: aur usse dhoka doon…. Us ka dil tor doon….. baap hain aap us ke

S: mat yaad dilao mujhe yeh kadwa sach…….. aur main itna janta hoon ke vo is ghar se jald hi jaa rahi… hai..

He leaves while kripa goes to goa before angad reached there…..

wait 4 next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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remember kripa didn't loves angad......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
awesome part
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👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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At 3.00 angad wid his family reached there pandit was also there.

D: namaste samdhan aur samdhi ji….. ab rishta jurne ja raha hai….

S: haan pata hi nahi chalta bache kitni jaldi bare ho jaate hain aur betiyon ko doosre ghar jaana hota hai.(to himself: mujhe hi pata hai us bojh ko main ne kaise paala hai)

N: nahi nahi ap ki beti ko to hum apni beti bana kar rakhien ge. Aur achii baat ladkiyon ke liye yeh hoti hai ke un ke do ghar hote hain. Dono ghar ke darwaaze us ke liye hamesha khule hote hain. Kyon behen ji.

G: ji bilkul ( to herself: aap ko kia Maloom ke is ghar ke darwaaze us ke jaane ke baad us ke liye hamesha ke liye band ho jaain ge.)

D: pandit ji, shaadi ki kaun si tareekh achi hai.

PJ: shaadi 2 hafte baad hi honi chahiye is ke baad muhoorat 10 mahiney baad ka hai.

N: bhai hum itna Intezaar nahi kar sakte, khaas karke angad, kyon angad.

A: (shy,) mom…….

AA: mom kyon aang kar rahi ho dulhe ko. Waise dulhan kahan hai.

G: vo beta…….. (saryabaan interrupts)

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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
i m posting 2 parts today coz may be i won't be able to cont 4 2 days.

sorry

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