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Kanchan

@kdrs

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: muskaan_2008
wow what a great start am relly liking it
could u please pm me when u update part1 tommorow thx 😳

Thanks! Will pm you!

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Kanchan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Sorry for the 1 day delay! Here's the first part. Hope you all like it.

Chapter 1: Happy things to an end.

Armaan's life was the best. Working in the office, he decided to have a secretary and the secretary when became his wife, it was like a new page in his life book. After 6 months of romance he proposed Ridhima which she accepted. And after 6 months she was pregnant. A new time for Armaan, the baby came healthy and Armaan had fights with Ridhima regarding the baby's name and then both came with the name. Aliyah and a smaller name, Ali. It was a boy's but they didn't mind it.
It was a bright morning and Armaan woke up seeing his love of life by his side. He got up and went to the nearby cradle which was kept there. How cute she was,thinking he went to the bathroom to freshen himself up. Coming outside he saw Ridhima awake standing near the cradle,showing the back towards him. He slowly went towards her and gave her a hug from behind. Kissing her on her cheek he said Good Morning to her.

Armaan: "Good Morning!"
Ridhima: "Good Morning! Get ready,we've got to leave!."
Armaan: "Where?"
Ridhima: "I told you, to the Radha Krishna Temple. Aliyah's finishing her 5th month today"
Armaan: "My sweet Aliyah finished 5 months" He said, taking Aliyah in his arms as she woke up and cried.
Ridhima: "Give"
Armaan: "I'll get ready!"
Ridhima: "Hurry up"
Armaan: "You want to come with me?"
Ridhima: "Armaan!"
Armaan: "Ok,Ok"

Coming out of the bathroom,Ridhima signaled himto keep quiet as she made her way to the bathroom. After 5 min, she was out in a red sari looking gorgeous.
Armaan: "You didn't tell me you were going to wear a sari!"
Ridhima: "No, I didn't"
Armaan: "You're looking beautiful"
Ridhima: "And you're looking handsome!"
Armaan: "Oye Hoye!"
Ridhima: "Put me the sindoor"she said, handing him the tiny box.
Armaan: "Here"saying, he put some on her hair.
Ridhima: "Breakfast's on table, I'll get Aliyah"
Armaan: "Ok, Ma'am"
Ridhima: "Armaan!"

A while later, Armaan was waiting in the car and Ridhima came with Aliyah. Sitting inside,she told him to hurry or they'll miss the morning Aarti. The temple was on a hill so it was far but the moment they saw the temple and truck came and clashed with them.
Armaan & Ridhima: "Aaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Armaan made Ridhima jump out with Aliyah and the car fell out of the hill leaving Ridhima shocked.
Ridhima: "Armaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Inside the temple an old lady was praying and came out hearing someone shout. Quickly, she ordered her driver and took Ridhima and found her baby wrapped inside her pallu.
Lady: "Driver, fast. She's bleeding very much!"

In a moment, Ridhima was in a strecher heading towards the ICU. The lady had Aliyah.

Meanwhile:
Before the car fell to the hill, Armaan jumped out of it, got injured by a rock and fell down but luck had already made his way. A truck was passing by and Armaan fell into it. The people from the truck inmediately took him to the hospital.

Hospital:
Fate had bought them again in the same hospital as Aliyah cried seeing her Papa in such a state who was passing by in another strecher.

After a few days:
Armaan woke up from his sleep, his head aching too much. The nurse ran to the doctor informing that the patient had woke up.
Armaan: "Aaah!"
Doctor: "Good Day, Mr."
Armaan: "Where am I?"
Doctor: "I'm sorry but you got hurt by a rock with made your memory a little less. In science, memory shortage is very rare but this is what God had in store for you. From your clothes we found some stuff for your identification. The things are there,in the cupboard. Well, the moment you feel better you are free to go."
Armaan: "What will I do now?"
Doctor: "Find people who knew you or Start a new life. It's up to you."

Armaan made his way to the cupboard and found his belongings. Opening his wallet, there was a burnt photo. Behind it was written: My gorgeous Basket and my cute Ali.
In the next, he saw a driving license with Armaan. Mallik written on it.
Armaan: "Armaan Mallik? That's my name. Atleast I got something. "

He changed his clothes and was thinking of talking with the Doctor for his discharge papers. Walking through the corridors he stopped on 1 door. Not knowing why, he stepped inside and saw a girl sleeping. The next moment, a lady entered.
Lady: "Hello, You know her?"
Armaan: "No. Actually...I was passing... and..."
Lady: "No problem. She's in coma. Doctors say when she'll wake up she won't remember anything. Her accident was the cause which made her come till here."
Armaan: "So, You're her mother?"
Lady: "I'm not her mother but she's a mother."
Armaan: "But...she looks young."
Lady: "The baby's in my house. God knows how was her previous life."
Armaan: "I need to go... See you.If God wants."
Lady: "Sure. Bye."
Armaan: "By the way, What's your name?"
Lady: "Padma.And yours?" she asked from the bedside.
Armaan: "Armaan" he answered while closing the door of the room.

The name Armaan made way into her head and the girl breathed heavily giving a shock to Padma. She called a nurse to inform the doctor. The Doctor came.
Doctor: "She's out of coma."
Padma: "Thank you Doctor".

After a while, a pair of green eyes were shown. Seeing here and there with a questioning look she saw Padma.
Padma: "Hey, How are you feeling now?"
Ridhima: "Fine but....."
Padma: "I know what are you going to ask. You're name is Ridhima. I saw it in your purse, but your red sari which you were wearing when you came her explains that you were married but after the accident I think you're husband's no more."
Ridhima: "Husband?, I'm Ridhima but I never had a husband."
Padma: " See,you had an accident but before that till I know, you had a husband and...."
Ridhima: "And?"
Padma:"You've got a baby."
Ridhima: "Baby?, Where is it?"
Padma:"It's sleeping in my house."

Padma abandoned the room and Ridhima was left there thinking. She walked towards her cupboard and saw a beautiful red sari. Taking it she walked to her bed and silently began crying.

Sad part, but surprises waiting!

Edited by kdrs - 17 years ago

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Samira

@Sammy__

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Hey a very good start 👏 👏
Ur ff is reall very different & awesome & i m eagerly waiting 4 ur next update.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

hey, gr8 story, really diferent, but so sad 😭 , plz tell me things will get better soon otherwise i won't be able to bear it. but HOW can armaan and ridz not remember each other? 😭 i mean they're soulmates, i hope they come together soon.

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Super.woman

@Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

wow.......tht was great........plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

wonderful prt bt its so deprssin! ill b w8in 2 read d nxt prt! cntd sn!

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

wooow
im strtin 2 luv dis ff
really nce conpt
cnt belve dey lost der memories
wundr wots gona hapn nw
updte soon plzzzzzzzz 👏

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rashi

@rashi_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

noooooooooooooooooooooooooo plzzzz don't do this. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
bring AR back 2gether.can't see them like this

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

hey kanchan 😊
just read the whole ff( i know only first part n intro though) 😆
its amazing yaar
👏 it reflect how uve grown as a writer n plz do update soon but is baar AR ko milana zaroor 😭 😭 😭 plz alag mat karana
plz pm me when u update it n update sooon 👏

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

great concept 👏 ...brill update

love kat 😳

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