LUV AT FIRST OR AT MANY SIGHTS (FAN-FIC) - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
KOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL PARTS SWEETY.............👏I WANTS MORE😉................SO.....CAN'T WAIT 4 NEXT PART😭........FAST..FASTTTT😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
sweety plz plz plz hurry up
i cant control my self any more [:s]
i just love thiz stories [L]
i beg of u plz cont [:^(] [;)]
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
The story's going really nicely. I just love it! 😊 Plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
that was mind blowing
love stuck 😆 😆
plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
ccccccoooooottttttnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ppppppppllllllllllzzzzzz
varna muje wait karte karte is sizzeling jawani mai
heart attak ajayegi 😆 💔
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
GR8 PARTZ....PLZ CONT. SOON.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
it was lovely...pls post the next part soon pls.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
AA: hi Prithvi….

A: Prithvi kripa nahi aayi.

P: na hi na hello bas kripa….. dost ghadaar.

A: Ab in fizool ki formalities ki kia zaroorat hai…. Bata kripa kahan hai…..

P: nahi aayee

A: nahi aayee?? Kyon

AA: Koi baat nahi kisi aur din mil lungi

A: to main ja raha hoon…..

AA: arre itni der wait kia aur jab Prithvi aa gaya to tata bye bye…

A: ek to tumhare fiade ki baat kar raha hoon aur tum….

P: haan pata hai kis ka faida hai…. Kyon

In the mean while KRIPA enters. Angad is surprised and happy…

A: kripa tum

K: haan main kyon….

A: tum to nahi aane wali thi…..

K: kis ne kaha….

A: Prithvi ne….

K: Prithvi ki baat Kabhi mat manana, ek number ka jhoota hai…..

P: ok leave that kripa she is aaliyah…

K: hi

AA: so ur r kripa…

K: ya

AA: nice name…

A: is ne nahi rakha…..

And they all laughed,
(murmuring)
A: kripa

K: hmmm

A: kia hum inhain akela chod dain

K: kyon

A: love birds hain ………. Kuch to samjho….

K: oh wo baat hai… theek hai.
Normal

K: guys we r leaving. bye

A: bye……

They left leaving love birds alone…… they went to another restaurant and had a chat…..

A: so kripa tum ne bataya nahi ki tum U.K main kia karti thi….

K: parhayee. C.A kar rahi thi…

A: oh aur kuch. I mean ur career planning

K: I wanna be a _______________. ( can't imagine her in other jobs)

A: aur shaadi ke bare main.

Kripa stops eating and was anxious

K: shaadi?

A: mera matlab hai ke aaliyah ki shaadi main kia pehno gi.

K: angad. Tum ne to dara hi dia… main to samjhi ke

A: kia samjhi…..

K: ke main shaadi kisse karon gi… and all this

A: shaadi karne main kia problem hai.

K: shaadi main problem to nahi par all depends on my conditions…..

A: CONDITIONS

K: haan 1st: us larke se main pyaar karti hoon….
2nd: he shud be honest and not a lair like Prithvi. (Angad giggles)
3rd: he must love me in same quantity I love him.

A: bas khatam….

K: abhi kahan shaadi ki baad ki bhi to conditions hain…..

A: ab chodo jis se shaadi karo gi ussi ko batana yeh batao ke Koi boy friend hai…..

K: no way…. Bf, ab to Koi ladka friend nahi banta bf to dur ki baat.

A: kyon tum khubsoorat bhi ho….. Aur rich bhi….

K: yehi hai ladkon ki prob. Inner beauty ko dekhne ke bajae bahari khubsurati pe jaan lutate hain.

A: main to aisa nahi hoon. Phir tum meri dost kyon nahi banti….

K: theek hai friends

She stretched out her hand and shook it with angad

next part wil be posted 2morrow till then T.C
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
tell me how was it and wat do U want to be next.
i m having no ideas

🤢
just tell me what shud be central point of story......

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