LUV AT FIRST OR AT MANY SIGHTS (FAN-FIC) - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
wow kripa has an attitud problem
weel how dare she talk angad like that 😡 😡 😡
cont soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
sweety that's something different
angad will be bad all the time is not gud
sometimes kripa shud have an attitude
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
KRIPA'S HOME

K: Hi mom, hi dad

Kripa's dad was very strict and did not love his daughter coz he wanted only son. not daugther
Kripa's mom was doing household work while his dad was working on his laptop and sitting near a window.

Gayatri= G   ; ;Suryabaan=S

G: kripa tu kaisi hai meri jaan.

K: theek hun. Bas aap ko bohat miss kar rahe thi…….


K: hi dad

S: ---

K: dad I m home. After 5 yrs.

S: so aana hi tha tujhe aa gayee. Badi baat kia hai.

K: I was only telling….

S: kio zaroorat nahi hai batane ki ke tum kisi ladke ke saath yahan aaye thi.

K: dad I really don't know who is he but he was prithvi's friend.

G: beta chalo tum thak gayee ho gi fresh ho jao aur khaana kha lo.

S: ruko mere sawaal ka jawab mujhe abhi chahiye now. Prithvi ke saath kyon nahi ayee. Kyon

K: papa us ne kaha ke wo bimaar hai and he can't receive me.

S: bas bas apni in jhuti baton mein kisi aur ko phasana mein jaanta hoon ke jab koi insaan kisi beti ka baap banta hai to vo zilat ke bohat kareeb hota hai.

In the meanwhile addi came he said hi to his sis and sat on his father's lap.

Addi= Ad

Ad: dad I wanna the same video game as my friend have and a bicycle because the last one's tire's are flatten by a classmate who is now my enemy. And I want a party on my birthday.

Kripa remember when she asked for the party on her 10th birthday as same as addi was going to be.

K: dad I want a little party for my friends.

S: no

K: but dad it's my birthday.

S: so wat insaan Kabhi na Kabhi to paida hota hai to kia birthday har saal manaya jaye ga….

She come out her bitter memories and ran upstairs to her room and threw herself on bed crying. Her mom was aso helpless.

K: wat is my fault if I m a girl. Why? Why? Why?

(that's why she is rude and having an attitude.

Edited by touchmenot - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
👏 👏 👏 cool plz cnt soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
😭 i m feelin bad 4 kripa but the stpry was awesome n plez continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
aww...felt really bad for her..plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
awwww that was great
plz cont sooooonn 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awesome part..plz cont soon......can't wait...plz cont....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
I LUV UR STORY...SEEIN KRIPA AS A BRAT IS SO COOL...MAKE SUM ROMANTIC PARTZ BETWEEN KRIPA AND ANGAD...PLZ CONT. SOON...
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
She come out her bitter memories and ran upstairs to her room and threw herself on bed crying. Her mom was also helpless.

K: wat is my fault if I m a girl. Why? Why? Why?

(That's why she is rude and having an attitude).

The phone rings. It's Prithvi.

K: hello

P: hi krips wat's up

K: nothing

P: wat do u mean. Ok leave that can u come to my place now.

K: for what

P: chi chat buddy.

Kripa remembers that Prithvi lie her about his sickness.

K: ok I m just coming.

P: gr8 buddy

K: now I will get that liar
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Prithvi calls angad

P: hi dude.

A: hi

P: kahan ho tum

A: Koi still jagah nahi hai par ghar jaaraha hoon

P: tu mere ghar aa ja

A: anything important.

P: no I m bored and wants some1's company.

A: ok I m coming.

P: bye. See u then.
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P: angad on kripa's one more chance to meet.

After some time Kripa enters.

K: hi

P: looks behind. Hi sweety how r u.

K: f9

Angad enters then. Prithvi is excited……

P: hi angad,

A: hi Prithvi.

Kripa looks behind. And angad sees her too. Kripa wasn't feeling difference while angad as happy to meet her.

A: hi u r………… kripa rite.

K: yes.

A: nice name.

K: maine nahi rakha

Prithvi giggles. Kripa stares Prithvi and asks.

K: tumhara bukhaar 104 se 105 hua.

Prithvi suddenly stops laughing and was scared.

A: bukhaar! tumhein bukhaar kab tha.

P: nahi vo main to……..

K: u lied…. To me… wat do u think of ur self

She picks up cushions and start throwing it to Prithvi.

Prithvi was trying to explain but kripa was not even ready to listen angad was enjoying all this…… she pick up the vase and was going to throw it when angad stopped her and hold her both hand and looked into her eyes full of conceit and she was trying to make herself free.

A: enough. He is elder than u and u have to respect him. At least listen to him.

K: wat shud to do and wat shud not, it is depended on me and it is my and Prithvi's problem don't u ever interfere. Aur Prithvi sorry if u have got hurt.

P: kripa is ki thodi si daant ne tumhein sudhar dia. Pehli baar tum ne mujhe se sorry kaha hai.

K: haan Kyonki Ab hum Phir se nahi milein aur is loafer

ki daant to kia maar se bhi faraq padne wala nahi hai.

I m use to suffer from this situations.

When she left she was not having any expression of regretting or sadness but her heart was crying. She sat in her car and drove back to home.
Edited by touchmenot - 19 years ago

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